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Re: Waterlures - A Capybara Man Fortress & Adventure [DF 0.47.05]
« Reply #735 on: October 29, 2024, 11:12:09 am »

Part V:
Writs of Citizenship



28th of Obsidian, 384

The last day of the year was coming to a close. It was evening and Tanzul was at the Fruit of Letters for a drink. The Winter Festivities had ended almost two weeks ago and citizens had returned to their daily routines. Tanzul—still waiting for citizenship—had not much to do during winter. The lake was frozen, so fishing was out of the question. The fox man spent most of his days at the tavern, but truth be told, it too was boring. He itched to do something exciting. He had noticed his thoughts wandering back to adventuring, and he had to admit that the thought of hitting the road was tempting.

Fortunately his boredom had been broken this evening by the fox woman Ana Talonspread. She had approached Tanzul and asked if she could share a drink with a fellow fox person. Tanzul had accepted gladly. He had seen Ana before, but this was the first time they had spoken together, their discussion shifting from idle small talk to Tanzul's adventures after a few drinks.

“It sounds like you had your share of excitement during your journeys,” Ana said when Tanzul finished his story. “You made a good choice coming here. I find myself quite content in Waterlures. Although I would some day want to head off in to the wilds, to see the beauty that nature has to offer.”

“Well, perhaps you could join us one day? That is, if we'll head out at some point,” Tanzul offered with sincerity.

“Oh, I wouldn't,” the fox woman laughed and patted Tanzul on the shoulder. Tanzul flushed, feeling a bit ashamed to ask such a thing. Noticing this, Ana smiled and continued,  “Don't get me wrong. I am bound. My duty lies here. Keeping Waterlures safe. That is why I came here, and why I am captain of the Orbs of Focus. Thank you for asking anyway.”







Meanwhile, Galel came up the stairs of the Trade House. He had been fetching food from the stores below and was carrying an omelette made from the eggs of various birds. He licked his beak as he looked at the tasty-looking meal, a beam of moonlight shining on it through the tall gem window. Galel turned to look out. The clouds had parted and he saw that the moon was full. He felt the crisp cold air blowing inside, through the building's wide archway.

He heard a door slam and the sound of hooves further off in the gloom where the moonlight didn't reach. He squinted his eyes—something was moving ahead of him.

Then he heard a loud, deep braying sound echo through the hall.




A large donkey-like creature with black and white stripes, twisted into humanoid form was, rushing across the hall, its eyes glowing a pale, sickly green, like the pus from a festering wound. Foam dripped from its maliciously grinning mouth. A terror of the night—a werezebra!

And it was headed straight for the dwarf Oddom Problemshield, who was at the otherside of the hall, back turned to the monster!



“SQUAAAW!” Galel squawked uncontrollably, terrified of the bestial monster.

It was what saved Oddom. The dwarf heard the ostrich man screeching, turned around, his eyes wide open in shock seeing the werezebra rush madly towards him!

“Ôsed's long ears! A werebeast!” Oddom screamed and ran out the side door as swiftly as his short dwarf legs carried him.

The werezebra turned its attention to the terrified ostrich man who had dropped his meal on the ground, his long legs shaking in fear. The werezebra grinned and with a ear-shattering bray, rushed towards Galel.

Galel managed to pull himself together in the nick of time, scrambled out the door leading to the library, slammed it behind him shut and managed to lock it, somehow. 'Drats! I think I soiled my britches,' Galel thought as he ran over the bridge to the House of Knowledge.



Sheriff Fayoba jogged towards the Trade House. He had heard the commotion as he had walked down the road. Somebody yelled “There's a werebeast in the Trade House!” as he neared the mausoleum. He hastened his pace to a run, hearing monstrous braying and door-bashing from within the Trade House. He ran inside, looked right and left, and noticed the werezebra pummeling a door with its large fists.

“Stop right there!” Fayoba yelled at the beast, his voice quivering as he drew his sword. He was at the same time terrified and thrilled of the inevitable mêlée.

The werezebra turned around and charged at the elf, madness in its eyes, but Fayoba dodged it easily, stabbing it in its arm as it skid past him. It brayed, annoyed, and groped at the nimble elf, who, once again, had little difficulty dodging the attack.



And so the battle went on with the werezebra charging at the elf, attempting to punch or grab him, the elf easily dodging and jumping away, dancing deftly around the monster, stabbing and slashing, cutting it many a time. The werebeast brayed in anger and frustration, when the sword was thrust into its gut, tearing its innards, the sword lodging in the wound.

Enraged, the werezebra punched at Fayoba, but he ducked and yanked his sword free, dodged another blow and slashed at the beast's leg. The blade cut deep, tearing ligaments—the werezebra fell to the ground, unable to bear itself with the leg.

The werebeast thrashed and lashed out on the ground, trying to land a blow on the elf. But Fayoba easily side-stepped the desperate flailing, circling the beast and looking for an opening.

And an opening arrived, when the capybara man Litast came to the aid, kicking the werezebra wriggling on the ground. The beast shifted its attention at the new arrival, and at that moment Fayoba struck.



The blade hit its arm, cut through flesh and bone, severing the limb. The beast turned to look at the stump, blood spraying from it like from a fountain, and as it turned its gaze back at its tormentor, the blade was thrust at its face, hitting it in the forehead and cutting all the way through into the brain.

The werebeast fell limp and was dead.






Early Spring, 385

A new year arrived in Waterlures and this was to be a special year. For it was now sixty years since the first capybara folk (and others) arrived at the shores of the Lakes of Saturninity. But it was a rough start for a year of celebration, with the werezebra attack on the eve of the new year, and with spring's arrival the The Prince of Duty slipped in like a cold breeze to collect her due.

Old age caught up with the humans Kon Praisednestle, a woodcutter, and Athri Dinnerarm, an herbalist. Abod's flail fell on them.

Yet, their deaths were not tragic, but rather served as a reminder that each and every mortal body will eventually come to its end—some sooner rather than later.

That is, unless you were one of the elves—immortals—like sheriff Fayoba and mayor Fecici were.






With spring, the elf merchants arrived, leading their pack mules and horses across the southern fields, dry and brown grass stalks jutting here and there, from under the last remains of snow. Istrul Wheelscrow had just finished her prayers to Ôsed when she saw the elves coming. She jogged back to town, ready to haul trade goods to the Trade House.

The elves from Ula Tefe unfortunately didn't have much of interest, but Atír still bought some elven clothing—for some of the citizens preferred the delicate elven handiwork—and some food stuffs, such as nuts and fruit. None of it was necessary, though. Waterlures was self-sufficient enough. It was more for the sake of courtesy (as was the tremendous profit Atír gave them). Mayor Fecici had said that it was important to keep good relations with neighboring realms in these troubling times. And Atír agreed.





Mid-Spring, 385

Spring approached its half-way mark. Work on the sewers had slowed down, for there were few hands to spare from other work. Despite this, Etur Laborworth and Kib Owlroughness took some time off and went to the Lover's Hut overlooking the town and lake. They were easily excused, for of course everyone expected them to be infatuated with each other. This was not the case, however. They had grown to be good friends, and very much enjoyed the company of one another.

Neither of them wanted the complications that romance might bring.





The dwarf prophet Sodel Oarmobbed had felt uneasy and bored lately. She had not been able find time to pray to the Turquoise and seek guidance. For her life wasn't heading anywhere. Being confined in Waterlures, doing her duty as a good citizen, all the menial labor day after day...it was not for her. She yearned to wander, to go on an adventure! And her hands wished to create, to craft something!

And then, as if from nowhere, a strange sensation struck her, a vision came into her mind. From somewhere beyond the mortal realm, from a fey place it came. It took hold of her and guided her to the crafter's table at Zon's Tailory.

At last, she would create—an artifact was on its way!





A few days later Sodel finished her masterpiece: Odkiskab, 'Ferninches', an oaken cup!

The cup itself was one of the highest quality, decorated with carved intricate patterns lined with sheep bone. On one side was an embossed cloth image depicting a scene from the stories told by Rin: Suwu Cleanmusics striking down a cougan man. On the other side was embedded a leather image depicting a book.

Perhaps the fey spirits had guided Sodel to create a replacement for the stolen drinking horn? Though, this artifact would not be stored where anyone could handle it. It was to be sealed in the vaults, far from the reach of questionable folk and their dishonest hands.







28th of Slate, 385

“I don't know what to say,” Logem Standardmartyr said in disbelief. She could not fathom how Nish could think like that. He had not only disagreed with her, but he had the arrogance to mock her opinion, and not only that, he had scorned her brother, Baron Oddom! She felt contempt and was utterly repelled by this young capybara man—not to mention that she had thought Nish might be a potential spouse candidate, ugh!

“Thing is, you should think more about it,” Nish Prisonpaddle said with a wide smile, clearly enjoying the exchange. “It should be obvious. If one is willing to sacrifice oneself, for some stupid thing, I reckon, well, it just means one will have less problems demanding others to sacrifice themselves. Is it not so?”

“No, it isn't,” Logem snapped at Nish, crossing her arms in front of her chest. “You are being disrespectful of your elders. You bring shame on your family with such talk. Do you not understand what you are saying? You are mocking the very people who founded this place, built it, so that we—their children—would have a better place to live in.”

“No, no, that is different,” Nish said, wavering for a bit, not exactly knowing how to continue. “Uh, I don't call that a sacrifice. Not at all. That was something else. My ma and pa didn't sacrifice nothing. I'm sure of that.”

“Oh, come now!” Logem scoffed at him. “You don't believe that even yourself!”






15th of Felsite, 385

Maloy was nervous and excited at the same time. He was at the mayor's office, waiting as the elf went through piles of paper on his desk. It was now two years since the elephant seal man had arrived in Waterlures, in the middle of a late spring snow storm with his companions. And that meant that the time of waiting was over, and Maloy would finally become a citizen of the town!

“There, that should do it,” Fecici said as he put down his quill, poured some wax on the paper and pressed his seal on it. “You are now officially a citizen of Waterlures, and I believe congratulations are in order. We have much need for able bodied folk like you, elephant seal man.”

Fecici folded the writ of citizenship and handed it over to Maloy. He looked at the elephant seal man from flipper to majestic flopping nose. 'Muscles suit this one better than elderly humans,' the elf thought. 'Though, I do think he has quite the layer of fat on him. I don't think that was the case when he arrived. Seems to be a quite common occurence. Perhaps I should have a word or two with the cooks?'






Idar Towerlock was sweating a cold sweat. Her palms felt all clammy and her legs quivered a bit. She was heading to meet with the mayor on the topic of citizenship. Idar was hesitant and agitated, her heart beating rapidly. She hadn't spoken with Fecici other than when she came to town and asked for residency. What if the elf did not like her? What if he held a grudge against dwarves, or, even worse, didn't like cheese? You never could know what was going on in the minds of the forest-loving scoundrels. Deceitful folk. If the mayor was anyone else, Idar was absolutely certain there would be no issue whatsoever. She was, after all, one hell of a dwarf—lovable, charming, and one of the most important cheese makers in history!






Early Summer, 385

Coni felt relieved. She had presented her case to mayor Fecici quite well, made many a good reason why she should be granted citizenship. Not that Fecici asked for any of that, but she wanted to be on the safe side. Perhaps she had a nagging feeling in the back of her mind that she might be thought untrustworthy and suspicious. Not that she thought of herself like that. So to make things clear and a positive impression of herself, she had been quite the bold flatterer—it was something she had mastered—and mayor Fecici certainly seemed mighty pleased.

“Yes, indeed, it is good to be reminded of such things once in a while,” the elf said, feeling all proud and satisfied with the hamster woman's praise. Of course he understood that she was trying to get on his good side, but he couldn't refuse a compliment. Especially something so well put into words. He was vain in that way, and, besides, the hamster woman spoke the truth. He was quite the fashionable and handsome fellow.

“I see no reason why not to grant you citizenship,” Fecici continued, took a quill in his hand, dipped it in ink and began signing Coni's writ of citizenship.






18th of Hematite, 385

Kumil the faun stood watch at the South Gate with Ana the fox woman when the merchants from the Just Union arrived. They greeted the humans as their wagons pulled by water buffalos went by, the wagon wheels clattering on the flagstone road. It was summer trading time, it seemed. And it was good. Trade was something Kumil could respect. Unlike Ana's proposal, which he found somewhat disturbing.

“Well, what do you think of it?” Ana asked the faun. She had felt that the concerns of those like her—warriors who kept the citizens safe—were not listened to by the ones making decisions. So she had approached Kumil, suggesting that he should take a bigger role, force the mayor to grant him, the militia warden, more say in how things were handled. The heads of the militia should have more power. They should be able to make decisions quickly without consulting others. The way things now were would eventually lead to disaster, make the militia impotent when most needed.

“No, it is something I will not consider,” Kumil refused with resolution. It was very unlike him, but this was a matter of principle to him. “We are servants of Waterlures and it is up to the mayor, who is mandated by the Citizens' Assambly, to make all decisions. Besides, Fecici does ask counsel of me, know you not? He doesn't do anything on a whim.”

“I understand,” Ana said in disappointment. “Still, perhaps you should at least give it some thought?”

“NO. No. And we will not discuss this matter any longer,” Kumil answered in a tone both cold and final. He would not be lured by power. What Ana suggested would eventually lead to tyranny, whether she wanted or not. Kumil hoped for the latter. That Ana was being naïve and was not seeking a way to control others.






3rd of Malachite, 385

“So, I overindulge sometimes. I see no problem in it,” Mame Fordedrises said, leaning against the town wall at the South Gate. It was he and Caÿilu Searend—one of the goblins around—who were unlucky enough to be standing guard. Mame the elf wasn't particularly paying attention and was absent-mindedly playing around with his short sword. He then continued his rambling, “The thing is, once you get me going, I won't stop for anything. Better hide the wine behind lock and key or the cellars will be empty after I'm done.”



“I doubt that,” Caÿilu snorted at the elf. She hardly knew Mame, and she didn't think she wanted to. 'Sometimes I just don't like somebody,' she thought. But then again, perhaps she could have some fun at the expense of the elf. She grinned and continued, “Why, look at yourself. With that frame you could barely handle even a full pint. I could easily drink you under the table and not break a sweat.”

“Sounds like you're looking for a challenge,” Mame said, slightly irritated by the goblin's remarks. But more than that, this seemed like something that could turn into an argument. And that he liked. “Or perhaps it is you who can't keep in their wine. I bet you'll end up vomiting like a dwarf seeing the sun!”






5th of Malachite, 385

Galel was striding down the halls and stairs of the Enchanted Bridge. He had a smug, satisfied expression on his face. For he was coming from the mayor's office and things had gone better than he planned. He looked at the very, very official looking paper—it had a wax seal with a ribbon and all—in his hand, lifted it and kissed it with a 'mwah' sound. 'Finally! Finally I'm a citizen and I bet things will change now—one way or the other,' the ostrich man thought, all sorts of shrewd plans beginning to flood his mind.






9th of Galena, 385

“Why, I believe congratulations are in order then, Tanzul!” Ònul Strickenrelics said to Tanzul as she walked aside the fox man out of the Enchanted Bridge. Tanzul was coming from a meeting with mayor Fecici, and he was now a citizen of Waterlures. The two years of waiting had been a breeze. Although, admittedly Tanzul was a bit bored during the last half-year stretch.

“Thank you, ma'am,” Tanzul said to the capybara woman. Ònul, along with her husband Deler, were the first people the fox man had met when he and his companions arrived. Still, after that first encounter, he hadn't really seen Ònul. Except during the winter festivities, but then again, everyone was there.

“What might be your plans? Now that you're a citizen and all,” the capybara woman asked cheerfully as they walked along.

“I-I don't really know...” Tanzul said. It was an honest answer. Truth be told, he really hadn't thought of it. All the time waiting for his citizenship, he had pushed thoughts of the future away for later consideration. When he came to town, he had given some thought to Master Themiyi's proposal—to get Waterlures to end the threat of the goblins and necromancers. Somehow. But now, after two years in town... He was not so sure of it. It was easier not to think of such matters, to live one day at a time, doing what he was used to do: to go fishing.

“Well, there's always fish to catch and paws needed at the fields,” Ònul said smiling, as if reading Tanzul's thoughts. They reached an intersection of walkways, and stopped before parting their ways. “Speaking of fields, I'll head off to help with the harvest. Take care, Tanzul!”

“Until next time, Ònul,” Tanzul replied, heading to the piers below the houses on stilts. Fishing was at least something he was comfortable with.





28th of Galena, 385

“And you believe it to be so? That it is the truth?” Mayor Fecici raised his brow, not entirely sure what to think of the llama man's words. He would, of course, be granted citizenship, but Fecici was a bit wary of someone who said that they had been led here by their god, for some divine purpose. That it was their destiny or whatever nonsense. People like that tended to be gullible and naïve, fanatic even. Not that it mattered as long as the llama man was not in a position of power and responsibility. There were, after all, many prophets and other such holy lunatics living in town.

“Yes. I do not doubt my beloved Mater's guidance,” Osod said confidently. “It was not a chance meeting, when I joined with my companions. Waterlures is where the rainbow took me, though the reason is still obscured. I am certain that in due time, that too, will be made clear, like the sky after rain.”

“Ah. You might have to wait quite long for the sky to clear here. But, in any case, here is your writ of citizenship. You are now officially part of Waterlures. Congratulations,” Fecici said with a hint of irony and somewhat uncomfortably, handing the documents to the llama man and patting him on the shoulder lightly.






Early Autumn, 385

Autumn arrived and the sewers of Waterlures were nearing completion after two years of toil. All the roughly mined walls were now smoothed either by stoneworkers chiseling or by masonry. Now all that was left was to clear all the rubble and other clutter. Then the engineers could get to work with floodgates and make certain that all was safe and proper, that there would be no risk of sewage waters flooding.

There were still things to do.







14th of Limestone, 385

With autumn the caravan from the heartlands of Ustuth Ïdath arrived. And with the caravan came the Outpost Liaison, Tirist Brasshandles. And with Tirist came the autumn rain. A loud rumble thundered from the sky wrapped in dark clouds. A heavy downpour cascaded from the heavens, soaking poor Tirist before he managed to get under the cover of the Temple Gate.

'I do not find this amusing. Not one bit, you divine scoundrel you,' Tirist grumbled in his thoughts at Ôsed. And as if as an answer, one of the upturned brims of his split-brimmed woolen hat flopped down, straight in front of his eyes.

“Why you—! That does it! I've had quite enough!” Tirist roared aloud furiously, shaking his fist at the sky, his plump cheeks red and round as ripe apples. He took his hat off and wrenched the water from it like from a wet towel. The hat looked quite miserable and pitiful after it. If the hat wasn't ruined by the rain, well, it certainly was now. Tirist still put it back on and continued through the gate as if nothing had happened, his fancy leather shoes sloshing with each step.

The capybara man Momuz Speartours—who stood guard next to the gate—looked as the rather short and very rotund dwarf lumbered down the road, muttering curses, the hem of his fur lined robes dragging behind in mud and puddles. 'Well, at least I'm not the only one to be tormented by this miserable weather,' Momuz thought, slightly amused by the sight.






25th of Limestone, 385

It was only a few days since Feb Spokenpaper had turned twelve years old. He was quite happy at the moment, working at the underground quarry, filling the minecart with phyllite for the masons. It wasn't as fun as playing make-believe, but you could imagine all sorts of fantastical things as you were working. He had imagined the heroes of Waterlures—Suwu, Cañar, Lòr, Ova and, of course, Rin the goblin—traveling around the world, doing good, heroic things, like giving mean necromancers (Feb was quite unsure what they were, but they were bad people) a good beating. Or fighting armies of evil goblins (Rin and the other goblins living in Waterlures were good) and defeating them all. Maybe one day he could go an adventure, too? But he wouldn't do the fighting. He'd just look at it from safety and then tell the story. Like a poet or bard—like mother was.





3rd of Sandstone, 385

Mayor Fecici rested his chin on his left fist while he drummed his desk with the other hand's fingers. He looked at the silent goblin standing in front of him. Rin the goblin. A miller by trade, once the Assistant Sheriff, then bold hero, and now retired, returned home, asking for the renewal of his citizenship. It should be an easy decision—everyone vouched for Rin—and this whole two years of waiting was only a formality... But there were things that bothered Fecici in this one. For instance, Rin was clearly lying, or, at the very least, not telling the whole truth.

“Now, what should I do with you, Rin?” Fecici said, tapping a finger on the writ of citizenship waiting to be signed and sealed. “I can tell a lie from a thousand paces away. You may fool the others, but I am not them. You see, there is a reason for the two years of waiting. It is a time of evaluation, so one can learn the character of the person seeking to become a citizen. 'What kind of a man is he?' and 'Is he worthy?' The applicant must be someone you can trust.”

Rin stood silently and unflinching, listening to the mayor. Fecici leaned back on his ashen chair, resting his elbows on the chair arms, and continued, “So we have a problem. How am I supposed to trust someone who does not tell the truth? Now, don't get me wrong, I do respect cunning when done in proper fashion. You have tricked the others very well. That much is admirable. It was a good tale you weaved. But it was only that: a tale. So, tell me now, what is it that actually happened during your travels? I am especially interested in how you died—” There was a slight twitch from Rin, barely noticeable, but Fecici's keen eyes saw it. “—and how you were brought back. For you are not alive. I can sense your undeath, Rin Fisthearts.”







4th of Sandstone, 385

Dîshmab Mirrortraded was at the Chapel of Duty, the shrine of Ôsed that had been built at the very beginnings of Waterlures, sixty years ago. That was nearly twice her age! The capybara woman was kneeling in front of the statue of the goddess, the air moist with autumn, the shrine's stone floor half-covered in yellow leaves blown by the wind. She was praying to the Great Doe, the goddess who birthed the world, who gave life to all, who raised the mountains and shone from above, from her heavenly domain, day and night, as sun and star.

'It feels sometimes that love is like a mountain, Ôsed,' she prayed in her mind. 'Once you see one, it so magnificent, so thrilling. And when you get closer, it grows and grows, inspiring awe. Then once you reach it, make your way to the top, it is a struggle. Both exhausting and satisfying. And sometimes it is too hard. The climb. And you fail or fall. And have to quit, sad and frustrated. But still it stays with you. It stays with you... You do understand what I mean, Ôsed? Right? Even though... Even though I've never seen a real mountain...' She paused, feeling a bit stupid. How could she make such a comparison? Well, she had read books, of course. Still, it wasn't the same. But certainly Ôsed understood her thoughts, what she meant in her heart.

The capybara woman opened her eyes and looked at the statue. She had been thinking about Åblel and their tumultuous times together. In the end it had not worked out and they had separated. Twice. Yet they remained friends, and in many ways things were better between them. But... She had to admit that she still did love him. She truly did. And she knew things would not work, no matter how many times they would try. Besides, she was married to Litast now. She should concentrate on him.

For she truly loved her husband, too.







16th of Sandstone, 385

Oko the badger man walked across the mausoleum square, carrying yak cheese to the food stores. The wheel of cheese made by Idar the dwarf looked delicious, but the smell was quite frankly awful. Oko pinched his nose as the heavy, musty smell wafted into his nostrils. The smell reminded him of the animal pens—the mix of hay, wet fur and dung. It made him somewhat nauseous and his mind was cleared of any notions of tasting it.

Why would anyone want to eat something so disgusting?

(Continued in next post...)

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Re: Waterlures - A Capybara Man Fortress & Adventure [DF 0.47.05]
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20th of Sandstone, 385

Almo Mirthfuldinners walked towards the gate ahead of her. It was a misty and damp autumn day and she really needed a drink. But that was nothing new in her life. She was always in need of a drink—she was a drunkard and a scoundrel, after all. And so what? It was her life and she could do whatever she wanted to do with it. To the hells with the hypocrites decrying her! Well, maybe she had drank a bit too often for the last two years or so. Her terrible hangover kept reminding of that—she had finished the last of her wine yesterday, not a drop left for the morning. It was a struggle to walk the last stretch to her destination, to Waterlures. A torment. Almost like a penance. The Enchanted Bridge better have damn good wine or she'd skewer those dwarf bastards praising the place with her carving knife. Gut them like pigs. Flay them—

“Good day to you, miss,” a fat capybara person standing guard at the town's entrance greeted her, interrupting her thoughts. The animal person was suited in plate armor, covered from head to toe, looking like a ball of steel. “What might be your business in Waterlures?” the capybara said, spear held across Almo's path.

“Um, I'm here to, er, relax... I-I'm in need of a drink,” Almo stuttered. It was the truth. But she became nervous and jittery around armed folk. Ever since that horrid day back at Breachwondered, the abandoned monastery where she and her group had holed up. She barely made it out alive when the four lunatics came. Nusgoz, Idri, Manba and her daughter Sporro... They were all killed by the bloodthirsty madmen. Those bestial animal people. No wonder she drank.

“Ah, you might be then wanting to visit the Enchanted Bridge on the east side,” the capybara guard said with a calm voice. “Or perhaps the Hut of Romancing, near the northern tip of the lake. Datan's mead is quite something... In any case, welcome to Waterlures.”

“Er, thank you,” Almo said, walking quickly past the guard and down the hill, craving for a drink more than ever.






“Mommy, I recited 'My Friend Equity',” little Tholtig said proudly. “This is gaiety.”

“Oh, you did? Well, isn't that nice, dear,” Ònul replied with a chuckle, glancing over her shoulder as she hung her emerald green woolen cloak in the wardrobe. Her youngest son seemed to have quite the broad range of vocabulary for one so young—he was but four years old.

“I saw it! I saw it!” Ingish piped in vigorously from the floor. She then put on a more serious face, and continued, “I felt no delight.”

Ònul burst in spontaneous laughter. She hadn't quite expected that. Clearly the three year old sister of Tholtig hadn't been impressed by the recital.






24th of Sandstone, 385

'Why should I be happy? There's no reason for such things,' Endok Touracts thought, breathing heavily and sweating as he carried the sack of spelt flour to the stores. Life in Waterlures was not so different from the life back at the hillocks. It was the same kind of hard work he did here as in Tradeplay. Sowing seeds, tending to the crops, collecting the harvest. Butchering livestock, tanning the hides. The life of a farmer. That was what he had hoped to get away from.

But no, oh no. He did the same menial tasks here. Except now he had to haul back-breaking burdens of stone, lumber from felled trees, heavy loads of trade goods, and so on and so on. His hope had been that here, in fabled and rich Waterlures, he would have the possibility to craft. To create. Perhaps one day be stricken by a mood and create an artifact! He didn't care about being skilled—he actually thought of striving for mastery quite off-putting. Regardless, he did appreciate craftsdwarfship as much as the next dwarf. It seemed unlikely he'd ever make anything wondrous.

But such is life: once a peasant, always a peasant. At least he wasn't a serf, worked to an early death by the demands of the Unaging King. Not that he really cared about an independent life. Still, he had not quite accepted his fate. There had to be some way to better things, advance his life. Become someone important and rich, perhaps. It was hardly likely, but certainly an opportunity would present itself at some point.

And, in fact, one such had come to him last year, in the form of a visiting dwarf.

It was late summer when Endok had met Camela Gullyrivers, a dwarf scholar from the neighboring elf realm. A dwarf living among elves had intrigued Endok. For since a child he had been deeply moved by nature; by the pine forests reaching up the slopes of mountains; by the glimmering fish scales in mountain streams; the wild fields blooming in spring like colorful gems in cavern walls... And the elves, they managed to live at peace and as one with the whole of nature! Unlike Endok's kin, who saw it only as something to be cut down to fuel their industry that spit ash and soot into the skies. Why could not the dwarves live like elves? Or, at least, have some respect for the natural world.

And there he had Camela in front of him: a dwarf who lived like an elf. So he had bought a round—or who knows how many—of drinks. And they had drank and drank, until Camela made the suggestion and promise.



An offer of eternal life. To live forever like the elves. Camela knew their secrets and could share them, but first Endok would have to do something for him.



There was a sword, a bronze short sword, that the dwarf very much coveted. Lurequakes was its name. And it was here, in Waterlures. For stealing the sword, Endok would receive immortality.

There was no way Endok would pass that offer. So he had stolen it—without anyone noticing it yet—and now he waited for his payment.

There better be a payment.






5th of Timber, 385

Likot Languagehame watched from the mouth of the South Gate as the wagons rolled down the road and over the fields, disappearing into the morning mist. A few stragglers of the dwarven caravan passed her: merchants leading their pack horses and camels. She smiled and waved at the sullen and dour dwarves, who responded with farewell grunts, clearly grouchy due to the weather.

“You seem to be in a jolly mood today,” Baron Oddom said from behind her. Likot turned around. She hadn't noticed Oddom arriving for the morning shift. He was leaning his shoulder against the gate wall, the head of his war hammer, Kilrudsat, resting on the stone road.

“I've been alright lately,” Likot said, and it was true. Things were fine in her life. Though, things could always be better. Some things made her a bit restless and uneasy, but that was just a part of life. One can not always be satisfied, but it wouldn't hurt to have a bit more time to see friends and family. And maybe time to pray properly to the Golden and to Ôsed. She was always so busy, it seemed. It was still much better than the farce when she was mayor.

“Good. I am glad to hear that,” Oddom said after a rather long pause. He looked from under the gate at the sky. “Looks like it'll rain today.”

There was another rather awkward moment of silence. Both of them kept staring into the distance, not paying particular attention to anything. 'This will be another long and boring day,' Likot thought before she broke the quiet. “Yes, so it seems.”






13th of Timber, 385

The bone mace was completed. Melbil Staffdives looked at it with pride, satisfied after creating something worthy of legend. It was, of course, only a decorative weapon and not much of use in real battle. Fourteen year old Melbil knew that much. He would present it to father. Melbil had made it in his honor, for father was part of the Fenced Princes—the greatest warriors of Waterlures! Nothing could stop them.

'You shall be named Knotbreached the Ape of Justifying. That sounds like a good and heroic name. Something the dwarves from legends might come up with,' the young capybara man thought. Melbil cherished the company of the bearded ones, and all of his closest friends—like Vabôk the Monk—were dwarves.






21st of Timber, 385

Autumn was nearing its end and winter was around the corner. The first snow had come a few weeks ago, but all autumn leaves had not yet fallen from trees. Rin was milling spelt in the old mill, like he used to do in ages past, before his adventures. Mayor Fecici had eventually believed Rin and granted citizenship, but it was only after Rin had told the true story, and not the one he had told the rest of Waterlures, which left much untold. Now two elves—sheriff Fayoba and mayor Fecici—in Waterlures knew the true fate of Suwu. How Cañar had succumbed to the call of the Dark Powers and killed her in cold blood. And that Rin had drowned and died, only to be raised from the dead as a death hunter by foul magics wielded by the elephant man.

Still, Fecici had not at first been entirely convinced. The elf suspected Rin to be an agent of the evil sorcerers, but in the end he had come to believe the story. The only thing Rin left out from his tale was how the dark god Bazsa the Sinful had spoken to him, seeking to command Rin to do his bidding.

Rin was uncertain why he left that bit untold, but something in him, some strange, uncanny feeling, told him that he should not speak of Bazsa.

Especially not to Fecici.







3rd of Moonstone, 385

Winter arrived in Waterlures. The air had cooled down quickly at the turn of the month, and the lake had frozen over. It snowed outside and Edzul the Silent was glad he was indoors. He had dragged himself up the ramp to the hallway above the Fruit of Letters when it began snowing. Edzul's wounds hadn't as of yet healed properly from the giant coyote attack, and most likely they never would. Some things can never be mended. He was to be a cripple for the remainder of his life. However, he did not pity himself—he would persevere—although sometimes he felt hopeless. But that was not only due to his wounds.

It was because he had lost his dear friend, Pife.

His wounds and the loss of Pife had changed him. A lot. He was even more withdrawn than before, spending his days reminiscing on his life and his choices. He hardly saw his traveling companions anymore, although they tried to get close to him. To be friendly and offer help. He pushed them away, despite seeing friends as one of the finest things in life. But they reminded him too much of the hedgehog man. And he feared that if they became any closer to him, he would lose them too. It would be too much, and he was certain he would succumb to the dark whispers of Nokor offering an easy way out from misery: death.

Edzul pushed the thought of Nokor aside, calmly. Indeed, he rarely felt anger anymore. That, too, had changed in him. Well, at least something good came out of it all,'he thought and sighed. He filled his mug with the contents of one of the barrels in the hallway and tasted it. Carrot wine. Not his favorite, but good enough—it would quench his thirst.

It wouldn't make him forget Pife, though. Some wounds can never be healed.



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Okay, this turned out to be super long, again. Sorry 'bout that!

There just was so much happening during this year and I wanted to get most of it down. But I got only to the start of winter, so didn't even play the whole year through yet.

That was quite interesting that the human drunk came to visit. Somehow the name sounded familiar, so I saved, made a backup and checked legends. And lo and behold! Almo was one of the few survivors of the first bandits that Tanzul and company slew.

Then there was the thing with the dwarf Endok. A necromancer dwarf came to visit, and I was sure the same one had been visiting before. So legends mode again. Found out Endok had been offered immortality and he had stolen Oko the badger man's sword from the vault. Turns out I had either forgotten to lock the door or then something weird had happened and unlocked the door.

Well, in any case, there's quite the number of plots going around, so it's a bit hard to keep track of them and I keep forgetting things despite notes. So, sorry for all the loose ends, which probably will never be solved.

I'll try to keep the next writeup shorter!

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« Reply #737 on: October 29, 2024, 05:05:14 pm »

I am reading these and loving every one. . the gifs are the magic touch. ascii dreams forever ~

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“I saw it! I saw it!” Ingish piped in vigorously from the floor. She then put on a more serious face, and continued, “I felt no delight.”

a very dwarven experience hmm. Ingish seems particularly stoic!
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Part VI:
Complaining Citizens



Early Winter, 385

A flock of ravens was sighted circling above the South Gate when winter came. Once again, the capybaras deliberated and wondered what did the black birds portend this time around. Perhaps in the coming year new runts would be born? There had been no births this year, so it was something many hoped for. Those of a more gloomy disposition said it was most certainly an ill omen if anything, but that kind of talk was generally dismissed and frowned on.

Regardless, work slowed down to a crawl, and preparations for the coming Winter Festivities were made. The last of the detritus from the sewers had been cleared, and come spring, engineers would make the finishing touches to the waterworks. Surely the sewers would be functioning by the end of summer. It would make life in Waterlures more pleasant and less smelly. And there would be one thing less Outpost Liaison Tirist could complain about!






22nd of Moonstone, 385

Alåth Clearednet, the dwarf leader of the Ochre Snarls, stood watch at the Temple Gate. It was a cold day and snow fell from the sky. Alåth had been feeling a bit lonely lately, and it didn't help that she was all by herself on guard duty. Mostly her life in Waterlures was satisfying and pleasant, but the winters were something that always reminded of her loneliness. While others were merry with friends and family during the festivities, she usually ended up sitting in a corner, drinking alone. She did have friends, though not any particularly close ones, and that really wasn't the problem. What she most lacked in life was a family of her own. It was one of her greatest dreams in life that she, too, would one day have one.

Alåth snapped out from her thoughts as she saw something scurrying across the snow from the corner of her eye. She turned to look and there was a small fluffy hamster rushing to and fro, burrowing in the snow, peeking out, making a dash for some food scraps or whatnot and then rushed back to hiding.

“Say, little one,” Alåth bent over to get a closer look of the rodent. She pulled out a piece of bread and crumbled it on the snow. “You look like you're in need of something to eat. Here have some.”

It always cheered her up when she helped someone, no matter how tiny they were.







24th of Moonstone, 385

“Yes, indeed. Most unfortunate thing, but such is the cycle of life, that eventually our mortal bodies fail,” Tirist Brasshandles said solemnly to the capybara woman Astesh. The outpost liaison had stayed longer in town than usual, but he was soon to leave. He was with Astesh in the uppermost gallery encircling the main hall of the Enchanted Bridge, talking about matters related to the Creed of Adventuring, one of the sects formed around the worship of Ôsed.

“So true, so true,” Astesh said with a nod. “The soul of His Holy Lapiness, the First Wind Cerol, is now shining among the brightest of Stars. He is at peace now, dancing aside Almighty Ôsed.”

“Well said, Astesh. Well said,” the outpost liaison said with a smile. “Aah, it is good to talk with a fellow worshipper. And I am sorry that word of the First Wind had not reached your ears. I am certain I told mayor Fecici about it two years ago. I am aware of the importance of the Great Doe to many in Waterlures, so I would not have left it out. Perhaps Fecici forgot to mention of it then? There were much news and other things we went through, after all.”

“Worry not. I know of it now, though the news saddens me,” Astesh said somewhat melancholy. “And who might be the successor, the next First Wind, if I may ask?”

“Ah, it is one Geshud Puzzlevessel who was anointed,” Tirist said and went on telling all he knew about the head of the religion—embellishing it quite a bit and making up things where he forgot the details.





As Moonstone neared its end and midwinter approached, it was time for the yearly Winter Festivities. Throngs of capybara folk and other denizens of Waterlures began to stream into the Fruit of Letters, packing it to the point of bursting. The smells of cooked foods, spilled beer, stale sweat and wet fur mingled, making the more sensitive noses twitch with irritation. The air was warm and humid, but it was better than being out in the snow and cold.

And so stories were told, songs were sung, prayers said, merry was made and meals were had. Though the meals were nothing quite like what old Kib Spearmobbed used to make—or so said Dôbar Tombhold of her grandmother's cookings.






Early Spring, 386

Spring arrived and with it the Winter Festivities were over. It was time to return to daily life and toil.

But—alas!—it was to be the second spring in row that the shadow of Abod fell upon Waterlures. Asmel Earthenlures the hoary marmot woman and Mestthosite monk had come to the end of her journey. A stout defender of the town with her bare paws, she died peacefully at the age of sixty-four. She would be sorely missed by her comrades, and her friendliness and compassion would surely be remembered.

Yet it was not only Asmel who passed away. Id Pucefloor the naked mole dog man, loyal to Ïteb the gorlak prophet, wasted away at the age of seventy-four. His life in Waterlures was a sad one. It was one of unfulfilled desires—the result of his unhealthy sense of duty—and one of loneliness, a life without friends. But such things were not known to the others, for he kept his own counsel and none knew what was hidden within his heart.






18th of Granite, 386

The lake had thawed, but the ground was still covered in snow when the spring caravan from Ula Tefe arrived. The elves led their reindeer and mules into Waterlures through the Hill Gate—not quite their usual route—and across the walkways to the Trade House. The citizens of Waterlures scurried off to fetch goods for trade, and Atír prepared himself to haggle with the forest dwellers, hoping that this year they might have something interesting to offer.





6th of Slate, 386

“Oh, I don't know, Sibrek... It feels like sacrilege!” Astesh lamented, tears in her eyes. She had run to Sibrek's home after hearing news that the old unfinished temple outside the town walls was to be torn down. “How could they? How can they do such a thing! It-it is so wrong!”

“Astesh, Astesh, please, try to understand,” Sibrek said soothingly, putting a paw on Astesh's shoulder. “The walls were all weathered, all but crumbling. It was becoming a danger, a hazard. You yourself said that it looked like falling apart, tree saplings pushing from between flagstone cracks. Think if children would go playing there and hurt themselves. What then? Who would be to blame? For once, I think it was right of the mayor to make such a decision.”

Astesh yanked herself away from Sibrek's touch, looked at him angrily and said, “I can't believe you are siding with mayor Fecici! Not finishing the temple to Ôsed in the first place was wrong. That was a horrible mistake! It is like this place has turned its back to the Great Doe, condemning their souls to the Prince and Darkness!”

“I... I don't know what to say,” Sibrek frowned and sighed. Clearly Astesh was upset and being all riled up, but, then again, it was true that for some reason the temple had not been completed. Had the citizens abandoned Ôsed? But that could not be true. There were many faithful in town, and they spent much of their spare time praying to the Rabbit in the Sky.






16th of Slate, 386

“Look out!” Someone yelled from above.

Rin turned to look up, only to see planks speeding down towards him. Immediately he tried to jump aside, but he was too slow and his leg was hit by the spinning wood. It was but a glancing blow, though it was enough to knock him off balance, sending him plummeting down from the walkway.

—SPLASH!—

Into the lake he fell, sinking straight to the bottom. Memories flooded his mind. Slipping and falling. Floundering in water, his mail weighing him down, dragging him  into the depths. His lungs feeling like bursting, gasping for air—only to fill his lungs with water. Panic. Consciousness fading. Then death. Darkness... It was strange going through all the memories again, but it did not trouble him. Fear and such were something he could not feel any longer. And, besides, he could not drown, not this time, for he was not really alive.

Slowly he made his way to shore, walking on the muddy bottom of the lake.






18th of Slate, 386

Sheriff Fayoba sighed and looked at the lamb and eggs in front of him. For some reason he had lost his appetite. Well, the reason was quite obvious, given what Ònul's son Tholtig Treatydreamed had come to tell him. Another theft. This time a ring, a family heirloom. And, once again, no leads, no nothing. How was he supposed to solve these cases? He couldn't just go around questioning every one, suspecting each and every citizen, like some had suggested he should. As long as he was sheriff he would frown upon such ideas. He didn't really care what others thought of him. If they thought he was lazy or incompetent, so be it then.

'If Rin were the assistant sheriff, things would be easier,' Fayoba thought, 'but he has no interest in it anymore.' Indeed, when Rin had returned, Fayoba had asked if he'd like his old job back. But Rin had refused. Perhaps he'd have to find a new assistant?

“Say, you wouldn't be interested in being a sheriff's little helper, would you?” Fayoba said to little Tholtig, who had stayed in his office and was now playing on the floor.

Tholtig turned to look at Fayoba, confused by the question.

“I was merely jesting, little one. Please, continue with whatever you're doing,” The sheriff said with a smile and chuckled as he imagined a five year old trying to solve crimes with him.






While Fayoba was pondering about thefts plaguing Waterlures, Dimbulb was stomping angrily down the walkways. The hippo man was furious, but that was his usual state of being these days. In fact, ever since the encounter with the giant coyotes, being wounded, and the shock of Pife's death, his emotional state had gone downhill. His anger was ever growing, like an avalanche. He was in a constant state of internal rage, and it was only a matter of time when he would explode in fury.

He reached the Oaken Gold—the guildhall—and slammed its doors open, treaded across the hall to the southern door. Osod looked up from one of the tailor's tables, away from his knitting, eyeing the hippo man. “Hello, Dimbulb,” the llama man said calmly. “Is there something wrong?”

Dimbulb didn't respond or look. He just waltzed out the doors back outside, banging them shut behind him. He was so mad, so mad that he felt like he soon needed to punch someone. If he had stayed any longer at the mayor's office, he surely would have punched the elf. 'He's so full of himself. Bossing folk around. Stupid elf! He makes me so angry!' Dimbulb fumed in his thoughts, imagining all sorts of different ways to beat up the elf, but soon he felt bad about thinking such mean things.






'By the gods, that was awful!' Mayor Fecici thought as he walked along the wooden walkways across the lake. He was feeling such contempt that he was uncertain he'd felt quite like this ever during his long, long life. He had tried his best to listen, to console, to find out what exactly was the problem, but... It was no use. The hippo man had to be one of the foulest and dumbest beings ever living in Minbazkar. Fecici had tried to remain calm, to keep his voice down, but there was only so much he could bear. The hippo man had the audacity to insult him, and to make matters worse, he did so in an unbelievably dim-witted way!

Though, he had to admit that he did feel pity and empathy. It was that he did not like being yelled at. Especially when there was no reason and Fecici had only tried to comfort him. Well, maybe it helped Dimbulb to vent out his anger at him. At least for the moment. It probably wouldn't be easy to find a solution to the hippo man's problems, to make him happy. Fecici would have to think about it for quite some.






20th of Slate, 386

It was as if the gods themselves disapproved of the dismantling of the unfinished temple.

Etur Laborworth—the youngest of the Mestthosite monks—looked in horror as the scaffolding above him came crashing down along with the stones lain upon it. He was knocked off the boards and went tumbling down to the ground, air escaping his lungs as he impacted. Then horrible cracks and thuds as a stone block fell on his leg, another on his right shoulder and a third on his left paw, crushing it to smithereens. He was overwhelmed with stinging pain.

The pain was unbearable and Etur passed out, bruised and broken.





The elephant man monk Eman Crowglee carried poor mangled Etur to the infirmary. The capybara man was barely conscious, mumbling confusedly, but at least he wasn't bleeding any longer. He would survive, though it was still too early to tell how well he would recover. His leg and arms were a gruesome sight, crushed and twisted into unnatural positions.

“Do not fear, brother Etur,” Eman said to his fellow monk as he lay him on a bed of the hospice. “You will be in good hands soon. You are strong and you will pull through this. Rest, rest now. Mestthos be with you.”






“Um, are you sure you know what you're doing?” Etur asked nervously, as Osod examined his leg looking puzzled. Etur flinched as the llama man poked his leg with a finger, pain almost knocking him out.

“Hmm, the bone appears to be crushed into little bits,” Osod said gloomily, scratching his chin while his mouth was open. “The suturing was the easy part. I'm afraid I'll have to set the bone, then apply a cast. This might hurt a bit...”

It was an understatement. Were it not for the piece of wood Osod gave Etur to bite on, he would have screamed out loud when the llama man pushed the fractured bones together, massaging the small parts back in place or close enough. The operation felt excruciatingly long and Etur was barely conscious, drained of strength, when Osod finished his tormenting.

“There. It is almost as good as new,” Osod said, satisfied as he looked at his handiwork. He wiped his bloody and dirty hands on his tattered silk trousers, and continued, “I have to admit, I am a bit surprised how easily that went. It was the first time I did something like that.”

Etur whimpered, a mortified look on his face.






17th of Felsite, 386

'Aw, that was so nice of Amane,' Coni thought as she walked through the furnace hall. She had bumped into the fairy and had stopped for a little chat. Coni was moved that Amane—who she barely knew—had confided in her with something she had never told anyone. It was quite touching, really. She could not but feel empathy when the fairy told of her arrival in Waterlures over a decade ago. It was just like when Coni had arrived—during a horrible late spring blizzard!

'Well, I do hope I won't be thinking of the snow storm and being all miserable about it in ten years,' the hamster woman thought. She suddenly stopped in her tracks and looked around. She was going the wrong way! She wasn't supposed to go the Fruit of Letters, but to the animal pens to see if any help was needed there. She had completely forgotten about it when she talked with Amane. How silly of her!

She turned around and headed back, chuckling to herself, 'If I continue this way, I'll soon be as scatterbrained as Amane is.'







7th of Hematite, 386

Fecici was at his office, looking at the trinkets on display. The large gems had been replaced, but he was unsure if the new items were any better. The mortar and pestle made from polished green stone—malachite, the miners' had said—with all kinds of decorations were certainly more interesting, the bands of varying shades of green making captivating patterns naturally, but still perhaps not what the office needed. A cleaver and fork—both bronze—sat also on the plinth and the skull of a giant sparrow crowned the queer choice of knickknacks. The other pedestal had an assortment of books, but they were only copies of the originals and lacking in the quality of their illuminations.

'Now where is that hippo man?' Fecici thought as he picked up the bird skull to inspect it. He was waiting for Dimbulb, who once again had some complaints to make. Fecici was not eager to meet up with him and he was running out of patience. It was obvious that he'd be yelled at and called names for things that were not his doing. The mayor grumbled and put the skull back. He had better things to do, plans to make. Things to consider.

The sewers should be good to go by the time the autumn caravan and the outpost liaison came. It was now the beginning of summer, so there was plenty of time. The stronghold, however, was not progressing nearly as fast as it should have and Fecici was running out of excuses. Tirist will not be happy to hear that. Truth be told, Fecici was a bit suspicious of the whole building project. It was something that the legitimate baron of Waterlures, under orders of the Unaging King himself, had commanded to be built. A stronghold, a living space, beneath the surface, in the safety of stone. It was to be a safety measure—a place to hole up in—if the worst came to pass: if the enemy lay siege on Waterlures and the walls did not stop them.

However, what baron Stukos required from the stronghold spoke of something else than a place to withstand a siege. The rooms and halls and everything else seemed like the plans for a small fortress. The halls were to be grand, the living quarters opulent. There needed to be places for work and places for leisure. Places for worship and places for study. Grand cavern gardens built in the underground quarry...

It all seemed as if someone was planning a place suited for a large amount of dwarves to live in. And it disturbed mayor Fecici. For if that was the case, things were bound to change once the 'stronghold' was completed.






12th of Hematite, 386

“Yes, they should stop all the silly daydreaming,” Upu the snow leopard man said to baron Oddom. The two were on sentry duty at the South Gate, passing their time chatting idly of this and that. Somehow they had ended up discussing about romance and marriage, how some folks seemed to complain how they couldn't find true love, and how they yearned for a family of their own. Or, more precisely, it was what Oddom thought folk complained about.

“Indeed. It has worked out quite well with me and Istrul,” Oddom said, nodding his head. “It was a practical choice to marry, not one out of love. That is not to say that we do not care for each other. Quite the opposite, in fact. We have grown to love each other. I do believe this way a relationship and family has stronger foundations than when based purely on romantic desires.”

“Spot on, spot on,” Upu agreed vigorously. “It is best to ground oneself in reality, not strive for some impossible fantasy. If one wants a family, then start one. There is no need for romance to make it happen.”

And so the two went on for quite some time, agreeing and backslapping each other, bolstering their confidence of being right in the matters of this and that.






As was expected, merchants from the Just Union came to Waterlures during early summer. Somehow it still managed to catch everyone off guard: “The humans are here!” and “What? Now? Already?” could be heard all over town. And then the streets filled with laborers running about—some almost panicking—heading off to fetch all sorts of trade goods.

Though, this time there was much hustle and bustle even before the caravan arrived. The town was quite the hive of activity with all the finishing touches to the sewers, the tearing down of the old temple grounds, building new houses, and so on... The occasional grumblings about too much work had grown more frequent, and some—such as Dimbulb—were clearly overburdened by it all.

All it would take was a little push to send the grumblers over the brink.






24th of Malachite, 386

It was the turn of the elf Mame Fordedrises and the capybara woman Inod Oilyrounds to stand guard at the South Gate. A fine summer day with nary a cloud in the sky—such a waste to be on duty today, they both agreed. But such is life, and someone has to keep watch lest foul beast or skulking vermin crawl in to do nasty deeds.

“I'd rather be out in the forest to get some fresh air,” Mame complained, running his fingers through his long silver hair. It was something he had a habit of doing when he was bored, and he most certainly was bored now. “I'm sick of that stench of rotting fish,” he pointed at the middens outside the walls, “sick of that sound of hammering cobblestones,“ he looked up the slope to the mausoleum plaza. “Why bother to cover the ground in stone? There was nothing wrong with the dirt paths and green grass.”

“Maybe it's not perfect, but it's good enough. Much better this way,” Inod said, feeling somewhat uncomfortable in Mame's company. She didn't really understand the mindset of the elf—or of any typical elf, come to think of it. It was just beyond her, all the fuss about nature and the wilds. “What's it to you, anyway? Why fret about the bricking? It's not like the fields and forests beyond the town walls are being paved.”

“Ugh. You almost sound like a dwarf,” Mame said with disgust, feeling like wanting to pick a fight. A good argument would put an end to the boredom, at least for a while.

“Whatever you say,” Inod muttered sourly, turning her back on Mame. She was not at all in the mood for this.







19th of Galena, 386

Zefon Syrupcurl sat in her room, in the Dwarf Quarter beneath Waterlures proper. She had a bowl in front of her, but she did not feel like eating. It wasn't that the yak lung filled with scrambled peahen eggs wasn't tasty—Dodók's cookings were almost divine. It was because Zefon had become haggard and drawn. There was just too much hard menial labor that she had to do. She wasn't cut for it. She was not one to grumble or protest. It was something she held very important: to never complain, no matter what. That was the way, the proper way. Yet, she had thrown a fit—screamed, yelled—before coming to eat. She was disappointed in herself. Like an unruly child she had been, throwing a tantrum like that.

'I'm eating in a dining room. A fantastic dining room. Isn't this bliss?' Zefon tried to be positive as she chewed on a mouthful of food. It didn't work. It certainly didn't feel like bliss.







3rd of Limestone, 386

It was the beginning of autumn. Dimbulb was stooping at the blade weed plot. A constant drizzle of rain fell from the sky, making the air a bit misty. The foliage of the old plum tree provided some cover, but Dimbulb hardly noticed it. He was too wrapped in his own thoughts, dwelling upon old arguments he'd got into—mostly with Galel—and thinking of it made him angry. And that did not help to ease his already troubled mind.

All the hassle and strain caused by life in town, the sheer amound of work there was to do was becoming too much for him to bear. The storm inside him was getting worse and worse. He was not one used to civilized life. All that sillyness with having to act and pretend when talking with people—especially with the stupid nobs—felt so wrong.

But who was he to mock them? Dimbulb was, after all, a “barbarian”, like people smarter than him said. He knew he wasn't smart or wise. He wasn't special, really. That's why he kept his mouth shut most of the time, to not make a fool of himself—

“Hello, Dimbulb,” Deler said as he arrived at the plot, interrupting the hippo man's thoughts. “How're you doing today? Been busy?”

“I dunno, Deler,” Dimbulb replied glumly. “I just get fed up sometimes. I just want to help, but then someone says something mean and I get all mad.”

“Huh. I'm sorry to hear that,” Deler said as he began to help weed the plot. “It happens to us all sometimes, and some people are just ungrateful. So, don't pay attention to the naysayers and bullies. Think of something nice, like... Like a good jolly party!”

Dimbulb straightened up, rubbed his chin with a mud-caked hand, thinking. Maybe it was a good idea? Maybe he just needed some time off, just doing nothing, or, like Deler suggested, have a party? At the very least he could have a drink or two in the evening.

“I think that's a great idea!” Dimbuld said, a hint of a smile appearing on his face.





10th of Limestone, 386

Dôbar Tombhold was strutting down the walkway, her tummy all full after a fine dish. She was quite content and ready to head back to work, which in her case meant hauling resources from one place to another. She was still undecided on what to pursue in life, what would be her trade. She wanted to be an artisan, to create something truly magnificent one day. But what would she focus on? Stone? Wood? Bone? Or perhaps clothes? She was sixteen and by this time many had finished their apprenticeships. She hadn't even begun one.

All of a sudden she felt an odd tingling sensation creep up her spine, her hair standing up. It wasn't a cold or spooky feeling, but one full of warmth and inspiration. The tingling took hold of her mind, removing all doubt and questions. Everything was clear now. She knew what she would become.

She headed to the craft guild, her steps determined and full of confidence. It was time to create.






14th of Limestone, 386

“What do you care how I speak or live? You're just making fun of me! You're a mean bully!” Dimbulb bellowed at Fecici. He was once again at the mayor's office complaining how things were awful in his life. And complaining had turned into arguing and yelling. It wasn't that the elf said anything nasty—he was trying to help—but Dimbulb either misunderstood Fecici or needed to vent his frustration.

“Mind your tongue, hippo man! I'm not trying to torment you—I'm trying to help you!” Fecici snapped at him, waving his finger in front of the menacing giant of an animal person. He was quite fed up with the wailing and tantruming of this citizen. “Now, I have more urgent things to do than listen to your fits. The autumn caravan has been sighted, which means that the outpost liaison is about to arrive. This meeting is over! Thank you, now goodbye!”

With that mayor Fecici ushered the hippo man out of his office, not the least bit afraid that he'd make Dimbulb angrier. He himself was at the point of becoming enraged and for the moment he couldn't care less if things escalated. Fortunately it worked, and Dimbulb left without causing further issue.

'This will be a tough nut to crack,' thought Fecici as he slumped down in his chair, finally alone in the office. 'But that's a problem for another day. Now I really, really need to prepare for the meeting with Tirist...'






“Why the sour face this time? The weather is fine, for once,” mayor Fecici asked Tirist. Indeed, it was a sunny day outside, quite unusual for early autumn. Yet, the outpost liaison looked as grouchy as ever.

“Well, it is not only the rain that I hold a grudge against,” Tirist said rather offendedly. “As you well should know by now, there are other things I find most unpleasant in Waterlures. For instance, the smell is still here—I thought you would have that taken care of by now.”

“Yes, yes. The sewers are finished, but they are not yet in use,” Fecici said as he walked to his desk and put down the bushel of hemp plants he was carrying. “There were some... delays. But, rest assured, by next autumn they will have been in use for some time.”

“Hmpf! They better be. That would be one less annoyance,” the outpost liaison snorted. “It will not, however, take care of some other nuisances and discomforts this town has to offer.”

“And what would those be?” Fecici asked, slightly irritated.



“Well, you see, this time around I was coming down the hill—I visited the marvelous statue garden at first, lovely place, really—in my mind going through matters we have to discuss,” Tirist began his tirade, his nostrils flaring. “Really, I was minding my own business, when, all of a sudden, this absolutely horrendous buzzing sound approached me. I looked around and I could not but scream the Rabbit's name out loud when I saw this horrid black cloud, this swarm of mosquitos, come straight at me! It was ghastly! The fiends stung me here and there, feasting on my blood—do I look pale by the way?—like, like some blasted vampires! I barely made it out alive!”

“A-ha, I see...” Fecici said laconically, sitting down on his desk absent-mindedly.

“And as if that were not enough, there were other, more foul things to come!” Tirist fumed, his fists clenched and his whole body shaking, sending ripples across his belarded frame.

“And what would that be then?” Fecici asked with a not-so-discrete yawn.



“Pixies, good man! Pixies!” Tirist quivered, clearly upset by his experiences. “Nasty, foul, whizzing pixies! Speeding and dancing around me, making me all dizzy in the noggin when I tried to shoo and swat them away!”

“Really...?” Fecici didn't know what else to say. It might take some doing to get Tirist to calm down before they could get to the matters at hand. It'd be a long, dreary meeting and Fecici wasn't one bit happy about it.






26th of Limestone, 386

Thob Helmlabored felt blissful. She had given birth to a boy, her first child! All her prayers to Ôsed were finally answered! And she was not the only one to give birth on that day. Her aunt, Olon Seerlances, had birthed her seventh child, a girl, merely a few hours before Thob.

'Oh, thank you, blessed Ôsed, thank you!' Thob praised the Doe Goddess. It was as if all her worries and insecurities had been wiped away.



(Continued in next post...)

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6th of Sandstone, 386

Zefon's mood kept taking a turn for the worse. There was so many things troubling her mind, and to make matters worse, she had been there, at the old temple grounds, when the accident happened only a few days ago... Or was it weeks? She couldn't quite remember, but she could remember what happened. The sudden rumble, the yelling, the dust. The crash. Then screaming. Sesle's hand sticking out from under the pile of dirt and rubble. Death, death had arrived, claiming the life of the human prophet. He had moments before told Zefon how satisfied he was, how he liked physical work. Then a few heartbeats later he was dead. Mangled and crushed. How fleeting life could be!

Zefon wiped tears out of her eyes as she walked through the dining room of the Baronial Quarters, taking a shortcut to the vault stairs. She was taking the phyllite earring the capybara woman Dôbar had made to be stored behind lock and key. It was strange that she was entrusted with this task after what she had done all those years ago. How she had been a coward, fearing that goblin monster slayer, that cursed Salore! And to her shame she had stolen Brimrabbit the Fin of Mouths, the lay pewter goblet of Odda the leopard gecko woman.

But sheriff Fayoba was a merciful soul. Upon seeing her plight, he had let her go. He had let her go. Like that! She would have deserved a punishment for her sins, but Fayoba... Fayoba had let her go.

Zefon burst into tears as she placed the earring on the pedestal. Then she ran out of the vault, sobbing into her hands.





Despite the grim moods of some and the tragic death of Sesle, life went on as it normally did in autumn. The Trade Hall was filled with bustle and haggling, goods changing hands; the vinyards were harvested, the grapes bountiful; coopers made new barrels, cobblers new shoes; fishery workers handled smelly fish, and cooks cooked fresh meals. And the sewers, they were ready, the channels slowly filling up with water.

And Ôsed's blessing was once again upon Waterlures, for eight more children were born!






21st of Timber, 386

Autumn was nearing its end. The ground was already mantled in a layer of snow, and it was about to thicken, for more white flakes fell from the darkened sky at an increasing rate. A snow storm was approaching, it seemed. Baron Oddom and Mame Fordedrises stood at the East Gate, guarding the entry to town. They were both wrapped tightly in their cloaks to keep the biting chill away.

A traveler entered through the gate, clad in thick layers of clothes made from pelts and fur, cowl pulled tightly over her head. “Good day and welcome to Waterlures, traveler,” baron Oddom greeted the hunched woman, who appeared to be a goblin, judging by her fern green skin and plum purple locks.

“G'day, capybara man,” the goblin croaked as she walked past. She was a vicious looking creature, this one. Her large red eyes had a malign cruelty in them, something that sent shivers down Oddom's spine. Her face bore a nasty jagged scar, running down from the temple to jaw. The scar pulled her upper lip towards the cheek, giving the goblin a constant wicked sneer. And her neck: a straight scar ran across it. Doubtless, someone had tried to slit her throat.

But Oddom was not one to judge by appearances. Who knows what horrible things the goblin had faced leaving her face so ruined? If he would be mutilated as badly in battle, certainly he would feel glum and sulk about it all the time, would he not? Suddenly, he realised there was something familiar about the goblin... Had he seen her before? When? No, that wasn't right. He hadn't seen her. That much was certain. But he had heard a description that fit the goblin.

Now, where was it that he had heard it and in what situation? He pondered and pondered, trying to recall it... Then, after a moment, he remembered.

“Mame! I think you best fetch the sheriff,” Oddom commanded the elf. He was sure he knew now what this was about. “An old thief has come back to town.”






Fayoba was satisfied how the interrogation had turned out. He had been right in trusting his intruition on how to make the goblin talk. The goblin was not as hardened as she looked: a simple threat had been enough to make her tongue loose. Salore, or rather Atu Touchlies—a fitting name—spilled out everything. How she had threatened and forced Zefon to steal the lay pewter goblet, making the poor dwarf her accomplice. It was good to have the case finally solved, even though the stolen goblet was still missing.

However, there was more Atu had confessed to when Fayoba had cornered her. He had felt there was something Salore—Atu—was hiding. And he had been right. Though, he now wished it would not be the case. The goblin had told troubling things, disturbing things. The theft was but the mere beginning of her sinister plots. She had planned to sow seeds of doubt in town, to agitate citizens to the point of rebllion. To cause chaos and disorder. To weaken the rulership, so that it could be overthrown with little trouble.

But who did she work for? It seemed unlikely that Salore was alone behind this. Yet, try as he might, the goblin revealed no names, no pointers as to who lurked in the shadows and pulled the strings. Regardless, justice would be served and Atu would face severe punishment for her treachery.

“This time there is no escape for you,” Fayoba said sternly, his hand on the hilt of his sword. “You will be judged and you will be punished. May Mater have mercy on your soul.”







28th of Timber, 386

“You can hurl all the curses and threats in the world at me if you want! It will not save you from the hammering,” baron Oddom mocked Atu's pitiful attempts to frighten him. The goblin had tried to threaten him and his family, claiming that there's worse to come. She tried to curse him, screamed how demons from the Underworld will feast on his and his family's souls. Oddom had responded with a beating, kicking and punching the goblin until she lay on the library floor, broken. He had then shackled Atu, and was now taking her to the dungeons, dragging her behind him through the snow.



“Fifty hammerstrikes, Atu. Fifty hammerstrikes,” Oddom taunted Atu as he pulled the mangled goblin onward. He was exhilarated and felt zeal after delivering the beating, and now waited for the moment when he could bring the hammer down on her. The law must be upheld, after all. But it was also a personal matter, for he did not take kindly to those who threatened his family. He looked down at the goblin and went on, “There's no surviving the hammer, I tell you. You'll be begging and screaming for mercy long before the end. But if for some reason the gods and fate decide to keep you alive, it won't be over. Oh no, not at all! You'll be thrown into a cell and left to rot in the darkness. You'll never see the open sky again, feel fresh air in your lungs, nor the grass under your feet. You'll be alone until the end of days.”

The goblin glared at the capybara man, her face all bruised and swollen. She spat blood on the snow and grinned. Little did Oddom know that she had no need for such things, nor did she feel pain. For she was one of the undead and she would endure.



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So, yeah, another writeup that had to be split into two posts.

After a long time there's some unhappy citizens. Not entirely sure if I'll manage to save Zefon and Dimbulb seems to accumulate stress easily due to getting enraged all the time.

I've also started removing combat hardness from all citizens. Otherwise I've been happy with the 0.47.05 stress fix, but I'm not such a big fan of everyone getting so quickly used to seeing bodies. So that also contributes to the stress, I guess. Most of the citizens are still at negative stress (many at -99k) so I don't believe there's any time soon going to be any general tantrum spiral.
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