After several nights' worth of reading, concluding with this up-till-5:25AM final session, I must say Sean, my hat is off to you. You've blended comedy with action and suspense excellently. Well done to you and everyone else for sticking with it these past couple of years.
My highlights, that I can remember in my somewhat illness-scrambled state: Dwarf's burial, beautiful. This:
You announce yourself to those in the building: "Behold, I am now Red, the Illusionist!" Among hushed chuckles you hear in response a few remarks about clothing, and Frelock's groaning for help.
Coming right after JK's building his living armour.... thing and Gantolandon blowing the roof of the travern onto themselves had me in hysterics. Pacing has been great too (in your comic drawings as well). I do agree with your decision to hasten the events in this world unfolding.
The only thing on the internet that had me reading so attentively recently was Yahtzee's
"ARTICULATE JIM: A SEARCH FOR SOMETHING" (
linky for those who don't want to search). So excellent, well-done, top-drawer, хорошо, wonderful all round.
Couple questions - have you explored the 'Multiworlds' setting elsewhere? In prose or in RTD? I thought I saw a hint of a mention a few tens of pages back - 50 posts per page bring the page count to a 'meagre' 121 pages
- but I could be wrong. Also, where did the RTD rules originate? Top search result credits your good self, if so,
I'm even more impressed. They are beautiful in their simplicity. If Apple did RPG rulesets, they'd... probably not let you use them except in pre-approved settings... but they would be beatiful rules, like these.
Anyway, bed time. I have (man) flu and have to be up in a few hours to do Christmassy stuff. Happy holidays to everyone.
(Not-quite-an-edit: I didn't mean to be quite so fawning. Ah what the heck, you deserve praise)