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[Fault]

page #53 is out

[Askot Bokbondeler]

talking ogre head is awesome
i hunger for more, WORK FASTER

EDIT: i just didn't get the "?, atrium, traps" schematic

[Fault]

it's a map of the temple from william's book, (I worried it might not be clear that he is looking at his book in the seventh panel...) he tried figuring out what the symbols meant from his father's unfinished notes... but in the end William did not know what awaited them at the end of the temple.

[Askot Bokbondeler]

yeah, it isn't too clear, maybe you should have made the book clearer in the previous pannel, and showed the actual book in william's hands* instead of just that page filling the entire panel...

[Sensei]

Awesome comic!

...but, I can't help but nitpick, Red's face in the last panel looks like an angry playmobil person.

[Rumrusher]

I take it just how fault draws people from a distance.

Spoiler: fanart (click to show/hide)

so I guess the ogre head could be used to fire a long beam of "noooooo's" I would call that a unspeakable power

[Fault]

Character design

Spoiler:  the Keep - Captain of the Guard (click to show/hide)

also page 54 is inked and scanned but not coloured

[Acanthus117]

PURE. UNADULTERATED. AWESOME.

[Guardian G.I.]

PURE. UNADULTERATED. AWESOME.

[Sensei]

Maybe broaden his neck a little. Also, the hood seems kind of odd, especially for a king.

[rarborman]

His legs seem...off.

[Rumrusher]

Maybe broaden his neck a little. Also, the hood seems kind of odd, especially for a king.

He's Captain of the guard is he not? Unless I miss an update showing the Cotg switching places with the King or the Cotg is the King?

[Sensei]

Maybe broaden his neck a little. Also, the hood seems kind of odd, especially for a king.

He's Captain of the guard is he not? Unless I miss an update showing the Cotg switching places with the King or the Cotg is the King?

Wait derp. That makes a little more sense then. Still, neck.

[rarborman]

I'd have to say his proportions are very strange, thin neck-wide shoulders-long arms-short legs-think ars-thin legs...

[Fault]

3/10 panels of page #54 are coloured.

Spoiler: preview image (click to show/hide)

more complaining goblins

I'd have to say his proportions are very strange, thin neck-wide shoulders-long arms-short legs-think ars-thin legs...

the shape of the armour messes things up a bit... I need to research where armour elements sit over body parts, particularly where your pelvis would be.

well at least this is just concept art and not a finished page or anything