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Mulch Diggums

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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #75 on: August 28, 2009, 06:01:23 am »
That was pretty good. I'm wondering why the ambushers expended so much ammo and showed so little general skill. You'd think after five years they would have learned a bit more, darn lepers. Keep writing Jack, good stuff so far eh? :D wot wot
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #76 on: August 28, 2009, 06:04:01 am »
I say!

And that thing about people shooting to miss intentionally is actually fact. I read it on the internets, it must be true!
Addmitedly, TV tropes is not the most trusted source. But whatever.
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« Reply #77 on: August 28, 2009, 06:17:53 am »
Ffffffffffffff- damnit jack! I just walked around TV tropes for a good 10 minutes there ,and its all your fault.
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #78 on: August 28, 2009, 06:22:17 am »
I am evil.
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« Reply #79 on: August 28, 2009, 06:56:04 am »
In the new one, you say "lucky basterds" when the leader was talking only to Cooper.
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #80 on: August 28, 2009, 07:00:58 am »
Sod, I honestly did see that and fix it. It's fixed in the non-frontpage version!
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« Reply #81 on: August 30, 2009, 03:44:37 am »
Removed by the author. Paranoia cited as the cause.

Alright, leveling with you. Know how the first chapter was written for a competition? I'm basically doing this so I don't get called out on copying someone else's work. Sure I can prove it easily enough but this is even easier.

Just being practical in an over-the-top way.
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« Reply #82 on: August 30, 2009, 09:55:51 am »
Loved it.
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #83 on: August 30, 2009, 04:30:09 pm »
Sorry, I know it's off topic, but I love your avatar. It's so perfect for reviewing stuff.
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« Reply #84 on: August 31, 2009, 01:48:00 am »
I've had a revelation!

It came to me about four o'clock this morning. I woke up with the cat sleeping on most of my face. She must have only just got there because I can't sleep with a cat on my face, ever since I was a kid and had a nightmare about a cat sleeping on my face except it wasn't a nightmare and... but I digress.

Anyway, I woke up, shot upright, knocking the cat down the side of the bed (seriously) and decided, "hey! I'm actually going to try and get this published!".

So I will. Therefore updates will cease. I'm sure this will come as a shock to the... at last count three people who read this thread, but I'm sorry. It's something I very much want to do. Consider all the updates already done a sneak peek.

So in about two years if I'm seriously, stupidly, ridiculously lucky, expect to see this on the shelves!

EDIT: Also, just got the full, uncut version of The Stand!
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« Reply #85 on: August 31, 2009, 03:12:55 am »
1. aaaaaaw
2. Good luck
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #86 on: August 31, 2009, 03:58:55 am »
Yeah, good luck on getting it published.

Also good luck with The Stand. It's a megabeast of a book.
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« Reply #87 on: August 31, 2009, 04:00:50 am »
1325 pages.
A bit of light reading, wot?
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« Reply #88 on: August 31, 2009, 04:09:46 am »
The stand.. Sounds familiar. Isn't that a Steven King book?
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #89 on: August 31, 2009, 04:22:00 am »
Yeah, this thread went off topic for a bit while Little and I discussed its awesomeness.

Rerailed handily thanks to an update.
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