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[TheFlame52]

This is fucking excellent and I eagerly await more!

[HakuryuVision]

I hate myself for drawing so many backgrounds.
Friendly reminder to read from right to left.
(Also little warning; this chapter contains some mild nudity.)

Anyways, chapter 2, here we go:

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And that's it for chapter 2.

Sorry for Icar's hornyness, but that's literally how the game described her.
(She is constantly ablaze with feelings of lust -or something like that.)
I planned on making her actually more shy and gentle, but i like characters with flaws, and the game (or rather dfhack) presented me with an interesting one.

Fan theory: Geño is a demigod and Issha's is his mother.

While not canon, i used your fan theory as an idea on why Icar would join. ; )


Thanks for reading!
I'll use the next days for some extra pages, and then a draft for chapter 3.
Have a nice week, everybody!

[Haspen]

Talk about forward, huh.

The little videogame-esque bonus panel is just icing on the cake.

Great read!

[Cathar]

N I C E
Awesome chapter, and awesome art. Your backgrounds are especially fantastic. Best of luck to slay the roc !

But go to horny jail

[voliol]

I don’t know who is more terrifying: the rocs, Icar, or the tavernkeep. The second chapter was a pleasure to read.

[King Zultan]

This is some top level art right here.

[TheFlame52]

Two chapters in one month? What a delight! I hope the pace keeps up until the end!

[HakuryuVision]

Do you guys know how to put a link to certain replies?
I can't put chapter 2 in my opening entry (exceeding 40000 letters), but i'd like to at least put a link to my last reply containing chapter 2 so that people don't have to scroll through the entire thread to find certain chapters.

Talk about forward, huh.

The little videogame-esque bonus panel is just icing on the cake.

Great read!

Thank you! : )
Pixeling that one took longer than coloring the title page and the page about mega beasts combined, no joke.

Here's the version without the fake VHS effect;

Looks more like a Gameboy Color game instead of a NES one that way.

N I C E
Awesome chapter, and awesome art. Your backgrounds are especially fantastic. Best of luck to slay the roc !

But go to horny jail

Awww, thanks!
My hand hurt so BADLY after all those backgrounds, and they take up so much friggin' time.
...but i admit looking at them afterwards feels really rewarding.

And hey, come on! I'm just being faithful to the game here!

I don’t know who is more terrifying: the rocs, Icar, or the tavernkeep. The second chapter was a pleasure to read.

This is some top level art right here.

Two chapters in one month? What a delight! I hope the pace keeps up until the end!

Thank you all for your kind words! : )

[voliol]

If you click on the yellow ”Re: whatever the thread name is” of the reply, you get linked to that certain reply, and you can then copy it from your address bar. (Or you could right-click the link to get the address that way)

The copied address should look like this: http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=177779.msg8240465#msg8240465 and then you use e.g.

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[url=http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=177779.msg8240465#msg8240465]Chapter 2[/url] to make it a prettier url of this kind:
Chapter 2

[HakuryuVision]

If you click on the yellow ”Re: whatever the thread name is” of the reply, you get linked to that certain reply, and you can then copy it from your address bar. (Or you could right-click the link to get the address that way)

The copied address should look like this: http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=177779.msg8240465#msg8240465 and then you use e.g.

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[url=http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=177779.msg8240465#msg8240465]Chapter 2[/url] to make it a prettier url of this kind:
Chapter 2

That is MUCH better!
Thank you, Voliol! : )

[HakuryuVision]

Some bonus pages for chapter 2;

Icar Copnutonec

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Lord Struslot, Testri, Buqui, and the Tavernkeep;

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[delphonso]

Gotta say, Lady Tunem and Strutsalot Struslot have a great style to their faces.

[rico6822]

I know this may be out of topic but maybe I can give you ideas for additional personality traits for your characters with this meme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i7Z5YEzTGfw

[Haspen]

Struslot looks like he is constantly at the verge of sneezing.

Maybe that's why he is so unfriendly? He wants to sneeze but just cannot get it out. It would make me grumpy and uncooperative as well!

[Rumrusher]

God got done reading this and the big reveal was 'oh yeah I check this character bio with dfhack' which means technically Icar could achieve their wish one way or another.


and having been the one who technically seen the result of inter-species Adventurer families uhh looking at this hybrid wolf child would probably Crash the game or well in 47.04 I don't know if that would be the case for 47.05 given what the werebreeding fix did to the game. also said issue could also be fixed with dfhack so uhh...

that pub scene in this comic got me thinking how many named items could one give to clear up the debt made for that pub I feel like 10 items would do it.