Bay 12 Games Forum

Please login or register.

Login with username, password and session length
Advanced search  
Pages: [1] 2

Author Topic: The journey of a thousand boulders begins with a single leak in the roof.  (Read 2004 times)

Untelligent

  • Bay Watcher
  • I eat flesh!
    • View Profile

But before I can tell you that story, I have to tell you this story.



The smallish continent known as the Land of Murders has not known the light of civilization for long -- only fifty years ago did seafarers from the distant lands begin to settle it. However, after those mere five decades, the seeds of what may become great histories have already been sown.

For now, let us look at the three fledgling dwarven nations. One, The Quiet Bridge of the frozen south, is mostly boring, aside from their secretive arms-dealing to both sides of a nearby elf-human war. Another, The Pulley of Wringing of the eastern ridges, is also content, aside from occasional raids from the nearby difficult-to-pronounce kobold den of Thlafafablarbin. For a tale worthy of telling, the third Dwarven nation, The Peaceful Viper-Razors of the western spires, seems the most promising, so we shall examine its current predicament.

Once, the Peaceful Viper-Razors were indeed peaceful, but from out of the dark and jagged peaks on the far shore of a nearby inland sea, Smug, the Lilac Demon and Master of the rising goblin empire, has begun to ignite the flames of war. His dark towers of Zonngokang are situated in a fell mountain range known by many names; though officially called the Dour Fingers, some also speak of the range as the Demon's Claw, or the Dark Cross.



Already the goblins have begun expanding to the mountain range on the north shores, no doubt preparing to strike the dwarves from both sides in a pincer attack. In the interest of national security, a small band of bold dwarves have been sent to build an outpost deep within enemy territory. For there, at the tallest Finger at the south end of the Cross, a base camp would be established which would one day aid the dwarves in their defense against the Lilac Demon.

That day, should it ever arise, will likely be long after our tales have reached their conclusion, for Smug has the patience of the immortals and bides his time. Until then, we shall follow the lives of these dwarves who dwell in the shadow of the Demon's Claw. More specifically, we shall follow one Solon Cruxdagger -- Doc Cruxdagger to his friends -- for it is his vision that will, in years to come, drive this fortress to a new, far bolder purpose.

The outpost administrators in the mountainhomes had decided on the name Heavenscrapes**, for the mighty mountains of the Demon's Claw seem to clutch at the very halls of Armok himself. Whether this newly-founded fortress will survive to live up to its name will be determined by a chief doctor who didn't even managed to reach the base camp at the valley floor before being headbutted partway down the mountain by a local goat, breaking two of his limbs.



**My apologies to the fine folks at Skyscrapes. I rarely frequent the Community Games & Stories forum, and if I looked at it BEFORE I finished embarking I'd've used a different name.



Doc Cruxdagger's Journal
28 Felsite, 51



The bloody roof still leaks.

It's all that miner Zuntir's fault. It was his brilliant idea to make mud for a mushroom farm by digging a big room underneath a pond and poking a hole in the roof. It worked, but now the only place I can hang around in without tripping over a rock and sending bolts of excruciating pain through my still-mending upper leg has a steady drip. Apparently our fearless leader wasn't aware that ponds don't just appear out of nowhere; something has to fill them up. Something like rain. Something which, apparently, happens here quite a lot. And now he justifies his decision with the reasoning that it'll keep the mud from drying up, and refuses to plug up the hole.

Anyway, we got in a fairly minor argument -- we didn't even sever anything -- and in a fit of anger, he shouted that if I was so smart, I could be the Chief Foreman and Architect. So now I'm in charge of planning out the fortress and designating all the rooms and buildings. It'll be a handful on top of the medical  work I'll be doing in the future, but despite the creepy purplish tinge around the mountain I've yet to see anything more dangerous than that goat, so maybe it won't be as bad as the legends make it out to be.

Zuntir still refuses to fix the leaky farm room, though. I suppose he has a point about the mud, but I still want to get back at him. Maybe I'll design a fortress that can't possibly have a leaky roof. That'll show him... nah, it'd have to be rediculously tall. I'll just start getting us further underground, once we finish getting settled in. Next on the agenda will be getting a hospital set up. I was trained by the finest lumberjack in the whole of the Viper-Razors, I should be able to get this leg patched up.
Logged
The World Without Knifebear — A much safer world indeed.
regardless, the slime shooter will be completed, come hell or high water, which are both entirely plausible setbacks at this point.

existent

  • Bay Watcher
  • I Watch Bays
    • View Profile

I like it so far. Sounds.... grandiose. Have you planned/played ahead for this "bolder purpose" or are you just making it up as you go?
Logged
[DF 0.31.13]  ۝ War of the Ring Mod ۝  [WotR 0.13.3]

War of the Ring is back baby!
A mod based on Lord of the Rings, by JRR Tolkien.

Dariush

  • Bay Watcher
  • I don't think I !!am!!, therefore I !!am!! not
    • View Profile

I love your introduction as to how you came to power :) Will you start dorfing people?
Btw, you shouldn't excuse yourself for Heavenscrapes - there's a fortress of Tinmurdered currently being played.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Untelligent

  • Bay Watcher
  • I eat flesh!
    • View Profile

Malachite 2

My ram-wound was in a difficult place to get at, so I had my friend Tulon, the other miner, describe it to me so I could reach a diagonosis. It wasn't quite as effective as if I were looking at a patient myself, but I need to get these limbs treated as soon as possible. That'll probably have to be done by someone else too, which I'm not really looking forward too.

I'm having Tulon get some soap made so I can stave off infection. Meanwhile, the mechanic's making a couple traction benches. Her name escapes me at the moment. Maybe I'll call her Meanwhile, aha ha. I think the funny feeling in my arm is making me a wee bit loopy. That arm might have to come off if we don't get some soap around here soon.



Malachite 6

An assortment of dwarves have arrived to aid in the defense of Heavenscrapes; a smelter, a speardwarf, a marksdwarf, and a High Master weaponsmith. Additionally, we received a thresher/mason, a Fisherdwarf, and a clothier. No doctors. I'm reassigning that fisherdwarf to train as my apprentice so I don't die because Tulon was too busy mining to help scrub the purring maggots out of my thigh.

Additionally, I'm having a barracks and an armory set up near the entrance. When all the medical paraphernalia's up and running and I've got a fair chance of survival, we're going to start a shaft heading down through the roots of the mountain... and perhaps up, too. That might be the arm talking again.





Have you planned/played ahead for this "bolder purpose" or are you just making it up as you go?

Planned yes played no.

Will you start dorfing people?

Sorry, I can't keep track of a lot of individual dwarves, especially if I start associating people with them. This is mostly just a story.
« Last Edit: July 21, 2010, 09:59:22 pm by Untelligent »
Logged
The World Without Knifebear — A much safer world indeed.
regardless, the slime shooter will be completed, come hell or high water, which are both entirely plausible setbacks at this point.

Heron TSG

  • Bay Watcher
  • The Seal Goddess
    • View Profile

Indeed it does. I'll be watching this like a hawk.

KRAW KRAW
Logged

Est Sularus Oth Mithas
The Artist Formerly Known as Barbarossa TSG

Untelligent

  • Bay Watcher
  • I eat flesh!
    • View Profile

16 Malachite

bretheren still trying to invent soap. infection's passed though thanks to the miracle of swampy pond water, thank armok. the fisher-turned-intern iden dangerrock slipped up on the sutures in my leg though - feels like a herd of hedgehogs making love to my femur. hard to concentrate on writing. idens just about to learn how to set a bone/dress a wound, hope that goes better



27 Malachite

The apprentice patched up my broken bones surprisingly well, and the pain's much better now. Bandages and splints went well too, but in between splints he stopped and stared at a wall for two hours, and wouldn't answer me when I swore at him. Hmm.



1st Galena

It's been a somewhat frightening five months, but I'm well and walking around again, with some difficulty -- and more importantly, I can get my own booze now. The bastards only gave me water during my stint on the other side of the scalpel, and I haven't had any fermented shroom squeezings in ages.

It seems it hasn't rained and the roof in the farm room's stopped leaking; I'm going to have a room built somewhere else for us to hang out in so that doesn't bother me or anyone else. The hospital was one of the places they were loitering in while I was bedridden, and the constant staring at me was mildly disturbing. I'll have to put a stop to that too.

Next on the agenda is getting our military trained. Etur "Marmot-shafter" Axeprairies, the commander sent to us last month, has been bothering me to bother the miners to get that barracks finished for a while.








Through will and leadership, Doc Cruxdagger was able to save himself from an untimely death with the help of his new apprentice -- and will, barring catastrophe, continue to practice his profession with his pupil for many years, undoubtedly saving the lives of many others yet to come. Though his tale has reached its conclusion, the saga of Heavenscrapes has yet to truly begin. While Cruxdagger strives toward the day when his vision becomes reality, the next dwarf we shall follow has a more practical goal in mind: raising a mighty militia from the untrained peasants, to defend this beacon of Dwarven civilization from the forces of darkness that, when they discover a surprising settlement in their backyard, will begin a campaign to eradicate both the emergent outpost and run-on sentences.
Logged
The World Without Knifebear — A much safer world indeed.
regardless, the slime shooter will be completed, come hell or high water, which are both entirely plausible setbacks at this point.

Iituem

  • Bay Watcher
    • View Profile

Brilliant opening line.  This is definitely a story to watch.
Logged
Let's Play Arcanum: Of Steamworks & Magic Obscura! - The adventures of Jack Hunt, gentleman rogue.

No slaughtering every man, woman and child we see just to teleport to the moon.

Heron TSG

  • Bay Watcher
  • The Seal Goddess
    • View Profile

Can't let those run-on sentences live or else they will take over the world like the goblins plan to but because everyone is in their way they have to kill everyone including the humans, dwarves, and elves.
Logged

Est Sularus Oth Mithas
The Artist Formerly Known as Barbarossa TSG

Untelligent

  • Bay Watcher
  • I eat flesh!
    • View Profile

"Hoy, lass! You there!"

"What?" the startled Tekkud exclaimed.

"You are now a member of the grand militia of Heavenscrapes!" shouted the stocky dwarf, tossing Tekkud a wooden axe. "Bring this to the barracks. Don't cut yerself with it, it's sharper than it looks."

"We have a barracks?"

"We do now. Last room before the stairs leading up to the surface. Right inside the vomit-green doors, you can't miss 'em."




"Right, then," began the commander, glancing around the room. His trusted lietenant, Eral, leaned against a nearby wall; the sound of copper on stone echoed from around the corner, the miners having only partially completed the war chambers. "As a metalcrafter, you've been designated the least productive member of our fourteen-dwarf society, and therefore the best candidate to be trained in the art of armed combat.

"You may or may not know me as Etur 'Marmot-Shafter' Axeprairies," the dwarf exposited. "From this day onward, I will be your commander. You will obey me at all times, whether in the field or in the barracks. Firstly," he began, taking a strange-looking metal rod with two short prongs on one end and a ridged loop on the other from atop a nearby boulder, "we're going to do a little practice. Since my marmot shafter didn't survive the journey here," he said, glaring at the lietenant, "we'll stick to dodging until we can get some proper weapons.

"First! Remember, it doesn't matter how good you are at swinging that embodiment of irony you're holding right now, if you can't survive long enough to swing it!" Etur adjusted his grip on the short rod. "I got this widget from the mechanic. Not sure what it's for; she called it a Servomechanical Torsion Facilitator. Right hefty, though. Anyway, if you can dodge a Servomechanical Torsion Facilitator, you can dodge an iron warhammer. Think fast, lassy!"

"Wha-"

thuk!

"Arlgh! Bastard, that's my favorite forearm!"

"Good thing we're practicing then, eh? A hammer would've taken that arm right off! I've got a whole set of these things, we'll make a master dodger out of you yet!"

thuk!

"@&%$!"

"If you can't dodge in time, don't be afraid to parry! That's just wood, but it's a masterful axe, it won't bust easily"

thuk!

"Hrrk!"

thuk!

"Aiyk!"

chink!

"Lookit that, we're learning! Arright, we'll take a break now. Go see the Doc, he'll be happy to have some work to do."
« Last Edit: July 23, 2010, 03:51:02 pm by Untelligent »
Logged
The World Without Knifebear — A much safer world indeed.
regardless, the slime shooter will be completed, come hell or high water, which are both entirely plausible setbacks at this point.

existent

  • Bay Watcher
  • I Watch Bays
    • View Profile

I liked that one. Very well written.
Logged
[DF 0.31.13]  ۝ War of the Ring Mod ۝  [WotR 0.13.3]

War of the Ring is back baby!
A mod based on Lord of the Rings, by JRR Tolkien.

Heron TSG

  • Bay Watcher
  • The Seal Goddess
    • View Profile

If you can dodge a wrench, you can dodge a dodgeball!
Logged

Est Sularus Oth Mithas
The Artist Formerly Known as Barbarossa TSG

Iituem

  • Bay Watcher
    • View Profile

"Hoy, lass! You there!"

"What?" the startled Tekkud exclaimed.


Heheh.  A very, very small number of people will appreciate why that name out of the name generator makes me smile.
Logged
Let's Play Arcanum: Of Steamworks & Magic Obscura! - The adventures of Jack Hunt, gentleman rogue.

No slaughtering every man, woman and child we see just to teleport to the moon.

Heron TSG

  • Bay Watcher
  • The Seal Goddess
    • View Profile

I suppose she was just the top pick of the day.
Logged

Est Sularus Oth Mithas
The Artist Formerly Known as Barbarossa TSG

Untelligent

  • Bay Watcher
  • I eat flesh!
    • View Profile

I don't get it. Why so conspiracyrious? :v
Logged
The World Without Knifebear — A much safer world indeed.
regardless, the slime shooter will be completed, come hell or high water, which are both entirely plausible setbacks at this point.
Pages: [1] 2