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Author Topic: Remember, a story  (Read 5843 times)

Little

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Re: Remember, a short story
« Reply #30 on: August 12, 2009, 02:36:18 am »

@Little:
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was so badass. I've yet to see an
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who was so fun to read about and yet who I wanted to die every single chapter he was in.

Fixed.

I actually thought
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had the right idea about how to run society in a
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world, if you made it much less draconian and war-based. Everybody had a job, and as it was noted, the power was back on far before winter. Course, you'd have to cut out the
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stuff, but cut out that and
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is right.

But that isn't what we are supposed to be discussing, as epic as The Stand is.
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #31 on: August 12, 2009, 02:39:24 am »

Man, I need to read that now.
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Vester

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Re: Remember, a short story
« Reply #32 on: August 12, 2009, 02:46:09 am »

@Little:
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was so badass. I've yet to see an
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who was so fun to read about and yet who I wanted to die every single chapter he was in.

Fixed.

I actually thought
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had the right idea about how to run society in a
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world, if you made it much less draconian and war-based. Everybody had a job, and as it was noted, the power was back on far before winter. Course, you'd have to cut out the
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
stuff, but cut out that and
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is right.

But that isn't what we are supposed to be discussing, as epic as The Stand is.

Well, one last thing about Tha Stand: it also had the best deus ex machina, literally, I've ever seen. I mean,
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is pretty hardcore in Desperation, but in The Stand he's all  :o .

Man, I need to read that now.

Stephen King's pretty good, is all.  ;D

I don't have my tablet with me, so I can't draw anything now, but I want to try my hand on Quarantine.
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"Land of song," said the warrior bard, "though all the world betray thee - one sword at least thy rights shall guard; one faithful harp shall praise thee."

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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #33 on: August 12, 2009, 02:50:29 am »

You have the uncut version, right?

The last chapter is such a fucking tease  ;D
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #34 on: August 12, 2009, 03:01:20 am »

You have the uncut version, right?

The last chapter is such a fucking tease  ;D

Yup, in all its doorstopping glory

I couldn't help but want more
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. Then I picked up the Dark Tower series. And lo and behold, there he is again.

ANYWAY we should stop talking about The Stand before this thread gets extremely derailed. Although I should have guessed you were a Stephen King fan from your RTD. :D
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #35 on: August 12, 2009, 03:12:23 am »

Blaze and The Running Man are fucking great. It was another door-stopper, but it seemed to move more quickly than The Stand.

But back on topic.
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #36 on: August 13, 2009, 07:23:52 am »

Removed by the author. Paranoia cited as the cause.
« Last Edit: September 15, 2009, 03:16:38 am by Jackrabbit »
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #37 on: August 13, 2009, 11:48:41 am »

It's still a fucking badass story. I got bored at school yesterday and drew up the containment room he was in, but alas, I have no means to upload it at the moment.
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #38 on: August 14, 2009, 06:00:19 am »

Story's looking good so far.

Also, here you go. Is it bizarre enough?

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I have no idea how the hell it ended up like this. I was mucking around in photoshop with paintbrushes and paintbuckets. I can't reproduce something like this, because I don't know how it ended up like this.
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #39 on: August 14, 2009, 06:06:47 am »

Whatever it is, it is God damn awesome.
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #40 on: August 14, 2009, 07:31:22 am »

Thanks.. It's supposed to be the confrontation with the freak doppleganger, only it came out all inky and black and white.
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #41 on: August 14, 2009, 11:36:05 am »

It certainly underscores his insanity.
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Once tried to conquer Earth, and succeeded! Too bad it got really, really boring, really, really fast.

One day, we shall all look back on this, and laugh. Sorry about the face, by the way, and the legs, and the eyes, and the arms. In fact, sorry 'bout the whole body.

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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #42 on: August 14, 2009, 01:54:26 pm »

Whatever it is, it is God damn awesome.
no. no it is not.

It is bad-fuckin-ass.
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #43 on: August 16, 2009, 06:01:26 am »

Removed by the author. Paranoia cited as the cause.
« Last Edit: September 15, 2009, 03:16:40 am by Jackrabbit »
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Re: Remember, a story
« Reply #44 on: August 16, 2009, 06:10:46 am »

It's good. :D

Some minor spelling errors, though. Also, I like Alex. ;D
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