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Author Topic: The Succubus Four(community, accepting members for the prologue)  (Read 1634 times)

Bloogonis

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Here comes another community fort inspired by the writings of lituem and the many other great writers here. I wont be using ASCII Draw, at least for the prologue, then I will be sliding into a Prelude giving you a more in depth view as to the name of the story and the political situation that lead to the events of the story, plus some dwarfy fun.

Prologue
The Hunt
GrandDuke Stinthad Omshem was bubbling! The hunt, The Hunt! he would finaly get away from the fort to go off for a little sport, none of those nearby places the peasant Hunters go but to The Scraped Mire. Many great beasts had begun Migrating there for some reason out of the Savage Forest, some say the elves of the Shaken Storms had gone insane with paranoia driving them out.

Well that didn't really matter because The Scraped Mire was Neutral territory so all the beasts there were free game! No stepping on political toes or etiquette, just a dwarf and his crossbow hunting wild beasts. Of course he didnt own a crossbow, far to undwarven a weapon for a GrandDuke to posses, so he would bring along a pair of the mountains Legendary Rangers he would temporarily add to his retainer, ten copper a peice should cover any inconvenience. this along with his personal guard brought the number to seven, ah a very dwarven group indeed.

The GrandDuke of The Picks of Deification stepped out into the dry hot air of the Mountain halls of Rigothmat in The Watchful Spines. "Ah, to be away from the peasants for a bit, they were always complaining about something... and they still haden't brought the soap table he asked for. the Hammer strokes will fall for this injustice!" He looked down at the preparations to find that He was the last to arrive and they had been waiting for three whole hours, my goodness, but who would want to wake up before mid-afternoon?

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So here we introduce the GrandDuke there are six open slots. 4 Military dwarfs all Champions and two legendary Rangers.
Bonus points and the first lines of the next update(if you claim a Dwarf) if you translate the name of the Mountain hall  ;D
« Last Edit: June 11, 2009, 09:14:25 pm by Bloogonis »
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Re: The Succubus Three(community, accepting members for the prologue)
« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2009, 08:22:57 pm »

is the name craftbend?
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Re: The Succubus Three(community, accepting members for the prologue)
« Reply #2 on: June 11, 2009, 08:35:11 pm »

Ding Ding Ding! we have a winner! did you want a dwarf?
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Re: The Succubus Three(community, accepting members for the prologue)
« Reply #3 on: June 11, 2009, 08:48:40 pm »

ah yes, i get to choose from two rangers and 4 champions?
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Re: The Succubus Three(community, accepting members for the prologue)
« Reply #4 on: June 11, 2009, 08:51:33 pm »

I want a ranger named Labs.
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Re: The Succubus four(community, accepting members for the prologue)
« Reply #5 on: June 11, 2009, 08:56:01 pm »

2 rangers and 4 of any type of military dwarf. They are all legendary in the weapon you choose, all weapons accepted. these are not the fort members they will lead a spectacular opening quest, owners of these six will also get first dibs on the starting 7 for the main storyline after the prelude.

Edit!: lol woops! there are 4 succubi in the world my bad, I guess I need to add her to the list! name changed  :o

Oh and Check on Labs, any specific personality feature you want me to use.
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Re: The Succubus Four(community, accepting members for the prologue)
« Reply #6 on: June 11, 2009, 09:54:00 pm »

Can I get a paranoid speardwarf?
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Re: The Succubus Four(community, accepting members for the prologue)
« Reply #7 on: June 11, 2009, 10:32:53 pm »

oo thats gonna be great! also I will just let you know these dwarves have limited survival chance, granted whn the stuff hits the fan it will be spectacular, so if you want any specific name, nows the time.

I've been reading through the legends for the sneaky fourth female Demon that I had missed before, and she is now in the story as the youngest of the 4 (visualy and emotionaly, since age is meaningless to them). she had several attacks against human villages that had no defenders they just up and started worshiping her. it was odd, I had never seen "so and so attacks littleville" without "The Defenders were lead by X"
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Re: The Succubus Four(community, accepting members for the prologue)
« Reply #8 on: June 11, 2009, 10:47:44 pm »

Hmm... Name him "Gloaf"
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Re: The Succubus Four(community, accepting members for the prologue)
« Reply #9 on: June 11, 2009, 11:28:43 pm »

I'm in gimme a character and name him 'deathlord'
legendary axedwarf
legendary shield user
dabbling armor user
make him kind of laid back but with anger issues
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« Reply #10 on: June 11, 2009, 11:33:17 pm »

gah, got distracted by visitors and lotsa posts now. the character i want is one of the rangers. name him after me
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Re: The Succubus Four(community, accepting members for the prologue)
« Reply #11 on: June 12, 2009, 11:17:04 am »

"Graaaaghaagha! Peice of junk!" Ousire kicked the thorny branch he had just stepped on driving a second set of long thorns into his foot. "Ooof oof oof"

"Shhh, you'll scare away all the game, or worse, piss off the GrandDuke and get us hammered." his companion Labs Feastsword whispered harshly. "And we are NOT getting paid enough for that."

Ousire sat on a nearby log to pull out the thorns a to calm down from his huff. "Bleeding Nobles! Always throwing their weight around, its not like they have any skills they just rule and those brutes the royal guard enforce it."

"Hey now, carefuller with that talk, they might get woried you will start another tantrum spiral, and we lost to many people in those day."

i know, it just gets to me some times. But seriously! Can you believe he made us Walk the entire way, and he insisted on choosing the rout, 'I am the GrandDuke, I know the way. I dont need the higly trained trackers and scouts to help me at all.' Geez" Ousier had almost ran out of breath trying to force as much pumpasity into his voice while imitating the GrandDuke. He felt dizzy and slid off the log losing his grip on his crossbow.

The Weapon hit the ground with a TWANG and a bolt disapeared into the bushed followed by a short whine.

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Gloaf Sandhammers the Triumph of squirrels stood at the edge of the camp kind of jittery. He just had this feeling, something wasn't right the forest was too quiet. he heard steps behind him, slow, deliberate, and headed right for him.  He swung around his spear at the ready and let out a shrill war cry.

Commander Deathlord Pleatedgears the Alchemical Trifels stared down at the jumpy dwarf with a slight grin on his face just before being taken by an enormous yawn. "Relax, its a hunting trip and The Picks of Deification have no enemies in these parts, actualy come to think of it. we haven't been at war for nearly a century, so we are safe here. But stay on your toes, we are the Royal Guard! We Are the Fist that Holds the Picks Together!" they both let out a guttural shout in salute before returning to their posts.

Gloaf was a little calmer but he had been in the last war as a recruit, He had seen the Demoness who had lead the goblins of the southernmost border of The Scraped Mire at Drillbad. Some say she was a succubus, and it was felt that day, none of the soldiers among the Picks relayed the information but the complete loss of self control was something intoxicating. Gloaf had promised himself he would never leave his guard down ever again. He remembered the screams from Commander Dastot Complexaxes, one of the rear commanders, he was boiled slowly from the inside out. Sad Ruthlessmenace the Flickering Spiders was dead now slain by an elf, but The Deceiver of Monkeys still stood as a testament to her evil and its goblins, hold up in their many obsidian Palaces and towers, still loomed over the reigon.

He still saw her standing over him every time he woke, she stood her marble white skin and eyes as black as pitch her sultry lips parted slightly, inviting, he wanted to feel her polished Impala horns against his skin. She called for him to return to Drillbad to live in piece and constant ecstasy and he had seen many of the Picks military deserted over the years, officially they left to seek action and glory with mercenary bands, but Golaf knew. He knew far to well. Far to well.

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the plot is hinted thickens!
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Re: The Succubus Four(community, accepting members for the prologue)
« Reply #12 on: June 12, 2009, 11:24:17 am »

I'd like to have Oldbeard here, it's him when he was young (well, younger) before he set out across the world and gained a mistrustful and derisive attitude towards just about everything.
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One day, we shall all look back on this, and laugh. Sorry about the face, by the way, and the legs, and the eyes, and the arms. In fact, sorry 'bout the whole body.

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Re: The Succubus Four(community, accepting members for the prologue)
« Reply #13 on: June 12, 2009, 11:28:25 am »

anyway what could they do ra... ack bad images
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Re: The Succubus Four(community, accepting members for the prologue)
« Reply #14 on: June 12, 2009, 11:35:56 am »

Incidentally, Oldbeard is a legendary crossbowman.
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Once tried to conquer Earth, and succeeded! Too bad it got really, really boring, really, really fast.

One day, we shall all look back on this, and laugh. Sorry about the face, by the way, and the legs, and the eyes, and the arms. In fact, sorry 'bout the whole body.
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