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[olbohn]

They vomit in the sunlight,
Caked in blood and mud,
Puppies and kittens taste good.

[Capntastic]

Five seven and five.
That's how you make a haiku.
Here's a good example.

[Retro]

Hey Capntastic
I think in your last stanza
You overdid it

[Capntastic]

Good eye.  Edited.

[Retro]

Hate to tell you but
The last stanza is still six
Better luck next time?

P.S. to OP:
There is already a thread
For dwarven haiku

[Capntastic]

Not how I pronounce it, no.

[Rowanas]

But Capntastic,
how else can you pronounce that?
I want to know now.

Back to topic now,
the construction of haikus
I'll give it a shot

Dwarves that dig too deep
how am I to manage them?
They are too rowdy

hey, I like this stuff
I think I will post only
in haiku's from now

[Capntastic]

If we're gonna nitpick each other to death, why do you pluralize haiku by adding an s?  Plural of haiku is haiku.  Furthermore, why an apostrophe?

Edit:  Just noticed you have an apostrophe in one 'haiku's' and not in the other.  This is some serious outsider art business.

[DJ]

Where's the seasonal element?

[Rowanas]

Well noticed, capn.
I'm ashamed of my mistakes,
all grammatical.

Grammar nazi hell,
I have erred in my spelling
and punctuation

P.S. to Capn,
I was only curious
It confused me lots.

DJ wants seasons
I shall rain down blows on him
like petals in spring.

[Kidiri]

This thread has been done
Look in Dwarf Mode discussion
And find some wisdom

[Capntastic]

Someone already linked that, Kidiri.

[Medicine Man]

This thread to be locked
Lying on its death bed now
Thread has been struck down

[IronTomato]

I necro the thread,
I gesture at it, it moves,
I'm such a badass.

[pisskop]

Curses now thrown upon you
Demons of hellfire gnaw your soul
Your essence bleeds away