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Author Topic: Nist Akath - The Complete Story  (Read 609849 times)

Silleh Boy

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Re: Nist Akath. Betrayal in the Tundra.
« Reply #870 on: February 01, 2008, 04:30:00 am »

Silly Likast, you should have thrown a chair at the captain in a fit of rage, you may even have made him flinch then.

I was considering just, how you could blame goblin's for the lack of immigrants, at least story wise. I wonder if that'd happen when the army arc arrives, dead immigrants being possible to stumble upon, killed by rival civilisations.

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Re: Nist Akath. Betrayal in the Tundra.
« Reply #871 on: February 01, 2008, 06:15:00 am »

Events on the 7th of Malachite.
"Ostri, I tire of these negotiations." said Captain Ironblood, clearly ready to wrap it up for the day.
"As do I, old friend." said Ostri, barely suppressing a yawn.

"In that case, we shall adjourn for today. I shall see you in the morning. I bid you a good night."

Ostri nodded sleepily as they exited the Mayors office. His female 'guards' followed him.
He turned to them, and said "Early to bed, early to rise, eh, ladies?"
He was grinning as he said this.

Their distaste evident, one of them said "Uh, we're not tired yet, sir. We might go for a bit of a walk."

"You can't play hard to get forever, but go enjoy your evening." he said, and turned to head down to his quarters.


The guards, Kozi and Issha, sighed in unison.
"He never quits." said Issha.
"He's old enough to be my father!" muttered Kozi, irritably.
"Indeed. But unless I'm mistaken, we have other matters to attend to."
"Ah, quite right, Issha. Do you have it on you?"
"Of course. Let us go to the meeting place we told of."

They moved down the halls, and soon found themselves in the Galleria.
They had a few moments to themselves, and gazed in awe at the faces of Dwarven heroes staring down at them.
"So many..." whispered Issha.

"Quite." said a female voice, behind them. They jumped, startled, and turned to see a robe clad figure, clearly dwarven.
Another, clearly more militaristic dwarf, closed the doors behind her.

"You have it?" said the dwarf, walking up to them, her companion at her side.

"We were expecting a man..." began Kozi.
"You can expect away. But I'm here, and you'll do business with me. Do you have it?"
"Yes... here!" said Issha, pulling a worn tome out of a knapsack.

"I shall inspect it." stated the dwarf, snatching it, and opening it.
"Yes... yes... this is it, alright."
The dwarf looked up at the two humans.
"Well then, it appears your part in this story is complete." she said.
"What? Where's our payment?!"
"Here." murmured the other dwarf, for the first time, its gender was indistinguishable from its voice.
It removed a hammer from its robes, and the humans felt their hands go to their swords.
"It's a doublecross!" shouted Issha.

Kozi roared as she slashed her scimitar through the dwarf before it could attack.
It staggered, and she kicked it against the wall, where it slumped, lifelessly.

Both guards turned to the weaponless dwarf.

"Now..." began Kozi.
"Not done." came a voice from behind her. She turned to see the slain dwarf rising to its feet. Its voice was like gravel, and had an unusual cold quality to it.

"How?" she muttered as it moved towards her.
"Look out!" shouted Issha, as it moved towards Kozi with unnatural speed, holding its hammer high.
The hammer smashed through Kozi's stomach, rending flesh and bone.

"KOZI!" shouted Issha, slashing at the mad dwarf with her two-handed sword, slicing through its right calf.
The dwarf hissed, as it fell to its knee, and brought up the hammer to meet with Issha's face, cracking her skull, and instantly knocking her unconscious.

The mad-dwarf halted a moment. "Where?" it asked the unarmed dwarf, who was still clutching the book.
"On the staircase." said the book-clutching dwarf.
"Yes, mistress." it said, forcing itself to its feet. It dragged the unconscious Issha to the staircase.

It brought the hammer down, ending in a horrific crunching sound.
"It is done." it said simply, wiping off its hammer. An image of dwarves speaking with each other shone on it, outlined in blood.
"How long, mistress?" it asked.
"A year. Maybe a bit longer. It's never specific."
"Yes. It has been good to show my true strength for a change, Mistress."
"Indeed. We should depart. Recommence blending in with the other dwarves."
"Very well, Mistress. What of the bodies?"
"Leave them. Ironblood can sort out that mess."
Very well, Mistress."

They left quietly through the main door, and slipped into the shadows of the fortress halls, parting nearly immediately to avoid suspicion.

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Re: Nist Akath. Betrayal in the Tundra.
« Reply #872 on: February 01, 2008, 06:27:00 am »

Events of the 8th of Malachite
"There are too many dead bodies in the Galleria!" stated Captain Ironblood.
"There are two, sir." noted BurnedToast.
"One is too many!" shouted the Captain, "Do we know what happened?"
"They were killed." said BurnedToast.
"That's not what I mean, BurnedToast!"
"I know sir. All we know at this moment is that they're dead and Archibess found them."
"The Hat Maker?"
"Milliner sir, yes. She was taking a shortcut to take a walk around the inside of the fort. Nasty surprise, I should think."
"I should think so. Bomrek is investigating?"
"Yes, sir."
"Does Ostri know?" asked the Captain, worried.
"Yes, sir."
"He's angry, isn't he?"
"Yes, sir. I'm sorry sir."
"Why are you sorry? You didn't do it, did you?" asked the Captain, exasperated.
"Indeed, sir."
"You didn't, did you?"
"Uh... not to my knowledge, sir." replied BurnedToast.
"Well, that's at least you down. I suppose I can trust my closest friends to have had nothing to do with this." starting to walk to his office.
"I should hope so, sir." said BurnedToast, following.
"That leaves something like sixty possible murderers, BurnedToast."
"It may have been other humans, sir."
"Don't make it harder than it has to be, BurnedToast." said the Captain, sadly.
"Sorry, sir."

They reached the office door. A peek inside told the Captain that Ostri the Merchant prince was waiting for him in there. He didn't look pleased.
"The joys of being in charge." he muttered.
"Good luck sir." said BurnedToast.
"You're not coming with me, BurnedToast?"
"I'm sure I have other things I need to do, sir."
"Yes... abandoned at every turn."
The Captain sighed, and opened the door to his office.

There was a lot of yelling.

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Re: Nist Akath. Betrayal in the Tundra.
« Reply #873 on: February 01, 2008, 07:12:00 am »

Suspense!Drama!Betrayal! My Dwarf acting just like any other guard on the face of any world! My weapons yearn blood *blanks out and speaks with a loud monotone voice* BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD...*blinks* What?
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« Reply #874 on: February 01, 2008, 07:13:00 am »

Well, I doubt it was Nosey doing the killing. What with him having no skill in using hammers.
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« Reply #875 on: February 01, 2008, 08:01:00 am »

I can bet you 10 bucks what He IS doing...
Probably either in the following areas:
Standing around near a meeting area, or where you may have stationed him
In the Barracks
Somewhere in the fort, picking his nose.
...
I'm aiming for the third option :P
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« Reply #876 on: February 01, 2008, 09:09:00 am »

A murder mystery, WOO!

(Mini-Xotes pulls out a Holmesian cap and pipe, and lights it up.)

I shiver in anticipation!

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Re: Nist Akath. Betrayal in the Tundra.
« Reply #877 on: February 01, 2008, 10:50:00 am »

AMAZING!  :D
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Re: Nist Akath. Betrayal in the Tundra.
« Reply #878 on: February 01, 2008, 11:12:00 am »

Weren't there actually 3 dead bodies? They killed one of the dwarves.
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« Reply #879 on: February 01, 2008, 12:20:00 pm »

quote:
Originally posted by Squeegy:
<STRONG>Weren't there actually 3 dead bodies? They killed one of the dwarves.</STRONG>

From what I read, the "dead dwarf" stood up and killed the two humans.

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Re: Nist Akath. Betrayal in the Tundra.
« Reply #880 on: February 01, 2008, 12:54:00 pm »

I can say I am thoroughly in suspense...

But confused.

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Re: Nist Akath. Betrayal in the Tundra.
« Reply #881 on: February 01, 2008, 05:24:00 pm »

Holy crazy plot twist, Batman!
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Re: Nist Akath. Betrayal in the Tundra.
« Reply #882 on: February 01, 2008, 11:57:00 pm »

I...I'm speechless.
Ever since joining the forum, I've avoided this thread. Not for a disdain of the idea of it, but for it's sheer magnitude. It started when I joined and it's size quickly blossomed to the point where I wrote it off as unreadable.
After constant in-forum allusions to the work, I decided to give it a try. I sat down and read one page. And then another. And then thirty-four more. I sat down for four straight hours reading Nist Akath.
I don't know what to say. It is by far the greatest thing I have read on this forum and will likely retain that spot indefinitely. First the initial hardships, the seeming inevitable war with the elves, the goblin seiges and finally nobility. And, as I make my way through the final pages of it, concerned about the lack of (major) plotline following the death of Baron Dirty, you spring upon me this new development with doubtless epic storytelling to follow. Captain Mayday, you are Legendary.

I, uh, really liked your story.

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Re: Nist Akath. Betrayal in the Tundra.
« Reply #883 on: February 02, 2008, 12:04:00 am »

quote:
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From what I read, the "dead dwarf" stood up and killed the two humans.</STRONG>


Dwarf Companion is awesome, but not that awesome! He would leave a corpse. It's like cells multiplying.

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Re: Nist Akath. Betrayal in the Tundra.
« Reply #884 on: February 02, 2008, 05:40:00 am »

you know, I never quite realised how skeletal elk could actually be a threat


but they are fucking hardcore

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