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[KittyTac]

Did I format my action properly?

[crazyabe]

Did I format my action properly?

player will be the GM of their own little world, which their own character is forbidden to interact with.

underlined the Important part.

[Supernerd]

You can't have your own character interact with your own world. I'll make that line in the first post a bit more clear so that we don't have this problem again. (Its like tile co-ordinates all over again)

I would also strongly recommend having a lot more content in your action posts so that the GM of the respective world actually has something to work with. (Although you wouldn't have much information on the first post due to not being familiar with the local geography of the world, so the entry post can be pretty light.)

[KittyTac]

Is just looking around considered interacting? You're not affecting anything in the world. The wording is a bit vague.

[TricMagic]

Spoiler: Elysium Lost- Elysia (click to show/hide)

Name: Elysia
Abilities
(60)World Order-Ether of Thyself: Elysia is a being of Ether, Thought. No matter the rules of the world, all Ether abilities can be used. She can spread Ether into a world through clouds, mist, and water systems. This ether tends to convert matter to itself. Elysia can turn her Thought to Law upon the Ether.
(100)XenoBlade- The Blade Which Cuts All Thought. The symbol upon it's Dias tells which ability is being used. This blade turns matter to Pure Ether before itself, formless.
(60)読Ether Prediction-Reading: When a powerful or special ability is used against the wielder, the user of the Xenoblade learns of the event beforehand. The user of this ability can also predict the movement and actions of beings caught in Ether, with perfect accuracy. This Ability is learned from the Xenoblade, and not a part of it's cycles.
(10)斬Monado Art-Slash/Cut/Slice: Normally, the blade of the Xenoblade is formed of ether, which can be extended in combat. This Art brings that to the next level. The Blade Becomes a Cylinder of ether which means to cut, destroying all in it's path, before blasting outward in the direction it's moved.
(10)盾Monado Art-Shield: A sphere of Ether meaning Shield forms around allies and yourself. This completely negates attacks directed toward the person inside for a short time.
(10)轟Monado Art-Roar/Thunder: A shockwave blasts every enemy nearby off their feet, or out of the Air.
(10)機Monado Art-Machine: Despite the name, this simply gives allied weapons the effect of the Monado's cutting edge.
(10)疾Monado Art-Swift: Greatly speeds the perception and movement of the user and their allies.
(10)破Monado Art-Break/Destroy: This Art destroys everything around it's user, reconstructing itself as ether. It also has the effect of completely destroying, negating, and nullifying Auras and Constructs for a limited time, and stopping/undoing forced transformation. Does not affect Xenoblade Arts themselves.
(10)鎧Monado Art-Armor: Enchants the target(s) with the meaning of Armor, greatly reducing damage taken.
(10)喰Monado Art-Eat/Devour: Any target has their ether eaten away, within the minute. Can also be used as a projectile attack that explodes on contact in a sphere. Does not affect the user or their allies.

Perk Themes:
Ether- Ether is the energy of thought. It's only form is based upon the thought placed upon it. Water becomes Water Ether for example, and Light, Light Ether.
Conduit-The creation of the world, Creation and Dimension. Energy in it's purest form.
Self and the Soul- The Soul is shaped by the Body, and the Body shapes the mind. The Mind affects the body, and upholds the form of the Soul.
Transformation of Thy Life-The change that occurs over one's lifespan.

Appearance: Long White hair and a petite form. Eyes as green as fresh leaves and morning dew.

History-World not yet named.

[waits for SuperGM to show up]

[Screech9791]

Spoiler: Gilbert (click to show/hide)

Name: Gilbert
Abilities:
Cryovenom (50): Gilbert's fangs and claws have some form of venom-liquid nitrogen hybrid chemical in them similar to a snake's fangs, which can kill via simultaneous freezing and poisoning.
Cryomagnetic Roar (100): Gilbert can roar with extreme force and is able to coat things roared at with ice shards impaled into them, and can also knock out electronic-based objects.
Frosty Step (50): Gilbert can freeze the ground below him when he walks, especially to the point of cooling lava so it's safe to walk on.
Ice Shield (50): Gilbert can quickly freeze the water vapour in the air around him into ice to provide protection from attacks.
Ice Clones (50): Gilbert can create ice sabertooth tiger-constructs which have the same powers of Gilbert himself but physically about the strength of an ordinary sabertooth tiger, but they can't create ice clones.
Perk Themes: Ice and felines
Appearance: Picture a white sabertooth tiger with dark cyan stripes, ice fangs and claws, and frosted fur. Size-wise, he's about that of a house.

[TricMagic]

And here I yet wait...

[Supernerd]

Having anything to do with your world after its creation is not allowed. Even existing there and looking around is a no. You also cannot observe it from another world; you are completely cut off. The whole reason that the characters of this game lost their god status is that they are no longer connected to their place of power. I have updated the first post yet again to clarify things even more.

Ok, with that little rant out of the way it is now time to review some character applications!

Spoiler: Elysia (click to show/hide)

(60)World Order-Ether of Thyself: The purpose of this ability appears to sort of "Corrupt" an area to better suit your character. I do not know what "Thought to Law" is supposed to mean so you will need to clarify this.
(100)XenoBlade: This ability does not make sense to me. My best guess is that its some kind of antimatter sword kind of like a lightsaber?
(60)読Ether Prediction-Reading: This ability seems to basically protect you from attacks that take place in your "Ether" zone created by other abilities, which can be used even if you are disarmed. This would be a major hassle in any PVP scenario, but otherwise fine.
(10)斬Monado Art-Slash/Cut/Slice: Basically a thing that makes your special sword longer. Ok.
(10)盾Monado Art-Shield: For just 10 points, this shield will not hold up against powerful attacks.
(10)轟Monado Art-Roar/Thunder: A shockwave attack. Ok. Though for only 10 points it will seldom be lethal.
(10)機Monado Art-Machine: I understand that this skill applies the XenoBlade's inherent special-ness to other weapons, but I don't really understand the XenoBlade's power itself.
(10)疾Monado Art-Swift: It would work as intended, but for only 10 points and an area of effect it wouldn't be a particularly extreme effect.
(10)破Monado Art-Break/Destroy: It works, but again I must point out that for only 10 points, powerful enemies and special materials will be able to resist this one.
(10)鎧Monado Art-Armor: The wording of this ability implies that it will reduce harm, but not eliminate it completely.
(10)喰Monado Art-Eat/Devour: Ok. Whether or not any of your enemies would have Ether in them or be able to utilize it for anything would depend on the world's GM.

I suspect that this character may be based off a copyrighted franchise. I don't like it when players do that. Not rejecting it based on that alone though.

However, you will need to better explain some of the above abilities. Also, I have yet to get a world submission from you.

And... Now the other one.

Spoiler: Gilbert (click to show/hide)

Cryovenom (50): Looks ok.
Cryomagnetic Roar (100): It sounds like your roar can do two things, and you can choose to just do one or the other. This ability seems like it could work just fine for much less than 100 points.
Frosty Step (50): Looks ok. 50 points is probably enough to also use it offensively.
Ice Shield (50): This one is actually pretty good.
Ice Clones (50): The abilities of your clones would be weaker than the main Gilbert, but still pretty strong.

Isn't one cat demigod of questionable quality enough? That was a joke. I saw this coming a mile away. I still dislike the unoriginality, but I already made it clear that is not in and of itself grounds for dismissal.

The character should be fine, though you may want to tweak it a bit. I'll be sending another PM to discuss the world.

[Screech9791]

Spoiler: Gilbert (click to show/hide)

Cryovenom (50): Looks ok.
Cryomagnetic Roar (100): It sounds like your roar can do two things, and you can choose to just do one or the other. This ability seems like it could work just fine for much less than 100 points.
Frosty Step (50): Looks ok. 50 points is probably enough to also use it offensively.
Ice Shield (50): This one is actually pretty good.
Ice Clones (50): The abilities of your clones would be weaker than the main Gilbert, but still pretty strong.

Isn't one cat demigod of questionable quality enough? That was a joke. I saw this coming a mile away. I still dislike the unoriginality, but I already made it clear that is not in and of itself grounds for dismissal.

The character should be fine, though you may want to tweak it a bit. I'll be sending another PM to discuss the world.

So, I can just reduce the cost of Cyromagnetic Roar and spend the extra points on something else?

[Supernerd]

Yes. It will reduce the roar's effectiveness in proportion to the reduced power, but it should still be effective on any normal electronics.

[TricMagic]

To be fair, it's not like that weapon is locked to one part of it. Creative license.

And none of them are very extreme to start with.


Ether is by definition of Fate/, a kind of formless True-Neutral energy. It's actually the energy of thought.
In this case, the concept of water, applied to ether, turns it to water ether.

Kinda a double-state, Concept applies to all ether. So transformed things are the same except for being made of ether.


As for the weapon, Xenoblade. It's edge is made of ether, and turns what is before it formless, if only for an instant before it's overwritten. That instant however, is enough to effectively remove what it cuts, so a Lightsaber without heat would be a good analogy.

It's also tied to every one of those Monado Arts. As for your understanding of them, everything is correct.

Not surprisingly, More Ether around=Stronger effects. And Eat/Devour doesn't even work if the enemy hasn't been converted to ether by Break/Destroy.

Will send world PM tomorrow then.


"Thought to Law" When the area is completely overwritten by ether, I can change the natural state of things by overruling the Concept of Ether-materials. If it doesn't have a soul, it can be changed. Ether=Thought
This takes a long long time though, so it's not immediately ready. Just something more to do with being a demi-goddess.

For all that skill is corruption, all it does is change things to an ether state.


Ether Zone is also the right description. Hopefully I survive long enough to reach a portion of my old strength.

[Screech9791]

Edited Sheet:

Spoiler: Gilbert (click to show/hide)

Name: Gilbert
Abilities:
Cryovenom (50): Gilbert's fangs and claws have some form of venom-liquid nitrogen hybrid chemical in them similar to a snake's fangs, which can kill via simultaneous freezing and poisoning.
Cryomagnetic Roar (70): Gilbert can roar with extreme force and is able to coat things roared at with ice shards impaled into them, and can also knock out electronic-based objects.
Frosty Step (50): Gilbert can freeze the ground below him when he walks, especially to the point of cooling lava so it's safe to walk on.
Ice Shield (50): Gilbert can quickly freeze the water vapour in the air around him into ice to provide protection from attacks.
Ice Clones (50): Gilbert can create ice sabertooth tiger-constructs which have the same powers of Gilbert himself but physically about the strength of an ordinary sabertooth tiger, but they can't create ice clones.
Flight (30): Self explanatory. Speed is roughly that of an eagle.
Perk Themes: Ice and felines
Appearance: Picture a white sabertooth tiger with dark cyan stripes, ice fangs and claws, and frosted fur. Size-wise, he's about that of a house.

All I did was cut 30 points off of Cyromagnetic Roar for the ability to fly.

[TricMagic]

Of course the cats are flying..

[Screech9791]

Of course the cats are flying..

They aren't sharks though. Land sharks would be scary, and even more so with flying ones.

[Supernerd]

Ok I guess? If you don't mind being accused of ripping off Felius I guess I can allow it.