Okay, so we've got probably 36 hours before The Great HiatusStuck is over. As long as we've got time and no content, I might as well post that fanfic I've been writing, since it's done and all.
I was going to have somebody else review this personally, but I'm don't think I need it. I just read through the whole thing, and I think it's alright. Commentary is appreciated. It is indeed a "stream of consciousness" in the strongest sense, but I tried my best to make it a coherent and cohesive narrative of thoughts. "Steam of consciousness" isn't an open invitation for rambling bullshit.
Not that it isn't rambling, being kinda long for what it is, but I know I'll never revisit the subject, so I wanted to include every idea I could think of, and hammer it all together so all the parts support each other.
I call it
The Cool Mote In God's Eye, because I'm an unoriginal douche. I know I'm unoriginal, because it's just an exploration of Davesprite (Bad Future Dave) as a character, heavily informed by stuff
dellaluce wrote, and if I posted it on AO3, it'd be the fourth "What's Davesprite thinking during
Cascade?" hosted there alone. Be warned, it's also melodramatic and maudlin as all get out.
Okay, whatever, enough introduction.
It's also kinda hard to read on a large monitor in left-aligned 8-point font, but that's the Internet's fault, not mine. Try copy/pasting it to a word processor.