Place:Before Intelligent life beganThe air shimmered and a figure clothed in black robe appeared. He walked into the woods, his midnight black eyes glanced at the dieing trees and he frowned.
"Brother Life, come out and speak with me..." the Black Robed Man voice was like the voices of everything that has ever died or will die.
"No Brother Death,I will not let you destroy my experiment."this voice sounded like the wind in the leaves and the sound of the grass growing.
"Brother, what you are doing here is destroying the balance." shouted out Death as he stepped over a fallen branch. He was heading toward a clearing in the woods when suddenly he heard the gurgling of a dieing beast. He glance over toward a pond and looked in.
In the pond was a drowning Rabbit,it was being ripped apart by a Carp who looked hungry. Death reached down into the pool and touched the Rabbit.
Nothing happened, besides the bunny getting horribly mauled by the Carp, who seemed confused that its prey was putting up this much of a fight. The water went red with blood as the Rabbit bit into the Carp and ripped the Carp's eye out.
"Brother,Why do you torture the beasts so?" called out Death.
"Death is a release not a punishment. Release these beasts from your curse! What you are doing is creating abominations." yelled out Death, beseeching his brother to stop the madness.
"Your just mad that the beasts cannot be in your icy grip! I know what the feeling of death is and it is not a release! It the misery of not being breathing, of not being able to love or create. Your time of ruling is over brother, I shall create a new world, one without death!" screamed out Life, suddenly appearing before his brother.
"Brother come to your senses! Please I implore you, nay, I beg you!" begged Death glancing at his brother.Suddenly Life struck him in the face.
"If my creations shall not have life then neither shall you!" yelled Life at his brother. Death's pale skin suddenly clung to his face, his hair usually raven black turned white and fell off all together, his breathing faltered and stopped and his skin fell off. Death, now all bone and no blood or flesh grew, angry at his brother.
Death pulled The Blade Of Ending out of its sheath and chopped off Life's legs in his anger. Life fell to the ground and his godly blood fell to the earth.Soaking in.
"Where your blood is spilt so shall your soul and body remain.Till the balance is restored." Cursed Death and he left the forest never to return to bring beings mercy and a ending to pain. But before he did, he named the unnamed forest the Limp Fields.
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