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[mendonca]

I'm hungover, so I can't decide whether this is complete yet.

Looks a bit rough, but I don't want to be overwork it either. I'm trying to render with the brush set to opacity-on-pen-pressure and I'm not comfortable with it yet.

Pre-post edit: Yeah, don't think it looks finished yet. Hope I can muster up some more time to work on it later.



I think its a reasonable likeness (including greying skin ...) Must remember to never drink again ...

[lordnincompoop]

you still have plenty time to work on it, though, why wait for next time? theres no reason to point the flaws you noticed and not try to correct them

Honestly didn't think of that, I'll try to work on it some more.

[Outcast Orange]

Somebody significant needed some help with a French assignment so I made these for her.

Spoiler: Page 1 (click to show/hide)

LINK

Spoiler: Page 2 (click to show/hide)

LINK

I'll get the finished version back sometime tonight and probably post that as well.

[lordnincompoop]

Why. Why would you do this to us, OO?

Images are loaded regardless of spoilering. Also, use [IMG width=x] jeez

[Outcast Orange]

I'm pretty sure they are loaded only after you click the spoiler tag.
That would explain the lag on the first opening of the tag,
 and its absence on subsequent clicks.

EDIT: And thanks for the width tag advice, I wasn't sure how to do that before.

[lordnincompoop]

I can attest to the opposite; my loading times for this page increased dramatically after you posted. The pictures required no loading after the page was done.

[iceball3]

Somebody significant needed some help with a French assignment so I made these for her.
Beware, these are absolutely gigantic.

Spoiler: Page 1 (click to show/hide)

LINK

Spoiler: Page 2 (click to show/hide)

LINK

I'll get the finished version back sometime tonight and probably post that as well.

That turtle seems... Awfully familiar to me...

[Outcast Orange]

Somebody significant needed some help with a French assignment so I made these for her.
Beware, these are absolutely gigantic.

Spoiler: Page 1 (click to show/hide)

LINK

Spoiler: Page 2 (click to show/hide)

LINK

I'll get the finished version back sometime tonight and probably post that as well.

That turtle seems... Awfully familiar to me...

There aren't too many ways to draw turtles.
It's like Squirtle x Homestuck, eh?

I can attest to the opposite; my loading times for this page increased dramatically after you posted. The pictures required no loading after the page was done.

It could be that our browsers treat spoilers differently. I'm using Chrome.
In any case I've changed the links and they are much smaller now.

[Outcast Orange]

Here they are with the text filled in.
Courtesy of the captain.

Spoiler: TRELVIS Page 1 (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: TRELVIS Page 2 (click to show/hide)

Good luck with the French.

[Hippoman]

Why is it in French.

[Nivim]

@ Hippoman above:

Somebody significant needed some help with a French assignment so I made these for her.
Beware, these are absolutely gigantic.

Do try not to skim when you're going to post.

[Spreggo]

Outcast Orange: The comic strips look good They might gain visual clarity if you vary line weights a bit more. For example, heavier weighted object/character outlines would help differentiate them from other objects/characters.

Lord Nincompoop: I look forward to the revised version Perhaps try to redraw it using this one as a reference. Also collect references for the objects and clothing and use them for the new version.

Mendonca: This meets the requirements, but you might get something out of it by working on it a bit more. The color is good and you did a good job avoiding blacks and using saturated colors instead. One improvement might be to decided where you want the viewer to focus and adding some sharp edges there.

Jopax: Yours also meets the requirements, but there is room for improvement. The highlight on the face is pretty blown out and I think it takes away from the visual as a whole. Normally a rim highlight like that would be pretty thin. As it is the highlight obscures the turning planes of the face a little too much.

Everyone: There is still time left so I hope anyone who hasn't already will join the challenge In the future there may be prizes and things for these if we get to that point.

[Soadreqm]

Re: Line weight
I remembered reading this nifty tutorial by Andrew Hussie describing the point of varying line weight and how to go about it, but when I tried to find it, I discovered that the lazy bum hasn't been paying his website bills and teamspecialolympics.com no longer exists. In case someone's interested, I found all the text in Google's cache and the images at one of his other websites. (The inktut##.jpg files.) It's something of a chore to read without the images linked into the document itself, but there it is anyway. Until Google updates its cache, at least.

[Hippoman]

@ Hippoman above:

Somebody significant needed some help with a French assignment so I made these for her.
Beware, these are absolutely gigantic.

Do try not to skim when you're going to post.

I was away for 3 days and didn't feel like going through what I expected to be many posts, seeing as I had just gotten out of a car I was in for 5 hours and it was near 11PM and I wanted to sleep.

But enough of my stupid excuses, I'll check next time.

[Jopax]

Took some pictures of my pen works, the quality is rather bad but i think you can get the general gist of the drawings X)