Half the problems would have been solved if Aribeth had just done the goddamn quests herself.
Seriously. "Go and see that the beasts are safe!" Aren't you wearing boots of teleportation? Pop over there, check on them yourself, and come back in 10 seconds!
For some reason my sleep addled mind read that as "Go and see that the breasts are safe!" My reactionary thought was that Freud was right, followed by how that would make an infinitely better main plot. I'm a big fan of if you can't write well, write in a lulzy manner. A Dance with Rogues is a good example of both of these mixed to good results. It's plot is on a fanfiction level, but the writing is at least somewhat competent, as are the characters, at least in the first chapter. But there's nothing quite like having sex with almost anyone who offers. Or the fact that you have to make a skill check to fake an orgasm in a certain part of the plot. I neglected to mention it earlier, I least I think I did, simply for the fact that it's not for everyone. I mean Almraiven you had to dismember and embalm a corpse, but that's nothing like graphic depictions/descriptions of getting brutally raped by 6 gladiators. Also note it's written and designed by a female.