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[IronyOwl]

God I love these puns.

Also faces.

[Neonivek]

I think your problem with chapter two may be more that it really was rather aimless and was mostly enough Pink walking around.

I'd give suggestions but those suggestions would be wrong... so...

Keep up the good work! *thumbs up!*

[Enzo]

Updated the OP, it now archives all comics to date. Didn't take as long as I thought.

I think your problem with chapter two may be more that it really was rather aimless and was mostly enough Pink walking around.

I'd give suggestions but those suggestions would be wrong... so...

Even if I disagree with and veto a suggestion, I still take it into consideration and appreciate the feedback.

I think the problem wasn't too much Pink walking around but:
1) Literally half, 9 of 18 pages, featuring Team Neutron.
2) This chapter, believe it or not, did serve the function of setting some stuff up for a bit later on. Being more interested in the payoff, my heart wasn't completely in it.
3) I decided at the last minute that all the chapters are going to be the same number of pages, thus skimping on the tail end.

[Neonivek]

I meant more or less that while I may think I know how to aid the comic, I know that anything I suggest will likely be the opposite.

It is like when boring people tell comedians how to be funny

[Armok]

<3
That's all there really is to say on the matter.

[fqllve]

Yes.

I would just like to say that I also enjoy this. The terrible puns are all great, and so are the faces.

As for any problems with chapter two, I enjoyed it. Most of the Neutron pages were hilarious, so I don't see how anyone could begrudge you for them. Maybe if it continued like this, but that doesn't seem likely so it doesn't seem like a big problem.

Keep it up dude!

[SolarShado]

So what if you had a bit of a weak finish for this chapter, no-one can be

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all the time

[Enzo]

Well, this being a learning experience and all, and I find articulating what I think I did wrong helps me figure out what I'm doing wrong. And the responses help me tell whether it's really bad or I'm just being completely neurotic.

Oh! Speaking of learning and being bad at things (terrible segue!) I thought I'd try my hand at a title page for chapter 1. I got all the way to the colours before I remembered I'm terrible at colouring and I shouldn't even try. If anyone has skills in the field and feels like doing something COLLABORATION STYLE, I can send you the full-res version of this...

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...and you can make it pretty. I will pay you in hugs.

[Willfor]

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I may have confused 'pretty' for 'horrifying'. See the text under my avatar for details.

[Sean Mirrsen]

Neat take. Btw, how would a zombie apocalypse work in the Pokemon universe?

Anyway, my take:

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[Neonivek]

Oddly enough I pictured Pink's hair as sort of an Aqua

[USEC_OFFICER]

Oddly enough I pictured Pink's hair as sort of an Aqua

Blond for me.

[Neonivek]

I guess it depends if we ever see her take off her hat.

I just always seen her as Ugly and almost manlike. Hense why I think the realism shot was supposed to be more of a joke.

So if she takes off her hat and she is attractive... Yeah Blond

If she takes it off and is still sort of ugly... Ill stick to Aqua.

[Armok]

Pinks hair is, obviously, pink.

((I actually don't imagine it in colour at all... Just as is.))

[Neonivek]

Pinks hair is, obviously, pink.

((I actually don't imagine it in colour at all... Just as is.))

So white hair