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Re: Lanternwebs (Now with more nobles)
« Reply #135 on: February 27, 2009, 05:49:47 pm »

Pure brilliance. Why isn't this in the Hall of Legends already?
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« Reply #136 on: February 27, 2009, 06:11:42 pm »

For Lanternwebs!
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« Reply #137 on: February 27, 2009, 08:05:21 pm »

Good.  No.  GREAT.
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Re: Lanternwebs (Now with more nobles)
« Reply #138 on: March 02, 2009, 07:17:35 am »

Great story Rysith. Finally got around to reading it all.

If there is any young and slightly psycopathic axedwarf available and it's not too late, I would like to join in. Name Kheskeim. Feel free to do anything you want with him.
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« Reply #139 on: March 02, 2009, 07:58:30 pm »

Grimes gripped his axe handle nervously. The adrenaline of the first clash no longer surged through his veins, replaced with cold anticipation of the battle to come. To the west, he could see storm clouds the color of gabbro advancing, their gray fringes already starting to hide the sun. To the east, he knew that two squads of orcs lingered, their savagery barely contained by the cunning of their commanders. Waiting, he knew, to force the dwarves to come to them and fight them far from the gates, without the benefit of their fortifications and bridge.

The sweat under his armor, once welcome in the summer heat, grew clammy as the clouds rolled in. He could see the squad commanders standing in a huddle, their heads bowed together in urgent discussion. The Tooninator would be suggesting a frontal rush, he knew, and Workerdrone would be agreeing wholeheartedly. Flint would be urging caution and tactics, supported by Tirist. He sat down to watch a colony of ants pick over an orc head, the mouth hanging open in an eternal scream of rage as the ants swarmed over the it, the empty eye sockets seeming to glare at the living world with hatred. He poked the head with his axe, rolling it away from him as the ants scattered.  He hoped that the commanders would come to a decision soon, anything would be better than waiting.

He had been late to the last battle, stationed under Workerdrone at the gates, and hadn't charged until the battle had already been joined. It was probably for the better, he thought, as he reflected on the sight of the champions charging the orcish archers, their shields turning away dozens of otherwise-lethal arrows. His own shield was still heavy on his arm, and a charge against archers required that the soldier trust absolutely in his strength, speed, and skill. One day he would be there, he knew, but today was not that day. His shield was still heavy on his arm, he still struggled to deflect even all of the strikes against him during sparring practice.

Flint's call to assemble cut through his thoughts like the axe that had severed the head, and Grimes hurried over to the commander's circle with the rest of the army.

"The attack will be in two forks." Flint was saying. "I will lead my and Workerdrone's squads to the north, facing the lancers. The Tooninator will lead his and Tirist's squads to engage the archers in the east. It is crucial that we strike at the same time, so that neither squad has a chance to flee. We must kill both leaders if we want to ensure the safety of the dwarven caravan this autumn."

The squads were quickly in position, as close as they dared to the waiting squads of orcs. The humidity was getting worse, and Grimes knew that rain was coming soon. The inside of his armor was uncomfortably slick with moisture, something that the muggy air did nothing to improve. Flint raised his axe and ordered the squads forward, and Grimes charged behind him, raising his axe high and shouting a war cry as they rushed towards the orcish lancers.

The lancers responded in kind, rushing forward to engage the charging dwarves. Grimes saw an orc steering her beak dog towards him and slowed, raising his shield to protect himself against the mounted charge. As he expected, the spear landed heavily on his shield, the tip blunting and sliding off the fine dwarven steel of his shield. He shifted it slightly, hearing the beak dog's claws skitter ineffectively off it as he drove forward with the shield, feeling the beak dog unbalance and fall. His axe fell in a swift downward stroke, parting skin and muscle to lay open a grievous wound in the beak dog's side as the beat struggled to get back on its feet. The beast shrieked in pain and fell to the ground as Grimes turned his attention to the orc.

Grimes and the orc circled the dying beak dog, the orc holding her spear in front as she probed for an opening past Grime's shield and Grimes unwilling to open himself to the orc's longer weapon by attacking. Moments dragged on, each step by one matched by the other. The point of the black iron spear waving idly at its reflection in the shield, the blade of the gray steel axe held low and steady, the top of its blade nearly touching the ground.

The beak dog, in a final, reckless act of courage, suddenly lunged at Grimes. His shield dropped quickly to block the body, and the orc lunged, the blunted point striking Grimes in the helmet and deflecting, but leaving him dizzy with a ringing in his ears. He frantically swung with his axe, the low arc nicking the orc's leg as she withdrew, and Grimes stepped back to give himself space while his head cleared. The two resumed their circling as the beak dog coughed its final blood and collapsed on the warm stone of the mountainside.

"She's overeager." thought Grimes. "She'll strike if I give her an opening." He thought about the execution: He'd lower the shield as the orc charged, taking the spear blow on his armor and getting a clean shot into the orc's unarmored head. The steel plate would protect him. He just had to lower the shield. Give up a bit of his defense to end the battle. Trust in his armor, in his axe. "It won't get through, the tip is already blunt." he thought to himself. "I've got the skills to end this now." Still he circled. "The strike won't hurt any worse than the one I just took. It'll give me a good strike." Another step to the left, matched immediately by the orc across from him. "'Chop! Thunk!'. No more orc! Only a minor bruise!". A pause, then a step to the right. The orc matched his movements. "Maybe I'll even swing in early. Hit her before she even gets the strike in." A step forward, a step back. "Anything is better than waiting."

Finally convinced, Grimes lowered his shield, feinting exhaustion. As expected, the orc lunged for his heart, and he quickly brought his axe up to swing. He felt the tip of the spear slam into his breastplate, and felt himself be pushed backwards by the force, but he pivoted to let the spear slide past him, bringing his left arm up to trap the black shaft in the plates of his elbow as his axe came around, striking the orc in the jaw. The steel sliced easily through skin and bone, leaving the orc's jaw dangling from her throat. With a tug on the spear, he unbalanced the orc and sent her sprawling to the ground. A step to the right, another swing with his axe, and the orc lay dead at his feet, her hand still gripping the spear that he had trapped.

Grimes stood, shaking with released tension. He cautiously felt his armor where he had been struck, his fingers finding the thin scars on the metal where the spear had twice been deflected. He was amazed that his plan had worked, that he was not lying on the ground hoping for rescue before the pain seized him. That he had killed an orc, not in the frenzy of combat but with tactics and foresight. Around him, the battle was dispersing, the orcs fleeing from the battlefield as the slain littered the ground, their blood coloring the rocks a dark and sticky crimson.

Dwarves were gathering again, slapping each other on the back as they recounted kills and celebrated their victory. Flint was ordering them to guard positions to ensure that no thieving kobolds could make off with orcish equipment before the civilians could gather it inside the fortress. He could see Shoruke standing with some of the champions of the Elder Banners, proudly displaying the blood on her war-pick. He wandered over to the rest of Workerdrone's squad, all busy congratulating on surviving another battle, just as Workerdrone was announcing that when they got off-duty, they'd have to head to the dining room for a round of drinks and a round of tales. He stood mutely among them as the fear and adrenaline drained from his body, leaving his arms and legs feeling like they were made of lead. But in their place, they left a strange new feeling, the feeling of confidence. Not the confidence of the champions, standing tall like a mighty oak on a mountaintop, able to face anything without flinching. A tiny seed, that might grow to such heights given nourishment. The very beginnings of what he could not learn in a lifetime of sparring. He barely jumped at all when the first stroke of lightning split the sky, warm summer rain pouring down to wash the sweat and blood of the battle away.

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Xanares: I'm sure we've got someone that will suit you, I'll post it as soon as I can. It's too late for this battle, but there will always be more (or I have to go fix the orcs). It's certainly not too late for Lanternwebs to accept more people.

Gumball: I don't really feel comfortable asking for legendary status for Lanternwebs (legends being decided by the people, not the author), though I noticed that Flint already mentioned it for possible inclusion there.

Final battle statistics (no kill counts, sorry):
39 out of 48 orcs killed, with 34 beak dog kills. Two losses, both champions. 148 assorted non-corpse body parts on the field after the battle.

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No movie of the second part, unfortunately. It was two simultaneous battles across 8 or so z-levels, and the movie that I took resisted all of my attempts to turn it into something watchable.
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Re: Lanternwebs (Now with more nobles)
« Reply #140 on: March 02, 2009, 08:12:13 pm »

Once again, Lanternwebs repels yet another Greenskin assault. Its only a matter of time I say, until they all lay dead at our steel clad feet!

Alas, for every Dwarf killed, brings pain to our hearts. Yet we shall not falter! For every one of us killed in any battle, a dozen orcs will fall, and another Dwarf will take up the shield wall to replace him aswell!

To arms again I say! We have some heads to mount on pikes, and some orcish blood to spill!

Blood for the Blood God!
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Re: Lanternwebs (Now with more nobles)
« Reply #141 on: March 02, 2009, 08:36:06 pm »

Tell me when I return home!
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Re: Lanternwebs (Now with more nobles)
« Reply #142 on: March 03, 2009, 06:47:08 am »

No worries there Rysith. Everything in its own time.

Fix the orcs? Aren't they supposed to assault all the time? Shame they only bring beak dogs. I take it you haven't seen them bringing anything else? (I haven't). Ok sorry for the off topic here.

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« Reply #143 on: March 03, 2009, 01:38:52 pm »

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I don't really feel comfortable asking for legendary status for Lanternwebs (legends being decided by the people, not the author), though I noticed that Flint already mentioned it for possible inclusion there.

I know; it was kind of a rhetorical question :P I just said it to show my appreciation for the story :)
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« Reply #144 on: March 03, 2009, 04:31:14 pm »

A solemn circle of dwarves stood at attention around the dolomite coffin. The only source of light came from a single candle set into the lid of the coffin, its weak flame glimmering off the polished steel platemail that each dwarf wore. Though the chamber was deep underground, the air was warm and dry, proof of the magma which flowed around the chamber, held back only by the masterful engineering of the dwarves. Below their feet magnetite shone dully, the gray stone softening and spreading the light until it did more to conceal than it did to reveal.

Kib Amkolrigòth the Fields of Scalding stepped forward and carefully lifted the candle, her steel-gloved hand pressing into the soft wax and sending a stream of liquid down the side to harden on her armored fingers.

"Today we gather to remember Kol Desorònul." Kib said, her quiet voice echoing through the small chamber. "Slain in battle defending Lanternwebs from those who would destroy it. Before his death, he had sent ten of our foes to their deaths, and earned the title of  the Lost Bane. His bravery in combat no doubt saved dozens of dwarven lives. He was to all of us a companion in arms, to most of us a friend, to some of us a squadmate, and to one of us a lover." She choked slightly at the last words, but continued.

"He will be missed by each of us, and remembered with honor by all of us. His deeds will be sung of in every dwarven hall and engraved into the everlasting rock, that they will be known long after each of us has been called back to the earth. It will be forever recorded that he died a glorious death on the field of battle, his axe held strongly, his shield held high. It will be forever recorded that he fought to the end, neither attempting to flee nor surrendering in cowardice. It will be forever recorded that he has earned the servitude of those he has slain in the Eternal Halls, and he will no doubt be well-served there."

"He will continue to affect our halls as well. His spirit lives on in his armor and his axe, and that spirit will guide more dwarves along the path to victory, valor, and glory on the field of battle. Know now, you who have been chosen to wear his armor and wield his axe, the task that lies before you. Honor his deeds by continuing them where he can not."

"With these words, we send Kol Desorònul the Lost Bane from our tomb in Lanternwebs to the Eternal Halls in the heart of the mountains. May he be forever remembered in both."

Kib lifted the candle to her mouth, the flickering flames casting wild shadows around the room as it moved until she extinguished it with a quick puff of air. Darkness and silence fell on the room as the dwarves each knelt briefly before the coffin and filed out.



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Xanares:
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Basically a good, hardworking axedwarf, but with a tendency to keep to himself and sometimes let his fantasies go a bit farther than they should. "Mildly psychopathic" is a strangely relative term, I strongly suspect that all of the dwarves in the military (and probably most of the dwarves in DF in general) would by psychopathic by real-life standards, especially given the amount that I'm basing my dwarves off Norse epics.

And yes, the orcs should be assaulting all the time. That's why I have to go fix them if they aren't.
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Re: Lanternwebs (Now with more nobles)
« Reply #145 on: March 03, 2009, 05:14:10 pm »

What's the latest map at DFMA?
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« Reply #146 on: March 04, 2009, 10:04:38 am »

Excellent! Funnily he sounds a lot like me hehe.
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« Reply #147 on: March 04, 2009, 05:36:47 pm »

"Gather around, children." Zon Kidetrith said, sitting at the base of the platinum statue in the statue garden. "Gather around, and I shall tell you a tale of legendary heroes and fearsome beasts."

"Once upon a time, long before the Braided Lenses existed, there was a great dwarven king. This king, Rimtar Dalubur, was the wealthiest king in all the world. His fortress overflowed with gold and silver, his army had a thousand champions-at-arms, and his subjects were all as ecstatic as could be. There was only one problem that King Dalubur could see with his kingdom: There were not enough giant cave spider chitin items for his taste."

"King Daluber sent out a mandate throughout his kingdom: Construct me three giant cave spider chitin items! Now, as you know, giant cave spiders are not willing to part with their chitin willingly, and so a contest was set among the thousand champions, to determine who would go forth to slay the three giant cave spiders. For twenty days they sparred, until at last Tarmid Terstumtalin the Conflagration of Scribes, a swordsdwarf of unmatched skill, emerged victorious. 'I shall slay three of these giant spiders!' He said as he left the fortress gates. 'And return with their corpses within the month!'"

"Tarmid traveled for many weeks, seeking the caves that he knew the spiders lived in. He found many, and slew giants, trolls, and even an ettin in his search, but it was not until the third week that he at last found a cave covered in the webbing of the giant cave spider. He entered with caution, his sword drawn, and began the long descent into the darkness of the cave. It was only when he saw the light behind him blocked out and felt the stickiness of the spider's web upon his back that he realized his mistake. His arms were stuck helplessly in the web, and the spider, who had snuck up behind him, was able to quickly pounce on him and devour him."

The gathered children gasped in horror as Zon lunged forward, mimicking the spider's actions as it ended Tarmid's life.

"At the end of the month, King Dalubur grew impatient. He ordered his champions to spar again and send another warrior. Again, they fought for twenty days before selecting Astesh Tobuslibash the Hand of Crushing, a hammerdwarf who's skill was second only to Tarmid's, as their new seeker. Again, he set out boldly from the fortress, and again he promised that he would return with the corpses within the month."

"Astesh traveled far and wide, seeking chasms in the earth just like the one in the mountains here, where he knew giant cave spiders lurked. After three weeks of travel, having slain hundreds of troglodytes, batmen, and giant cave swallows in his search, he at last found a chasm filled with the giant webs he sought. Remembering that giant cave spiders could lurk hidden from view, he carefully caught a groundhog and released it onto the web before venturing in himself. As he suspected, an enormous spider, larger even than the one that had slain Tarmid, scurried out from its hiding place and sunk its massive teeth into the groundhog, killing it instantly."

"Astesh faced the giant spider, now revealed to him. He swung at the beast's body, crushing one of its legs with a powerful hammerstroke, and slammed into it with his shield. The spider clacked its enormous fangs at him, scuttling backwards and lunging in to bite, tearing Astesh's shield away from his arm. Unafraid, Ashtesh swung again with his hammer, putting out one of the foul creature's eyes. But the spider could not feel pain, and bit again, the mighty jaw muscles driving its venom-slick mandibles through Astesh's chestplate, killing him."

"Once again, King Dalubur grew impatient at his champion's failure to return. Not only was there no giant cave spider chitin to be had, the people were beginning to grow unhappy as news of the deaths of Astesh and Tarmid began to filter back. For the third time, he ordered his thousand champions (now missing two of their number) to find the best of them for a third expedition to slay giant spiders. The champions fought for a full month this time, finally selecting Innok Ulingsog the Intimidating Beard. Innok was unequaled with an axe, and the best of the champions that remained."

"Unlike Astesh and Tarmid, Innok began his quest by consulting the dungeon master about the weaknesses of the giant spiders, and where he might find them. After spending a week in deep study, he left the fortress without a word. He headed for the nearest human settlement, where he proclaimed that he was on a noble quest and would give gold and glory to any who followed him. With these words, he gathered a host of companions, each of them armed with iron weapons and armor of all sorts. Innok lead his band to a nearby cave, where he ordered his companions inside. As he had expected, a giant spider soon struck, but Innok was able to strike at it as it fought his men. When he at last severed its head and ended its life, it had slain half a dozen of his followers, but Innok pressed onwards, deeper into the cave."

"Farther into the cave, they again encountered a spider, and were again able to surround it and slay it, though with even heavier losses. Innok himself was gravely injured in the battle, and the humans refused to follow him any deeper. Unhappy that he could not continue to find a third spider, but glad that he had at least partially succeeded, Innok began hauling the two corpses back towards King Dalubur's fortress."

"When he at least arrived at the gate, his wounds and the weight that he had been carrying at last overwhelmed him, and he collapsed even as the peasants were rushing out to greet him. He was immediately taken inside to the infirmary and given water, while the butchers and leatherworkers began to treat the spiders that he had returned to make use of the chitin."

"But it was too late. King Dalubur was furious that his mandate had not been fulfilled, and ordered thirty hammerstrokes for Ethad, the master leatherworker of the fortress, for failing to make him his giant cave spider chitin items. The protests that the material had not been available, and that the punishment would surely kill the leatherworker fell on deaf ears. The hammerer (who was not nearly so kind as Likot is) went to his work quickly, and Innok died in his bed upon hearing of Ethad's death."

"The loss of their third champion, coupled with the King's injustice, was too much for the army of nearly a thousand champions. One by one they tore lose from reality, some seeking to end their own lives as quickly as they could, while others simply went mad, running around and babbling as they threw their armor and clothing around. The most fearsome ones, however, were the ones who went berserk, trying to kill as many other dwarves as they could before being slain by the fortress guard. Each new victim drew more into the madness until the fortress halls, once gleaming with gold and silver, instead ran red with rivers of dwarf blood. The King himself could not endure watching his fortress tear itself apart and hurled himself into the magma pipe, and the magnificent fortress crumbled to its end."

"And so, children, always remember: Never ask for giant cave spider silk, or chitin. To get it, hundreds of brave dwarves may die. And if you ever become mayor, never mandate that those items be constructed, or the fortress you lead will come crashing down around you."

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Zon begins her brainwashing campaign! That was just a brief bit of filler, since the fortress is still in late summer (I haven't had much time to play recently).

As promised, a map of Lanternwebs is now available on the DFMA here. I've labeled the non-obvious points of interest that I've mentioned in the story, let me know if there is anything else you'd like me to point out.
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Re: Lanternwebs (Now with more nobles)
« Reply #148 on: March 04, 2009, 05:40:03 pm »

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« Reply #149 on: March 05, 2009, 03:15:44 am »

Ironicly, this is the kind of brainwashing you WANT.
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