Formatting looks good! I'll note that in some of Basil's equipment descriptions it looks like you've got a few acronym tags that are acting strangely, but otherwise everything looks nice! Keep up the good work!
Also, That's a lot of 10's on that negotiation roll. Fortune seems to have smiled upon us big-time there.
Also once we fix the satellite could we use it to kill that Hegemon guy, I mean it's a terraforming satellite so it must be able to damage them in some way.
I don't recommend using the terraforming satellite as a weapon, but instead turning it to more beneficial uses, increasing the agricultural yields of the area etc. The people we are talking to are afraid of it being used as a weapon. If we take control of it, and then immediately use it as a weapon, we demonstrate to them that we can hold them in just the same stranglehold as the Hegemon. If we use it to help them, we show that we are different, and actually benevolent in nature. Life is precious, after all.
We should ask for enough food to keep our crew fed for a few more months, maybe 6, plus a portion of the food that the terraforming satellite allows them to produce. Ideally, we'll be using the terraforming satellite to improve their farmland and boost food yields for everybody, so taking a portion of the profit from that seems pretty reasonable.
Also, we're only getting one side of the Hegemon story. This individual may be completely different from how they are being portrayed, and may be misunderstood by these people. Or they could be even worse. But either way, until we know for certain, my vote is on using the satellite to improve life, rather than end it. I personally would rather know the enemy before wiping them off the face of the earth with weapons of mass destruction. Until we have seen for ourselves, we only have the word of an enemy of theirs that they are actually a brainwashing, vile menace.