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burningpet

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« Reply #1920 on: July 04, 2010, 06:29:21 am »

Those lines are so very very uncertain and busy and the values are confusing, I can't decipher the form very easily.

Don't just use a black brush, colour pick some values and paint them around with large brushes. Give the figure an overall pass of lighting and keep everything distinct.
And then we look at your pictures and we see...
The same type of marks just with color, and a little better detail.

No, we see a clear contour ,forms and values that are presented in a digital ala "impressionist" style, one that is starting to become an art trend among accomplished artists. check out the name Andrew "android" Jones for example.

Edit - since i already posted, i feel abit ashamed not to post any artwork...

one of the aliens i made for the game "fangorodrim" using sculptris, a 3d sculpting program.



and an animated version of it ingame.. that was scrapped in favour on an inanimated one.


« Last Edit: July 04, 2010, 06:43:06 am by burningpet »
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« Reply #1921 on: July 04, 2010, 08:30:37 am »

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« Reply #1922 on: July 05, 2010, 12:23:42 am »



I was screwing around, but I like how it turned out.
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« Reply #1923 on: July 05, 2010, 03:16:35 am »

burningpet, that first image looks very painted, interesting! I like it.



I also like the simplicity; maybe you can add more value contrast? (i.e. make the shadows much darker and keep the highlighted areas a clean white, although I do see what the camera has done, a quick contrast/brightness/white overlay layer modification makes things look more like they do in actuality)

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« Reply #1924 on: July 05, 2010, 03:34:29 am »

I've substituted a good drawing with twenty bad ones. By that I mean I have an animation. Flash chewed it up a lot when I exported but it seemed alright in swf form.

I want to know if the motions are believable

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« Reply #1925 on: July 05, 2010, 11:49:07 am »

The animation looks a bit glitchy, but the motion seems okay. Maybe a bit uncanny valley, although that might be just the flickering and the low framerate. Oh, and now that I look at it some more, I think there's something wrong with arm length somewhere. It's not really all that clear what position the right arm is in the first one or two frames, but the left arm is definitely shorter than it. You might want to cut some more corners, too. No reason to redraw the parts of the image that aren't supposed to be moving. It'd prob'ly look cleaner that way.
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« Reply #1926 on: July 05, 2010, 01:42:56 pm »

No reason to redraw the parts of the image that aren't supposed to be moving. It'd prob'ly look cleaner that way.
Heh, yeah- it looks to me like the squiggles on his belt are constantly migrating to the right.
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« Reply #1927 on: July 05, 2010, 02:23:56 pm »

No reason to redraw the parts of the image that aren't supposed to be moving. It'd prob'ly look cleaner that way.
Heh, yeah- it looks to me like the squiggles on his belt are constantly migrating to the right.
That's because it is an electric belt. Sandpapers you slim, it does!
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« Reply #1928 on: July 05, 2010, 02:46:19 pm »

A belt- that is a belt sander.

That is stupid and awesome.
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« Reply #1929 on: July 05, 2010, 05:28:32 pm »

turned this:


into this:
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« Reply #1930 on: July 05, 2010, 05:45:54 pm »

Is that a body of a goron?
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« Reply #1931 on: July 05, 2010, 06:53:40 pm »

I think the first one was an albino porcupine.
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« Reply #1932 on: July 05, 2010, 06:57:49 pm »

well, not in purpose, but zelda could very well maneuvered my subconscious here.

and yeah, thats an albino hedgehog.
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« Reply #1933 on: July 05, 2010, 08:24:38 pm »

Totally looks like a skinny goron artwork from twilight princess.
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« Reply #1934 on: July 05, 2010, 08:27:36 pm »

I don't see much resemblance other than the stomach to be honest. Isn't the skin of gorons more greenish than that? Bah, I haven't played in ages.
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