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[Terrahex]

thanks but *YAWN* my sister decided it would be fun to invite a friend over. they've been blaring thier music loudly for hours while running around the house. and if that's not enough, her twin brother has this postman thing from legend of zelda going on and he knocks on my door every five seconds.

yet my parent somehow sleep through all of this. the only place that I can get any quiet whatsoever is down here where the only internet in my entire house is.

suffice to say, I didn't get the amount done I was hoping to post tonight. sorry.

perhaps tomorrow. I think I might end up sleeping on the couch.

[Terrahex]

okay guys. I stayed up until 5 AM last night browsing the forums. great.
but after spending the whole day napping, I'm still sleepy. I need to work on it, but... what do you guys think I should do?

[ragnarok97071]

if you're tired, you should sleep. Or write up more of your awesome story. whichever.

[Scood]

if you're tired, you should sleep. Or write up more of your awesome story. whichever.

this

[Terrahex]

thanks for being entirely unhelpful.

[Scood]

thats what we are here for.

glad to be of service.

[Terrahex]

okay guys. last night I dreamed that my legs were cut off. it was pretty wierd, but it got me thinking that maybe we could have a character with prostetic(? not sure how to spell that) legs that he could control. they would have superhuman strength of course.

so anyone agree?

[Furtuka]

Sure

[Terrahex]

cool, do you want me to come up with the bio, or you guys?

[Furtuka]

well it was your idea

[Terrahex]

I've got some Ideas I suppose. so you want it to be a surprise or a... not surprise.

[Terrahex]

Name: Jamie Tallas
appearance: jetblack hair worn in braid, tallish, red eyes, legs cut off, robot leg replacements
bio: not sorted out yet, but believe me, it will be epic
personality: seems rough, but actually very heroic and caring, she doesn't know about the Fay.


this will probably be one of the last main characters introduced

[Terrahex]

what I have typed so far. keep in mind that this is not the final version. I still have to go through two or three stages of editing, not to mention I also have to finish the update itself...

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

   Aeta and Faelyn ran quickly through the train terminal, pushing their way through crowds and barreling through people with little guilt. Aeta’s backpack bounced up and down with each slam of her sneakers onto the floor.

   “I knew that you would lose them. I knew.” Aeta yelled at Faelyn between exasperated pants. “I offered to hold on to the tickets, but no.”

   “Yes I get it already,” Faelyn replied, “I feel horrible, now will you stop rubbing it in?”

   Aeta vaulted over a man’s suitcase, leading her friend toward their train. “Not until we’re on the train.”

   A voice suddenly came on through the speakers. "Train from Obiridos to Lumen is now leaving." it was barely heard over the crowds in train terminal C. Aeta looked ahead. All that separated them and the train were a couple of lax ticket takers next to those annoying booths that have those spinning bars. The train let out a loud woot and a loud screech echoed through the building.

   "We can make it." Aeta and Faelyn said to each other at the same time. Faelyn smirked.

   “Hey stop!” a ticket vendor noticed them running towards them. “The train is already leaving; no one’s allowed to go past this point.” Aeta and Faelyn didn’t give him half an eye, running right past him and jumping over the turnstiles. By now the train was already moving quickly past them, passengers’ cars moving quickly. Aeta took Faelyn’s hand and everything turned grey. Faelyn and Aeta looked at each other quickly. Each was surrounded by a light blue outline that separated their colorful bodies from the slow-moving, muted world. Aeta and Faelyn jumped simultaneously onto the train as a gap between two cars moved in front of them. They landed on a metal grate floor over the large metal hook that held the two sections of train together, and the world returned to color.

   Doubled over, panting, the two girls with their hands on their knees smiled as the train moved on its metal tracks. “Nice job.” Faelyn said, opening the door to the train car, entering to a narrow space with rows of three seats lining the walls. Each outer seat had a window though every rider was currently looking at the two Changelings who got on late. They just waved weakly and took the only empty row of seat their were in the car

It's starting to look like you guys will be getting a small portion of the story ahead of time always

[Scood]

i don't know if its too late but i disagree, i don't really like the idea of super armor...or prosthetics. makes it soun likeits set in afuure technological point instead of a present technological point i think that anything abnormal should stay related to the fay world. thats just my opinion buti would really lie to hear the oppinnions of others

[Furtuka]

maybe its magitech and she doesn't know it?