There are many great beasts in this world... many great challenges. One man, living in Nedorbehal, would dedicate his life to these challenges! He dreams often of being the one who would best the giant predators of the land.
Armed with his preferred tool of the trade, a whip, he sets off to become a great and renowned hunter!
Woge Blazegod
Proficient Lasher - Skilled Armor User - Skilled Wrestler
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-7th Felsite, 1054-
My journey to put myself with the ranks of the great hunters of the land begins here in my home town, Ramulthomod. I should start up some conversation and inquire as to the location of something that would pose a challenge for a hunter such as I.
A guard I struck up a conversation with has told me the surrounding area holds leopards... perhaps one of these great cats will pose a thrilling challenge! I set off immediately! Though before I leave, the guard also tells me the area may hold Jaguars. I will keep that in note, for they too would be a thrill to hunt.
-9th Felsite, 1054-
I have explored the region for a while. The great cats have remained elusive... but I have found a hippo! Surely felling such a great beast will earn me some praise!
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The journal ends here.
Apparently whips are only good for tickling hippos.
One dwarf would stand above the rest. One that would heed the call to be a commando. Armed with little but a crossbow and supreme wrestling skill, he would vow to vanquish all that would stand against the supreme might of Shinfeb!
Stukos Razoraura
Talented Marksdwarf - Proficient Wrestler - Ambusher
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-22nd of Felsite-
My training is complete. The dwarven elite have deemed me worthy of graduating. I am now a dwarven commando. For my first mission, I was told to seek the Queen, and ask what she may require of me. I am ready for anything! The capital is far to the south, so I shall set out now.
-23rd of Felsite-
Interesting. I have found a cave hidden in the hills on my journey. I will keep that in mind later, perhaps whatever task the Queen will ask of me may take me in there. The name certainly isn't welcoming... "The Legendary Angry Hell".
-25th of Felsite-
Found yet another cave on my trek to the capital. The name is also not as welcoming. "The Natural God-forsaken Heart of Subtleties".
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The journal ends here. Again.
This commando apparently slept through the tiger fighting class.
(I also somehow forgot I was using a crossbow. heh.)
After a short period, a messenger had found the badly mangled corpse of a fallen commando. A newly trained commando has been given the task of the previous, seek out the Queen and give her any service she may provide.
Dodok Rockwood
Talented Marksdwarf - Proficient Wrestler - Ambusher
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-10th of Hematite-
Hah. I got word some fool tried to beat a tiger to death his his crossbow. Unfortunately, it seems that fool had a mission, and now I have been sent on his mission. I know I will fair better than that idiot. I set off now to get my first task from the Queen. From my training fortress though, this is going to be a long trip. Not looking forward to it.
-18th of Hematite-
Bah. Pack of wolves. They will be crushed underneath my foot like the dirt they are!
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Yep. You guessed it. Wolves apparently don't like being called dirt.
I need to try some smarter combinations. This isn't working at all.
A scout soon happened upon the body of the recently fallen commando. The scout barely got away with his life. The Dwarven Commando squad has recieved word of this and has begun training their new recruits slightly differently. This is the tale of one of these new recruits.
Unib Pridesword
Adept Swordsdwarf - Proficient Wrestler
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-2nd Malachite-
Finally... I have graduated from the Improved Commando Training Program, at the top of my class no less! My skills with the sword were unmatched by any of my classmates. My first mission is simple and below a new commando such as I... I am to perform the duties of a simple scout. I do not argue that it is important to the nation that any threat be discovered and stamped out. I will set off on my mission now.
-3rd Malachite-
I have happened upon a cave to the north of my fortress... it is called the Scar of Groves. I'll sneak around inside and see what might lurk within.
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A pair of glowing eyes nearly happened upon me. This is a home for those petty thieves, the kobolds! I will stamp out their miserable existance... and make some nice coin for myself on the side!
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Apparently the cave was home to a kobold bowmaster. He didn't take too kindly to my presence. I didn't even get it's name!
The Commando Training Program of Shinfeb is coming under great criticism. Many recruits are dying to simple things that are but a petty nuisance to dwarfkind. The leaders of the board meet and have a heavy discussion. They will attempt one last batch of recruits... if they fail, the commando squad will be disbanded in disgrace, known only as a way of getting rid of excess dwarves. Datan Siegecastles was one of those last batch of recruits.
Proficient Swordsdwarf - Proficient Armor User - Shield User - Wrestler
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-16th of Hematite-
Bah! I will never forgive my parents for putting me in this damned Commando unit. Apparently they don't care about the horrible reputation they have! Recruits have been dying left and right to tigers, kobolds, and wolves... and what do they do? They put me into it and say it'll make me strong. If anything it's gonna make me a damned steaming corpse. The leaders of the unit say I have potential though. The best of my kind... if that can be called a compliment. I guess they mean I'll just die slower than the rest of them. I'm told to seek out the Queen for my first mission. No recruits have even survived this mission... talk about horrible training!
-19th of Hematite-
Well, I've done what no recruit before me managed to do. I actually killed a jaguar. I'm probably going to get promoted for doing something as simple as this.
-20th of Hematite-
I have made it to the capital alive. Remarkable. They even promoted me to full Commando level just for accomplishing this simple feat. I laughed to myself slightly. Now, let's see what the Queen has in store for me.
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Interesting. Some fellow named "Reg Helmslabor" was killed at a a ruin called Lengthslid, far to the south. Now I am tasked to do the job he failed to do... kill a human pikemaster. Sigh. I only nod to show I will accept the task... I do not know if I'll actually do it. Going there will certainly spell my death. If I fall, I want to bring this damned Commando Training Program with me. No more young dwarves will have to die needless deaths like my own. I suppose I should set off now. If I ignore this task, I'd probably be severely punished... probably at the mercy of the Hammer. I'd rather take death over being imprisioned in the lackluster jails of our nation, at the mercy of the Hammer.
-23rd of Hematite-
I have arrived at the ruin. My death awaits me here... but I will try to fight my damnest. I may not approve of my parents sending me to my death, but if I can help it, I will try to avoid it!
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Already have I shattered many skeletons and cloven zombies apart. They keep pouring from the ruins towards me... I fight for my life. No sight of the pikemaster.
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I remain in my position in the forest surrounding the ruin. No sense charging in like a fool to get ambushed and surrounded by those damnable skeletons. Instead, I let them come to me. Fortunately for me, undead are stupid.
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with my dying breath... i curse that damn commando squad... why, my parents... why did you send me to my death?...
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One of the skeletons that came out killed that previous adventurer, so it seems it was pretty decently skilled. Once it wrestled me to the ground, it was all over... since about 4 others came out and started taking me apart.
The other recruits met similar fates. That was all it took to bring the Commando Squad to its knees. Funding was cut and the leaders of the squads were either completely exiled or stripped of their military rank for poor management. However, the leader would not take defeat this easily. He managed to convice random dwarves to be trained in secrecy to become commandos. Severed from the government, they swear to protect the dwarven nation regardless of what they may think. One recruit believed the Commando Squad could achieve glory again. His name is Erith Newcraft.
Talented Macedwarf - Talented Armor User - Novice Wrestler
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-7th of Galena-
The master has deemed me worthy of striking out on my own. I must avoid contact with the nation I have sworn to protect... lest they learn of the Squad's attempts to renew itself. I will set out to find a threat to my nation.
-8th of Galena-
I have located a cave nearby, called Strikecave...
-Argh... I've been badly wounded by a fire man inside the cave, but I got the beast. I must escape...
-9th of Galena-
I escaped safely, and soon stopped at a Commando outpost a distance away from a dwarven fortress. They tended to my wounds... and I set off towards a cave I have just arrived at, called "The Shadow of Love".
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Argh. More fire men. I am uninjured so I might explore further.
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A titan took great pleasure in folding me into a basketball shape. Sounded pretty brutal.
Disheartened, the leader of the Commandos cannot even persuade anyone to join his order anymore. All but his most dedicated "Elite" Commandos have left to rejoin the dwarven nation. He soon takes up his axe, along with his friends, to defend the Commando name to the last. This is the story of Cerol Helmstrike.
Talented Axedwarf - Shield User - Competent Armor User - Competent Wrestler
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-22nd of Galena-
I have had enough. I will prove to my nation that the Commando Squad will work. I will be aided by my remaining elites... my close friends. They were with the Commando squad from the beginning, and they have sworn they will be with it to the end. I have been told to meet them at the halls of Racedbust.
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I have located Iden Urnbusts, Zan Whipsteels, and Morul Wheeledtwist... commandos of Axe, Crossbow, and Sword. I'm told my remaining friend was chased away and is hiding out at nearby Raysbooks.
-23rd of Galena-
Fikod Tomenets, the other Axe commando, has joined me. Having located all my friends... we set off to the ultimate goal. We are going to vanquish the ruin the Queen sent one of our last commandos to. We will succeed where he failed.
-6th of Limestone-
We were ambushed by some wretched Ogres on our way to the ruin. Zan is horribly injured, and we thought he might not want to continue, but he soon comes around and wants to press on.
-9th of Limestone-
We have arrived at Lengthslid. A most saddening sight, we can still see the rotting corpse of the commando we had sent here. Vengeance will be ours!
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We fight with our lives. Morul sustains heavy injuries but the undead keep coming, and we keep striking them down. We make a stand right at the entrance to their wretched ruin... skeleton bones and zombified limbs flying every which way.
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Disaster. Fikod was beset by a skeleton... the foul thing bit him on the throat and tore it right out. He died a commando though, for with the last ounces of his strength, he shatted the fiend's body into a fine powder, before finally succumbing to his wounds. If we survive this, he will have a place of honor with us always.
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A skeleton has tried to demoralize us by proclaiming its accomplishments. No, instead it filled us with rage... it is the slayer of Datan! I charge after the wretch while my comrades deal with a zombie.
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It has been destroyed, though due to no small effort from my friends... but the undead just... keep... coming...
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Morul the sword commando is nowhere to be seen... we assume he has been seperated and ambushed by the fiends. It is just me, Zan the crossbow commando, and Iden, the remaining Axe commando... we are on the verge of exhaustion, bearing many wounds of our battle.
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The undead surround us. We will fight to the last.
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Sadly, one of the skeletons had the wise idea to strangle my throat. I quickly passed out and died. The marksdwarf was already pretty mangled up so he went down fast... and the last axedwarf took about 5 minutes to die despite being unconscious and having 9 skeletons beating the hell out of him.
We fought long and hard but this ruin is absolutely swamped with skeletons.
No idea where the hell Morul went. He got beat up pretty bad but I searched the entire gamelog, he did not die.
In other notes, that evil skeleton named "Datesuns" is still alive. He killed some adventurer some time ago, as well as two of my commandos on this adventure.
Just for fun: Going to make up a quick scout adventurer. I want to find out what became of Morul, and add a few more things to the legends area since this adventurer does not show up yet.
I feel the call of history. I am but an archaologist, but in these times, everyone who travels must carry a weapon, or have an armed escort. Having some handy skills at the hammer, I choose the former. The story of the Commando Squad fiasco intrigues me. I hear rumors that the leader and elites of this squad led a brave charge on the ruins that have troubled our nation in the past. They have never been heard from again.
My name is Reg Canyontoe, Archaologist and Historian.
Talented Hammerdwarf - Competent Armor User - Competent Wrestler - Competent Ambusher
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-21st of Limestone-
I set off on my journey to find out more of the Commando Squad. My first task is to stop at the capital and inquire the inhabitants about any of the surroundings, perhaps I will find some information I need. I had already poked around the guild halls in a few fortresses, and the abandoned campsites they used in their more recent times.
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*pull*
The Lion goes: RAWRGHCHOMPSHAKESHAKESHAKE
*pull*
The Dwarf goes: AUGH MY LEG AAAUGH IT'S EATING MY LEG
Unicorns are spawns of satan too, one kicked my ass out of stealth, making me get mauled by aforementioned lion.
Take two:
Same story, blah blah blah.
Same skills, with addition of novice shield user.
Name: Ezum Arrowstone
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-8th of Sandstone-
*copy and paste from previous message*
-15th of Sandstone-
I have arrived at the capital. Let's see what I might be able to learn here.
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Nothing interesting, time to set off for the ruins.
-19th of Sandstone-
I have reached this ruin. I will begin exploring... hopefully I can sneak past the undead that swamp these ruins.
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Aaagh! I've been spotted! I smash one apart but I am immediately sieged by at least ten of them. But as this happens my adrenaline rushes and I enter a martial trance. I injure a few more and run as fast I am capable, escaping this ruin. Night is falling anyway. I cannot seem to find what I want yet. I did succeed where the others failed, however, I have located the pikemaster. No way am I going up against him though, not with the legions of undead at his command.
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I return shortly after. (oddly enough it is still the same day despite being daylight now) I devise a sneaky plan. I start fires at various shrubs and trees around the ruins in hope of accomplishing something.
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Sure enough, a few skeletons are starting crack and burn in the heat... but so am I... I suffer quite a few burns, and the area is already quite hot... I will travel for now and let the area simmer down a bit, since it's quite inhospitable. Before I left, I did see the corpse of one of the axedwarf commandos. I didn't bother to check who it was, since the area was heavily patrolled by undead (I forgot to use look )
-22nd of Sandstone-
I return, the fires having burnt out. Not sure how much impact it had on the local undead population, but hopefully I have more working room.
Turns out the corpse belongs to Fikod, the Axedwarf Commando. His corpse was dragged into a muddy pool by the undead. This leaves yet two more axedwarves to discover, including the leader. The swordsdwarf and the marksdwarf also remain in an unknown location.
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Gah. I have been spotted. I now fight for my life as undead shamble towards me. Fortunately they are terribly slow and I can easily outrun the zombies... and skeletons don't move terribly fast when they're missing a leg! I've survived scratchless so far.
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Getting tired. The undead just keep coming... I whack the legs off incoming skeletons and make a run for it. This place is a hellhole.
-23rd of Sandstone-
I return to the ruin... yet again. I'm starting to get annoyed. But I am persistant.
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YAAAAGH! I have been discovered. EVERY skeleton and zombie is now chasing after me! I flee the ruins as fast as my short stubby legs can carry me... but paydirt. I pass a mudpool, and lying in it are three corpses. The Axedwarf Commando Leader, Cerol... and next to him, the Marksdwarf Zas, and the other Axedwarf, Iden.
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Freedom! Despite being chased down by the entire legion of undead... I somehow managed to flee into the woods where the undead would not pursue me. I thought I was dead for sure. There is still a mystery though... what has happened to the last member of the Commando team? Morul's corpse has yet to be seen. My search of the exterior of the ruin is nearly complete... just leaving the interior of the ruins. I need a break though... but on a hunch, I decide to stop by the capital one more time, and then go to the fortress where Morul was last seen.
-25th of Sandstone-
I have arrived at the capital and find nothing of interest... so I set off for Racedbust... far to the north.
-8th of Timber-
A fairly long and uneventful journey has brought me to Racedbust. Let's see if I might find out what I need to know here.
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After some searching, I turn up nothing. I think I will retire here for a short time and continue my studies within the safety of a fortress.
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Surprising that this is my only adventurer to survive this long. I'm surprised how well he did in the ruins, I might dust him off and have him clean up the rest. With some time and sneaking he could clean out the entire ruin... but by then all the corpse will have rotted. I think Morul survived but I'm not sure where he ended up.
Sadly, nothing I did here actually affected the legends screen yet. I don't think Morul killed any named creatures so I don't think he can earn himself a place there.
Really though. This ruin is thick with undead. I dunno about that place mentioned earlier, but damn this place has a lot of undead. When I was running I had no less than 40 undead on my tail, and at least 5 of them only two tiles away... it was quite interesting.
[ September 18, 2007: Message edited by: Lightning4 ]
[ September 18, 2007: Message edited by: Lightning4 ]