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Re: The Autumn War (Community Forest): CHARACTERS NEEDED!
« Reply #15 on: June 05, 2009, 04:42:51 pm »

I smelt the epic win of this story when I stared up firfox

I'd like an elf please

name: Khannesh
proffesion: assassin/scout
points: ambusher 4/bow 3/tanning 1/leather working 2
can I have a pet raven or another bird if possible

Background: Khannesh was in the field when Amiyaayiti fell, he could hear the screams of all he had know ring out through the forest and the force. He rushed back only to find that the charred, gory remanes of his home. Strangly he found a raven in a single tree that had survived the human attack, a crushed nest and a dead female raven lay at the bottom of the tree. Kannesh befriened the bird for they had both loast there family after the attack. After many days wandering he had found two wandering survivers that had told him about Nelo and her plan to strike back at the humans. When he arived he demanded that he be part of the expidition, offering his expirience as an assassin and scout of the Shadowed Leaf and as a leather worker
                                   
I kinda nocked that up in two minets but you could make him have ties with Ocade as they might of been on a mission together at some point or something.

Any way love this story, your writing style is far superiour to mine and I hope that by reading this thread everyday that some of your brilliance will rub off on me.
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« Reply #16 on: June 05, 2009, 04:50:09 pm »

Nice story Greymane.
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« Reply #17 on: June 05, 2009, 09:20:53 pm »

Feana Sethearido, “Feana Packhero”
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The silver call of the warning horn still echoed through the trees as Nelo glided away from the glade and the young druid. Her feet picked over a carpet of soft wet leafs and thick lichen, skipped across shallow pools of crystal clear water without so much as leaving a ripple behind her. The Force was returning to her swiftly in the short time since her return. Already, she could feel the pulse of the world around her. She could hear the breath of the trees, understand their soft groans of respectful greeting as she passed.

Respect, though not welcome. Where she walked, the world changed subtly. What was green and flourishing took up autumns bronze and crimson shades and a dry wind shriveled healthy moss to barren brown patches. These changes, they never lasted. Mere seconds after she had passed them by, the leafs cast off the summer colors, the moss soaked itself again in emerald dyes, and the trees began to whisper to one another of what had transpired between herself and Ditari earlier that day.

Such was the way of all high druids. They were the will through which the Force could shape the world. Here, in cold and damp Dafoequa, her will was inconstant contest with Ditari’s and the other druids of this retreat. A battle she had known she was doomed to lose. This was not Amiyaayiti and never would be even if she put all her will into trying to make it so. You could not make a sapling grow when it was already dead.

Behind her, a twig abruptly snapped and the high druid stopped. She stood upon the edge of a slender trickle of water that ran through a muddy embankment. Tiny dams of ancient leaf mold and bright blue flowers clogged the little water way, giving rise to inlets along it’s bank where frogs and fireflies played. Nelo did not look at these, however. Her face was to the sky.

“I wonder what will become of you when you do not have me to follow around the retreat all day,” she wondered idly to the air, a long finger tapping her bottom lip speculatively.

The air did not answer her back at first, but finally a voice responded with a tone of deep apology and embarrassment. “... I am sorry, high druid. I did not mean to be a bother.”

Nelo smiled and shook her head, a tolerant parent. She turned, placing hands upon her hips. “Come out of hiding, Feana. You’ve never been any good at sneaking about.”

A shadow detached itself from the woods behind her, shape coalescing from the deep pools of darkness into the slender form of a waifish girl. Her long red hair was scraggly and unkempt, speckled with leaf and twig. With the splash of sun-freckles across her face, she looked something like the wood nymphs of legend, were it not for the slender oak spear griped in her hand and the freshly carved featherwood armor that seemed nearly to swallow her whole.

“I am sorry, high druid,” Feana said again, this time lowering herself to her knees and preparing to offer a formal gesture of apology. One that involved a mimicry of the humble earthworm and seven strikes of her head to the forest floor.

“Don’t, Feana,” Nelo intervened with a sigh, motioning the girl to rise. “I’ve no desire to see you break your head upon the stony ground. And are you not my sworn guardian? I should make you recant your oath if you did not try to follow me everywhere.”

That made the girl smile as she returned to her feet, pleased beyond measure by such a simple compliment. She brushed wet leafs from her wooden greave and even pulled a scrap of cloth from under her gauntlet to wipe the edges of the carved surfaces clean. So proud to be wearing that. It would be a lie to say that Nelo was not tickled by such enthusiasm nor pleased by the girls devotion. If only it were to the cause and not Nelo herself. For all her seemingly timid and girlish manners, the Spear Master Kaithan had told Nelo the girl was magnificent on the practice field. If she had only the will to hate, she would have been a true weapon of vengeance.

Nelo beckoned her closer with a gesture and obedient Feana came hurrying forward. They stood face to face, as differing a pair of women as could be found. After a moment, Nelo reached forward. The poor, timid little thing flinched as though she expected a blow but instead the high druid’s long fingers traced softly across the elf maid’s brow. Sweeping back the wild curtain of scarlet hair and tucking it behind her ears, she opened the girls face to the wind. She was so pretty. Still just a girl, even at two hundred years old. She would have made a fine wife for Nine.

Nine...

Nelo’s hand abrupt flinched back from the girl’s hair as though it were fire. The thought, come so casual to her, was like a splash of icy water across her soul. She felt herself tremble and felt a sudden rage rise up through her throat as she looked down at Feana.

How dare the girl make her think that thought!? How dare she bring back such memories?!

Nelo’s eyes were fixed only on Feana’s suddenly fearful face, the shadows of Dafoequa growing long in the corners of her eyes, swallowing the very trees that cast them. Nelo’s hands clutched to fists so tight, her long nails sliced open flesh. She began to lift her hand and knew, as wide-eyed Feana stared up at her, that this time she would strike the girl...

Blood for what hungers...

... until a second force abruptly intervened. She saw a pair of golden feline eyes flash across her mind and felt something twist in her grasp. She struggled a moment to hold it, but her hold loosened felt it wriggle away. The shadows writhed and faded, the forest suddenly surrounding them again. Nelo blinked, then slowly lowered her trembling hand towards Feana’s head. There was blood under her finger nails when she unclenched her fist.

Plucking one of the many twigs from the girls locks, Nelo held it forth and rolled it back and forth between her fingers. “I see you have continued your experiment on becoming one with nature by carrying as much of it in your scalp as you can.”

“I... I did not have time to... to...” Feana started, seemingly unable to find any words. Her eyes were as wide as the moon and her bottom lip trembled. She was no fawn about to break and run, though she did seem more intent on staring at Nelo’s feet rather than looking her in the eye. Even when Nelo herself had felt that urge to strike the girl, Feana had only flinched and waited for the blow. Such a good girl..

“You should take better care of it,” the high druid admonished, but lightly, and stroked her fingers through the girls thickly tangled locks, freeing a few more helpless bits of foliage from it’s embrace. “Your color is rare. If we’d the time, child, I would comb it out for you again. It is something you will have to learn to do on your own for now, I fear.”

“Yes.”

Nelo curled a finger under Feana’s chin and with gentle pressure forced the youngling to turn her gaze upwards. There, she found Nelo’s blood-red eyes waiting. “You do understand why I am sending you with the others, don’t you Feana? I need someone there to look after them. Someone I can trust to always be alert. Always on guard.”

Feana’s throat bobbed under Nelo’s finger tip. She could feel the pulse of life beating in the girls veins like water roaring through a rapid. “Yes.”

“And that you are going to be my eyes and my ears as well? To tell me all that you see and all that they do?”

“Yes.”

Her sudden bought of wordlessness annoyed Nelo, but she hid it on her face and gave the girl a reassuring pat upon the check. “I worry about the others, that once out of my sight they might stray and scatter. Some children are so like untrained birds. The moment you open the cage, they all fly away. But you, Feana, I know I can trust.”

“Yes...” Feana repeated and then a heartbeat later. “Yes high druid.”

It was an improvement. Nelo took her hand away and the girl’s eyes stayed up, shimmering and wide.“Go find Avetho and tell her to fetch the half-breed from his hole in the ground. I will wait in the Lacy Forest east of the retreat. Bid her to gather all the others and meet me there.”

Nelo turned and left her there. She had much still to think about before this day would end. Already deep in thought, she did not pay a wit of attention to the ground she walked on or the girl she left behind...
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With Nelo gone, Feana found herself gasping for air as though she had spent the last few minutes with her head held under water. Strength nearly left her and she leaned back against the tree behind her for support, a hand clutched over her face. It was not to hold back a sickness, though her stomach had lurched. It was to ward away the stench of smoke and ash and burn skin that pervaded the air. Scents too familiar and ones that filled her with a panic that neared animal in it’s intensity.

She had turned her gaze down, back to where Nelo had forced it from, and beheld what the high druid had not even seemed to notice.

Death.

All around where Nelo had stood, the forest was dead. The grasses and moss shriveled to ash. The bodies of the tall, noble trees scorched upon one side as if lashed with tongues of flame. Gone was the stream, bubbled and hissed into steam, and for several yards along it’s length, the cooked bodies of a dozen helpless frogs still sizzled and popped in the cooling air. Even her fine oak spear, just that morning shaped for her by Vadoena and still throbbing fresh with the power of the Force, had been drained of that life and blackened as though plunged into flame.

Feana bit her lip and cried, tear cool on her cheeks as they dribbled down. She did not know what had just happened. She did not understand what she had just seen. Only that she had to try to keep it a secret. If someone found out, they would tell Ditari Stormshower. Feana had been there, that morning, when the two high druids spoke. She was better at sneaking around than Nelo realized. She had heard the harsh words and the terms of exile. Feana knew too that Nelo had not told Avetho the full truth about those, but she would not second guess the high druid. There was a reason for the trickery. There must have been.

It was some time before she composed herself enough to act. She began to rake fresh wet leafs over the blackened ground and used her spear point to dig away the burn cinders damming the little stream. The earth accepted the dead frogs as she buried them in tiny anonymous graves. The trees were the hardest to cover, but she finally managed to scrape together enough moss to cover the burnt sections. Thankfully, the wounds were only skin deep and she hoped that they would be beyond Dafoequa before Ditari spoke next spoke with these particular trees.

The last thing Feana did was to hide her spear in a log. She could not carry it around anymore, burnt as it was. Stashing it deep into the fallen tree, she looked one more time over the area. It did not look right, but it only had to hold until they were out of the Bud of Death’s lands. With nothing else to be done, the elf maid turned and ran to find Avetho, hoping she was still in the glade where they had left her.
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Many thanks, fil and Militia. =D

I'll get Khannesh done next. Is there anything else you're gonna want for equipment beyond just a bird, by the way? Even the most expensive one (red-winged blackbird, which is probably as close to a raven as there is avaliable) is only *30, so he'd have 170 left.
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« Reply #18 on: June 05, 2009, 11:20:58 pm »

Wow...just...wow.  Impressive as always.
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« Reply #19 on: June 06, 2009, 02:40:29 am »

Khannesh Icemiawi, “Khannesh Leopardbowel”
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The song of birds was ever presence in the forest of the elves. In flocks or alone, like all natures beasts, the creatures of the air seemed drawn to ancient woods and the living essence of the retreat. Every forest had it’s own song. Dafoequa’s was one of owls and march birds and even the rare gull come drifting in from the not-so-distant sea. Swirling and mixing together, they formed a most disharmonious choir. It was only the rare moment when one bird was given freedom to perform alone. So it was with the elves themselves. Tied to the earth and the trees, a moment of solitude was a rare and precious thing. The lengths they might go to in order to find it could be legendary.

Some, less than others.

The Lacy Forest lay just outside the retreat of Dafoequa, engulfing and surrounding the elven sanctuary and yet ultimately removed from it. The untrained or those of lesser races would not have known the difference. One tree was much the same as the next and as the elves were a people who did not believe in boarders, the woods seemed to simply blend together. Yet, there was a lightness here that separated it. It had a sense of openness and freedom that the dark retreat lacked. You were still watched, but only by curious beasts and the occasional glade runner slipping through the underbrush. The trees were silent and they unnamed. A single bird could sing, as indeed did one now, a lustrous sound foreign to this landscape.

In tartan scarf and worn leathers, Khannesh all but vanished into the tall branches of the tree in which he perched. One leg crossed upon his knee, he cradled a finely made mandolin to his chest. Dangling from a higher branch beside him, quiver and bow were not out of arms reach. He could have them in an instant, should he desire. It was no longer his role to watch the comings and goings of beasts though. The part he played would change today, with Nelo’s return. For the past hundred years, he had been a glade runner for the Bud of Death, walking the woodlands around the retreat with Dafoequa’s own black-cloaked rangers.

Now, he breathed deep and for the first time in that hundred years was able to truly appreciate the scents of the woods and not find himself compelled to search for the sour scent of goblin. He could listen to the bird song and appreciate it’s beauty, not sift through it’s sound for notes of warning and fear. There had been a minor alarm raised earlier and he had ignored it. He could even close his eyes, as he did now, and never once fear who might suffer for his lax of duty. As the lone song bird’s tuneful warbling seemed to reach a crescendo, Khannesh’s fingers began to pick at a slow amble across the strings of the mandolin. The sounds that emerged were... disharmonious.

Khannesh opened his eyes and looked down, his fingers stopping cold. The little black bird perched atop the neck of the instrument tilted it’s head to the side, the tiny black eyes giving him what he felt was a rather accusatory look.

“Not tuned up,” he told the bird and began to adjust the knobs at the end of the neck, tightening the strings. The little bird answered with a doubtful chirp.

He could not blame it. Khannesh was a horrible liar and barely knew the first thing about music. The mandolin, like the scarf he wore, was a parting gift from Amena, the Bow Master under whom he’d served this past century. Khannesh had always expressed an interest in learning, but his duties never granted him reprieve to try. He paused a moment and gave the mandolin a strum to test it. The sound that emerged sent an entire flock of nesting birds into panicked flight from the trees around him. The look the little blackbird gave him was positively a glare.

It would be a long road to mastery.

Khannesh was still struggling to tune the instrument when his eyes caught sight of the row of figures moving past below his tree. It was reflex that he look, sharp eyes unstrained to peer from the high branch and examine the six creatures passing by beneath him. Four large predatory cats and two elves. No, one and one-half an elf. He knew them all and could also tell at merely a glance that something was wrong. The half-breed elf was supporting the weight of the full-blood, nearly carrying her across the forest floor.

“Ah peaceful times, how fleeting you are,” Khannesh sighed as he rose to his feet on the high branch. When he swung the mandolin onto his back, the little bird flapped it’s wings and traded the instrument for his shoulder, perched and looking curiously down with him. A hand to his mouth, Khannesh blew a bird call to figures below and the half-elf stopped, raising his arm in recognition.

Retrieving bow and quiver, Khannesh descended his living tower hopping branch to branch with the deftness of a squirrel. His boots barely bent the grass as he descended into the middle of the tiny group. By that time, Ocade had leaned Avetho against the tree and was attempting to wake her with splashes of spring water to her face, to little avail. Khannesh brushed him off. Neither of them were healers, but he at least knew some signs to look for.

“... did you hit her?” Khannesh asked incredulously as he checked first to make sure Avetho was still breathing.

“Are you seeing cats eating my entrails?” Ocade spat back, an eye towards the large beasts who prowled worriedly around them. The half-elf was clearly suppressing the urge to shiver. He never had been good with surface animals. Too few legs, he claimed.

Avetho was breathing evenly, yet clearly her sense had left her. Druids might sometimes dive into the Force, he knew. Go into trance. They just tended not to chose to do so in the middle of a stroll. Khannesh looked up to Ocade, unspoken question on his face.

“Vas valking. Time for gathering var party, voman said. Ve come tovards here, but before ve leave retreat, she just... go,” Ocade finished and lifted his hands in a helpless gesture. “Nearly fall on me.”

“Mm, she didn’t say anything or- Rehue Raffae!

The name, spoken in shocked oath, came as Khannesh peeled back Avetho’s eye lid and found himself staring into a golden eye, it’s pupil split like one of her cats. He pulled back from her sharply

“I am seeing you notice eyes too, hm?” Ocade asked, unsmiling. “Look that vay before she fall over. She say ‘high druid’ and then...”

That drew a sharp and worried look from Khannehs. “High druid?”

“Ditari,” a third voice suddenly spoke, imposing itself upon them.

The four cougars turned in unison, rumbles deep within their throats. Nelo paid them no heed as she walked closer, silent as a ghost, and all four cats gave ground to her as she drew near. Khannesh’s own eyes were briefly pulled away as the bird upon his shoulder gave a sudden trill cry and darted up into the tree. Their reactions were startling, though so was Nelo’s appearance. The aura of anger around her was almost palpable. The colors of the forest did not change to autumn in her presence, as he had known them to, but seemed instead to only dye themselves in blood. The high druid of the Copper Autumn turned cold but concerned eyes down at Avetho, then knelt gently beside her and took the young druid’s hand, stroking it softly.

For some minutes, she did this, until at last her eyes turned back to Khannesh and Ocade beside her. “Ditari Stormshower did this. The Bud of Death has betrayed us. This morning, she ordered that all elves of the Copper Autumn leave their lands, swearing we had a day to depart.”

“A day?” Khannesh asked, scarcely believing. A day was not even the blink of an eye. Even a season would have seemed a hasty departure.

Nelo nodded gravely to his shock, her face a bitter mask. “It seems she has changed her mind however. I suspect young Avetho may have seen or overheard something Ditari did not want her to.”

Ocade, abruptly, shifted and muttered uncomfortably, but said nothing. Khannesh noticed, but Nelo either did not or chose to ignore it. Her gaze was on the glade runner alone. “I can scarcely believe it. Why?”

“Can the sane mind ever comprehend the mad one?” Nelo demanded. “Two hundred years now she has sought to divert us from our purpose. This is the length she would go to towards that end, Khannesh. Avetho is not even one of us, merely an ally, but Ditari would seek to destroy her for that alliance.”

He shook his head, dizzied in shock and dismay. Gone already from his mind were the idle thoughts of the morning. Gone was the freedom he had waited so long for. Duty had already returned to shackle him. “Rehue Raffae!” he exclaimed suddenly. The name drew a look of sharp reproach from Nelo, but he pressed on. “The others! They must be warned! Must be evacuated! If she would go this far-”

“Others are already seeing to that,” Nelo interrupted, rising to face him. Avetho’s limp hand slid from her grasp and slapped onto the forest floor. Nelo seemed to have forgotten the girl entirely, stepping over her still form as if it were just another fallen branch in the forest. “I came because I knew I would find you here. Khannesh, I have something I must ask you to do. A terrible thing.”

A terrible thing...

The words echoed to him from a dozen voices in a dozen memories. Khannesh felt his heart sink and his breath draw long, eager for a sigh he could not let out. “What would you have me do?”

“Do you have what I asked you to save?” Nelo demanded, giving him no reprieve from her burning gaze. That her eyes were red was not lost to him, yet searching his memory could find no clear image of what color they had been before.

The question floated in the air, odious and despairing. Khannesh had no choice but to nod, however. He set his quiver down and took a small wooden knife from his belt. Splitting the seams, he slid his hand between layers of smooth leather and drew forth a long cloth-wrapped bundle. With all slowness and ceremony, though driven mostly by lack of desire to go where he knew this was heading, Khannesh unwrapped the pale green rope reed from around the object at it’s center and held it up for her examination.

An arrow. A goblin arrow, it’s crude iron head hooked in such a fashion as to do more harm pulling out as it could going in. It was fletched with the feathers of cave swallows and carved from the pale flesh of giant cave mushrooms. A hideous, dead construct. You could still smell the giant cave spider venom on it, fresh as if it had been dipped that morning.

It made Nelo smile.

“We work to evacuate even now, Khannesh Icemiawi, but we need more time. We cannot be certain that the Bud of Death will not seek to bar us further,” the high druid said slowly. She spoke with dire gravity, yet Khannesh was not deaf to the hint of eagerness in her voice. Of course she would take some pleasure in this. He was not unaware of her rivalry with the high druid of Dafoequa. “Two hundred years ago, Khannesh, your arrows bought time for the last elves of the Copper Autumn to escape Amiyaayiti. I have no right to ask you this burden, when you have already given so much, but-“

“-but you do not need to ask,” Khannesh smiled and empty smile, looked at her with empty eyes that longed to damn her and could not. “I will do what must be done. May I have Ocade as my second, in case I fail?”

“No,” Nelo shook her head, only briefly looking past to the half-elf, who watched them both with increasing agitation. “If you fail, there will be no second chance.”

“I understand,” Khannesh said, the words deceptively simple.

Nelo slowly nodded and reached forth, touching his head as though bestowing a blessing. “I will not be here when you return. I go to find our scattered people. I will send them on to the camp. Ocade, wait for the others to arrive, then begin to travel north. When Avetho awakens, she will know where to take you.”

Khannesh had no words and offered no response. She did not wait for one, but stepped beyond him gracefully and began to track across the quiet forest. Every step seemed to take her half a mile, her body blurring into mist until not even his trained archers eyes could pick her out. Not, truly, that Khannesh was trying.

“Vat is this?” Ocade asked, his face twisted and disquiet. Of all the elves in the Copper Autumn, Khannesh alone came nearest to calling the half-breed friend. It had been the two them, virtually unaided, who had put down the goblin ambush that gained Khannesh possession of the vile arrow he now clutched in his hand. He wanted so badly to break it. “Vat are you to do?”

Khannesh looked at Ocade and smiled a weary smile, mournful beyond comprehension. How circular life could be.

“I am going to kill a high druid.”
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Yeah, Khannesh's last name translates out to Leopardbowel. I really, truly wish he had a better last name than that, but he was the only male elf left on the list and someone was going to get stuck with Leopardbowel.

Still, I had fun writing this one. =D

Anyway, I've got one elf left to fill and then I can get this thing rolling! Only a female elf left, so if I get any takers they're gonna be stuck with that.
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« Reply #20 on: June 06, 2009, 06:57:26 am »

dude you reached my mind through the internet

get out of my head!

actualy if you keep writing cool stuff like this I don't mind. That was truly awesome and my characture kicks so much arse it's unbeliveable. Don't worry about the name you can come up with something good
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« Reply #21 on: June 07, 2009, 04:03:42 am »

Brilliant writing you can count me in.

Name:Flin'Tess'-('for short')
Profession: 4 sword/4 shield/ 2 ambushing

Backround:A very young elf Tess was still unborn during the burning of Amiyaayiti, however her father was a high ranking warrior of the Elvish nation but he forsook all bonds of honour and friendship when he abandoned his people to their fate.

Tess's mother died shortly after her birth and her father raised her as a warrior so she could redeem her family name. Tess is quite upbeat despite her complicated upbringing, although when the fate of her family is brought up she can suffer bouts of depression. Due to the facts that Tess is a warrior and was raised by a single father she has many tomboyish qualities. She was raised to hate mankind and those who fought against the Copper Autumn but does not hate them as passionately as those who witnessed Amiyaatiti's fate. Her main motivation in life is to become a great hero and redeem her fathers lost name.

Personality: Usually upbeat and friendly, Tomboy, on the battlefield she is takes up a more serious tone.   

Keep up the good work.
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« Reply #22 on: June 07, 2009, 05:11:42 pm »

Flintess Ditanemo, “Flintess Fanciedroot”
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“Are we going to kill a lot of humans?”

“Yes.”

“Have you killed any humans before?”

“Yes.”

“What about dwarves?”

“No.”

“But you did kill humans?

“Yes.”

“Did you eat them?”

“Yes.”

“What do they taste like?”

Look,” Vadonea sighed in open frustration, closing her eyes tight to try and squeeze out the frustration through her brow. She could hear Fre fighting off a snicker near by and barely fought back the urge to club him over the back of the head with her bow. When she finally opened her eyes, just as she expected but much to her disappointment, the source of her headache was still walking beside her, looking up with wide amber eyes, expecting an answer like a hopeful fox pup expects a treat. “It’s not... something you talk about. None of this is anything we talk about. In fact, we don’t talk about anything at all. So, why don’t we just close our mouths and walk in silence?”

“But I just wanna know!” Flintess protested, her voice drawing dangerously near to a demanding whine. The young elf maid stood with her arms behind her back, hands clutched together around the tail end of the long braid that bound her dark hair together. She bounced on her feet as though her boots were pinching, peering up at the matron with guileless amber eyes.

“Yeah, me too, Vadonea! I want to hear all about it!”

Shut up, Fre,” the elf matron said, giving a look of murder to the grinning green-clad elf. Just beyond him, Feana did her able best to seem small and unobtrusive to avoid rousing the elf matron’s ire. Neither seen nor heard. Vadonea wondered why all younger elves could not be so gracious. Feana had told them that the war party was gathering and that Avetho had asked them to fetch Flintess from the practice fields of the retreat. Vadonea cursed herself for not just sending Fre alone.

“I bet they taste really bad,” Flintess went on, stooping a moment to pick up a rock from the forest floor and bouncing it in her palm. “I had meat once, you know. Animal flesh. Father traded for it from some hillfolk. It was awful.”

“Put that down,” Vadonea ordered, her eyes watching the small gray stone jumping from hand to hand. It bounced in perfect time to the tick that was forming in her right eye. “You don’t take anything from a foreign retreat they don’t give you willingly.”

“But it’s just a rock!”

Nothing,” the elf matron

Flintess pouted, but nodded and turned around. Her hand swung up and the gray pebble arced up into the air. Vadoena was nearly ready to thank her for being obedient, for once, when there was a sudden whistle and a blur of motion from the girl. A flute-like note trilled into the air and ended with a sharp, teeth grating crack as she whipped the sword off from her hip and smacked it into the stone. The little hunk of rock went careening through the air, rebounding off trees until they finally lost sight of it. When Flintess turned back, she looked pleased.

Only Fre‘s intervention spared her the back of Vadonea’s hand. Hand to his brow, he looked back as if still following the stone’s flight. Feana did too, her eyes wide in that perpetual moon-like fashion of hers. “Nicely done, Tess. Good form, good swing, good eye to hit such a small target too.”

Flintess blushed proudly and beamed.

“A might be disrespectful though, dear heart,” Fre went on though, admonishing softly. The smug little look left the girl’s face and her blush turned into a bruise of embarrassment instead. Fre stepped closer and put a hand on the top of her head. “Hurt to the woods, even small hurt, is like hurting your family. We’re all bound together, little one. You and me and the trees and rocks. You understand?”

“Yes, Fre,” she said, looking up at him with a far more winsome smile.

Vadonea had to admit he had a knack for dealing with the younger elves. Never a mother or burdened with someone else's child, it was a skill Vadonea lacked. Where Fre had learned that subtle art, she couldn’t say. He had no wife or child either, that she knew of.

Distracted by such thoughts, she missed the glance he had given her and the teasing glitter to his eye. If she had seen it, she might have been better braced for what followed. “Why, you even Vadoena! Though I do sometimes wonder if she isn’t just a really tall dwarf in disguise.”

The girls, both of them, giggled, with Feana clamping her hands over her face to hide it.

Fre...” the elf matron said slowly, a growl of warning in her voice. A smarter man would have known better than to provoke a lioness, but then she never had attributed Fre with an over abundance of brains.

“In fact, I think I see some hair on your chin,” he went on, proving her right as he leaned closer as if examining Vadonea’s nonexistence facial hair. “You’d best trim that before your beard grows back and you give yourself away.”

Her fist was about ready to meet his jaw when Flintess suddenly imposed herself between them, an arm outstretched to point. “Hey!”

Vadonea barely pulled her blow in time to avoid clobbering the girl in the side of the head. Though it might have done her good to get her brains rattled around a bit. Teach her to be less careless. Flintess had not even seemed to notice what transpired though, her gaze fixed into the distance. “Isn’t that Khannesh Icemiawi?”

Fre put a hand on his savior’s head and smiled over the girl at Vadonea, whose gaze promised that this was not over. Both then turned to look where she pointed and even with her gesture to guide them, it was a moment before either spied the leather-clad glade runner moving through the woods. He was walking in a swift but silent crouch, knees bent in a fashion that left him ready to dive into cover at a moments notice. A stalkers crouch.

“See? Good eyes on this girl. Look’s like he’s hunting something. Maybe another kobold got through?” Fre wondered, watching the glade runner closely.

“Well, he’d better well stop hunting. He’s supposed to be coming with us,” Vadoena said, though made no move to intercept him in word or voice. Another thought had come to her. “... Flintess? Why don’t you go fetch him for us?”

“Me?” the elf maid asked, looking up a moment at Vadonea, then back down to where Khannesh was. “He’s moving kind of fast...”

“All the more reason to get started now. We’ll need everyone together, before we can head north, after all. Though if you don’t think you’re up to it, I guess Feana could go...”

“I... I don’t mind...” the freckled girl said softly, already moving towards the distance glade runner. She made it only about two steps before Flintess’s hand grabbed her shoulder and nearly tossed her back out of the way. Fre caught Feana before Flintess’s sudden enthusiasm bowled her over.

“I can do it! Don’t worry! You just watch! I’ll get him good!” she declared, breaking into a swift and noisy jog through the underbrush. She could move with stealth and grace when she wanted to, Vadonea knew. The girl had even snuck up on her once or twice, but where as every other elf moved quietly out of habit, Flintess rarely seemed to give it a moments thought. No doubt, whatever Khannesh was hunting would end up scared away by her approach, solving two problems at once.

“Mean, Vadonea. Very mean,” Fre said with a cluck of his tongue, though sounded more respectful than disapproving.

“You elves have your ways, we dwarves have ours,” she grunted and Fre grinned, tipping his hat to her. Vadonea felt something tickle up her spine and nearly smiled back. Her face was still a stony mask. “Now come on, they’re waiting for us.”

“Yes, my taskmaster.”

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He found her among a stand of trees, staring at the ground. Khannesh did not know what she was doing there. There was a strange and worried look upon the high druid Ditari’s face. Whatever troubles played on her mind, they worked in his favor. She was distracted.

The goblin arrow burned his fingers. So close to the heart of the Force within Dafoequa, the arrows cold, dead presence was like a shard of ice. It was empty of everything but the will to kill. So, too, must he be. Khannesh’s slowed the beating of his heart and the measured the rhythm of his breath.

Out., he placed the arrow to the string.
In, he raised the bow, leveled to the white-clad druid standing before him.
Out, he pulled back slowly, the strain on his arms greater for the control he wielded to keep the bow from creaking.
In, he took aim, the dull iron tip pointed straight at the druids heart.
Out.
Hold., he-

Khannesh!” a voice suddenly cried out from behind him.

Khannesh knew he recognized it from somewhere, but could not place it. Someone he had served with or met in the retreat? It did not matter. He know the moment he heard his name called that the mission was doomed. Ditari’s head snapped up at the sound, her eyes going instantly to his position and from behind he heard the speaker drawing closer, their shadow on his shoulder. Instinct took over and he let the goblin arrow fly. There was a chance, a slim one, that it might have struck but he doubted it and would not stay to see. Twisting back, Khannesh pulled the knife from his belt and plunged it towards the center mass of shadow behind him...

... and too late, he recognized the startled face of Flintess Ditanemo standing behind him.

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“She what?” Vadonea asked Ocade, not believing what the half-breed had just told her.

He shook his head and did not repeat the words. Once was enough. Fre was on the ground, cradling the unconscious form of Avetho in his lap and trying to rouse her with gentle slaps to the face. Above him in the trees, Feana was keeping look out, though without her spear – where had that thing gone? – there would be little she could to but shout a warning if someone approached. That left Vadonea to try and sort through what Ocade told them, a fact she was not pleased about at all.

“I can’t believe Ditari would go that far...”

“Nhem,” Ocade grunted his own disapproval. The half-breed seemed unusually calm about the whole affair, but then he had always seemed detached from the rest of them. He had said it often enough, they were not his people. “Is not to be mattering soon though. Nelos is having Khannesh deal vith traitor vitch.”

“Deal with her?” Vadonea asked, a cold creeping sensation beginning to run across her skin. Ocade gave a nod, then put a finger to his throat and drew a line across it. Vadonea suddenly pictured it again, the sight of Khannesh creeping through the woods as if on a hunt, the sight of Flintess dashing off after him.

“... oh no...” Fre’s voice was little more than a whisper, but his words seemed loud enough to deafen her.

Flintess,” Vadonea said, her heart turning to ice. She had sent the girl after Khannesh. She had, not knowing what sort of mission he was on. A mission that he surely must have known would be suicidal. If he was caught, after what had already been done to Avetho, the Bud of Death would not entertain any mercy. He would have walked into that knowingly, but Flintess...

Vadonea was already moving before she even realized she had made up her mind. Shrugging off bow and quiver, she tossed both to the ground beside Fre. She would need to move light. “Stay here, all of you. I will be back as soon as I can.”

Fre began to stand up, shifting Avetho out of his arms with care, her blond hair spilling off his lap. “Vadonea, you can’t go alone.“

“I can and I will. Stay here, Fre. Help Ocade get Avetho onto one of her cats and start moving. I’ll catch up,” her tone brooked no argument. He gave one anyway.

“Not going to happen. I won’t leave you or Flintess behind,” Fre said. Ocade was already moving to do what she asked, hoisting Avetho off the ground and drapping the druid’s limp body over the back of one of the mountain lions. The other cats paced worriedly around her.

Fre...” Vadonea said, speaking his name low and slowly. It was the tone from behind, the rumble of a lioness. It was darker this time and it’s warning more dire. Just like before though, Fre did not heed it.

“I’m coming wi-“

This time, her fist had no trouble finding his jaw and the green-clad hunter went reeling back to the ground. Vadonea stood over him, her cold gaze glaring down and a fist readied to put him back to the forest floor if he tried to rise again. “This journey has not even started and we’ve already lost people. I will not have us losing anymore. You. Will. Stay.”

He said nothing, though he was clearly biting back an answer, a hand pressed to his bloodied upper lip. She was ready to end their stand-off there, but then someone else ended it for her.

“Khannesh! Flintess!” Feana called out, jumping down from her perch and darting past the two embattled elves.

Vadonea whipped around, watching in shock as the leather-clad Khannesh came bolting into sight with Flintess in tow behind him. The girl looked panicked, her eyes wide, barely doing more than letting Khannesh drag her through the underbrush. Feana intercepted them with a body check, almost sweeping Flintess off her feet as she grabbed the other girl and hugged her tightly. Khannesh stopped in the face of the stares of the others, a wall of emotion greeting him. Shock, wariness, relief; no one was certain how to feel but Ocade, who merely smiled and nodded to the returning elf as if he had just returned from a trip to the pond.

Vadonea found her voice first. “Did you-“

The glade runner held up a hand to silence the question before it could come. He opened his mouth to speak, but the sound that reached them was not his words, but the bellowing cry of a horn being sounded. Louder than the alarm that had been raised in response to the kobold earlier that day, it was swiftly joined by a dozen others that seemed to rise up around them on every side as the glade runners and wardens in the forest beyond the retreat blasted their own horns in answer.

One sounded no more than a stones throw away from them. Khannesh looked towards the sound, but only for a moment. He reached back and shoved the two younger elves onward, hurrying them towards rest. “No talk. Just run.”

And with no more words spared, they did.

Towards the distant north...

And whatever fate may await them there...

The Autumn War had begun.

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And woo! Seven elves! Now I can actually get the game itself started.
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« Reply #23 on: June 07, 2009, 05:23:44 pm »

And that was just the prologue...  I really like how you've started this, and can't wait for the next chapter (seriously, I look for this every time I get online).

Also, I'm quite surprised.  I thought the Autumn War would be against humans, not our fellow elves.
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« Reply #24 on: June 07, 2009, 08:40:28 pm »

Yeah the character introductions are terrific I can't wait for the rest of the story.
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« Reply #25 on: June 08, 2009, 03:04:51 am »

And that was just the prologue...  I really like how you've started this, and can't wait for the next chapter (seriously, I look for this every time I get online).

I cannot add to this
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« Reply #26 on: June 08, 2009, 09:37:24 am »

And that was just the prologue...  I really like how you've started this, and can't wait for the next chapter (seriously, I look for this every time I get online).

I cannot add to this

you just did. and i agree with Frelock
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« Reply #27 on: June 08, 2009, 11:31:33 pm »

The Autumn War.
Chapter One: Planting Roots
Ocade placed his foot upon the human’s shoulder and shoved. The man, or rather the empty shell that remained of him, slid off the half-breed’s featherwood blade and tumbled down the embankment. It slid into the gurgling waters of the brook known as the Fondled Romance, a cloud of crimson swirling downstream as the currents slowly dragged the corpse onward.

The human had been one of four who had the misfortune of being present when the elves of the Copper Autumn had arrived at their destination, driving a wagon full of wood and supplies through a freshly carved path in the forest. They had been alert, even fearful, as they passed through the woods. Not alert enough. Khannesh and Vadonea had put nearly half a dozen arrows into the staff wielding guard before he even knew they were there. One man tried to take refuge under the wagon, only to find himself set upon by Flintess and Feana, who swiftly battered him into submission. The other two, clearly not knowing who was attacking them, fled into the forest instead of hurrying their animals onward. One had barely made it beyond the wagon before Fre sprung from hiding. The hunter had seemed to experiment with seeing exactly how many arrows he could put into the man before he died.

The last human, to his credit, actually made it as far as the brook before Ocade had run him down and then run him through. Ocade watched the corpse go, bobbing up and down in the water like a discolored log.

“What’s the matter? Never seen one before?” Fre asked him from near by, crouched by the waters edge to wash the blood from the tips of his arrows. He was smiling a small and happy smile, staring not at Ocade but at his own distorted reflection in the water.

“I have seen humans before, but not the ones ve are to be making var upon,” Ocade answered, turning “They are more pale that I vould have thought. They remind me of northern elves like you.”

“Go talk to Vadonea. The two of you seem to share very similar thoughts,” Fre said, the smile wavering as he scrubbed the blood away with his finger tips. Ocade merely grunted and walked away, scarlet still dripping from the tip of his blade. No point in cleaning it when he’d just been dirtying it again in a moment.

Over by the human’s wagon, Avetho stared across the Forest of Skirts and shivered, pulling the rope-reed shawl she wore tighter across her shoulders. Her great cats had abandoned her for the moment, drifting off to sniff and explore the new environment. Flintess wondered if they remembered this place. They were supposed to have come from here, after all.

She was supposed to be standing guard over the prisoner with Feana, but the human had seemed little inclined to insurrection after she had cut off his hand, so she moved off to step up behind the druid. “Cold? It’s warmer here than down south. Not as wet either! That’ll be nice, not getting rained on so much I mean. Do you think it snows here at all? I’ve always wanted to see snow up close.”

“It’s... dead,” the druid answered her softly. Avetho’s golden eyes were distant and Flintess hovered at her side, peering intently in the same direction to try and see what she was looking at. For all she stared, the only things she saw were the trees, Ocade, the brook, and then more trees.

“What is?” Flintess asked at last.

“The forest.”

“Really? It looks pretty alive to me,” Flintess said, leaning down and running her hand through the soft wet grass that grew like a carpet lawn on the forest floor. It was green. That tickled her. She didn’t know it came in that color. All the grasses back south had been black, thick clumps of long stalks growing where the moss did not.

Avetho shook her head, at least pulling her gaze away from the distance to look down at the elf maid. “No. It’s only skin deep. The Force isn’t here. There is no presence. No energy. These trees are like corpses. Just empty shells. Corpses, like the humans we killed.”

“Oh...” Flintess said, chewing her bottom lip as she considered that, and then adding. “Does that mean we’re gonna eat the trees?”

Avetho gave her a puzzled look, then the corners of her mouth began to turn up. She started to give an answer when the half-breed passed them by, his dark gaze intent upon the human-creature huddled and terrified in the shadow of the wagon. His intent was clear, even to Flintess. Avetho turned and raised her hand. “Wait, Ocade.”

“Vhy?” Ocade turned back, giving the druid a befuddled glare. “Ve here to kill humans. This thing human. Ve kill it. Vhat else ve supposed to do vith?”

“Eat him alive?” Flintess volunteered, causing the man to flinch and try to bury himself further under the wagon. Without mercy, Feana grabbed him by the ankle and dragged him back out, fixing him with her spear so that he would not try again. Flintess giggled.

No,” Avetho admonished sternly, taking the suggestion as a serious one rather than half-serious as Flintess had meant it. “I told you all, we’ll not eat the flesh of men or any other race while we’re here.”

“You take all the fun out of a war, you know that Avetho?” came the voice of Fre as the hunter returned from the river, a dripping clutch of smooth white arrows between his fingers. “What are we supposed to do with the bodies when their souls are gone, hm? Just leave them in the field to rot? It’s disrespectful.”

“I’d prefer we put them somewhere more discreet, but if we have to let them rot then we do,” Avetho said, looking at those gathered. Khannesh and Vadonea were out scouting the area, making certain there were no other humans lurking in the woods. “The younger races do not comprehend the reason for the act and we can little afford to make war with everyone. We’ve made enough enemies already...”

No one spoke for a moment, feeling again the shadow of the wolf who had hunted them since leaving Dafoequa. The past months of travel had been difficult, though none so much as the first two weeks. Hounded by open pursuit the first week, then restless in wondering the second, they had marched for days without stopping to take rest. The Bud of Death had seemed to give up the chase by the time the elves of the Copper Autumn met up with the Frostling caravan. They had joined the goblin-kin hunters for a time, as they followed the migrating herds of elk and caribou northward with the changing seasons. It had been an unusual and fragile alliance, but one that served both groups well. Avetho and Fre had been the only ones to socialize in any fashion with the frostlings and it was during her talks with them that she seemed to pick up the idea not to eat the meat of other races.

At last, Ocade broke the silence with a grunt of disgust and walked off to find some shade to sit in. The half-breed did not either sentiment, but nor did he press the issue.

“Alright, so what do we do with him?” Fre asked, pulling their attention back to the more immediate issue of the human on the ground near by, pinned and struggling under Fenea’s spear point.

Avetho looked the human’s way a moment, then turned back to Fre. She drifted to him, her hands reaching down for his belt.

“A little public for intimacy, don’t you think?” he asked quietly, grinning. “Or are we going to win the human over with a demonstration on elven love making?”

Mirthless, Avetho yanked the wooden dagger from his belt sheath and turned away, ignoring the disappointed click of the tongue that followed her. All eyes were upon her as moved, though none with more focus and terror than the human. He seemed to realize what was about to happen before the other elves did and redoubled his struggles to escape. At a look from Fenea, Flintess ran over quickly and stomped a boot down on the man’s still-intact hand, pinning it to the ground. He was babbling desperately in the human’s clumsy language and even, to Flintess’ surprise, threw out a few words of elvish.

None of which stopped Avetho as she knelt by his side and, with the gentleness of a mother to a new born babe, eased the edge of the knife across his throat. Fenea winced and turned her face away, but held her grasp tight as the man tried to flail one last time. Flintess though found herself watching, fascinated, as the blood bubbled up and the light began to fade from his eyes. Part of her was still just shocked and enchanted by the fact that human’s bled red, just like she did.

“Blood for what hungers,” Avetho said softly, setting aside the knife and curling her fingers into the stained earth.

“Well, that will keep him from escaping,” Fre said, watching the ritual from a distance in uncertainty. The act had even roused Ocade to look up from where he sat, the eyes gleaming out from under his hood displaying little of the thoughts that took place behind them.
 
Avetho rose clutching handfuls of bloody earth. Flintess looked up in awe. For the first time since leaving Dafoequa, Avetho was radiant with the power of druidic magic. Even her untrained senses could feel the life-force wafting from the druid and even if they could not, the faint light that glimmered around Avetho gave it away. “The Force is dead here. The human’s have spared the forest, while yet somehow destroying it’s soul. We will regrow it. We will plant the souls of these destroyers like seeds into the ground and water them with their own blood, until the Force again will flourish in the Forest of Skirts.”

“And the dead meat that remains when blood and soul are gone?” Fre asked, his gaze as fascinated as Flintess’ as he stared at the druid in her glory. Though, Flintess could not help but notice that it was a different sort of fascination.

Avetho looked at him and did not smile. “You need more arrows, don’t you?”

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From the Journal of Vadonea Noquemesthe
1st of Granite, 291
I suppose you could say that the war is off to a good start, at least if you’re only counting corpses.

Our arrival happened to coincide with a lumber harvest and we stumbled over one of the wagons, dispatching laborers and guards. While everyone else was cleaning up, Khannesh and I went further to field. We found the rest of the foresters more than ten miles away, carrying out a gristly slaughter, scything down trees with their butchers blades. They were piling the corpses onto wagons and even desecrating the roots by putting them to torch. Tempting as sniping at them from the woods as, the axe-wielding workers alone out numbered us by a terrifying amount and they had dozens of guards among them as well. We’d have run out of arrows before we ran out of targets, so instead we were forced to skulk about like stinking kobolds and spied from the shadows. We came close enough to them that I could make out the pox marks on one humans hairy face and smell the boozy stink of their labored breathing.

In the end, we didn’t learn much for it. Only that half the humans committing this atrocity were from Amiyaayiti (hearing that name emerge from their mouths was like having them spit poison at me) and the rest seemed to come from a city near by, though we never learned it’s name. The city guards were certainly better equipped. They swaggered about in plate and mail as if invincible. I’d have liked to put an arrow through the eye of one of their helmets just to prove them wrong.

Khannesh and I spoke little on the way back, beyond sharing expressions of surprise that the humans had left the forest untouched for so long. There was only half a mile of dead and ruined landscape – every inch of it was terrible to behold, but the forest was still mostly intact. There must be some recent troubles that are driving them to harvest the lumber only now, when their usual practice from centuries of observation has been to consume the forests like termites and leave nothing behind. Khannesh suspects a regime change, I’m hoping urgently that it is war.

By the time we returned, the last human had been dispatched and Avetho had begun to grow a shelter for us, though it’s little more than a sapling now. It was my suggestion that she do so and it took some time to convince everyone but Ocade that it was necessary. I hate the thought of hiding our faces from the sky, but it’s too dangerous to sleep out in the open. The landscape is flat and the forest cold and uninviting. Flintess and Feana don’t seem to notice, nor does Ocade, but I can see the looks of disquiet in everyone else’s eyes. This was not what we hoped to find.

We all want to talk about it, but everyone was too tired too tired from the journey to talk about it tonight. I’d be bedding down myself if Fre would ever shut up. He’s supposed to be on guard duty with Feana, but I can hear him flirting with her no matter where I go. If he tries anything with that poor little creature, I swear I’ll be making arrows from his bones.

2rd of Granite, 291
I spent most of my day helping Flintess (druid’s crazy wisdom, of all the people to put in charge of such a task, you pick the girl who cannot match a mayfly in attention spans?) take stock of the supplies the humans had on their wagon, getting them in order before we pull the monstrosity apart. A few barrels of alcohol, seed bags for assorted crops, and over two hundred freshly killed feather trees. My hands are still coated in sap. At least Avetho says there is still life enough to them to merge them into the shelter and help it grow fast. Not fast enough for me though, this place already looks like a graveyard.

We saw a herd of pegasus taking wing in the distance earlier today, but they did not respond to our calls. Avetho says it is because the Force is as dead in the animals as it is the plants around us. Fre seems to feel that means they are fair game to hunt and butcher for their bones and hides. Idiot. What beasts will dwell in the forests when we reclaim them if we’ve slaughtered them all to make arrows and hats?

3rd of Slate, 291
It's finished! Admittedly, it's more of a stump than a tree, but it'll serve. Avetho did a fine job, even shaping the walls into shallow bowls for us to rest in. Khannesh and I risked going close to the human work camps to gather up pine needles for the beds. We didn't get close enough to see the human's this time, which is probably for the best. It seems a silly thing to say, but I'm growing restless. It's been two hundred years since Amiyaayiti fell, almost one hundred since Nelo started talking war. Even if we've barely been here a month, my patience is growing thin.

Khannesh is keeping me in line though, blast him. Every time I feel like staking out to that camp and putting an arrow to one of those creatures, he's there with a word or a mangled song. I should hate him for manipulating me so easy, but I can't. He's the only one around here I seem to be able to talk to anymore. Maybe it is because he's older than the rest. Why did we have to send children and outcastes and idiots to start a war?

And speaking of the latter, Fre is at it again...

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3rd of Slate, 291
“We need them.”

“Like we need a visit from a dragon!”

Fre sighed and shook his head, pulling the hat from it to run his hand through his hair. Since their arrival a month ago, he’d been forbidden to hunt. Perhaps with good reason, as the only creatures they’d seen were unicorns and pegasus, sacred incarnations of the Force and perhaps the only sign that it might exist in some form “This isn’t a retreat, Vadonea. Avetho was strained enough as it is just getting that shelter of yours put up. She can’t bend nature to make the plants grow whenever we want. I can.”

“By churning up the earth and jamming seeds into it, yes,” the elf matron said, her tone as accusing as if he were talking of murdering someone.

Fre shrugged. “Would you rather starve?”

“I have to side with Vadonea here Fre,” Khannesh interjected, the leather-clad glade runner standing, as he always seemed to be lately, at Vadonea’s side.

Fre felt a slight pang of jealousy, though he buried it deep. Not so much that he had designs on the matron huntress, but for one hundred years of trying to win her good graces and failing, Khannesh had done it in less than one. If Fre were a more naive man, he’d call it unfair, particularly given what Khannesh had done in Dafoequa.

“This is supposed to be a war camp, not a community,” the glade runner went on evenly and gestured with the neck of his mandolin to Vadonea. “She and I have been to war with humans in the past, as in fighting them on their own lands. We know how easily their farms and live stock can be decimated. Too much reliance on field-grown crops might leave us weakened if someone were to destroy the crops.”

“And so we’re supposed to just harvest food off the forest floor?” Fre asked, feeling a tick of annoyance but letting it pass through him. “What happens when we’ve plucked all the plants near by? How much further out do we want to send Vadonea and Avetho? How much danger do we want to expose them to?"

“Danger from what, Fre?” Vadonea snorted. “No one knows we’re here and we haven’t seen a single predatory creature since arriving. What is going to attack us? A herd of unicorns?”

“Assassins, maybe?” Fre said and, despite himself, looked straight at Khannesh as he spoke. He saw, feeling a touch of bitter satisfaction, the glade runners face fall. Yet, it was Vadonea who responded to the barb.

“Oh you little-“

STOP!” Flintess squeaked suddenly, surprising them all into silence with the sheer volume of her outburst. Sitting on the ground at Feana’s side, the two had been playing a game of Skip Stones and listening in silence as the argument progressed, as they had done for nearly every argument since their party had fled the south. Suddenly though, the dark haired elf maid was rising up to her unimposing height and glaring them all. “All three of you, stop! It’s annoying and it’s boring and it’s stupid!”

“Tess...” Fre tried to sooth, but she had none of it.

“Quiet, I’m talking now! Look,” she paused a moment, turning up a face that was doubtless intended to be stern, yet was more pouting and angry. After giving them all a once over, she settled on Vadonea and Khannesh. “Fre is right, okay? It makes more sense to have some place where we can just grow all the food. We’re supposed to feed an army, eventually! We’re supposed to be an army! You’re great at finding plants Vadonea, but you can’t feed that many people just picking over bushes and like Fre said, Avetho can’t just grow the stuff.”

Vadonea, silenced as much by the source of the argument than the argument itself, shook her head to clear it and glared down at the younger elf. “Child, you will not take that tone wi-”

“I’m two hundred years old, Vadonea,” Flintess cut her off and planted her feet sternly, hands upon her hips. “I am not a child and you’re not right just because you’re older! You’re being stupid about this! We can protect the food,” she waved at herself and Feana, who, put on the spot suddenly, stood up in support of her friend. Flintess’ challenge went on. “And if you’re so worried about the forest, why keep ripping up the forest and hurting it when Fre can just make all the food come from one place anyway?”

“You have no idea what you are talking about,” Vadonea said, though it seemed to Fre her conviction was somewhat shaken on that fact. “

“Vadonea,” Khannesh interrupted. “Leave it.”

“But she-“

“Let it go, Vadonea,” Khannesh said softly, laying a gentle hand on her arm. His body eased closer, till he was all but whispering in her ear. “Let it go. I won’t say I agree with them, but they’re not entirely wrong and it’s not worth fighting over.”

“I’ll keep the plots small, if it’s any consolation,” Fre offered, but only got a withering glare from Vadonea in response. She turned on her heel and almost stomped away, seeking solace in the woods. Khannesh lingered.

“She’ll be upset for a few days, but I think she’ll get over it. I’d keep your distance if I were you though, Fre.”

“You really think she’d assault me?” Fre asked, throwing a worried look to Vadonea’s retreating back.

Khannesh stared, watching the direction of his eyes, and smiled thinly. “No, but I might. I don’t like to see her upset and you seem to bring out all the worst instincts in her. You just keep your distance and play in your dirt and we’ll all be happy.”

It would have been a shame to spoil such an exit line, so Fre held his tongue in check as Khannesh turned and ambled unhurriedly after Vadonea, thoughtfully strumming his mandolin. When they had left, Fre turned to Flintass and smiled, shaking his head in disbelief. “Well, I’m impressed. I’ve never seen anyone turn Vadonea out that way.”

“I’m not a kid and I’m not stupid, you know,” Flintess said, trying still to be gruff but melting under the warmth of his grin into a puddle of blushes and barely restrained giggles.

“No,” Fre said, respectful and honest as he leaned forward and bowed. “You most certainly are not.”

“I-I think you’re right too, Fre,” Feana added quietly, as if afraid of imposing her presence and yet afraid of being forgotten. Fre made certain to bow to her as well, making her blush in a pleased fashion behind the curtain of hair.

“Well, I’m glad at least that two people in this camp take me seriously. Now come, it’s too late to get started on the fields, why don’t we all play Skip Stones together?”

Flintess gave him a doubtful look. Older elves rarely played. "Do you even know how?"

"Mhm. Someone showed me once," Fre said and smiled, sad and gentle, at the little circle of rocks on the ground. "A long time ago."

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Druid’s crazy wisdom indeed. Somehow FLINTESS, of all people, wound up as the expedition leader. Still trying to wrap my head around that one, but she’s going to have to ‘grow’ into the role as things progress.

Couldn’t play much today or at all yesterday, thanks to other obligations, so not much as happened yet. I opted to make up for that by being extra wordy, apparently. Also, please forgive the pretentiousness of dubbing it 'Chapter One.'

Edit: Somehow a line got cut from the bottom when I copy/pasted from word. Fixed.
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Re: The Autumn War (Community Forest): CHARACTERS NEEDED!
« Reply #28 on: June 08, 2009, 11:55:08 pm »

Is there still room? if yess could I have an elf, a true pacifist.

Arc
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Animal trainer/trapper
he cries when blades of grass are stepped on. we must presurve the forest, it is our own use of violence that has caused this plight!

great work, the elves seem to get the short end of the stick in DF because a)they are openly crazy and b) they are the weakest of the good civs. Oh almost forgot! they anger the dwarven mind with their caravan of 50 bins of cloth and nothing else! >:(

so it will be a fun read! ;D

Edit:well guess any more elves will be from emigration wave
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« Reply #29 on: June 09, 2009, 12:13:46 am »

Yeah, nothing yet Bloo, but I'm more than happy to start a queue for when we get emigrants. Arc probably won't be a very happy character, seeing as how it's a war camp and all, but then again if he snaps and goes inane later on, we'll know why. =D
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