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« Reply #345 on: July 16, 2024, 04:35:23 am »

Dang that's a lot of dead zombies, some epic fights just happened here.
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« Reply #346 on: August 12, 2024, 05:21:52 am »


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The band had begun the grim labor that follows all great battles: Clean up

The charnel house of a fort was a field of rotting meat, maggots, bones and disease. If left alone it would likely be a source of plague for the region for years potentially destroying the tribal plains Kanil so adored.
The more important reason though was less practical: Dignity

None were satisfied at leaving so many victims of such a tragedy so dishonored. In dwarven culture only those properly memorialized can enter the after life. The rest live in a purgatory-like middle land between the Mountainhome and hell until the time of final judgement. Many dwarven heroes died here defeating Tumam and it would not do to curse them to this fate.

What bodies that could be gathered were, but so many parts were unidentifiable or were reduced to a slurry that was a feast for worms. Legendary weapons and armor were all over the field as well and each body was placed inside the former barracks of the fort now turned into a sepulcher. The rest of the ground of the fortress was burned. Even with the cloud obscuring the sun the savannah was still in the deepest part of its dry season and so the ground caught well. The smell of burning rotting flesh and the sound of it was more disturbing than Kanil imagined.

Although he was a veteran of many battles it was his first battle of such scale and where clean up after even mattered. "The ballads don't sing about this, do they?" Called Nemo grimly
"Certainly not, but neither shall we, I expect." Ersi the priest said after swigging some wine from his waterskin he continued "I imagine as age takes our minds we will mostly just remember our glorious triumphs"
"I am timeless, Priest. I doubt I will remember this as you did when you are too old to rise from your seat" Nemo replied sadly
"Mores the pity" Ersi the warrior interjected. The priest silently raised his waterskin in toast

Kanil was staring up into the cloud wishing his gaze could pierce it and see the sky above. "There's peace in knowing that it was true evil that we killed. Our enemy were foul cursed beasts who desired to kill all that is good in the world. That gives me comfort about today even if this labor disturbs" he said
Ingiz stomped over from the dwarven party. He looked to have aged many years, as far as dwarves go, and out of the entire crew his whole body was a criss-cross of scars, missing teeth, and even a missing toe. "A wrong has been made right and many of my kin given peace. I thank you, brothers"
Ersi the warrior nodded his head toward the dwarf party some distance away from them "They gonna arrest us still?"
"Try to" Kanil said flatly
Ingiz shook his head "No, they know better now. Lost too many of their own number and now they don't trust each other after letting Ushrir rush ahead and get herself killed. More wrongs to right, but Kanil Inchwhip isn't one of those"
Kanil looked intently at Ingiz "What wrongs still need to be righted?"
"No reason to involve yourself, lad. Dwarven matters and you've proven yourself a hero."
There was a strange twinkle to Kanil's eyes. A desire in him that he never could put into words "I feel no obligation. Let me help" he paused realizing that he rarely ever verbalized his affection for his friends "...my friend"

Ingiz noted the intention and chuckled "A madman you are. I doubt you wish to involve yourself in all the trade debts, family grudges and clerical grudges that are going to be fought over in courts these final days. There is another great battle coming though. I'll tell you more back home" It meant a lot to the party to hear Ingiz refer to Helmsfragrance, their base, as his home as well.
"Lets be off then, but first, Priest what was your plan for the cloud? It hangs over us still"
The priest looked despondent "I see that too! I had heard from the dwarves that the cloud was made from Tumam's fell zombies he summoned near the end of the battle." He scratches his head "I sort of hoped that killing them all would cause it to dissipate."
Nemo "So, no plan. Just a hunch that didn't pay off?" Kanil asked
"It might go away someday, you never know!" he defended
"And this land, one of the most fertile in human hands, will likely turn into a desert before then" Ersi the warrior stated. He spat on the ground and continued "A cursed desert to our west and cursed lands to our east. We're fast running out of places for our children to call their own"
This thought left the party in a dark state of mind. They decided to return home to plan the next steps with one thought left unsaid for it being too dark and too soon to utter "The sudden drop in population of the dwarves has left their lands to the north empty to occupy and farm and so there's hope for mankind in the end of the dwarves"


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« Reply #347 on: August 13, 2024, 06:15:08 am »

Well damn I was hoping that wold work and the cloud would go away. After all that how many dwarves are left at this point?

Also I'm fine with you bringing Burt and friends back to have some fun with the elves and goblins, it'll be good to see the old gang again anyway.
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« Reply #348 on: August 30, 2024, 02:36:23 pm »

New Cast for this particular story:

Itha Feciciyaba
Itha has spent the years since his failed expedition wrestling with regret. His forest paradise served as his comfort in these times and he was beginning to come to terms. The Elder Hell did not forget his transgressions though, even if he failed, and they find themselves in need of the army of beak dogs he liberated and led back to his home. The young elf will soon find himself to regret his preference to not learn the arts of combat


Ingiz Laboredgirders the Geared Tragedies of Disemboweling
Ingiz has lived a tumultuous life. He was one of countless dwarves cast out of the kingdom during the religious schism regarding the Spry, the god of undeath who would later turn out to be Tumam. He later ventured to the far corners of the kingdom to defend from goblins before meeting Kanil and spending years traveling the roads, saving the world, and building a legend divorced from the kingdom that had spurned him.
Then came the doom of the dwarves. Suddenly, he and his exiles were exiles no longer, but inheritors of the legacy of all dwarfkind. Only now there weren't enough dwarves left to even save the species. Faced with the grim reality of the future ahead of him, Ingiz has determined to right wrongs committed against his own people and to ensure a legacy is left behind that will be remembered for all ages to come. The time has come for Ingiz to right the greatest wrong committed against his people.


Kanil Inchwhip the Humorous Belly of Bites
Kanil went from orphan to the hired muscle of a bandit chieftess. Only when discarded and sent on a suicide mission did he ever find independence, and even then he was prompted to simply seek the very next fight in front of him. Although he saved the world he still was not satisfied and only when he, the peak of human strength, was struck down by something greater did he begin to wrestle with who he was and what he wanted.
To this day he still struggles to understand his purpose in this ruined world, especially after learning his origins, but he considers Ingiz a brother by oath. He swears to see this path through to the end, but who will he find on the other side?




Old characters returning! We'll see who even makes it to the end! Scales of battle are only growing as Adelaathira reaches its twilight age

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« Reply #349 on: August 31, 2024, 02:44:36 am »

Sounds like you have some exciting stuff planned for the future.

Also are you sure bigger battles are a good thing when you said the last one took over a week to complete?
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« Reply #350 on: August 31, 2024, 06:57:19 am »

Sounds like you have some exciting stuff planned for the future.

Also are you sure bigger battles are a good thing when you said the last one took over a week to complete?

Honestly, it wasn't intentional!
I was doing dfhack to make all the dwarf pops come out and stop being off map populations and things kind of spiraled out of my control, but that is the most dwarf fortress outcome possible so I am rolling with it lol

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« Reply #351 on: September 03, 2024, 03:43:46 am »

Sounds exciting can't see what this out come is.
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« Reply #352 on: September 25, 2024, 10:06:45 am »

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Ingiz awoke with a sputter. Clouds of dust left him coughing as he rolled over to get to his feet. He pushed himself up with his axe, but then ducked low again as he heard a thunk and a crack as a bolt pierced the skull of the dwarf next to him and the valiant warrior fell to the ground dead.

He called out to the next dwarf he saw in dust, but the figure he saw amble over to him wore the disgusting colors of the Elder Hell. The rogue stabbed knives at him, but Ingiz bashed him back and quickly beheaded the dwarf. This was a mess. Enemies and comrades were indistinguishable at a distance and a full melee had broken out. How had it come to this? Ingiz's head was fuzzy as he awoke in the dust. He knew that the dwarven kingdoms had come here to do battle against the Elder Hell, children had been kidnapped, and wrongs were to be righted, but all of a sudden they had fallen?

He had little time to ponder his situation as he saw a beak dog tear out a dwarf's throat while pinning a dwarven child under its claw. He roared a battle cry of the Spry and viciously hacked at the beast and separated its lower and upper body. The dwarf in its maw blew to death moments later, but the child was mostly unharmed. Ingiz saw the fallen standard of the Silver of Staves and Craterous Glazes and he planted it upright shouting "To me! Dwarves rally to me!"


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Itha was out of his element. The elven bard and saboteur was unfamiliar with the underground, with warfare, and with this particular land. Yet, here he was. He had thought to have brought some measure of peace to the world by taking the Elder Hell's beak dog population back to the elven forests with him. He had rehabilitated many and removed any collars or symbols of ownership.
This had only made him a target.

Taken from his home alongside the beasts these vicious goblin-educated dwarves had led him off to some accursed blasted land and held him prisoner while they beat the poor creatures back into their vicious state. He was sure of his death to come as they starved and caged him, but then the battle came. One moment Itha was sitting in a cage in a goblin tower and the next the entire room fell into the earth and broke his cage on impact. Now he was trapped underground surrounded by angry bearded soldiers viciously tearing one another apart! Worse, they were butchering his precious beak dogs! His dear animal companions were merely frightened by the noise, but were attacking anything they could get their beaks on.

The elf had no weapon and crawled along the ground shielding his mouth and nose from the dust cloud, but bumped into something and looked up to see a particularly angry dwarf brandishing a blade while sneering at Itha.


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Kanil stood amidst the chaos confused. He could not tell friend from foe and the dwarves of both armies seemed content to ignore the human outsider to focus on one another! He saw one of his own soldiers, having joined Kanil on his journey of maintaining the dwarves' legacy, getting pinned by two dwarves while another attempted to stab him. Kanil, dashed over and quickly killed the dwarves before picking the man up and nodding to him. I may have just killed allies, he thought, but there was little choice in the matter. He saw a young child running as a beak dog roared and charged after her like the pre-historic monstrosities that were once said to roam the planet. Kanil quickly beheaded the flightless bird and assessed his surroundings.

Looking up he realized that they were underground, but with a large opening to the surface above them. The ground had collapsed, clearly, and they had all fallen down here initiating this jumble of murder. He saw a dwarf with glowing eyes suddenly disappear and Kanil felt a spike of fear - Cold Hunters. There was a fissure twenty strides from Kanil and he saw as an invisible force shoved dwarves down into the pit. The valiant and sturdy folk screaming as an ignoble and messy end rushed to greet them.

He spent agonizing moments fighting with himself on what to do. At the rate of losses they were suffering they wouldn't have near enough forces ready for the final onslaught at the center of the fortress, for moments ago they were at a subsidiary tower at its edge, but distinguishing friends in this melee was impossible.
He saw beak dogs tearing into whole groups of dwarves and killing left and right. The creatures had never been a threat to Kanil previously, but now he understood how devastating the monsters could be, and he decided that those needed to be his target to minimize losses.

It was at this moment he saw a hulking form begin crossing the room. The huge figure carving a path of death as it marched to the other end of the room. Kivish, the rhino demi-god who had deprived Kanil of his vengeance upon the titan, had come. A god of war walked.



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« Reply #353 on: September 26, 2024, 01:37:30 am »

Sometimes rolling with the chaos is the best way to play, and a rhino demon seems like a pretty strong opponent it'll be interesting to see how this fight plays out.
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« Reply #354 on: October 19, 2024, 07:04:07 am »

Breaking the situation down led to a tactical and strategic nightmare for all sides involved:


As you can see it is one huge melee.

To the far north you can see one archer trying to shoot down dwarves as they advance on him.

Cold Hunters are also here mixed in with everyone else and reaping some bloody carnage. See that pit with a ton of dwarves around it? Cold Hunters are pushing and throwing dwarves in it so they go splat below as it leads all the way to the second cavern level.

Many of them desperately hold onto the sides, but have been exhausted by the battle and don't have great climbing skills. Many don't even successfully grab onto the wall, but of those who do only a few will successfully climb back to the top.

Following Itha's kidnapping by the corrupted dwarves his beak dogs were returned to enemy hands, and following the collapse that led to this mess they had the most advantage as they tore into dwarves.
Armored dwarves on both sides fought against crowds of dwarves, but even a skilled warrior can't do much when pinned down by many bodies.

How did this happen?

Ingiz recalls riding out with the last combined force of dwarves. It had been months since the battle to defeat Tumam's army and the failure to dissipate the necrotic cloud that consumed an entire fertile region of the continent. Since then a mass kidnapping had been staged: Corrupted dwarves belonging to demons or goblins had a mass exodus from their foul holes in the earth after the Auburn Deity's purge of the goblins. They had no goblin allies nor the nigh infinite hordes of trolls that lived to the far north, but fought alone.

Ingiz and the other military leaders could theorize about why this was the case, but it was less important to the fact that the corrupted dwarves had kidnapped many of the surviving dwarven children from the hillocks they were being raised at. Why they did this was also an unknown, but to Ingiz's mind it was likely pure spite. The end of the dwarves had come and his traitorous cousins sought to hurl one last insult before the end.

The corrupted dwarves had taken the old goblin fortress to the west of Helmsfragrance, Kanil's home, and built a strong defensive position. The true dwarves marched forth united together in one last band to seek vengeance and to rescue the children and were met by intense resistance as volley after volley of crossbow bolts rained down from the outer towers of the fortress.

It was just as the dwarves reached the trench line of the corrupted dwarves that Ingiz briefly saw a double flash of blue and met eyes with the disturbing gaze of a dwarf cold hunter. The creature held some kind of switch and within that moment of visual contact with Ingiz it flipped it and the entire earth collapsed beneath them all. Corrupt, true and undead dwarves were all hurled into the depths of the earth leading to the nightmare they were in now.



Flash forward to the present and Ingiz had successfully rallied a band of true dwarves around the two kings of the dwarven kingdoms. Although there weren't enough dwarves left to truly have a kingdom the dwarves were traditional people and so candidates had been chosen! Ingiz held a banner of the Craterous Glazes in one hand and struck out with his axe in the next removing limbs and heads from dwarves and beak dogs alike.


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It should be noted that the average Cold Hunter is corrupted by the magics that brought them back, but unlike goblins who dream of ruling the world and being the strongest. The Cold Hunters dream of bathing the world in chaos, and so even being trapped in this strategic nightmare themselves they were likely having the time of their lives; at least insomuch as they can with the magic majorly reducing their capacity to feel emotions.

They were led by a legendary hunter named Iteb. Not only one of the first warrior dwarves in the history of Adelaathira, but also bearing an artifact battle-axe thrice stolen before ending up in his hands.

In one moment in the battle a cold hunter grabbed the lower lip of a dwarf and pressed it into her face with such strength it caused the entire skull to explode.
The dwarven archer was in a martial trance, but could do little as he was swarmed and beaten. No one could even say which side he belonged to.
The cries of those thrown into the pits begging for help couldn't be heard by anyone as the battle roared above. All those holding on could do is pray, and if they had the strength, to try and climb up.

Beak dogs killed dwarves left and right, but as the battle progressed the sheer number of dwarves and the fact that Ingiz had rallied them, led to a counter-attack as the beasts were whittled down one by one.
A mad horse charged through the battle kicking dwarf and beak dog alike! It killed with impunity in its rage long separated from its owner and rider.
Some children fought and killed others. The sight of dwarven children, the size of human toddlers, drenched in blood was seared into the traumatized minds of human survivors who had accompanied Kanil to this battle. While many children hid or fled. Cold Hunters would throw them into the pit if they caught them.

One beak dog chased a boy across the room and almost caught him before two dwarven civilians valiantly threw themselves at the beast to stop it.

You can see the martial trances, and despite being warriors capable enough to HAVE martial trances, most of those warriors perish under a mob of dwarves.


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Itha was terrified. He could hear his unicorn whinnying in the distance and wondered where his ocelots were. He could see his beak dogs.
They had been tormented and beaten by the foul dwarves into a state of rabidness. Despite his calling to them and pleading with them to calm they attacked anything they could see. He couldn't do anything to save them. If he could find his unicorn and ocelots he could still flee and make it home though.

And this is what he attempted, but his way was barred by evil dwarves. He had escaped his cage and despite having a pressing battle that they were losing now the dwarves did not forget their elven prisoner they so enjoyed hurting.
He was cornered as 6 of them turned upon him.


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Kanil's human eyes could see little in this darkness and the dust from the collapse did not help. From what he could see anarchy reigned in this cavern.
Dwarves were killing each other and he could not tell who was who as often dwarves wearing the same regalia would be killing one another.
Fortunately, all dwarves recognized Kanil and so most gave him a wide berth knowing what the massive blade known as Cloudfought could do.

He saw cold hunters blinking into invisibility throughout the battle around him and killing with impunity and he worried. They were incredibly difficult opponents normally, but here Kanil would be defenseless. He had to hope they would be similarly cowed as the rest of the dwarves.
His own men were scattered: Soldiers from his battle against the necromancer queen who had come to help him as he brought peace to the final dwarves, but now were scattered and dying alone.
Just barely at the side of his vision he saw something and his heart stopped! Ilosp, an orphan Kanil had adopted and barely 14 years of age, was pinned down by a beak dog. The boy wasn't even meant to be here! He hadn't been trained and had been forbidden from riding out with them, and now the beak dog had a solid grasp of his back and was swinging him around breaking his body. Kanil jumped the distance letting dwarves hop out of the way of be hit by a few hundred pounds of iron and muscle. He slammed cloudfought down as he descended and beheaded the beast.
Ilosp was bleeding badly and unable to stand as a pool of blood formed around him "Ilosp! Foolish boy! Talk to me!" The boy didn't speak, but only cried in pain as he curled up in a ball. Kanil was going to check his vitals, but now saw dwarves advancing on him: They had found their courage. He raised Cloudfought and taunted them "Come and die!"

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Itha was dying. The dwarves had beaten him and were still beating him to death. He couldn't even breathe now and his vision was fading.
All he saw before darkness took him was a great beast: Like a rhino charge into the mob and begin tearing them apart, but he was too far gone to feel satisfaction from this. He was just so tired.






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« Reply #355 on: October 23, 2024, 03:46:05 am »

Damn that's quite the melee seems like it would be incredibly difficult to tell what the hell is even happening most of the time even with combat logs especially with how fast combat in game can be sometimes.


Also if you do anything with discord I won't be able to participate in it sense I don't have an account and am not planning on getting one, but don't let that stop you from doing it as I could just post my stuff here.
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« Reply #356 on: November 14, 2024, 06:16:04 am »

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A lot of fighting! Deduk with the iron shortsword is the survivor of Tumam's huge massacre at the fort where he died and was carrying this battle. Zasit's corpse is that of a Cold Hunter. I believe it was Ingiz who got him? From the dialogue you can ascertain that the collective trauma I have put these dwarves through in the last two years has hardened the entire species to be immune to stress and grimly satisfied at the death of their enemies.
Kivish, Avoliton's character, was brought here by accident. He will bring me no small measure of trouble later.



The clamor of battle continued for what felt like days, but was almost certainly only hours. In a cleaner setting a general would have ordered his forces to pull back and rest or switched them out with fresh forces, but as things went both sides had been dumped into this cavern by a cave-in and did not even know an exit to retreat to.

Thus the battle continued longer than even dwarven endurance could handle. The battle ended more because everyone began falling over and passing out from exhaustion. The few warriors with more strength than others finished off the traitor dwarves who were also barely able to stand.

The Cold Hunters had apparently picked a side in the battle and with their endless reserves of strength killed the remaining enemies.

Kanil had successfully defended Ilosp, Ingiz had defended the kings and rallied the loyalist dwarves, and the rhino demi-god Kivish had reaped his ruin of the traitors.

A group of dwarves had survived being thrown into the chasm and desperately cling to the sides as they worked their way up bit by bit. A few of them looked as if they were about to pass out, which would surely spell their doom and that of those below them.

Rope was dispensed and those closest to the lip of the chasm were lifted out, but there wasn’t enough to reach the rest. It was left where it was and those still trapped would have to muster the strength they had to climb the distance to reach it.
Meanwhile an accounting of the living and dead took place. The total number of dwarves left was less than 100.
Many still couldn’t even stand and passed in and out of consciousness.
Kanil searched for an exit and made for the surface without waiting for others. He desperately needed to see the surface again after that.

The tunnel he found curved upwards eventually breaking into a primitive, dilapidated, and leaning wooden tower. A left behind watch tower from the by-gone days from whence the Plagues of Forking sought to conquer the world. Kanil stumbled out from it and crested a nearby hill. The eastern late morning sun baked him in his armor and lit the landscape around all except for one part:

The slade dark fortress that dominated the landscape to the west. This was the largest building in the world with its equal being a similar copy to the arctic north. The black stone absorbed sun light as if to remind any who found hope in the light that the darkness would not be chased away. Yet, chased away it was, for its master was long dead at the hands of a nameless dwarven peasant who slew him.

Kanil sat upon the hillside and rested “Why does it always come back to someone wanting to rule the world?” he wondered aloud

“What do you say the answer be?” a distant voice whispered
Kanil turned to his right and saw a Cold Hunter- The Cold Hunter- Iteb. The first dwarf and the first Cold Hunter stood within arm’s reach. She was a hulk of a dwarf. An insane amount of muscle wrapped in bandages and under armor hefting a legendary axe that rested upon her shoulder. Glowing blue eyes shone with the light of death itself.

Old warriors say that before a duel happens it is already decided. That two master warriors battle countless times in their minds in the moments before the battle begins to reach the conclusion before it starts.
Kanil had slain more Cold Hunters than anyone and had slain the legendary elven prince Cacame. Cold Hunters could turn invisible in a moment and this would make it impossible for Kanil to stop and he would die.
Kanil could swing Cloudfought a half moment faster than they could turn invisible. He slew each Cold Hunter a half second before they could turn invisible and he would need to do so to win here.

But Iteb was armored, unlike any other Cold Hunter. Iteb was stronger and faster than any other Cold Hunter. She could probably swing that axe faster than he could swing Cloudfought with her supernaturally enhanced muscles. Iteb had fought in wars for over a century and her weapon was legendary steel.

Source: The outcome was uncertain for both warriors, and the two seasoned warriors were united in that moment by two emotions: Fear of defeat and eagerness to test each other's merit.

Kanil recalled the accursed dwarf’s question from a moment ago and spoke while keeping his hand on Cloudfought, “Some people just can’t live on this world without ruining it for others”

The Cold Hunter’s face showed no emotion. They never did, and it would be hard to tell with the helmet blocking the face and those blue eyes shining and casting shadow around the rest of it. “Would you say that those of that measure deserve to die?”

Kanil refused to blink. Iteb didn’t need to blink. “Absolutely” Kanil said.

The dwarf was quiet for a moment “Truce Inchwhip” she spoke
“Truce. For a moment” he said back. They both relaxed their grip to a half-grip. Still ready to fight swiftly, but enough of a gesture to speak.

“I’ll give your question question, Inchwhip” Spoke the dwarf. Kanil noticed her older dialect of dwarvish. Or perhaps she simply spoke oddly even for an ancient dwarf. Her voice also sounded as if it was being shouted from very very far away. Barely audible and yet entirely understandable. He wondered if all Cold Hunters sounded like this. She was the first he had spoken to. The others preferred murder to conversation.

She continued “In an ancient day a man had a dream and in it the wisdom of the world was revealed to him. Wisdom to bring peace, abundant food and paradise to the world.Have you heard this tale?”

Kanil frowned “Many times”

“Man goes to tell others, but they refuse to believe. ‘Why would you know this’ they say. They mock the man, and the man’s dream for the world cannot be done for the world refuses him. The man turns his craft to that of war and tongue. He rallies those who would believe to defeat those who won’t so that all may enjoy paradise. The man dies to a nameless arrow from a nameless man and his dream dies with him. War goes on although the true reason long forgotten”

“So, you’re saying no one knows why we do this?”

“No, child. Those who knew and sought to forge a perfect world tried and died. Those who carried their banners continued to carry it long after and after those died then more rose who found old tattered banners and graves and sought meaning and dreamed of paradise. It continues thus”

Kanil narrowed his eyes at Iteb “The culprit is those who’d force their will upon others then? Are you one of those, corpse?”

Iteb’s face was covered still yet Kanil could feel her cold grim smile “No. I am the one who sank the earth that swallowed your forces and your foes. The one who killed both with abandon. I threw my peoples children into the great chasm and dashed all order from this field.”

Kanil gripped his blade and three more Cold Hunters materialized around him, all dwarves. He spat at her “I didn’t realize you had enough of a heart left to gloat, corpse! Do you wish to test me now and see why your goddess fell to me?”

No goddesses. No masters” Iteb spoke “I watered your blood here for traitors sought to water it there” she pointed her free hand at the dark fortress “A ritual of blood was to take place there. Taking place even now, and the blood of those here was to ensure its success. Dream of paradise and an old banner lifted by the traitors.”

Kanil didn’t stare at the fortress she pointed at. He was ready to swing and risk everything on his ability to fight all four hunters himself. He did speak though “What are they doing there? How many are still there?”

“Fewer by the moment. The ritual draws to a close and the dream of paradise, a nightmare to you and your blood, will be unleashed again. Lead the survivors there. Stop the ritual. We shall be waiting there.”

Kanil bore his teeth at her “You killed my men in your cave-in”

“After the dream of paradise is shattered I shall kill you, Inchwhip” Iteb said. A promise, a challenge, a gift from one warrior to another. In her own venom she promised him his chance at vengeance once the greater foe was destroyed.

“Gather, Inchwhip” She and the others blinked out of existence and presumably headed towards the fortress.


It was sometime before Ingiz was able to assemble the survivors and march them to the surface. The rhino god refused to speak, but prowled up and down the lines staring holes into the souls of every dwarf that saw him. He was the legend that ended the age of Goblins, slew the marsh god, slew the demon master, and drove the goblins to near extinction all in a year. His legendary axe in one hand and whip in another. Both chained to his arms that he might never drop them.

Ingiz had dwarves break out on the surface in establishing a camp and approached Kanil on the hillside. The human hero was speaking with his foster-son Ilosp and Ingiz decided to stand quietly in view until the exchange ended

Source: Map I threw together real quick
“...I had to be here! This is the last great battle!” Ilosp said

“Last battle? There will always be more! As long as there are still fools who dream of being heroes”

“None of them will have seen the last battle of the dwarves though! Or fought in it!”

“You were mauled. You didn’t get to fight! Lost your blade in the cave-in and instead of finding a new weapon, as I taught you, you got pinned by an overgrown chicken!”

The two argued intensely, but Ingiz could tell it was from genuine care between them both. Ilosp was an orphan of the union, one of countless, and when first adopted looked as any union child: Hair kept shaved in mock discipline, shirt tucked, pants tucked into boots, and all other forms of obsessive discipline that the dwarves liked about the Union. Now, he sought to mimic his foster-father and grew out his hair. Still short it looked more like a brown mop on his head and he wore tattered clothing from his sparring as if it being worn out was some sign of experience. His shoulder and back bore many bandages.

Kanil’s armor was similarly tattered on the right side. It was a wonder he could put it on or take it off, but smiths were rare in the Entangled Plain and new armor was found by looting the dead. None of the enemies of late had been human. Kanil glanced at Ingiz and nodded his head signaling the dwarf for help

Ingiz had lost track of where the conversation was, but didn’t really need the cue “Don’t worry, lad. Plenty of glory to still go around. Got a mess of a wounded tent and we need someone to guard them. Still got Cold Hunters running around after all.”

Ilosp was not deceived “You just want me out of the way! Guarding some dumb tent!”

“Oh, I see. Do you want to stay on this hill guarding one of the only men no one is dumb enough to actually try to fight? Wounded in the tent need help and everyone is mad as the hell at each other right now. Need someone who isn’t a dwarf with a grudge to keep the peace. That’s you”

Now Ilosp believed and was gave a messy salute that left him wincing from his wounds “On it!” and he sauntered off.
“Thanks, Ingiz” Kanil said
“Wasn’t joking. Everyone is mad. Half of the traitors were blood-kin of the survivors and dwarven custom is demanding everyone declare grudges against each other. Even those with enough sense to know better were still mad watching their cousins and siblings get split open by their comrades”

Kanil scratched his chin in mock parody of Ingiz’s usual thinking pose “Darned dwarves and their traditions and stubbornness!” he said

Ingiz spat “got that right. By the end of the day we’re gonna have another battle and there won’t even be enough dwarves to dig a hole after that, unless we get out of here and let things cool down”

Kanil was silent at that and looked back at the fortress. Ingiz hated when the man was brooding and stomped up beside him “What? Tell me now, oath-brother! I haven’t the patience for your brooding and my peoples suicidal ways”

“Cold Hunters came up here. Led by Iteb. Said the traitors were doing a ritual down there. Something about ‘unleashing a dream of paradise’ and she said I wouldn’t like it”

Ingiz spat again “Iteb? We been hunting her since we slew Cor. No one has been able to find that traitor before now.”

“Think she is telling the truth?”

“Probably” Ingiz spat again at the thought “knowing the traitors and knowing this place, I know exactly what those beard munchers were up to”

Kanil waited patiently for the dwarf to continue and he did after pulling out his waterskin and taking a swig of ale. A staple of any dwarf trying to get through a working day “Demons, brother. Bottom of that hell-hole has a door to hell itself that the original demon slithered out of. Sealed up nice thanks to my people, but Cor took it from us and then she lost it herself. Looks like they want to unseal it and let them all out again. Another Leapbodice” Ingiz spat for a fourth time on the soil that could still not grow plants from the poison the fortress poured out decades ago upon it.

“They told us to go in and stop it. Sounds like we have to”
Ingiz looked back on the emerging camp and the crippled, angry, cursing dwarves stumbling around it. “Yeah” he said quietly

“If we kill all the demons then Iteb said she’d show up and we would have our battle”
Ingiz snapped his head back to Kanil “Darned fool! Never even fought a demon and talking like it's a rotten zombie that needs beheading? Each one fights like that swamp titan that crushed your legs a few years ago!”

Kanil grimaced at the memory. The swamp titan was the greatest failure of his life and he still hadn’t fully bounced back from it. Every now and again he’d have days where darkness seemed to take hold of him and no matter how hard he fought he could not compel himself to move forward or do anything. “I’ll have to win this time then. Have to” he said

“We need to make sure the freed children and those too wounded are sent away.” Ingiz found himself dreading this. Fighting soul-devouring monsters was certainly a glorious ending for his people, but the idea of being dragged to their nightmare realm of a home also terrified him.

“You found the children then? I had near forgotten about them from all the excitement”
“There's the whole reason the traitors were able to lure us out of here and you forgot?”

“It was a confusing battle, Ingiz”
Ingiz sighed “I’ll consult the king and the queen and see what they have to say. Doubt they’ll disagree though”
Kanil reached into his pack “You’ll be needing this” he said as he brought forth a steel axe. Not any steel axe, but Matkan itself!
Ingiz took a step back in fear “You’ve been carrying that cursed thing all along?”

Kanil nodded “Yep. You told me a dwarf cursed it to destroy all dwarves, and dwarves were hunting me. So, I kept it just in case. Think you’d find it more useful than me though considering I am a swordsman” Kanil offered the weapon to Ingiz

It radiated pure hatred. The heart of a man cursed by fate, his people, and by the world itself. He poured all his hate into this last act of spite in hopes of seeing vengeance. It was one of the greatest weapons there was.
Ingiz gingerly took the weapon and as he touched it he felt it's nigh-sentient hatred direct itself at him. “I hate you I hate you! Die die die die!” he felt it screaming in his mind before it seemed to fade to mere background noise

“How did you not go mad hearing that?” Ingiz asked gritting his teeth against the hate
“Hear what?”
“The axe and its hatred?”
“I never heard anything. Can dwarves hear weapons?”



I don't think I'm nearly as talented at writing characters as, say, Brewerbob, or Quantum Drop, but I also felt like I couldn't keep moving this along without taking some time to really develop what is happening here and how everyone is reacting. I mean, thankfully, Kanil is a simple man even in his in-game personality! He wants to fight, he likes simple concepts, and likes to ask questions. He's a pretty well set up blank slate to look at the world. We'll see how much we focus on that in the future. Tbh I probably could put more time into really just writing and developing the story out, but I feel like I'd have to slow the updates and my own time actually playing by A LOT. And that seems like it would just hinder the project which is to reach the Age of Fairy Tales and just tell some fun stories along the way.

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« Reply #357 on: November 15, 2024, 04:38:35 am »

I thought you did well with the character writing in this story.

Also still no idea how you manage to keep track of what's happening in those big battles, I lose track of what's happening in battles with less than ten people.
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« Reply #358 on: November 18, 2024, 06:47:21 am »

I thought you did well with the character writing in this story.

Also still no idea how you manage to keep track of what's happening in those big battles, I lose track of what's happening in battles with less than ten people.


I appreciate it lol

I miss a lot actually, especially this battle. To get all the invisible dwarves to appear in the world I unretired them all, but this caused color coding problems:

Normally
Red an action done by an enemy
Blue an action done by an ally
Grey an action done by a neutral party

Everyone is blue. Not only that but because they are allies the game only tells me their first name instead of the full name. So now I got 10 guys named Kivish fighting and I gotta figure out which one is which lol
Few were easy though

Ingiz was the only Ingiz with a steel war axe
Deduk was a random dwarf, but I saw him beheading people left and right and read his sword to realize he was a survivor
Anytime a dwarf shoved a fist through someone else's skull I knew I was seeing a cold hunter
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