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Author Topic: Migrursut: What Comes After The World Ends? [Epilogue] (A Community Fort)  (Read 389437 times)

Stravitch

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Re: Migrursut: Of Glass and Steel (A Community Fort)
« Reply #675 on: July 15, 2008, 07:53:50 am »

I loved Agamemnon.

Also, Algernon.

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« Reply #676 on: July 15, 2008, 08:00:21 am »

Agamemnon. Stravitch. Not quite surprised. Personally I prefer quick-witted Odysseus.

I wouldn't be unhappy to see a King Pryarm turn up on an opposing side though. Or a Champion called HeckleTour. Or Payrise Legshandler, who's run off with the wife of Menlays, a beauty of a dwarf named Hellends...

Of course this is all ancient history. What about more recent stuff? An acerbic dwarf with a damaged leg called "Dwelling", dedicated to the single job of health care, bringing people buckets of water and insulting them?

Apologies to Heavy Flak for mindless speculation
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« Reply #677 on: July 15, 2008, 08:12:46 am »



Anyway, I'm interested in Rolland Dayschain / The Goblin in Black. I really don't get that reference.

Pretty sure this is from Steven Kings Darktower series.

First book concerned the Gunsligner/Boltslinger chasing the "Man in black" a demonic sorcerer across the wastelands. Gunslinger's name when not referred to just us as the last Gunslinger was Roland Deschain.

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« Reply #678 on: July 15, 2008, 08:20:30 am »

There goes my hope that it was a Johnny Cash reference...
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« Reply #679 on: July 15, 2008, 08:44:03 am »

Of course this is all ancient history. What about more recent stuff? An acerbic dwarf with a damaged leg called "Dwelling", dedicated to the single job of health care, bringing people buckets of water and insulting them?

At the end of his profile: "He needs Vicodin to get through the working day."  Also has a +tower cap cane+ in his inventory.  By the way, dwarven for "house" is "zoden" which I know because of Zoden Zefon.
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« Reply #680 on: July 15, 2008, 09:50:05 am »

Kagus: It would actually be Hairy Potshurt, translated to a DF/Migrursut format.  "Yer a wizard now, 'Airy!"

it's pretty obvious I steal borrow things from pop culture for this story on occasion.  I gotta' admit, it's a way to keep things fresh for me.  I get burnt out pretty easy, writing is much harder work than I ever expected and a quick way to invigorate myself is to switch up formats or try to emulate someone's style or bastardize their characters.

There's been a lot of references throughout this story, and more to come, depending on my moods and whims. :)  Most you've picked up on, though there are a couple scenes that have gone unnoticed by all but a few, and at least one character that people don't seem to have noticed the reference.
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« Reply #681 on: July 15, 2008, 10:55:54 am »

I see that you're open to suggestion regarding Limul's profession, so I'll throw in my thoughts.

I seem to recall you once mentioning that Limul had the most friends in the fort.  Since then I've sort of wanted to see him grow up to become the mayor of Migrursut.  With Likot in the position right now, I can see you not wanting to do that for story purposes, though.  Still, he's a popular lad and I can imagine him winning an election some day.

Kuli of course would love to have Limul in the Metalworkers' Union.  With a name like that, he ought to be a metalcrafter churning out gold items to increase the fort's wealth.

Rereading this thread, however, I did come across a post where Kaelem Gaen specifically said he wanted Limul to take over for his father as a jeweler in the event that Istrath were to die.  Story-wise, it would make sense for Limul to become a jeweler.  Personally I disagree with that just because of how useless jewelers usually are.
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« Reply #682 on: July 15, 2008, 11:03:10 am »

He could make Golden Statues then encrust them with gems!

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« Reply #683 on: July 15, 2008, 11:35:27 am »

  Most you've picked up on, though there are a couple scenes that have gone unnoticed by all but a few, and at least one character that people don't seem to have noticed the reference.

Which character? Or would that be telling? (I always get annoyed if I've missed something...)

Possibly that early goblin with the stovepipe [hat]... or is it someone still in the fort?

As for Limul, with all his friends and him seeming to be a good person, part of me wants him to take up the spear... but another part of me thinks it would be much more fun if he took a darker path.
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« Reply #684 on: July 15, 2008, 01:43:01 pm »

I'm going to guess it's Bertrand because he seems like he should be a reference to something.  Damned if I know what, though.

I don't think anyone commented about that time Snake asked a subordinate if "love can bloom on the battlefield."  Because of that post, I spent a long time assuming that Snake was a reference to "Snake" from Metal Gear Solid.  I didn't know who Snake Plissken was until I did a Wikipedia search out of curiosity.
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« Reply #685 on: July 15, 2008, 01:56:50 pm »

Kuli: My version of Snake is a mashup of both Snake Pliskin, and Solid Snake (who Kojima has said was the basis of the character).  I've used a couple lines like that throughout.

On the topic of Limul: He's actually a bit of a personal favorite of mine too, and I've gone out of my way to nurture him.  There have been a couple instances where he's been miserable-borderline-suicidal (specifically because of Mayor Likot's death) and I've had to get some quick work giving him statues and stuff. 

I may make him a Jeweler yet, because of Kaelem's request, and because as useless as they are...we're kind of swimming in gems.  I'm trying to make a bunch of gem-set statues but between the quarry and caravans, we're up to our ears in loose stones, logs, and gems.  Who said you can't flourish in the wastes?

And since it didn't pan out, I'll let you in on where I thought the story was going to go.  With Likot dead, Limul was going to grow up and take the vacant Mayor's position.  But I misjudged how fast Dwarves age by two years.  He's still the most popular by far, though.  Whatever I may plan, there's nothing that will stop the game from throwing a wrench into the story, so if he gets elected mayor, he's elected Mayor.

Lastly, I'll just say one character name and it's up to you all to find out where I took him from.  He originally started as a one-off, but I totally misjudged just how well liked he'd be and I brought him back in a greater role.  From there, he evolved into something wholly unique unto himself, and I'm pretty happy with the result.  That Character?  Major ---- DayCovering.
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« Reply #686 on: July 15, 2008, 02:54:30 pm »

Surelock Homes.

I've been tooling around for other literary figures to bastardize, but I haven't found much...  I also couldn't decide if Merlin should be Murklint or just Merlint.  I went with the second one, just because it's a little easier to get.

Yes, Throwbow was supposed to be Frodo.  I couldn't think of anything else at the time.  Another one was Rubygust Hag-rid, but I wouldn't want to delve too deeply into any one particular series with just one post.

Dawn Keyholy...  I just could not figure out how to end his last name.  I figured "holy" was the closest sounding thing, so I went with that.  Manchair turned out nicely though.

Alexander and Achilles were right bastards they were...  Trying to fit that "A" in was driving me mad.  I eventually just dropped it for 'Legshandler and told Achilles to bugger off. 

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« Reply #687 on: July 15, 2008, 03:14:51 pm »

I knew I recognised that "Do you think that love can bloom on the battlefield?" line from somewhere. Though I'm sure that in its original context it was about characters on opposing sides...

And Don Quixote would be simple to work in to the story. Just call one of my rescued donkeys "OT".

I'm going to have to think about Major Daycovering... I've watched a ridiculous amount of crap and good stuff, I ought to be able to work out who he is - mainly by focussing on his original appearance, and the horseshoe tossing...
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« Reply #688 on: July 15, 2008, 07:28:45 pm »

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I'm going to have to think about Major Daycovering... I've watched a ridiculous amount of crap and good stuff, I ought to be able to work out who he is - mainly by focussing on his original appearance, and the horseshoe tossing...
Major --- deCoverley from "Catch 22".
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« Reply #689 on: July 15, 2008, 09:02:39 pm »

The events of the 10th of Limestone, 1064

The Council had been called to assembly once more, though due to the increased size it had been moved from Aryn's study to the Duke's.  Even though it wasn't their room, Aryn was the first to arrive, followed seconds later by a harried looking Glacies, carrying three separate ledgers with him, each near to bursting out of their leather straps.  Bertrand, at the insistence of The Duke, showed up next, though the old man took a seat in the corner, more concerned with the tome he brought then any sort of meeting that may be going on.  Crowpages the Tax Collector, Duke Bomrek and his Wife, and lastly Hammerer Wavepaddles all arrived, taking their seats at the long rectangular table. 

"What do we do about the Leopardknight Brat?" Aryn said, starting the meeting off with a familiar tone.
"He probably should be drafted," The Duke said with his usual pomp.  "The military's size is shrinking, we need a fresh body to plug the holes, what?"
"If you're serious about this quarry getting finished any time soon, perhaps he should apply for entry in the Miners Union.  One of the miners..." There was a shuffling of papers as Glacies opened one of the notebooks, looking through what was before him, "Cog something-or-other was found trampled to death, leaving the project two bodies less than it had started the year with.  I recommend he be shifted in that direction."

Aryn just scowled at the two who had spoken, fingers steepled in front of him.     He glanced towards Crowpages, who was twirling her golden beard, waxed to a neat point, around her finger.  "Regardless of the choice you decide, Sir, Young Master Leopardknight will be a tax-paying member of this community.  It shouldn't matter where he goes.  If he works, we may skim a tidy some.  If he doesn't work, he'll be living on the charity of his father."

A knock at the door silenced what Aryn was about to say, and he growled out a sharp, "Enter!", much to the chagrin of the rooms owner.  Rice stepped in, prospectors cap held politely over his chest.  Behind him came The Stranger, the gaunt figure that had walked out of the wastes, and the man Aryn had spent nearly two weeks trying to avoid. 

"Aryn, sir, it's been a long time, and Mr..." He paused, and the man stepped forward, doing his odd, low bow.
"Rolland of Monom Ros.  Long days, and pleasant nights, Sai Estetar."

"He knows my name.  How does he know my name?" Aryn asked, scowling at the others around the room.
"Well, I told him, sir," Rice confessed, frowning as Aryn's displeasure was turned on him. 
"I've come to offer my services, if it's Ka's will.  I've traveled many wheels to arrive here, and though my quarry evades, perhaps a respite will offer that foul wizard a false sense of security."

"Can you wield a pick?" Aryn asked as he leaned back.
"Or hammer and tong?" Chimed in Crowpages.
"Prey, you said, lad?" The Duke said, grinning.  "I've heard the talk of you, from the boys in the mess, say you're chasing some ... Blacked Goblin.  You know.  I Once tracked down a whole horde of-"

"Would you shut up!" Glacies and Aryn yelled at once.  The Duke sank into sullen silence as the two exchanged a glance.  Glacies added a hasty "sir" and made to look through his notes, while Aryn gestured with an impatient circling of his fingers for Rolland to speak.

"A Boltslinger is versed in many things, though none as well as the trade of Death.  The abominations that filled this desert would drive even the most stout of Dwarves to madness.  I'd offer my 'bow to thee, Sai, to try and help purge these horrors."

Hammerer Wavepaddles leaned forward, her face partially shrouded by the hood.  She rarely spoke, but when she did in her cold, emotionless voice, the others in the council were apt to listen.  "It seems to me that one who offers service requires little in pay.  You've asked for meals and drink, and a warm bed.  You spoke nothing of gold.  Does it not interest you."

"Only as a means to an end, Sai Hammerer.  I have no wont for riches, that is not my quest."
"Then it seems that the price of a Hired Crossbow is much cheaper than our home-grown defenses."

"Are you suggesting..." Aryn began.
"Ohh, oh, Miss Wavepaddles, very clever," Crowpages said with a grin, continuing to twist her beard.
"Rice," Glacies said, scribbling furiously on an already full page. "Go fetch Sparrow.  He's to take on an apprenticeship to Mr. Dayschain.  When telling him... neglect to inform him of what the pay is, would you kindly?" 

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OOC: dingdingding, Gantolandon's hit the nail on the head!
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