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Re: EFFIGIES - Dwarfy Fantasy webcomic
« Reply #165 on: June 16, 2010, 05:00:11 pm »

thanks! I've been busy the last couple of days, but I got a lot of freetime tomorrow. I should be able to get most of the linework for the next page done.

I also have to write up something about Dwarven Religion as well...

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Re: EFFIGIES - Dwarfy Fantasy webcomic
« Reply #166 on: June 20, 2010, 04:27:46 pm »

Page #34 is up. Chapter one is complete.

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« Reply #167 on: June 20, 2010, 04:33:04 pm »

Well. Crap. I hope he lives.
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« Reply #168 on: June 20, 2010, 04:41:44 pm »

he had it comming. he was too damn happy, anyway, those guys never survive

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« Reply #169 on: June 21, 2010, 05:56:16 pm »

Why the hell would the idiot touch the statue anyways? Always avoid statues in creepy dungeons, it's rule #6 in the Adventurers Useful Handbook!
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« Reply #170 on: June 21, 2010, 08:27:12 pm »

I really love the depressed, sad and helpless look on William's face on the last picture. You are an amazing character-artist, Fault.
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« Reply #171 on: June 21, 2010, 09:34:07 pm »

I really love the depressed, sad and helpless look on William's face on the last picture. You are an amazing character-artist, Fault.
thanks. I was actually worried that his face wouldn't look serious enough, or.. however you'd describe it.
I mean obviously he has to look sad, but not to the point where'd he'd be excessively emotional. A sort of quiet, bleak despair, considering the magnitude of what he has lost.

Why the hell would the idiot touch the statue anyways? Always avoid statues in creepy dungeons, it's rule #6 in the Adventurers Useful Handbook!
Josef isn't really the kinda guy who'd prepare for anything by reading.

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Re: EFFIGIES - Dwarfy Fantasy webcomic
« Reply #172 on: June 21, 2010, 09:40:32 pm »

Hey.
Wanna hear about the time my uncle saw a wolfbear?
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Re: EFFIGIES - Dwarfy Fantasy webcomic
« Reply #173 on: June 21, 2010, 09:41:16 pm »

<----------- RIP

Hopefully still alive.
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« Reply #174 on: June 21, 2010, 10:01:45 pm »

Spoiler:  Dwarven Religion (click to show/hide)

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« Reply #175 on: June 21, 2010, 10:14:02 pm »

Eh. I have some criticism, but I do not like typing on my iPod too much.
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« Reply #176 on: June 21, 2010, 10:16:35 pm »

please, point out anything that was wrong with it.

I kinda rushed it cause I said I'd have it out about a week ago.

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Re: EFFIGIES - Dwarfy Fantasy webcomic
« Reply #177 on: June 21, 2010, 10:58:50 pm »

The dwarven religion one wasn't that great. Mostly, it makes sense, but could use some detail. Your Thor-Odin amalgamation is a little too obvious, you might want to mix it up a bit. For starters, it could use a little more explanation for the culture that nurtures the "dwarf stereotype", or at least I think as much. It might also bear mentioning, albeit implied that dwarves as a culture were striven to achieve before due to the tangible nature of their religion as afterlife-reward. But obviously if that's not your vision then whatever.

I might contribute a little more later, but it's your mythos.
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« Reply #178 on: June 21, 2010, 11:11:32 pm »

yes, it definitely needs a little more work before it goes into the Original Post.

however, some things I have to keep intentionally vague; there are certain details about Effigies cosmology that I am not revealing just yet (particularily the mechanics of how the Dwarven Pantheon exists simultaneously with the other religous figures)

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« Reply #179 on: June 22, 2010, 12:31:43 am »

I have theories on all of those things.
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