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[Furtuka]

so friend is gonna possess her?

[mcclay]

I really like this idea so I shall add to it.
prepare for wall of story text!

The sub approached the temple. Mat grabbed the hang rail as they drea closer his firend Todd stood next to him, his ak slung over his back. As they docked looked at him and winked , Todd jsut shruggded. As they entred they threw their hoods on as they were transformed from cloaked solidrs to cult members. As tey approached the gate two cultisit stood in the squads way "halt, who goes there!" shouted one. "ones who don't like chliche anwsers said matt as he pulled out his M60. THe cultists eyes opned up wide and was about to shout when Matt opned fire. Blood flew everywhere as the door was blown open as soliders opned fire into the great chamber kill muptile hostiles. Screams echoed through the chamber as robed figures fell into a pool of green water. As matt advanced to it he saw the symblols etched around it. "hould your fire it's a trap!" he yelled as a great tneacled being broke from the portla.

[Furtuka]

...wha???

[mcclay]

mkaing a cladstine goverment agenangcy. with added story finishing soon!

[Furtuka]

could you use spellcheck?

[mcclay]

how do i use it while posting

[Furtuka]

Well for me if the word is underlined red then a list of fixes will pop up after right clicking it

[mcclay]

dosen't do that for me.

[Furtuka]

huh.

[FuzzyZergling]

Why not just press "preview", find all your errors, then fix them manually?
That's what I do.

Also, epic update is epic!

[mcclay]

well tommarrow i will finsih my exapmle plotline and hope it is added to the story.
Here are two races I would like to add

outer gods

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The outer gods are are strange race that wishes to control and perver all of humainty, If they had their way: the fariy would be dead, magic would be realeased and the world would be warped beyond sanity and mankine would be horrbile adombations, never piss the off. I think friend would be a good outer god.

eledritch things

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The eledritch things are the servents of the outer gods. Their goals are whatever their masters goals are they can take human form but they prefer to goes as horrbile Cthulu rip offs. maybe the people who are robbign the trian could be them?

Also, where is the ywhole part when the get into the train sitaution, It maybe in a blank spolier?

[Furtuka]

they seem kinda "off" to me for some reason

[mcclay]

That's the pint, they suppposed to seem off;right now. But further into the story (if the Autohr agress t ip) their plans will be unveiled, that and they need some fleshing out. But that is a task for another day (aka tomarrow)

[FuzzyZergling]

I think of Friend as being "immune" to magic, which is why he needed to use a non-magical source for his "body".
But that is up to Terrahex, of course.

[mcclay]

their not really magical, more like.. I dunno, but Iguess i could be someting deeper and evlier than magic. i dunno what you would call it.