Eh, I suppose that while I support what seems to be the point of the article (which seems to be, "Think about what you're doing, because you don't just have to rape somebody to participate in the culture that makes rape seem acceptable to the people that do"), my main problem is that a lot of things that do often contribute, don't necessarily contribute. For instance, I think it's an unfair blanket statement to include, "... or proceeds in discussions as if the interests of the women are the same as the interests of the men." That seems to indicate that a person supports rape by suggesting that he and his friends should go see a movie after 6:00 to ensure that they are all done with work (the assumption here being that everyone is interested in seeing a movie, but cannot go see it when they're supposed to be working, and that all people present have similar work schedules). It may be that it's supposed to be more equivalent to, "the interests of men and women", but I think that in this case the use of articles changes the meaning... significantly. That's the only item I can think of, though, where I think the statement was simply too broad. There are a number of others where the behavior is overwhelmingly likely to be contributing, but needn't be in principle (though that might be a basic assumption that we're already supposed to know).
The other thing is that last point, "He defends these actions by saying that some women also engage in them." It's completely true, and it's also why the article shouldn't be written in such a way as to imply that the items on the list apply only to men, because it seems to me that it's just as important for women to consider them (it may be that it's a stylistic choice in feminist writing and anybody acquainted with the subject knows that it's not intended to apply only to men, but that really isn't helping the popular mischaracterization of it as the whole feminazi thing). The reason I bring it up is because that last point seems particularly likely to be misinterpreted as saying that women are immune to criticism.