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Re: They told me I could be anything...
« Reply #330 on: July 06, 2010, 02:51:49 pm »

Offer to join them, with a rousing speech about joining the height of the human form and mind with the perfection of technology and such. Make it seem like they are getting the good end of the deal by letting us have some access to their resources beyond what normal members get.
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Re: They told me I could be anything...
« Reply #331 on: July 06, 2010, 03:25:48 pm »

This seems a bit fishy.

Why does he respect us? I would understand amazement, fear, anything but instant respect. If their contacts have been with the enlightened, then why would he not treat us as them? He must have come into contact with other immortals who do not seem as hostile.

I say do what Armok said, but keep an eye out for anything suspicious.
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« Reply #332 on: July 06, 2010, 05:28:22 pm »

Try to get a feel for how they feel about the clockworkers.
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Re: They told me I could be anything...
« Reply #333 on: July 06, 2010, 05:34:06 pm »

Say that we wish to join them so that we may learn.
This, but first ask what makes us so great. Resembling a painting labled only "unknown man, unknown artist" is, while unusual,not inherantly worthy of respect. What does he know about this painting?
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Re: They told me I could be anything...
« Reply #334 on: July 06, 2010, 05:40:17 pm »

Well, seeing as there's no information on the plaque, either there is no useful information about it, or the information is classified.

There is no certain guarantee (although the man's awe suggests it to be so) that the man has access to the classified information, and he might not provide it to us free of charge. Particularly because simply asking suggests ignorance and is therefore a sign of weakness: paradoxically, he might tell us about the painting only if we don't express our ignorance of it. Heck, we might have donated it, and asked for them to classify the information about it ourselves.

I don't think asking about it and ourselves is a good idea, it's a sign of weakness. They may respect strong immortals, but they might perform experiments on the weak ones.
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« Reply #335 on: July 06, 2010, 05:55:20 pm »

"I wish to join you, could you take me to the guild master?" Your question was simple yet delivered with an air of authority. The man was all too eager to help you, nodding vigorously as he spoke "Of course, I am sure that he will be thrilled to hear that a man of your nature deems us worthy such association!" He responded, starting to lead the way as he dismissed his subordinate with a wave of his hand.

You could see longing in the eyes of that man as he was dismissed, you could feel the manner in what he was stricken with the desire to follow and see how this all panned out. Following the man, you decided to use the few minutes you estimated that you had before you met up with the guild master to inquire about a few more things that you knew were important for you to know.

"Is this degree of admiration for those of immortal nature common amongst the Technomancers or is it more of a personal thing?" You asked, though you already had a good idea about what the answer to this question was going to be.

"Many immortals have keen minds from the centuries their life has seen, many of them are bored with routine and want to experiment, to discover new things. During the time they typically remain with us, they tend to invent and innovate in a manner that many of us can only dream of." he paused, laughing slightly "That's always aided by the fact that they cannot die if an experiment floods an area with toxic fumes for one."

You gave the man a crooked smile, you could see the advantage there, yet you were far from dissatisfied with life as it was. If anything, your many years of life had taught you to appreciate it, to embrace it and to love every moment of it.

"Not all of us feel that way about life. While I love to see new things like any other, I find myself in love with the beauty the world has to offer. How could I possibly tire of life, when I have the stars to send me off at night and the song of birds to awaken me in the morning?" You chuckled. The man was somewhat taken off guard by this, but none the less understood it.

"That's quite the enduring love you have there. I suppose you have transcended mortal failings in some ways with your experiences, though it must be hard for you still to see people that you knew grow old and pass on." He sighed, mostly speaking his mind aloud in this case as he led you up a winding staircase.

"In a way, I like to think that I am as human as ever. If I became indifferent to what the world had to offer, I would no longer be alike those that I have always surrounded myself with." Came your response. You knew you'd always done such, you knew that you had always done your best to better the lives of others. "I mourn the loss of those I knew when their time comes, yet I celebrate the lives they had. When the time comes, wouldn't you after all, be happy to know that your friends, your family, would celebrate the life you had?"

"I suppose I would be happy to know that they loved me enough to do such a thing, yes." He responded, rubbing his chin briefly as he led you through a large hall, towards an office. "I must say that you are not what I was expecting. I am thankful for it I must say, as meeting someone who has seen centuries pass and still holds a passion for life is warming in a manner."

"I do have one other quick question before I meet with the guild master. What is the relationship of the Technomancer's in relation to the Enlightened?" You paused, briefly before adding to this. "I know that the Clockworker's are opposed strongly to them, I know you provide weapons for the Clockworker's mechanical men, but, are you as strongly opposed to them as they are?"

"Oh, heavens no, we may make weapons, we may maintain a friendly enough relationship with the Clockworker's, but, we do not go out of our way to interact with the Enlightened in either positive or negative manners. I guess you could say it's more about the thrill of invention for us, than using any of the inventions we make on actual people." he responded, pausing as he guestured to the door before you.

"This would be the office of the guild master. I'll inform him that you wish to meet him."

The man knocked on the door to the office before letting himself in, the muffled sound of voices catching your attention for a moment as the two of them spoke, though you couldn't make out anything from this side of the door.

"He's ready to see you." The man stated as he stepped out of the room, prompting a nod from you as you stepped past him and into the cluttered office of the guild master. It wasn't what you were expecting, to find an office cluttered with books and papers, with a bent old man huddled over the desk. You had been expecting this office to be extravagent, for the man sat behind the desk to be well groomed.

Instead, there you had what appeared to be an eccentric old man with a broad beard that stretched half way down his chest. You could see that there was intelligence behind those eyes though. "So, you're interested in joining us. Why don't you convince me you're bringing something to us that makes waiving the standard joining process worth while?"

The man was straight to the point at least.

You took a deep breath, standing tall, standing proud as you decided that it was time to deliver your case to this man.

"I am an immortal, I have lived for many lifetimes, I have seen armies rise and fall, I have seen the progression of technology from bows and swords to revolvers and rifles. I have seen tactics devised and defeated, I have seen gunpowder rise from its origins and become an established tool of war. I have seen defences rise and fall as progress obsoletes them. I have many lifetimes worth of experiences to draw upon to fuel how I tinker with things. With what I may potentially bring, should it not be you trying to convince me, however?"

You had him at I am.

"You clearly have something in mind, so, why don't you tell me what you truely want." The man stated, leaning forward as he placed his chin against one hand, visibly intrigued with you. Taking another breath, you stepped over to his desk, looking him in the eyes as you spoke.

"I want access to your dormitorys for myself and a friend, I want the assured safety of said friend from retribution from the Enlightened. I want higher priority given to aquiring materials, to forging and finishing things that I am able to design for you. If you will provide this in addition to basic necessities, then what I invent under your roof will be yours to do what you wish with."

You were giving up a lot here, but you knew it was a good idea to sacrifice these things for a good position. You could always renegotiate when the situation changed, sever ties if it came to such.

The guild master reached out for your hand as he nodded. "These are unusual terms, but, you are an unusual man. I will do my best to have your work given priority where possible, I will have you and your friend housed and your needs tended to, but, I do expect you to deliver results." he stated, prompting a smile from you as you shook his hand.

It was good enough for the time being.

"I will get the appropriate documents for you to sign sorted and ready, along with papers for the appropriate people relating to the benefits you are to be given. These things will take a little to prepare, so, if you have anything to take care of before you bring your friend here, you have time." the man stated, before giving you a dismissive wave to let you know that you were done. Was there anything pressing you still needed to get done before you brought Anne here?

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Re: They told me I could be anything...
« Reply #336 on: July 06, 2010, 06:15:42 pm »

I can't think of anything pressing we need to do right now, but our next point should go to air I think.

Typos I found:
dormitorys v dormitories
extravagent v extravagant
truely v truly
aquiring v acquiring
guestured v gestured
What is the relationship of the Technomancer's in relation to <-- Technomancers
relationship with the Clockworker's <-- Clockworkers
the Clockworker's are <-- Clockworkers

Sorry to nitpick, feel free to ignore me :)
« Last Edit: July 06, 2010, 06:25:56 pm by penguify »
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« Reply #337 on: July 06, 2010, 06:33:26 pm »

If we are to continue working for Red, we must make sure he understands that the guild will need us, and as such we must have a more fluid schedule. If we are to quit, we must do so. Besides that, I can think of nothing.
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« Reply #338 on: July 06, 2010, 06:38:35 pm »

We should ask Anne about her name on the way...
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Re: They told me I could be anything...
« Reply #339 on: July 06, 2010, 06:42:49 pm »

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Typos I found:
(snip)
Sorry to nitpick, feel free to ignore me :)

This is another reminder that I should install something with a spellchecker. I'd like to think I'm not doing too horribly at least for the fact this is all written up in Wordpad.))

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« Reply #340 on: July 06, 2010, 06:50:01 pm »

Well, for no spell-checker it's pretty good.

We should ask Anne about her name on the way...
Anne's real name is Anxiety, that wasn't just a hallucination. Remember when we introduced her to Red? It was along the lines of " 'My name is Anxi-' 'Anne. Her name is Anne.' "

If we are to continue working for Red, we must make sure he understands that the guild will need us, and as such we must have a more fluid schedule. If we are to quit, we must do so. Besides that, I can think of nothing.
I said we didn't have anything left to do because when we go over to pick Anne up we can tell Red about our resignation, because they're in the same place. (I don't think we'll be able to split the time around well enough to keep that job, so we should just resign).
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Re: They told me I could be anything...
« Reply #341 on: July 06, 2010, 06:55:57 pm »

But they could have just taken up glorifying names as they gained immortality. The Real Anxiety could be someone else entirely.
Also, we can't just assume actions. Type it out.
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« Reply #342 on: July 06, 2010, 07:24:08 pm »

While we're on the subject of corrections, you shouldn't always put in a full stop when you finish a sentence within quotation marks, unless you're also finishing a sentence outside them. If you're not, put in a comma. So this

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"In a way, I like to think that I am as human as ever. If I became indifferent to what the world had to offer, I would no longer be alike those that I have always surrounded myself with." Came your response.

should be like this:

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"In a way, I like to think that I am as human as ever. If I became indifferent to what the world had to offer, I would no longer be like those that I have always surrounded myself with," came your response.

Note the difference between 'like' and 'alike' as well. You do tend to make a lot of mistakes, but they're not particularly noticeable. :P
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« Reply #343 on: July 06, 2010, 07:27:21 pm »

While we're on the subject of corrections, you shouldn't always put in a full stop when you finish a sentence within quotation marks, unless you're also finishing a sentence outside them. If you're not, put in a comma. So this

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"In a way, I like to think that I am as human as ever. If I became indifferent to what the world had to offer, I would no longer be alike those that I have always surrounded myself with." Came your response.

should be like this:

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"In a way, I like to think that I am as human as ever. If I became indifferent to what the world had to offer, I would no longer be like those that I have always surrounded myself with," came your response.

Note the difference between 'like' and 'alike' as well. You do tend to make a lot of mistakes, but they're not particularly noticeable. :P
Oh wow, I generally pride myself on being able to spot other peoples' typos, and I totally missed that one!
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« Reply #344 on: July 06, 2010, 07:53:02 pm »

We should ask Anne about her name on the way...
Anne's real name is Anxiety, that wasn't just a hallucination. Remember when we introduced her to Red? It was along the lines of " 'My name is Anxi-' 'Anne. Her name is Anne.' "
Yes, exactly, we should ask her about it. That name was significant to us before we met her...
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