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[Taricus]

I'd say it's more of a third leg to him .

[Phantom]

I kinda guessed it after I stopped reading halfway through the story and my face fell off.

[Criptfeind]

I do really like the last paragraph though.

Edit: That part of the story is unsurprisingly ripped right out of a book.

[Terenos]

Ooh. Good fluff. Least so far as I can see. I like how you paint Gnomes as devilishly evil.

[Criptfeind]

Ooh. Good fluff. Least so far as I can see. I like how you paint Gnomes as devilishly evil.

History has a funny way of distorting in some eyes.

I guess we will never know who is right.

_{Edit: Me.}

[Phantom]

I'd write something about the McBrents, Racist Gnomes and SPACE Feudal Russians, but I wouldn't do good.

[Taricus]

I'd some fluff but I'm not exactly a good writer.

[Criptfeind]

I'd some fluff but I'm not exactly a good writer.

I'd write something about the McBrents, Racist Gnomes and SPACE Feudal Russians, but I wouldn't do good.

Did'ent stop me!

Go for it! Tis what the tread is about.

[Taricus]

Doesn't help that I'm being sleep-deprived right now. I'll do it tonight.

[Phantom]

Argh, this Amerikan needs some sleep.

[Taricus]

Eh, Atleast you haven't gone nocturnal yet...

[Criptfeind]

I would be a lair if I said I did not need some and a lair if I said I was going to get some.

[Iituem]

Eight hundred years makes it post-Unification, during the height of the wizard's reign (which started 1000 years ago).  If that's what you were aiming for, cool.  Otherwise, just be aware of timing.

[Johnfalcon99977]

Nice fluff!

Damn, you didn't just paint the Gnomes evil, you painted them as demons.

Although the Ariani would've just attacked them outright. They don't take very kindly to the undead, as in my fluff on the first page.

Edit: Ima also going to put something in the slavery section about how Farland used the most slaves. Even now with their freedom back the Gnomes have many many Ariani slaves.

[Criptfeind]

Eight hundred years makes it post-Unification, during the height of the wizard's reign (which started 1000 years ago).  If that's what you were aiming for, cool.  Otherwise, just be aware of timing.

The idea is for Regrad the Red to be still alive when the tribes of the red hand are integrated into the empire. I was unaware the wizard was active that early, I thought he took over five hundred years ago. I will need to change it for it is a pretty big part of the story (not maybe our story, but a story) that the spell of mastery greatly weakened the undead.