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[Drug_unit]

I wanted do show off my first truly good fort do the pepole to see what you guys think abaut it 
If this is in the wrong place or something else the admins can remove,delete,move or whatever you do to threads here that dont belong.


First we have the general View of the fort


Here is the Tomb/Temple(have not decided yet) of Champions my newest Project in this fort.


Here is the Green glass pyramid my first project in this fort(old pic).



And here is my second project of this fort im very proud of it the almighty curch of Armok.

Im planning a small magma sacrifice pool in the near future inside it


Here is the general stores/crafting area of my fort.



This is the bedroom area i accidentaly dug more bedrooms than i needed(included is the storage of magma for magma forges) The old barracks and noble rooms and Jails.



And this is the general mining operations area.
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http://mkv25.net/dfma/map-6700-dikecloud Here is the link for the DF map arhives of my fort for a closer look.



I hope you all like it and critisim is appriciated

[Glacial Eidolon]

The Church of Armok looks to have a rather small door. For it to be a church of Armok, of all gods, it needs to have the biggest & strongest door available to humans, dwarves, & elves alike.

The green glass pyramid seems to be rather small & tiny. For an unimportant megaproject this is fine, but scale & impressiveness is paramount. You should consider building upon it, or accompanying it with a gaggle of other pyramids. If you have enough other glass, you could always make another pyramid that's designed to burst and release magma upon invaders...

In all honesty, everything here is much better than something I could build. I'd love to see the Church of Armok completed and decorated with the spikiest decorations known to Dwarvenkind - especially obsidian spikes. I trust it is made of obsidian, is it not?

Now, all you need is a defense system fit for a god. Mile-high walls, perhaps? A flood of magma on the outskirts of it to wipe out any goblins that dare trespass? A maze of constructs to make any of the skulking kobolds cry as their minds break from pressure, simply trying to get in?

The possbilities are endless. But I think that, while not the most epic thing ever, is very impressive. Good job...

...The Church of Armok still needs to be studded with spikes of obsidian, however. It's somewhat plain at the moment.

[EvilTwin]

wow, really, really cool 
i like the pyramid, but the church blood god temple needs magma falls on the front of its towers 

btw, whats that visualization tool? i do only know ol' 3dwarf....

[Stromko]

I'm actually most impressed by the walls. They look very detailed and very authentic, like the best parts of the Great Wall of China. The rather nice towers at each intersection are a great touch.