Thanks
The paragraphs are already mostly short enough. I think people also read the ellipses differently than I do. I use it when I want a pause that's only a little more than a regular period. I'll keep it in mind though.
Oh, and Kazo isn't really much the type for being a pirate. He's not greedy enough :p
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Kazo met Yeln at the very top of the stairwell, crouched between the second-to-top stair and the closed hatch. As soon as Kazo opened the hatch, Yeln exited. Kazo exited as well, shutting the hatch behind himself. Kazo decided that, since he was in an opportune location, he would test the spear first. Who would be his subject? He wouldn't kill anyone, but he would find a way to test the spears effectiveness.
He looked around, and saw a guard armored in leather standing in front of the entrance to a wooden warehouse. Kazo walked over to the guard, and stood a distance in front of him. Yeln walked silently to the corner of the wooden building, and sat, watching. Kazo drew the spear, and flipped a small switch near the forward handle. The spear hummed slightly, the hum vanishing after a second. The guard spoke, drawing his half-sword, "Put that damn weapon away!" Kazo snickered, tilted his head a bit, and gestured to bring it on. The guard scowled, "You want me to MESS YOU UP? PUT THAT THING AWAY!"
Kazo smiled, and moved toward the guard, spear drawn back as if he were going to strike. The first test would actually be defense with it, as Kazo rarely ever swung the first blow. Kazo predicted this would likely result in structural failure of the spear, as the shaft was both thin and wooden, but he would try anyway. The guard smacked the spear to the side, and charged at Kazo. Kazo drew the spear up, ducking behind it in a parry. The blunt side of the sword struck the shaft of the spear between the two grips... SNAP! Kazo backed away one step. He now held a wooden stick with a handle in one hand, and a now shortened, one handed spear in the other. As he had predicted...
Now he would test the power of the weapon... well, the piece he held in his right hand, anyway. Kazo swiped at the guard with it as the guard drew up to swing again. Kazo struck the guard in the lower body. It cut into the leather, but not all the way through. Kazo had intended to do this rather than stab, as he didn't wish to mortally wound the guard. As the guard swung, Kazo drew back. The spear tip touched a metal button on the vest, discharging some of its built up energy through the button. The guard grunted loudly, bending forward and jumping a bit, his swing missing horribly. If Kazo had stabbed through the vest, the entire discharge would've gone right through the guards guts. This spear was actually useful in any situation, as even if a physical point has trouble going through metal plate armor, electricity favors such a medium.
Now, for the sake of his own curiosity, he would test what magic could do on top of it. He decided for this test to allow the electricity to 'ride' within a channel of mana. Kazo stepped back, holding the spear back, and channeled his energy through the spear to the tip, focusing it to the point where the mana began to leak out from the tip. As the guard drew near, Kazo formed this leaked mana into a line between the tip and the guards head, using the mana to break down the air into a more conductive state. Electrical energy arced right from the tip of the spear to the guards head. The guard stumbled forward and grunted again, catching himself from falling over. Kazo noticed the guard was stunned. A tactically effective result.
Kazo held the metal cylinder, and charged the spear with his own energy. Kazo then brought the flat side of the spear down onto the guards head, landing a powerful hit complete with a powerful jolt. The guard yelled, and seemed quite dizzy. The grunted, and with his remaining strength, swung at Kazo again. The blow landed on Kazos side, causing nothing but a clanking sound. Kazo grabbed the guards wrist, and pulled the guard toward himself, kicking the guard in the face as he pulled the guard close. Kazo let go, then kicked the guard in the head again. The guard fell over backwards, unconscious, nose bleeding a bit.
Another guard, standing opposite the center of town, laughed, and spoke, "You dumb s**t!" Kazo noticed this guard was actually referring to the guard Kazo had just knocked unconscious. Rivalry between the guards, perhaps? The other guard wasn't showing any hostile intent. Kazo shut the spear off, then put it away. He held the broken part of the shaft in his other hand. Yeln followed as Kazo walked back to the hatch. Kazo snickered, holding the dull end of the broken shaft above Yeln. Yeln mewed playfully, jumping up and swatting at the end of the shaft, attempting to grab hold of the shaft and bite it on each jump. Kazo moved it around, resulting in Yeln making some rather amusing maneuvers in an attempt to catch it, spinning in the air and tracking it with his head. Eventually, Kazo lowered the piece of the shaft low enough for Yeln to get hold of it. Yeln happily yet ferociously bit into the shaft several times.
This stopped though as Kazo reached the hatch... Yeln opted to stay away from it. Kazo opened the hatch, and descended the stairwell, shutting the hatch behind himself. Yeln waited patiently outside. Kazo walked into Rostus' living room... he seemed to be not there. Kazo looked around. One door that had once been locked was now open. Kazo grinned and waved his tail excitedly as he walked toward the previously secret room. The room was white, several heavy machines encased in steel present against the walls. Rostus was present at one of these machines, wearing a lead suit and heavy gloves, using some kind of mechanical instrument on whatever was inside of the bay of the machine. A part of the machine sticking up on the side blocked Kazos view.
Kazo approached silently, noticing the whitish rays glowing in Rostus' black-glass goggles. Just as Kazo was about to look in, Rostus slid a steel cover shut over the bay of the machine, and looked back at Kazo. Kazo took out the other part of the spear, and held one in each hand, "It works great except for defense. I don't think wood was such a good idea!" Rostus spoke, "Metal shafts are needed... noted. I will have to notify the dwarves that they need to make the grips out of something insulating. I expect at least one of them will make the grips out of metal anyway... I wouldn't want to wield one of those. As promised, you may keep the prototype." Kazo looked at the two broken pieces... Rostus continued, "Now, go and retrieve those documents for me please."
Kazo walked to the machine Rostus was at, and curiously moved to remove the cover. Rostus spoke, "DON'T touch my machines or the deal is off!" Kazo thought about it. He could explore this facility after he had the fuel. Kazo decided against removing the cover, he would do so at a later date. Kazo asked, "Why do you hide everything?" Rostus replied, "Because the technology that I work with is very, well, hazardous, should it fall into the wrong hands. The military especially must never be allowed to gain this technology, and this means your mission to retrieve those documents is all the more urgent. Now go, and return when you have them." Kazo asked, "So why is it dangerous?" Rostus answered, "Because it has great destructive potential." Kazo continued, "Is there something more specific?" Rostus replied, "I pray to the heavens we will never have to find out... now go, this is very urgent, and I trust your capabilities in accomplishing this task."
Kazo replied, "Sure thing! Goodbye!" Rostus spoke, "Best of luck." Kazo then left, putting both parts of the spear away. He would fix it back at Steelflame. If the name had a real meaning, he should have no problem finding a forge with which to make a new shaft. Kazo left the room, and proceeded back up the stairwell. As he exited through the hatch, Yeln mewed excitedly and ran up to Kazo, nuzzling Kazos leg and purring. Kazo snickered and smiled. Retrieving secrets from a military base somewhere... it could prove to be an interesting situation. Kazo loved uncovering secrets and he loved interesting situations. On top of it all, his feline friend might decide to follow him there to witness it.