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Supermikhail

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Away.
« on: April 21, 2010, 02:33:51 pm »

"Launch it", said Popovicz.
A touch on control panel. A couple of clicks. A soft whirring. Lights blinking.
A shrill whistle. A flaming spear in the sky. A surge of wind. A low, throbbing rumble.
A flash brighter than a hundred suns. A rain of glass shards. Cries of awe and alarm.
An eardrum-crushing blast. A sweeping air-wave. A flood of searing heat. Screams of pain. Blocks of stone coming down in a cloud of dust and rubble. The smell of melting plastic and burning flesh.
Darkness.
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Re: Away.
« Reply #1 on: April 21, 2010, 05:38:03 pm »

"Launch it", said Popovicz.[1]
A touch on control panel. A couple of clicks. A soft whirring. Lights blinking.
A shrill whistle. A flaming spear in the sky.[1]A surge of wind. A low, throbbing rumble.[1]
A flash brighter than a hundred suns.[2] A rain of glass shards.[3] Cries of awe and alarm.[4]
An eardrum-crushing blast. A sweeping air-wave. A flood of searing heat.[3] Screams of pain.[3] Blocks of stone coming down in a cloud of dust and rubble. The smell of melting plastic and burning flesh.[5]
Darkness.[6]

I've decided to analyse this controversial piece of work.

[1] - All these sentences seem to suggest a highly sexual, phallic connotation. We are not informed what's being "launched" ( some suggest that the original creator meant seminal fluid ), and throbbing doesn't truly fit into a rumble ( unless it is the rumble of lovemaking ). The flaming spear metaphor is obvious.
[2] - An apparent reference to an orgasm.
[3] - The subjects in these sentences seem tor refer to the "breaking" of virginity ( possibly female, possibly by force ) as represented by glass shards. Also note the screams of pain and a "flood of searing heat". Seemingly a representation of the first sexual orgasm in a female.
[4] - Cries of awe and alarm at the "masculinity" represented, perhaps? Or perhaps the virility of the subject?
[5] - This truly brings terrifying new meaning to the phrase "burning rubber". If you do not understand and are not weak of stomach, read this:
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[6] - Possibly an example of post-coitus sleepiness in the male, as he falls into "darkness" as soon as the "act" is "complete".
« Last Edit: April 21, 2010, 06:57:38 pm by Pathos »
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Re: Away.
« Reply #2 on: April 21, 2010, 06:56:30 pm »

All great works of literature and science boil down to sexuality.
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Okay, so, today this girl I know-Lauren, just took a sudden dis-interest in talking to me. Is she just on her period or something?

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Re: Away.
« Reply #3 on: April 21, 2010, 11:29:47 pm »

All great works of literature and science boil down to KRAW KRAW.

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Re: Away.
« Reply #4 on: April 21, 2010, 11:37:16 pm »

DUDE THIS IS NOT FUNNY THE OP PUT A LOT INTO THIS THEN YOU SAY HE IS MAKING SEXY TIME WITH HIS OWN STORY FFS

IM WATCHING YOU LIKE A HAWK

KRAW KRAW
Not this Idiot again. Didn't we get rid of you a while ago?
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Re: Away.
« Reply #5 on: April 21, 2010, 11:40:24 pm »

On point 5 in Pathos's post, the reference to melting plastic is probably more likely to represent the smell a condom makes after rigorous use. If we go along with the idea of the poem being about a sexual encounter, of course.

Actually, now that I think about it, this is a little bit disconcerting in a way.
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Okay, so, today this girl I know-Lauren, just took a sudden dis-interest in talking to me. Is she just on her period or something?

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« Reply #6 on: April 22, 2010, 06:38:05 am »

On point 5 in Pathos's post, the reference to melting plastic is probably more likely to represent the smell a condom makes after rigorous use. If we go along with the idea of the poem being about a sexual encounter, of course.

Actually, now that I think about it, this is a little bit disconcerting in a way.

You might have a point, there. Friction burn from insufficient lubrication, possibly?
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Re: Away.
« Reply #7 on: April 22, 2010, 02:26:43 pm »

DUDE THIS IS NOT FUNNY THE OP PUT A LOT INTO THIS THEN YOU SAY HE IS MAKING SEXY TIME WITH HIS OWN STORY FFS

IM WATCHING YOU LIKE A HAWK

KRAW KRAW
Not this Idiot again. Didn't we get rid of you a while ago?

Did we? Elaborate, I'm interested.

Incidentally, I find this hilarious:
All great works of literature and science boil down to sexuality.
All great works of literature and science boil down to KRAW KRAW.

I'm sigging it. I assume you don't mind.
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Re: Away.
« Reply #8 on: April 22, 2010, 08:49:27 pm »

This topic is filled with high amounts of win.
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Re: Away.
« Reply #9 on: April 22, 2010, 08:56:03 pm »

The win... IT BURNS MY SOUL
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Re: Away.
« Reply #10 on: April 22, 2010, 10:19:57 pm »

Exactly what is the original OP from? Is Pathos just fucking about and putting meaning behind things that aren't there? Because when it comes to reading meaning from things its pretty damn easy to put any possible meaning into anything else.

that and searching for it on the Internet leads here and only here.

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« Reply #11 on: April 22, 2010, 10:24:03 pm »

Drawing meaning that doesn't exist out of something is a lot of fun. Try it sometime.
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« Reply #12 on: April 22, 2010, 10:33:53 pm »

Drawing meaning that doesn't exist out of something is a lot of fun. Try it sometime.
Actually in High school I wrote an entire paper about how "saved by the bell" was a Christian allegory and that Screech was Jesus. I did it just to fuck with my English teacher but it worked out rather well.

I was just curious if this was actually a real poem of if you guys were just fucking about. Could easily be either.

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Re: Away.
« Reply #13 on: April 22, 2010, 10:50:15 pm »

The thing about literary analysis is that you don't get marks for being right, you get marks for the process and the foundations of what you've said.

If Saved By the Bell was a Christian allegory for you, then it is not 'wrong'. There is no right or wrong, just stronger or weaker choices.

It's hard to explain the difference, but after you've seen a few analyses/performances/whatevers, you will start to understand.
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Okay, so, today this girl I know-Lauren, just took a sudden dis-interest in talking to me. Is she just on her period or something?

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Re: Away.
« Reply #14 on: April 22, 2010, 11:09:08 pm »

If it is an actual poem, and written by Supermikhail, then I would just like to say to her/him that I quite like it.
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