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Author Topic: Bloody Cosmos (Work in progress) Now with 100% more plot!  (Read 7097 times)

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Bloody Cosmos (Work in progress) Now with 100% more plot!
« on: July 29, 2009, 02:24:55 pm »

Hello again. My last thread began to fall apart so I felt it needed a bit of a reboot.

Anyways, as a few of you may remember I have been writing out a sci-fi PnP RPg. I'm getting close to being finished but It will take a bit more time.

In the meanwhile, here is what I have completed:


New and updated huzzah!
http://rapidshare.com/files/291831467/Bloody_Cosmos_Uploadable.doc.html

Ideas and opinions (as well a criticism) is welcome.
« Last Edit: March 03, 2010, 03:32:53 pm by moghopper »
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Re: Free Pen And Paper Game (Work in progress)
« Reply #1 on: August 01, 2009, 12:17:23 am »

I really do need to ever read this. XD
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Re: Free Pen And Paper Game (Work in progress)
« Reply #2 on: August 01, 2009, 01:54:30 am »

This is great. I'd really like to see an expansion of the genetic engineering things. I've also noticed that you have used "thousands", when it would be better to have said "millions". Are there any sapient aliens in this setting? Because there has been no mention of them in what you have done so far.
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Re: Free Pen And Paper Game (Work in progress)
« Reply #3 on: August 01, 2009, 05:53:50 pm »

This is great. I'd really like to see an expansion of the genetic engineering things. I've also noticed that you have used "thousands", when it would be better to have said "millions". Are there any sapient aliens in this setting? Because there has been no mention of them in what you have done so far.

They actually come in the monster section AFTER I've finished the animals of the colonial planets.

I haven't made any mention of the alien species yet as humanity has yet to meet them. When they do however, they're very fucked.

It's funny that you say I'm doing a great job. As I feel I'm doing a bad job.
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Re: Free Pen And Paper Game (Work in progress)
« Reply #4 on: August 08, 2009, 09:29:04 pm »

I'm almost done with these creatures from the first system. Making the enemies for THE most dangerous planet in the game.
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Re: Free Pen And Paper Game (Work in progress)
« Reply #5 on: August 08, 2009, 09:37:14 pm »

post for later
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Re: Free Pen And Paper Game (Work in progress)
« Reply #6 on: August 10, 2009, 12:52:49 pm »

Here's the first of them. It's next to impossible to kill without heavy explosives and it will most likely kill you in one attack (and it gets three a round).

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Re: Free Pen And Paper Game (Work in progress)
« Reply #7 on: August 11, 2009, 07:09:41 am »

I'm reading this, and it looks quite interesting.

I approve.
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Re: Free Pen And Paper Game (Work in progress)
« Reply #8 on: August 11, 2009, 03:11:08 pm »

I'm reading this, and it looks quite interesting.

I approve.

Finished reading it yet?
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Re: Free Pen And Paper Game (Work in progress)
« Reply #9 on: August 11, 2009, 04:07:22 pm »

pg 27/121, so nearly there.  ;D
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Re: Free Pen And Paper Game (Work in progress)
« Reply #10 on: August 13, 2009, 06:40:58 pm »

Here's all the creatures from Alberterre:

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Re: Free Pen And Paper Game (Work in progress)
« Reply #11 on: August 13, 2009, 06:42:12 pm »

Wanna work on that fantasy WWII Game? I want to make one.
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Re: Free Pen And Paper Game (Work in progress)
« Reply #12 on: August 13, 2009, 06:45:29 pm »

Wanna work on that fantasy WWII Game? I want to make one.

You want to? Or Want me to?
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Re: Free Pen And Paper Game (Work in progress)
« Reply #13 on: August 13, 2009, 06:46:55 pm »

Both.
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Re: Free Pen And Paper Game (Work in progress)
« Reply #14 on: August 13, 2009, 06:48:56 pm »

Both.

I'll be holding a vote on what to do next after I'm done with this game.

One thing at a time.
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