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Egan_BW

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Revenant
« on: December 08, 2020, 12:00:58 pm »

It has been eight centuries since the Fell Lord, Aieux, wrested all the great energies of undeath from the world and rose to his undeath. For eight centuries, the world feared him as a god, an immortal being who could appear anywhere with a host of dead soldiers, bent on conquering the world and being its king. Or failing that, to drag it into the abyss with him.
Until, that is, a band of brave heroes and adventurers, the Bright Junct, defeated the Fell Lord forever. After overcoming him body, they took his phylactery and cast it into Rending Light, releasing the undead energies contained within...

As for you, you know not of the Bright Junct or their deeds. You awake in a tight, dark space. Memories of your life and death swimming through your skull, if not your head. You may now be dead, but you never truly let go of life, never truly moved on.
And now, something has come to give you a second chance.

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[b]Age at Death:[/b]
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[b]Physical Description:[/b]
[b]Life and Death:[/b]

[b]Attributes:[/b] 3pts
[b]Determination:[/b] +0
[b]Observation:[/b] +0
[b]Influence:[/b] +0
[b]Strength:[/b] +0
[b]Agility:[/b] +0
[b]Manipulation:[/b] +0

[b]Skills:[/b] 8pts
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« Last Edit: November 01, 2021, 08:19:24 pm by Egan_BW »
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Re: Revenant
« Reply #1 on: December 08, 2020, 12:48:06 pm »

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Re: Revenant
« Reply #2 on: December 08, 2020, 12:49:48 pm »

Spoiler: Henric (click to show/hide)
« Last Edit: December 09, 2020, 05:53:05 am by NJW2000 »
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Re: Revenant
« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2020, 02:45:04 pm »

Spoiler: Tom Greenfield (click to show/hide)
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Re: Revenant
« Reply #4 on: December 08, 2020, 06:48:33 pm »

Spoiler: 666 (click to show/hide)
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« Last Edit: December 08, 2020, 06:54:45 pm by TricMagic »
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Re: Revenant
« Reply #5 on: December 09, 2020, 12:30:58 am »

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Re: Revenant
« Reply #6 on: December 09, 2020, 01:19:22 am »

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Re: Revenant
« Reply #7 on: December 09, 2020, 07:10:52 am »

I don't really understand your last two skills, Tric. Under what circumstances would your roll get the bonus from those skills? The last one looks more like a persistent magical effect that's been cast on you, rather than a skill.
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Re: Revenant
« Reply #8 on: December 09, 2020, 07:37:44 am »

Flavor.

Ancient Fire Magic and Ancient Language helps with learning new magic. Apart, it's fire magic and language.
Ancient Purpose: Father falls under Determination, when someone tries to reduce her motivation to live/kill. As well as basic negotiation.
Ancient Numerology: Curse of the Unending doesn't actually give roll boosts, but augments the other skills, which has already been reflected. It could be reflected as giving a bonus against exorcism though. It being a magical effect is what I was going for.(And I had the extra point, so tying in a backstory element.)
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Re: Revenant
« Reply #9 on: December 09, 2020, 06:55:02 pm »

Name: Logan Nightingale
Morphology: Artificial Primordial Vampire (Primordial vampires are the Ancestors of all other vampires.)
Age at Death: 7800 Years old
Years Dead: 800
Physical Description: A young man with blood red eyes and inky black hair, He has short fangs coming out of his mouth and seems to radiate power and bloodlust. He is wearing a tuxedo and had no heartbeat and was deathly pale. The only sign he was even dead was the fact he was in a graveyard.
Life and Death: A great and powerful sorcerer was experimenting with the heart of a powerful vampire he had found and was trying to create a powerful slave that was completely obedient using a creation ritual.
Everything was going well and the sorcerer had become arrogant and foolish and made a mistake in the casting of the spell, The sorcerer was absorbed into the heart and the spell had created a powerful vampire using the heart of a vampire and the body of a sorcerer. When Logan came into existence he was extremely confused and a town that was close to where the wizard lived had taken him in due to him having nowhere to go. However Logan could not suppress his vampire instincts and went rapid killing all of the town, Logan became insane due to killing a entire town and his life after that consisted of kill, blood and magic. Due to having to kill so many people to feed, A powerful hero killed Logan and put his body into a common grave. Logan’s spirit was furious! He could not believe the audacity of that hero! Thoughts of such hatred kept Logan’s spirit alive due to extremely strong emotions and a lack of wanting to die.
Attributes:
Determination: +1
Observation: -1
Influence: +1
Strength : -2
Agility: +0
Manipulation: +2
Skills:
Blood Magic: +3, The Ancient art of manipulating blood and bone, Masters of this art are able to give a person a heart attack with a mere thought and boil their blood at the same time, A particular evil use of this magic is its ability to make other people’s bodys turn on them by manipulating their cells and flesh to make them like a puppet. It however only works on the physical body and can’t control the persons mind. Also particularly strong willed people are able to break out of this manipulation.
Mind Magic: +2, The magic of the mind, It gives a experienced enough practitioner the Ablilty to read minds and plant suggestions in the heads of others. However it is very exhausting to use this magic so don’t expect to be using this all the time, Because that’s a good way to die of exhaustion.


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Re: Revenant
« Reply #10 on: December 09, 2020, 11:14:07 pm »

Spoiler: Bird (click to show/hide)
« Last Edit: December 10, 2020, 12:48:51 am by Devastator »
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Revenant
« Reply #11 on: December 10, 2020, 01:13:38 am »

The year is 1005, late autumn. Less than a decade ago, people celebrated the pass of the new millennium. Those who cared, at least.
In this era, life is tough for many. The threat of undead attack has only slowly risen over the past eight centuries, as the Fell Lord grew more powerful. In this time, fear and violence has caused the loss of many technologies both mundane and magical.
Perhaps, once word of the Fell Lord's defeat spreads, many will take time to celebrate the end of an era of darkness.

But for many more, things will get worse before they get better. Already, energies once chained and sworn to the Fell Lord's cause are wild and free.



Well over six hundred years ago, in the fourth century, there was once a mighty empire. And its capital was here, Aldam City. Although now only ruins of the city remains, and this place is now but a small village, the graveyard is far older than the surrounding village.
The Aldam Empire fell in 339. Revolutionaries who protested at the royal way of life, who believed that the ruling class's study of magic had brought them further from the gods, overpowered the state and instituted their own theocracy. When the old king saw them breaking into his palace, in desperation he poisoned and cursed himself and his family.

Found dead, the royal family were unceremoniously buried in a mass grave along with many others. There, their corpses slowly rotted away to nothing, all except Tiim.
She awakes now, in the dark earth. For her, it feels as though no time has passed at all. Some residual force of the curse rips her upwards, out of the ground, where she meets the world...



The same day that Tiim died, those Aldamian revolutionaries raided many other buildings, including a museum holding a strange, unique skeleton. Perhaps the only reminder of the existence of Lamia in the entire world, in the form of a magically preserved skeleton. While in earlier times many such skeletons were fought and destroyed in fights against Aieux, this one was found simply inert.
The revolutionaries, disgusted that the remains were grotesquely displayed in a public place, stole the skeleton and laid it to rest, hoping that it would help the Lamia's soul move on.

But it didn't. It still remains, trapped. She had died alone and in pain, the last of her kind. In a prior era, she would have risen and become a vengeful revenant soon after dying. But instead, she was simply trapped, asleep in her own corpse, to await her time.
Mrush'shalva wakes up, as if from an unimaginably long sleep. She feels the earth, pushing down on her from every direction. Fearing suffocation, she pushes upwards, uncoiling her tail and breaking out into the cool air. Every one of her bones feels freezing, unbearably cold.



To be continued...
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« Reply #12 on: December 10, 2020, 05:00:41 am »

At the time of Henric's death, around the beginning of the sixth century, the theocratic government founded in the ashes of Aldam were still around. They called themselves the Rightful Authority, though barely anybody else did, as the people resented their overzealousness.
In those times, the Fell Lord was growing stronger, but the extent of his power wasn't known by most. Unprepared, the Rightful Authority was swiftly dismembered by his attacks, leaving only scattered, independent kingdoms.
It was around this time that a new religion was founded, Lightism, worshipping Mar, the god of destruction, as a savior. Though in the eyes of the ancients Mar was a force to be feared and hated, this new religion spread quickly on account of the fact that the undead are weak to Mar's Rending Light.

…Little of this is important to Henric's story, however. It could be said that he never came within a hundred miles of history, for he didn't care to pursue great deeds or be remembered after his death. In fact, one reading this story might be confused as to why he felt the need to return as an undead. Perhaps the idea of moving on simply hadn't occurred to him.
He climbs now out of the earth. The lid of his coffin wasn't enough to stop him, and he didn't particularly want to stay in it, after all.



Tom Greenfield was born to a period of surprising stability in the seventh century, under the Kingdom of Ryere, which still stands to this day. Sure, the Fell Lord was by then already at the peak of his power, but by then fighting his armies had become simply another inevitable fact of life, just the same as rainstorms, or winter, or death itself. Faith in the Rending Light was enough to survive on, and so people did, and prospered even while fearing the God of the Undead, who could appear at any time and wipe settlements off the face of the earth.
Of course, even with hope and acceptance, many were murdered by the Fell Lord, Tom was one of them.

He now pushes on the lid of his coffin, to be free and live again. Yet, he lacks the strength to climb out of his grave, just yet...



Coincidentally, a small bird died in this very graveyard, just a few days past. Stuck by a stray blast of necromantic energies in what may have been one of the final battles in the war against Aieux. The bird lay there, below the care of the mostly human residents of the village, just another dead thing.

And while the writer might joke that Henric was just too dumb to move on and avoid becoming a revenant, that is absolutely certainly the case for the bird.



To be more-continued!
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« Reply #13 on: December 10, 2020, 07:30:44 am »

Tom

Tom reflects on his current situation. It would seem that he's stuck. He doesn't exactly remember how he might have wound up buried inside of a coffin, yet that does seem to be what's happened. On the bright side he doesn't seem to be suffocating or anything.
Still, simply pushing on the coffin lid won't work, Tom isn't strong enough! He'll have to think of something else, or alternatively adjust to his new existance living inside of a small box for the rest of eternity.


Henric

Henric has no trouble pushing his way out of the box. He emerges into the night air, the first thing he sees being the beautiful full moon and a sky full of stars.
Less aesthetically pleasing are the mobs of corpses and skeletons presently clawing their way out of the ground. Hmm, that might be a problem. Henric scratches his head. His fingers feel odd.
Henric checks his hands, maybe they're covered in something. Instead, he sees that his hands are skeletal. Henric is no fool, and he knows this can only mean one of two things: either he's dead, or become see-through somehow.
Among the crowd of dead, Henric notices a little girl who he would almost assume to be still living as well as... some kind of four-armed skeleton with a long snake body?


Bird

The bird feels a sudden rush flow through its little skull, which is strange because it really shouldn't be in any shape to be feeling anything. The voices, they shout at the bird, tell it to get back up. So it does.
Good, the voices say. Fuck you, the bird replies. Caw! Caw! Get out of my head, mother-fuckers! And so the voices dissipate, leaving the bird alone in its own dead skull.
However, it would seem that whatever was just inside of the bird's mind left some luggage behind, because it suddenly starts thinking more clearly. Strange magical forms impose themselves upon the bird's mind, giving it what it supposes are new abilities. Useful!
There are a number of deceased humans stumbling about here, but most of them seem even dumber than the bird. The most interesting ones are the little girl in perfectly perserved ancient clothing, and the lamia skeleton. Not that the bird knows what either of those are, but it knows that they're interesting!


Tiim

Tiim surveys the night. How did she get here? What is this place? The last thing she remembers is eating a meal with her family. Everything was going to be fine. So why this?
Many undead stumble around the graveyard. Tiim knows what they are; servants of the Dread Lord. Yet, for some unknowable reason in her guts, she doesn't feel afraid of them. They feel like... kin?
She notices the skeleton of a snake-person. What were they called? Lama? She had seen a skeleton just like this before, in the museum. And illustrations of similar ones in her history books, accounts of old battles against Aiuex.


Shalva

Shalva shivers, feeling cold to her bones. This place is unfamiliar to her, so unlike the desert where she grew up. There are trees out there, barely visible in the moonlight.
She rubs her hands together, hoping to warm them up, but...
Just bones. That's all that's left. How... how did this...





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Re: Revenant
« Reply #14 on: December 10, 2020, 07:56:23 am »

Henric, after spending some time considering the evidence, comes to a deeper understanding of his situation with the aid of syllogism.

            1. Henric can put his hands inside his own ribs.
            2. Nothing living can survive having a large object lodged in its ribcage
            3. Henric is not alive
            4. Anyone not alive is dead
            5. Henric is dead

Having arrived at this important fact, he spends some time disentangling his phalanges from his ribs, and tries to remember what he was meant to do next.

Learn about magic.

Oh, right.

Henric walks over to the four-armed snake-person skeleton, and stands at a discreet distance, arms by his sides, feet widely planted, waiting for something to happen or for someone to tell him what to do.
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