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[Rex_Nex]

Here's most of my revisions, only have 5 gratitude points though -

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    *   Misuse of grammar Should read: "I think someone tried to tell me something..."
    * Link code - Link Code (The following are located in the 3rd informer customization box) Bricks for temple - Bricks for Temple Level progress - Level Progress Inventory progress - Inventory Progress Health progress - Heal Progress Quest caption - Quest Caption Quest progress - Quest Progress
    * General info - General Info Game options - Game Options Change password - Change Password
    * Just a minor change. Should read: Stumbled over something hard. "Something hard" turned out to be a chest of gold.
    * Hero's diary - Hero's Diary Hero's stats - Hero's Stats + Monsters killed - Monsters Killed + Death count - Death Count + Bricks for temple - Bricks for Temple + Town name - Town Name News from the battlefields - News from the Battlefields Remote control - Remote Control Have an idea? - Have and Idea?
    * Looks like I messed up on the wording for this one. Should read: "Suddenly I banged my head into nothing. It's like there is an invisible wall there... or was that just my imagination?"
    * Missing word: the Should read: "using the feedback form below"
    * There are many, many instances of the site using capitalization for certain words on and off (Such as the word "Godville"), and several things that would usually have capitalization lack it completely. (Such as the titles for the in-game hints page. Example: "Heroic Personality" as one title, and another being "Golden bricks") Just a minor site error, nothing big. This, I presume, would take a lot of work to wade through and fix correctly. Pointing it out, though.
    * Missing space Should read: "Special loot (optional):"
    * Misspelled word (Administraton) Should read: "9. Administration reserves the right to"
    * Should read: "Each power charge can instantly restore 50% of your godpower." OR "Each power charge can instantly restore 50% godpower." In addition, the use of "Can" is unrequired, there is no "can" about it, it always restores 50% godpower.
    * Grammatical Error (theirs) Should read: "among their members"
    * Unsure if this is deliberate, but there is an extra "ed" on "helped" Should read: "in and helped to make Godville better."
    * Missing word: your Should read: "a reward. Your hero can"
    * Missing word: your Should read: "believe. Your hero will write"
    * Misuse of Grammar: he'll Should read: "once he sees it."
    * Missing word: your Should read: "reach the ground. Your hero will write"
    * Missing word: your Should read: "so don't be surprised if your hero will not obey you."
    * Missing Word: your Should read: "Personality has a big impact on your hero's activities."
    * Missing Word: a (hero is in fight) Misuse of Word: other (with other hero) Should read: "Hero is in a fight with another hero or with a strong monster" Personally, ditching the "with a" on the end would sound best: "Hero is in a fight with another hero or strong monster"
    * Misspelled: Bought (Bough) Should read: "e. g., it can be bought from the trader,"
    * Missing space. Should read: "restore 50% of godpower. It might"
    * Should read: "I think I know what that was... Great one, I'm quite busy now, can you check back later?"
    * Should read: "Achieved Level [level#]" or "Achieved Experience Level [level#]"
    * Should read: "Welcome to the pantheons!"
    * Should read: "Our reputable priesty-judges and other mostly-respected...."
    * Should read: "Gold: about one thousand". May apply to the other statistics (Such as monsters killed), and may or may not apply to other units (Such as one hundred, one ten, etc.)
    * "I need to harvest these crops..." or "We need to kill these 65 340 285 bores..." is missing it's commas. I should read "I need to harvest these crops..." or "We need to kill these 65,340,285 bores..."
    * Great one, if you EXIST, help me. Otherwise, move aside.
    * Give heroes some more distinction from each other by giving them characteristics, such as their own personality, that can slowly change. This will be completely independent from what we have now (Good, Neutral, Evil), and rename the current Character line in the hero tab to "Alignment".
    * It would be nice (And probably pretty easy) if you implemented a simple background changer. The white background is a pain in the eyes when your looking at the sight at night. Some suggested colors: White Green Black Blue These are just a few. Just throwing that out there, in case you find it appealing.
    * I recently was looking into a deep well and felt compelled to kick someone down it. Madness.
    * Applying more dakka to [monster] for [amount of damage]...
    * I was walking, and suddenly I banged my head into nothing! It's like there is an invisible wall there or something. Probably just my imagination, Ill go the other way.
    * apply for participation in the Paralympics

[Farce]

Passed by a billboard with words on it: 'Beerburg - we still exist!'.

Besides that and me being level 10, nothing interesting happening with my hero at the moment.  :x

Oh wait.  I think he finished another quest while I was gone.

I had gardening shears for a while, but they were switched out to a battle shovel.

I also had a tank driver's helm +2. The stupid hero switched it out for a mask of rabbit -1.

I'm really glad that I am an evil god, and will have the opportunity to kill my hero for this after he prays.

What, are you serious?  Murdering and rampaging across the countryside is waaay more terrifying when you do it in a rabbit mask.  With that battleshovel he can dig up carrots, too.

Had some fun at 'Boatmurdered' - spent 425 gold coins.

That fun should totally be Fun.  We must all send in corrections.

If I could draw, I'd so wanna draw my heroine, who is running around wearing a bathrobe, a pumpkin on her head, bracers of the working teacher and beating up Epic Beard Men with sticks.

I imagine bracers of the working teacher to have straps all over it for chalk and red pens.  Maybe dry-erase markers, and like a little pouch for a stamp-pad and gradesheet.

[Nirur Torir]

I had gardening shears for a while, but they were switched out to a battle shovel.

The first gardening shears were -1. The battle shovel was -1. He switched back to gardening shears of -1. Please, someone kill him for me. He won't pray enough for me to destroy him with lightning.

[Farce]

leg's other wirt (2 pcs)

My hero broke it in half and then sold each piece full price.  Genius!  Now to turn that bucket of antimatter into sand and sell it grain by grain.


Or I guess he got two of 'em, but that's a boring explanation.  They sold for 66 and 57, if you're curious.

[pilgrimboy]

The game is down right now for me.  Anyone else?

[Farce]

My hero and a Smelly Quaker Guy just went from staredown to kick-in-the-face, so I'm pretty sure it's working on my end.

[forsaken1111]

The game is down right now for me.  Anyone else?

working fine here

[Rex_Nex]

I accidentally knocked down the server for a few minutes. Sorry.

At least, I think it was me. Happened as soon as I did something.

[AussieGuy]

Woot, Im first on the greed table, for now.

[Micro102]

cowboy's leather boots +3

0.0


and yeah one moment your on the top and next you spend 90% your money on some random event. Worst part about the game.

[Farce]

Oh snap, three bold items.

collection of varicoloured photons
portable photon generator
bag of dirty thoughts
pointy WIZZARD hat
Occam's safety razor
colombian necktie
free fall accelerator

I should shoo him back to town right now so he doesn't drop all of them, but I do not know how.  :\

(EDIT:  Oh wait, he just sold something off.  I guess he's in town, then.)

[Nirur Torir]

The first gardening shears were -1. The battle shovel was -1. He switched back to gardening shears of -1. Please, someone kill him for me. He won't pray enough for me to destroy him with lightning.

He bought another battle shovel -1.

[Acanthus117]

The first gardening shears were -1. The battle shovel was -1. He switched back to gardening shears of -1. Please, someone kill him for me. He won't pray enough for me to destroy him with lightning.

He bought another battle shovel -1.

Ahahaha

[forsaken1111]

23:15
Took a bath in a youth fountain, restored several pixels of the health bar.

[Rex_Nex]

Dropped off broken item and bought a new one for 929 coins: mask of rabbit. It is of worse quality, but it still should do.

Fuck you Shakaru. I wont let you hit 12 now. Your soul is mine!