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Author Topic: Community Writing Project: Motivate Yourself!  (Read 1951 times)

JoshuaFH

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Community Writing Project: Motivate Yourself!
« on: January 18, 2010, 10:42:16 pm »

So I was somewhat inspired by Aqizzar's Adventures in Procrastination thread to make this.

Basically, the title could be replaced with "Get off your ass and write something" with no loss in meaning. For those seriously lacking the motivation to devote their imaginations to written word.

What I'm thinking:

People come here, and we take turns writing stuff. I don't think it needs to be very strict in the turn-order, but I'm considering to honor any requests to bother those that are persistent procrastinators until something is written. Seriously, lack of motivation is a terrible thing, and I think it would be more easily overcome if there's some form of peer pressure to motivate people to get things done.

I don't think anything huge is necessary, even just a paragraph or two each time, just so long as work is getting done!

I'll get to work right now on something.

EDIT: I really liked reading this article:

http://www.writing4successclub.com/public/438.cfm
« Last Edit: January 19, 2010, 02:36:22 am by JoshuaFH »
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Muz

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« Reply #1 on: January 18, 2010, 11:13:01 pm »

Seriously? This is just going to encourage me to procrastinate. Might as well make a "Let's Play" thread :P

You guys are no doubt going to procrastinate until someone starts first. So, here's a random contribution to get the ball rolling:
Urist leaned on his pick and wiped the sweat from his brow. The tough obsidian stared at him defiantly. He heard whip cracks and shouting from far behind him, but he was out of sight for now. Exhausted, he decided that it was a good time to take a break. He leaned against the wall, staring behind him, pick in hand, just in case his master came back.

Mining was hard work. He did not have the muscles for it. No, he was the bastard child of an elven champion and a dwarven concubine, with none of the qualities of either. He never knew either of his parents. He never knew friends, just a life in a cage.

As he heard footsteps approaching, he wiped a few tears with his shoulder and lifted his pick to continue work.
« Last Edit: January 18, 2010, 11:24:12 pm by Muz »
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« Reply #2 on: January 19, 2010, 12:43:09 am »

I'm signing up. I'll post my contribution shortly (I'll just copy paste it from my thread. Yes it's not work per se, but it reminds me what I'm writing about.)
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« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2010, 01:06:16 am »

Urist leaned on his pick and wiped the sweat from his brow. The tough obsidian stared at him defiantly. He heard whip cracks and shouting from far behind him, but he was out of sight for now. Exhausted, he decided that it was a good time to take a break. He leaned against the wall, staring behind him, pick in hand, just in case his master came back.

Mining was hard work. He did not have the muscles for it. No, he was the bastard child of an elven champion and a dwarven concubine, with none of the qualities of either. He never knew either of his parents. He never knew friends, just a life in a cage.

As he heard footsteps approaching, he wiped a few tears with his shoulder and lifted his pick to continue work.

His dyed jet black hair fell back over one of his eyes, as he liked to wear it. It hid him from the world, and made sure they knew that they'd never understand his pain. The footsteps stopped behind him.

"Hello, father." Dammit. It was this little disappointment. Yes, mining was a tough job, but it was a dwarven job at least.

"What do you want?" He didn't turn around to look at the disgrace. He swung his pick in an exaggerated sweeping motion.

"I got my first job. It's with Ithiri'r'riaira'ra'irir'iari the Elf, a bunny herder with the trading caravan. I'm leaving with them to perform in the elf circus entertaining the trees on cloudy days."

He grunted and swung again, his rage seeping into his arms, giving them strength he didn't know he had. The pick struck the obsidian, and he heaved back for another swing. Something stopped him though, abruptly.

"Aren't you happy for me, father?" What? The incessant brat was still talking.

"Shut up, tree hugger." He stared at the gouge mark the pick had made... it was glowing, red.
« Last Edit: January 19, 2010, 01:09:11 am by tNok85 »
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JoshuaFH

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« Reply #4 on: January 19, 2010, 01:46:50 am »

Though, to be clear, I didn't mean for it to be a big story where each person contributes. More like where each person can start their own story, and then they'll be bothered to continue it as opposed to letting it die.

My story:

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« Last Edit: February 05, 2010, 05:57:10 pm by JoshuaFH »
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« Reply #5 on: January 19, 2010, 03:32:53 pm »


His dyed jet black hair fell back over one of his eyes, as he liked to wear it. It hid him from the world, and made sure they knew that they'd never understand his pain.

Urist squinted to see the red glow. He had trouble focusing due to his sweat making his mascara run. It's okay though, this was only one more sting to add to the immeasurable blackness of his pain. His little shit of a son was going to join the elves then, good riddance. The heat in the tunnel grew to the point where Urist felt uncomfortable. "Why, why must my life be so unbearable?", Urist complained. "I'll show them, they'll be sorry when I slit my wrists  again tonight!" Just then, the crack in the wall widened and the pressurized magma became visible through the tiny fissure. "Oh shit" said Urist, and those were the last words he ever spoke.
« Last Edit: January 19, 2010, 03:35:37 pm by moocowmoo »
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Re: Community Writing Project: Motivate Yourself!
« Reply #6 on: January 19, 2010, 10:18:48 pm »

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For those seriously lacking the motivation to devote their imaginations to written word.
I know what you mean. Recently I keep trying to start stories but Im constantly stoped by writers block or something and just give up.

I will join you! Here is my story:

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« Last Edit: January 20, 2010, 09:11:14 pm by cowofdoom78963 »
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« Reply #7 on: January 20, 2010, 03:39:51 am »


His dyed jet black hair fell back over one of his eyes, as he liked to wear it. It hid him from the world, and made sure they knew that they'd never understand his pain.

Urist squinted to see the red glow. He had trouble focusing due to his sweat making his mascara run. It's okay though, this was only one more sting to add to the immeasurable blackness of his pain. His little shit of a son was going to join the elves then, good riddance. The heat in the tunnel grew to the point where Urist felt uncomfortable. "Why, why must my life be so unbearable?", Urist complained. "I'll show them, they'll be sorry when I slit my wrists  again tonight!" Just then, the crack in the wall widened and the pressurized magma became visible through the tiny fissure. "Oh shit" said Urist, and those were the last words he ever spoke.

That's the most emo dwarf ever. I'm glad you killed him.
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« Reply #8 on: January 20, 2010, 08:35:06 am »

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The fishmen tried to use telekenisis to stop his bullets but they were coated in aluminum that blocked the telekenisis. Steve always thought three steps ahead of his enemys.

Class!

Here's my story. I can't seem to go from here ...

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« Reply #9 on: January 21, 2010, 03:42:12 am »

I've added a little bit more to the story in my second post. It really helps that I'm not feeling as depressed today.
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« Reply #10 on: January 21, 2010, 02:36:04 pm »

I'm currently away from my good computer and all of my stuff, so apologies for not contributing yet. But I will. Give me two weeks, then you can nag as much as you want.
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« Reply #11 on: January 21, 2010, 05:41:46 pm »

Im going to update a bit later today.

(or maybe not! :( )
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« Reply #12 on: January 21, 2010, 05:43:12 pm »

I'd like to mention that Willfor gave me a link to a rather helpful series of columns written by an experienced author, and I think it would be beneficial to repost it here:

http://coyotecult.com/communities/sfandf_critters/references/limyaael.php
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« Reply #13 on: January 21, 2010, 06:00:05 pm »

By the way Josh, I do intend to take up your challenge and post something here.  Tomorrow.  Hopefullydefinitely.  Just need to decide what the crap I'm writing among two or three or more options, so I can focus for once.
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« Reply #14 on: January 22, 2010, 02:21:22 am »

I'd like to mention that Willfor gave me a link to a rather helpful series of columns written by an experienced author, and I think it would be beneficial to repost it here:

http://coyotecult.com/communities/sfandf_critters/references/limyaael.php

Awesome, these'll help. Θanks.
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