Technically, its Saturday in Poland, so I can do whatever I want, huehue.
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Ain't no giant dragonflies in this worl, and bio doesn't exactly fit the blurb v;
Final PS passes the vibe check, I mean I allowed Soly's in FEF8, so.
Very early score:
maybe?-snip-
I don't think a single farm can supply a whole kingdom (not to mention all those feudal lords), so maybe tone it down?
PF won't trigger until several Chapters in at best, so that's a no.
1st PS is too OP because it nullifies half of weaknesses Fliers have.
2nd PS is obvs not gude because it's extra bookkeeping for me (aka I will keep forgetting).
3rd PS Falconknight suffers the same thing as PF, just inverse; if she will get 1 partner or less, this technically is active 100% of the time, no?
3rd PS Valkyrie is too OP; can give +2 MAG and no extra range, at best.
Very early score:
nah-snip-
No backstory is great detriment. Just because is only Priestess slot sheetu, doesn't mean I will let this slide past ;v
2nd PS is null because no weapons at first class, but that's balance to consider.
Very early score:
maybe?-snip-
Cliche teenager swordsman protag, but bio and mechanics check out. Huh, I even like the mug.
Where have you been hiding all this time, fren?
Very early score:
gude!-snip-
No bio?? What little PF/PS I see is ok, though.
Very early score:
maybe?-snip-
I don't remember a time I had problems with your sheetus, and it's the same now.
Bio fits and is a good read, PF/PSs are all nice.
Very early score:
gude!-snip-
The PF/PS combo feels like easy glass cannon mix that will get in trouble more than once. I approb.
Bio checks out, nothing to more to say about it.
Very early score:
gude!-snip-
And here we have something different.
PF: What is 'Avoid'? Assuming its 'Evasion', then the usual pairing of -Hit/-Evasion is both at -10.
PS's(??):
-Advantageous Position: OK by me
-Single Out: OK by me
-CafFriend: Either +2 AS or +10 (+15) Hit, but not both.
-Press the Advantage: Nah. PS should center on the player character, not enemies.
-Ambush: Too OP with the bonuses, and I'm 106% positive I will forget it half the time.
-Savant: If he has just one weapon, this is 100% active, so nope.
Bio while rather short, definitely works.
Get this sheetu in shape please, because for now the Very Early Score is
maybe?-snip-
PF will trigger rarely but I will allow it.
PS is ok.
As for bio, there's no nomads or eastern based culture anywhere near the game's region, so it needs a rework.
Very early score:
maybe?