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Author Topic: When did ponies become awesome? What else have I missed? (take 2)  (Read 442854 times)

FunctionZero

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Re: When did ponies become awesome? What else have I missed? (take 2)
« Reply #2025 on: September 04, 2011, 05:22:45 pm »
Quote from: kaijyuu on September 04, 2011, 05:10:40 pm
FZ, you're trying to trick people. Tsk tsk.
What else is there to do?
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Re: When did ponies become awesome? What else have I missed? (take 2)
« Reply #2026 on: September 04, 2011, 05:23:49 pm »
Quote from: FunctionZero on September 04, 2011, 05:22:45 pm
Quote from: kaijyuu on September 04, 2011, 05:10:40 pm
FZ, you're trying to trick people. Tsk tsk.
What else is there to do?
Discuss clopfics normal pony stuff.
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Re: When did ponies become awesome? What else have I missed? (take 2)
« Reply #2027 on: September 04, 2011, 05:27:01 pm »
If ya'll want something half decent from the old generations, try this.
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For, in order that men should resist injustice, something more is necessary than that they should think injustice unpleasant. They must think injustice absurd; above all, they must think it startling. They must retain the violence of a virgin astonishment. When the pessimist looks at any infamy, it is to him, after all, only a repetition of the infamy of existence. But the optimist sees injustice as something discordant and unexpected, and it stings him into action.

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Re: When did ponies become awesome? What else have I missed? (take 2)
« Reply #2028 on: September 04, 2011, 10:12:10 pm »
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Re: When did ponies become awesome? What else have I missed? (take 2)
« Reply #2029 on: September 04, 2011, 10:15:32 pm »
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I have something, too!
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Re: When did ponies become awesome? What else have I missed? (take 2)
« Reply #2030 on: September 04, 2011, 10:28:43 pm »
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Re: When did ponies become awesome? What else have I missed? (take 2)
« Reply #2031 on: September 04, 2011, 10:37:08 pm »
Well, I've managed to finally finish my fanfic. It's not quite the ending I hoped for, but it's better than any other idea I tried. I'm still more than willing to revise it if anyone offers me tips. I'm a perfectionist, and the ability to reach an improved state is better than most of my other forms of entertainment.

Anyway, here it is:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1w2lF1bySlCiItqqi4eGvmm7XSyEYpLUDDS2UY6LRjm0/edit?hl=en_US
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« Reply #2032 on: September 04, 2011, 11:05:19 pm »
Some shipd'awwww
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« Reply #2033 on: September 04, 2011, 11:09:28 pm »
Bronze, as to your fic, the ending seems a bit off. If'n she had done something wrong, wouldn't they be more likely to ostracise her or banish her, not just 'loltorture'?
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[Dsarker is] a good for nothing troll.
You do not convince me. You rationalize your actions and because the result is favorable you become right.
"There are times, Sember, when I could believe your mother had a secret lover. Looking at you makes me wonder if it was one of my goats."

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Re: When did ponies become awesome? What else have I missed? (take 2)
« Reply #2034 on: September 04, 2011, 11:30:15 pm »
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Re: When did ponies become awesome? What else have I missed? (take 2)
« Reply #2035 on: September 04, 2011, 11:38:12 pm »
Quote from: Dsarker on September 04, 2011, 11:09:28 pm
Bronze, as to your fic, the ending seems a bit off. If'n she had done something wrong, wouldn't they be more likely to ostracise her or banish her, not just 'loltorture'?
I knew there was something important missing from the fic.
Cherry Red's got a paranoia-heavy form of Antisocial Personality Disorder. She was lying about the law because the small part of her that's still remotely sane wanted to end the situation peacefully. When that failed, her paranoia that her neighbors would judge her drove her to perform a hack abortion on Cherry Blossom and then lock her in the basement to hide her shame.
Now that you brought that up, I'm going to take some time seeing how in the hell I can fit all that into the fic.
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Re: When did ponies become awesome? What else have I missed? (take 2)
« Reply #2036 on: September 04, 2011, 11:44:25 pm »
Quote from: FunctionZero on September 04, 2011, 11:30:15 pm
Quote from: Jacob/Lee on September 04, 2011, 10:15:32 pm
I have something, too!

>john joseco
So? He's the best brony artist out there IMO.
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Re: When did ponies become awesome? What else have I missed? (take 2)
« Reply #2037 on: September 05, 2011, 12:00:23 am »
Quote from: TheBronzePickle on September 04, 2011, 11:38:12 pm
Quote from: Dsarker on September 04, 2011, 11:09:28 pm
Bronze, as to your fic, the ending seems a bit off. If'n she had done something wrong, wouldn't they be more likely to ostracise her or banish her, not just 'loltorture'?
I knew there was something important missing from the fic.
Cherry Red's got a paranoia-heavy form of Antisocial Personality Disorder. She was lying about the law because the small part of her that's still remotely sane wanted to end the situation peacefully. When that failed, her paranoia that her neighbors would judge her drove her to perform a hack abortion on Cherry Blossom and then lock her in the basement to hide her shame.
Now that you brought that up, I'm going to take some time seeing how in the hell I can fit all that into the fic.

Firstly, have Cherry Blossom start saying that it isn't the law, and have Red shush her. Maybe have it clearer what was done to her. Make it clear that Red isn't quite right.
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[Dsarker is] a good for nothing troll.
You do not convince me. You rationalize your actions and because the result is favorable you become right.
"There are times, Sember, when I could believe your mother had a secret lover. Looking at you makes me wonder if it was one of my goats."

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Re: When did ponies become awesome? What else have I missed? (take 2)
« Reply #2038 on: September 05, 2011, 12:18:25 am »
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« Reply #2039 on: September 05, 2011, 12:18:52 am »
« Last Edit: September 05, 2011, 12:31:05 am by Jacob/Lee »
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