Not to offend, but you seem a bit naive for a law school graduate, firstly there is far more to political pressure than having teams of lawyers bothering politicians. Also you have these broad solutions without any regard to the financials. How will you pay for these great new programs? And while its all well and good to say "our schools should be better, i'll lobby to make them better," you aren't offering any structured solutions, which is one of the services that lobbyists strive to provide.
The other thing is that lobbyist is a toxic word, and you should always call yourself an advocacy group if you're running on public donations. Lobbyists is the word for those representing businesses, the NRA and collections of smaller units of governments. There are already a great variety of public advocacy groups.
The final issue I see is that this seems more like creating a lobbying group to further your own platform, and having other pay you to do it. If your group isn't centered around a singular tenant you'll be hard pressed to find people willing to donate, as you'll likely not be on the same page on at least a few issues. Efficacy will also be a big issue, even if you find a group of people willing to finance your operation, they're going to want to see demonstrable results, do you know enough about the legislative process to be able to strong arm an uncompromised bill into signing in the first few years of your run?
I'm just going to ignore the offensive parts of that, which is more than they deserve but meh.
a.) This is preliminary, no final sales terms are here. Needs polish. That's pretty clear to everybody.
b.) This posting has to be general. Would you like me to go over the Administrative Procedures Act and the difference between rule-making, and adjudication with you? How about all the committees, subcommittees etc? It would literally take about 30 pages and it's boring as hell. Yes, I know how legislation really works. Thank you.
c.) Most of what I'm saying isn't that expensive to the government. Take a look at the first page.
Most of it just involves changing the way we do things, not the costs of doing them.
Here's the simple and short of it because people don't read posts:Government efficiency.
Government procedure for handling everything from phone calls to letters is clogged as hell. These can be adjusted with minimal cost by adopting efficient workplace procedures with existing staff. As for business abuses, regulators really don't cost that much and they save you more in the abuse that they prevent.
Unless you like government inefficiency, long phone hold times, and no one caring about you being bled dry by people buying your government, you should agree. No?
Again, needs polish and I get that. Did you honestly think I would start out by posting a finished, polished product? That's not how these things work. It's a process that evolves over time.
There are so many soundbites for themes here I could pick:
Standing up for the Everyday American.
Making Government work for the people it represents.
Bringing jobs back to our country...
Pick one, or all of them.
I get it. I've posted before how I would go about getting people to buy in.
Unified theme,
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Honestly my two biggest problems are:
1.) Finding time between doing this and work in the legal field.
2.) Getting people to care enough to actually do something. Apathy. It's lethal.