Sorry I took so damn long to get with the program. I've had a really hectic week and work's been killing me by the time I get home. And Aqizzar cancels job: forum game: new DF. So here we go.
The waters were calm. The bay was always calm. The waters were quiet. The bay was always quiet. The waters were cloudy. The bay was always clear. The Sounder tried to look through the thick water, as he always had while wandering the edge of the Herd. But he had to stop and remain still, to let his tendrils hang and hear the best they could.
The Sounder had no name beyond recognition. If he had a concept of naming, he would know only the Old One had a name. The Old One had seen the Herd thrive and grow. The Old One had made the Sounder, and many more like him, stay away from the Herd, and made others bring food. The Sounders heard the Predators, and drove the Herd and Predators apart. All had food, the spawns produced many more young, and the Old One was happy.
But the waters were cloudy. The bay was cloudy. The others searching the reefs found less to eat, only more clouds. There were many more to feed, and less food to do it. So thin was gathering in the reef, that some were moving farther onto dry land, where strange but eadible plants and insects lived.
And lack of food was not all the clouds signaled. They held dangers – little fish that ate the spawn, vicious eels that ate the young, mighty crawlers that ate the gatherers, and the huge terrible Fish that ate anyone they could catch. And with the Herd growing larger, there were always more to be lost.
For a brief instant, the Sounder thought these two problems might meet each other, but his tendrils drew him back to the bay. Somewhere beyond the clouds moved something large. And in an instant, the Sounder kicked off. The Fish were upon him.
As fast as he was, as the Old One had chosen him, the Sounder could not outrun them for long. They lunged for his tail, and cut ribbons in his fins. They lunged for his feet, and tore off his toes. But a great mound of reef lay just ahead, and with the last desperate spasm, he burst into the open air and fell to hard ground. The Sounder quickly leapt up and danced from foot to foot to keep the pain away, watching the murky waters froth in rage.
And for another brief instant, the Sounder had a thought he had never had. He did not want to go back in the water.
[Behind The Scenes] The Kadesh have developed simplistic, herd-style division of labor, and the improved food-gathering has let them overpopulated their side of the bay. Their traditional gathering grounds are being depleted and their large numbers are attracting more predators. These will probably even each other out over time.
In response, they're starting to move out of the water more, probably up into streams and shoals, and the ones that are surviving predation are passing on better senses. My EvoPoints will be spent half and half between improving Amphibious and Vibration Sense. I'm assuming that such primitive division of labor is effective free, since without it they wouldn't be much of candidates for civilization, however far down the road.