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Author Topic: Dream of a New Dawn - apocalyptic fantasy, freeform rp - LOOKING FOR 2 PLAYERS  (Read 1846 times)

Askot Bokbondeler

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ok, the game has started, choobakka and psycho jelly havent replied in a while so i'm not counting on them
currently on game are mocman, yoink, and me, i'm willing to take two more players.

there are no properly defined rules, but here are a few general guidelines
- you can write whatever you want, but respect what has been written before you
- do not kill or otherwise directly control the other player characters without their consent
- you can contest what someone writes, either because it breaks some guidelines, or because you generally don't like it, this guideline exists to prevent bad roleplaying like mary sueism, etc, and to keep the setting to the liking of everybody, the points contested are then debated by all the players, and all the players should try to reach a consent
- we're here to have fun, try not to antagonize anybody, specially when invoking the above mentioned guideline

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original OP:
i don't know what you guys would call this, i want to play a game where i can contribute to the story in more that a mechanical sentence describing the actions of my character, but i don't want to be the game master either.

i'm in the mood for either a post apocalyptic fantasy a la darksun or a paleolithic\early bronze age setting, where magic is rare and mysterious. for example, superstitions make sense, but there is no fireball throwing wizard class.

we'll start like this in the first posts: we'll describe in broad strokes the setting we're in, as if we were all game masters, then we'll each define a character and start adventuring.

anybody up for it? i propose we start with only four people, if anybody else is interested enough we can add them later.
ingame posts shall be typed in bold, OOC posts shall be typed in regular font. ingame posts at least should be written in proper english.
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Re: post apocalyptic\paleolithic fantasy rpg
« Reply #1 on: May 19, 2011, 07:08:58 pm »

The world was a great place once. Huge cities, full of men, and dwarves, and elves. The races coexisted peacefully. The skyscrapers stretched to the heavens, the dwarven halls delved deep into the earth. Until the Dark One rose to power. He was the leader of a small country, which had always been neutral. A mountain country, with human cities, Elvish treehomes, and deep dwarven halls. The attacks were unexpected. He took one of the nearby countries first, and then others. He had a fanatical following, and any opposition was crushed. A group of nations banded together, and airships bombed his capital as infantry attacked his borders. Then he revealed it. A weapon to end all weapons. Mined from the bedrock under the capital. The dwarves dug deep... And they woke something. He could control it... But many say that it was actually controlling him. It ravaged the world. Destroyed cities, and wrecked the land so nothing could grow. Then it retreated. Back into its home. And collapsed the country around itself. Just a pit remains there.

And there's the apocalypse.
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Re: post apocalyptic\paleolithic fantasy rpg
« Reply #2 on: May 19, 2011, 08:03:08 pm »

i was hoping for a bit of discussion of the idea before we started... oh well


   Streets that once teemed with life now were swarmed by restless dead, for no-one was left to bury them. The once fertile fields gave way to arid landscapes, the earth too dry and too ravaged to feed the populations that fled the cities. The elven forests turned against their ancient protectors, the spirits of the land had been slain and the vegetation itself seemed possessed by feelings of hate and vengeance, even the once tame plants grew thorns and those that grew the fruits that once fed the elves now brewed poisons... the only animals left standing were vicious predators, whose violence the dark spirits rewarded with nourishment. Where the sun didn't scorch the earth, life had to battle freezing winds, and the old tunnels of the dwarves were now abandoned to the twisted creatures that the abyss spewed...
   For thousands of years the earth was unable to mend it's scars, and the secrets of civilization were forgotten... even the dwarves forgot the secrets of metal working, and feared the underground like any other sane creature, the elves now nurtured only resentment and hate against the forest, and lived shorter and shorter lives, as the blessing of immortality waned from their souls...
   The shape of the peoples was itself twisted by the curse of the land, the elves, once known for their fair features, now beared the semblance of naked skulls: their fine hairs burned out of their heads, and their thin skin dried up and receded, exposing sharp reptilian teeth; dwarves almost lost their eyesight, and bony warts and protrusions filled the skin of their bodies.
   The curses of humans were the most varied, though, to the point that one was able to tell from what town a human was from just by the curses that afflicted his appearance

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Re: post apocalyptic\paleolithic fantasy rpg
« Reply #3 on: May 20, 2011, 12:35:46 am »

Magic's secrets long since lost, now it enthralls and uses humans as they once abused it. The Ghasts are it's puppets, with a hive mind that wish to enslave all that cross their path. They are the only ones to possess a kingdom... Using profane rituals to bring unnatural and sadistic prosperity built on the backs of nonmagical slaves. They are the veritable rulers of the old ruins... places where no man ventures for fear of their soul. Even worse than capture by Ghasts is to become one... A horribly random occurrence that more often than not results in the exile or execution of it's subject. Goblins from the far north combat them, they bear no curse, and are the only heralds of a world that once was, bearing terrible weapons of ancient steel and armor forged by the great smiths of ages past. The goblins bear no Ghasts, and seek to destroy the abominations before anything terrible can happen again.
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Re: post apocalyptic\paleolithic fantasy rpg
« Reply #4 on: May 20, 2011, 12:52:50 am »

ok, i'll wait a few hours for a fourth player before i post a reply(i also need to get some sleep). to avoid loosing a huge reply because somebody ninjaed you and it no longer makes sense, if you are going to take some time to post make a post reserving your spot. you then have one hour to write what you want or you'll lose your spot

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« Reply #5 on: May 26, 2011, 05:21:16 am »

Dwarfs and Elves have given into the Ghasts and Goblins were now being slaughtered. Hundreds of years gone by but then a magic not seen since The Beginning of the world it's self, seeped through the lands. Though the magic still weak, it touched the strongest of souls giving them a Sparkle of Hope, Great Ambition, and Heroic Skills. Though almost everything had given in, these several souls would have to find each other and spread that hope lifting the world out of it's Gloomy curse. Before another Dark One arose, and woke 'IT' again...

i think its a great seg-way into the Rp except it seems worded wrong :-\
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Re: post apocalyptic\paleolithic fantasy rpg
« Reply #6 on: May 26, 2011, 05:46:19 am »

Well, you already have four people, but I'd certainly like to join in somewhere down the track! :) Interesting idea!
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« Reply #7 on: May 26, 2011, 10:13:00 am »

man, i'm so glad this resurfaced i'm allowing you in if you want to join now

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Re: post apocalyptic\paleolithic fantasy rpg
« Reply #8 on: May 26, 2011, 12:32:56 pm »

  It was the twelfth century after the cataclysm, though nobody was counting; the golden age of the world had been forgotten, and all the spirits the peoples knew were the manifestations of violence and destruction itself. All that remained of the old civilizations were small villages scattered across the broken land, each knowing the rest of the world only by the perils described, the peoples feared the supernatural, and all had forgotten the old gods, the only rituals being practiced now were to appease violent spirits, and so, the call of this new entity was often left unheeded...

  The southern desert lands were home to the Turiok peoples, the dark skinned humans. The Bajalak were a Turiok tribe who lived of hunting and animal rearing, they were known for painting their bodies with a mixture of clay and blood, and were cursed with taloned fingers and large pustules on their back and shoulders, but despite their mutated hands, their marksmanship was remarkable. Askot was an elder of a Bajalak clan, he was approaching his fiftieth year and The Ache was taking over his bones, but was well respected among the tribesmen for his wisdom and his hunting skills. One night, an omen came to him in a dream...
  He saw a naked child standing in a lush jungle, but a forest much tamer than the ones he had known. It was morning, and as the sun rose the child grew up and by noon it was already a beautiful woman. Around her the forest had changed into a village, but the clock didn't stop, and as the woman aged it got fatter and was becoming covered in jewelry, and around her stone buildings rose higher than the tallest trees Askot had known.
  By dusk it had become a bloated old woman with her arms covered in golden bracelets, her ears so heavily dangling with gold that her lobes stretched bellow her shin, her body so covered in jewelry that one could see more the color of gold than the brown of her skin, and around her white stone buildings, themselves decorated with jewelry, covered the landscape... the floor itself was paved with stones smooth as the surface of still water... Then the night came, and from the forest of stone buildings savage beasts appeared and attacked the elderly woman. She stood still as the beasts devoured her flesh, and around her the buildings crumbled and were covered by the fierce vegetation Askot had known all his life.

  The beasts feasted on the meat of the fat elderly woman until only a skeleton stood in the place of a woman, then, with bloated stomaches, the beasts lazily retired to the forest. The skeleton of the woman spent the rest of the night picking up scraps of flesh that had dropped from the beasts mouths, and covering her bones with these until it was again an old woman. This time though instead of a bloated body, there was barelly enough skin to cover her bones. It was then that she spoke, and when she spoke the words seemed to come from the earth itself...
   "Askot of the Bajalak, I am again alive, although my strength is limited. I bear a child in my belly, and a new dawn approaches, but the world must be made safe before my daughter can succeed me. I cannot reveal myself, lest I awake the beasts and alert them of my presence, but I can inspire and empower the noblest souls. You must search these warriors and one day rally them against the beasts, but for now you must be secretive. Say farewell to your family and travel north. I will come to you again soon."
  Askot did so. He told his people the lions had spoke to him in dreams, that they had demanded his flesh, or they would come down on his clan, and left his village with only his bow and knife, and only a little water and no food. Lest somebody suspect the true nature of his journey.

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« Reply #9 on: May 26, 2011, 01:08:29 pm »

   For as long as Amuzet could remember he had always had a unique ability to purify any plant he'd ever come across yet this plant seemed different. "For as long as our elders could remember," the elders of his town and hundreds of other towns surrounding would say,"all the plants and animals of this earth had been dry of fascination and care." But this was not true of the plant, as it was also not true of Amuzet.
   Amuzet, a short, 8 yr old human sat staring at this plant because he knew he hadn't touched it ever before. The plant had defied all conventional of these gloomy times. And that thought sat in the back of his mind for years. Now a strong and tall 16 male, Amuzet had be denied to stay in the presence of his town any longer. 'Everyone in the world has a curse' Amuzet thought,'I guess this ability is mine.' He'd been outcasted by his own family for his ability. He remembered the plant and and decided to go back and take it with him. When he got there there was not only one but, two, and a third about to sprout.
   Then it moved and began to speak. Amuzet had never seen anything of the like before, but decided to listen.
         "Me and my mother are still weak, and unable to live completely among you, but know that we have been, and will be watching you and your friends. What you must do now is travel south to the Garr Sea then go west. Understand that we cannot quite help until the people of this world are willing to accept it. Your ability isn't a curse its a gift one that will spread hope, but do not advertise it, as 'IT' might wake. I must leave this form now,but know we will be waiting"
   Amuzet was astonished but said simply,"Yes Madam"


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Re: post apocalyptic\paleolithic fantasy rpg
« Reply #10 on: May 26, 2011, 01:22:33 pm »

just a little objection
"As long as the sun had not been in the sky,"
if you're basing this on my post, the night and dawn in Askot's dream are metaphorical. the sun still rises and sets in the world. If it is your contribution to the game world creation, i think it is a bit unrealistic for a world immersed in a thousand year night to still sustain plant life at all

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« Reply #11 on: May 28, 2011, 12:26:32 am »

bumping the fuck out of this shit

who's still with me? i'll be dropping the people that don't reply

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« Reply #12 on: May 28, 2011, 04:59:29 am »


   Amuzet, on his own going south, was horrified by the scenery of his travels. Yet Remembering the mobs of elves, Dwarves and humans alike at his home threatening to kill him if ever he came back, made him favor the wilderness.
So he calmed him self, purifying the vegetation around him.

   Several hunters were headed home but stopped in their tracks by this bizarre sight. The trees and plants began to seem different to them, it wasn't a very dramatic change but noticeable. As they approached the center of the change they saw something astonishing. A boy eating the berries of a plant that would sicken anything that ate it. Amuzet unknowingly gave these hunters hope, something he too needed. Amuzet got up and kept going, the hunters were bewildered and facinated, all them thinking,'An actual edible plant! We can eat plants?!? What is that boy?'
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« Reply #13 on: May 28, 2011, 05:33:30 am »

thanks for sticking with this :) but i'd like to see the rest of the guys posting
i'll pm them and wait 24 hours. i'll drop the guys who don't reply and open up some slots... meanwhile this needs a name

is "defiled earth" too generic?

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« Reply #14 on: May 28, 2011, 10:53:46 am »

Wow, it's late and this got waaaaaay too long. Um. :S
I put the bulk of it in spoiler tags... Really long, warned ya... And I'mma go sleep now.
Sorry if it's rambling crap, I might edit tomorr- Zzzzzzz.


Somewhere cold, deep in the icy wastes of the north, surrounded on all sides by tundra, was a pitifully small group of huts, huddled around one small pocket of trees amongst the barren landscape.
In one of those huts, on the outskirts of the 'village', if it even warranted such a title, was a goblin doing his best to get very, very stoned.

Nogosh Spidermash had been born far to the south, in a slightly more temperate land where the ground was only covered in ice for about half the year. Even then, his race had been in decline... Though before then they had avoided the main brunt of the 'thing' that happened, its details lost in time, their culture had devolved from what it once was. No longer did they build great, shining black towers, rising into the sky like the jagged tooth of some immense beast. No longer did they fight great wars, slaughtering all their opponents and decorating the hills for miles around with piked corpses. No, these things were long-lost, deep in their racial memories, as their entire existence was dedicated to combating the taint.

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That was about four years ago now... Or was it fourteen? Nogosh couldn't remember anymore. He didn't care. Didn't want to remember. He'd long ago realised that there was nothing left. Only suffering. Cold. Death.
And the stubborn pain within his chest that refused to heal.
Half mindless with shock, his limbs slowly failing from the extreme cold as he wandered further north, he would have died if he had not been found by scouts, from one of the last vestiges of goblinkind, even more secluded than before. They had none of the ancient weapons, and mostly had never even stood on unfrozen ground, apart from a few of Nogosh's fellow refugees, from other villages.

They had nursed him back to health, revering him almost as a god for the flail he carried. Nogosh barely noticed. He slouched around the pitiful hamlet in a daze, memories of horror flashing through his mind. When a young goblin maid had introduced him to  a narcotic brew made from the few plants that grew in this hell-hole, he had willingly slipped into a haze of unconsciousness and drug-dreams.

And so it went, until this day. Nogosh was sober for the first time in, quite possibly, over a year. His dulled sensed idly obsevred the room he was in, and he scowled in irritation. Why weren't the herbs having their usual effect? He drained several bowls of the stuff, one normally enough to knock him out, to no avail. Just as he was about to go completely insane, his surroundings suddenly dimmed, and a terrifying appiration appeared before him in his tiny hut. What he saw was a small human child, growing rapidly to an adult woman, although the terrified, drug-addled goblin had no idea what he was seeing. He watched, frozen, as buildings grew where before there were his walls, and screamed aloud as they suddenly crumbled, replaced by beasts that lunged and tore the figure apart.

He watched mesmerised as the thing calmly put itself back together, before speaking to him.

Bla bla bla, this is getting too long. They say the same stuff as in the other dream, more or less, telling him to go south, or something.
Then suddenly, it disppeared, and with a jolt he was back in his room, surrounded by empty bowls of the narcotic juice. Mind spinning, he got to his feet, threw himself into some clothes that had not been worn for a year, filled a satchel with drugs, (this time in smokable form, with a pipe) and, grabbing up his flail, still encrusted with dried blood, ran silently out of the hut, out of the village, past the bewildered eyes of his fellow survivors.
He ran South...
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