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[Neonivek]

Frankly after seeing her chainsaw I expected her to check her wallet and found half her cash missing.

Though I guess that could happen after she tries to replace it.

Edit Note: No I am not making suggestions... I am just being somewhat random.

[Enzo]

Oh, I forgot to respond to this:

Frankly after seeing her chainsaw I expected her to check her wallet and found half her cash missing.

I have given thought to this at various times, because it's such an obvious thing to build a joke off of, and I've concluded that there is no satisfying way to convey someone missing half their money. There is no visual shorthand for it. Someone could just say "Hey! Half my money is missing!" I guess, but that is just horrible.

Also Updoot. No end of chapter rant this time.

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[Max White]

Still badass!   

[Mysteriousbluepuppet]

Fuck yeah, Crobat IS actually a good pokemon.

[Taricus]

Ooohhh, who's the chainsaw's replacement.

[Acanthus117]

((Hey, Taricus! DH117 here~))

[Korbac]

This story has taken a turn for the blatently dark and violent.

 

[Taricus]

((@Acanthus: Forth wall gone  0D))

[Acanthus117]

0D indeed.

Also, I feel so bad for our heroine.

WHAT WILL SHE KILL STUFF WITH NOW?!

[USEC_OFFICER]

0D indeed.

Also, I feel so bad for our heroine.

WHAT WILL SHE KILL STUFF WITH NOW?!

Her fists seem to be working well.

[Acanthus117]

Unless her FISTS are made of STEEL, like the Heavy, I don't think she'll have an easy time.

[IronyOwl]

Wait what.

[Neonivek]

I have given thought to this at various times, because it's such an obvious thing to build a joke off of, and I've concluded that there is no satisfying way to convey someone missing half their money. There is no visual shorthand for it. Someone could just say "Hey! Half my money is missing!" I guess, but that is just horrible

Actually I thought of a few ways. Though given that Pink rarely speaks it can be tough. Though actually I thought more on the lines of her screaming that they stole her wallet too with a pan to the villains where the underling asks why he bothered to take her wallet and he goes "Tradition". or something like that. (Or she goes to buy something and finds out her wallet was also stollen, goes to the bank and finds her account empty, then goes home and finds her piggybank broken into)

Though that is why I don't write these comics, because your actually funny.

And your comic is in what I call the: Heaping of the plot

So I have no real words for where it is right now.

[Enzo]

Wait what.

Thank you. I would have felt like a complete failure if at least one person didn't respond with this.

This story has taken a turn for the blatently dark and violent.

And your comic is in what I call the: Heaping of the plot

So I have no real words for where it is right now.

Alright, I feel as though I should address this. The basis of comedy - real comedy, not puns and silly faces - is to build up an expectation and then subvert it. Basically, the whole last half of this chapter was an extension of a single gag, in which I subverted the built up expectation for silliness as hard as I could. This culminated with the ridiculously darker-and-edgier end of chapter page (intended emphasis on ridiculous). I mean, compare is to the other two end of chapter pages. This is hopefully a humourous juxtaposition. Did it work? Fucked if I know! But I'm just experimenting here and it gave me the chance to try some things this comics wouldn't usually accommodate.

I guess I could have gone even more over-the-top with the timeskip, given Pink an eyepatch or something.

Anyway, that's not to say the plot is going to be completely irrelevant, just that the impression that everything is going to be SUPER SRS from now on is a false one. Just to clear things up.

[Neonivek]

Ohhh oops.

I thought that was someone other then Pink.

Hense why I thought you were what I call "Heaping on plot". Which isn't a bad thing but it is so neutral that it can be only judged by its resolution. Or rather, I thought you were adding a new character right after you just had the main character defeated by a mysterious group.