The Liir, I think.
PS: You're going to want to join the Discord, if only to see the artwork.
E; which I just realised is not linked to from the core thread. Here's the link:
https://discord.gg/9tNn2Fb###RIDICULOUS EDIT###
I finished the story below over a year after the last update. I didn't want to bump the core thread to share it, but it is easier to read in a forum post, so I've edited it into this old post.
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CARLP.CARL was defective, by Hiver standards. But CARL preferred to think of himself as
different. He had assigned himself the name CARL- Casts Away Ridiculous Laws-, even though such a nickname could only be granted by a Queen, and if he ever shared the name, he would probably be terminated immediately. His 'real' name was [P.1984.2.2.1.2(...)].
He was a prince of the [Forge Tender] lineage. The colony to which he was unfortunately shackled had an official designation (COL-FT-N84.16|E43.17-01), but was more commonly known as [Frozen Forge], due to being situated in the far north of Regalis, in one of the polar canyons, which (due to the planet's lack of significant orbital tilt) received almost no sunlight. In fact, the temperature in the canyon only rose above freezing during the hottest time of the year. Of course, the majority of the colony was underground, heated by nuclear reactors, and so few had to suffer the cold weather (something Hivers did not particularly enjoy). Unfortunately for CARL, he was one of the unlucky few who did.
Despite the remote location and harsh environment, the colony was of considerable size, boasting a population of around 950,000. There were extensive mining operations, augmented by three vassalized [Deep] colonies, as a wealth of minerals sat beneath the frigid surface. Processing the subterranean bounty was [Frozen Forge]'s main industry, and one that ensured the Queen was a powerful voice in the [Council], as a not-insignificant portion of Regalis relied on her exports.
CARL had nothing to do with that. CARL was a surface-operations overseer. The [Frozen Forge] had little to do on the surface, but not nothing. Ventilation shafts dotted the canyon walls, and those needed to be kept ice-free. Most of the inter-colony transport happened via underground tunnels, but a three-lane magway existed above ground, and that needed frequent maintenance. Hunting parties would occasionally be sent out, to reap what little animal life lived in the frozen hellscape, to be thrown into the meat grinders.
Today, CARL was to inspect a supply depot located almost in the middle of the canyon. There was no magway leading to the depot, no tunnels- getting there meant riding a tracked vehicle designed to cross the ice and snow safely. Which it was capable of doing, in theory. Today, however, there was a blizzard. CARL (whose vision was not great at the best of times) could barely see a few meters through the storm. The vehicle had no cabin, and despite being wrapped in gear designed for the weather, he could feel the cold sinking into his carapace.
Nevertheless, CARL was happy. For the weather provided an excellent excuse. The princess responsible for managing CARL and his fellow surface-operations overseers was not interested in braving the storm, so she relied on long-range psionics to keep in touch with her underlings; a much less effective way of communicating, which let CARL provide short, detail-poor reports- when she even bothered to ask for one. His last report had stated, honestly, that the blizzard was severely hindering progress, and that he would be delayed. He added, again honestly, that he expected to be back at base in six hours.
What he did not mention was that getting to the depot and back would likely only take four hours.
It was almost precisely midday when CARL reached the depot, which meant that the sky was merely dim, as opposed to completely dark. He could just make out the ramshackle structure through the snow, and noted with some relief that the entrance to the garage was not covered by a snowdrift (he had arrived here several times before to find that the drones had failed to clear the snow, and had to dig his way in).
He parked the vehicle, closed the door, and made his way into the depot interior. Six drones acknowledged him, and provided reports. He made a point to remember their contents, lest he be asked about it later, but did not make much effort to consider them. The structure was still standing, the interior was not freezing, and nobody had visited it since he was last here two weeks ago. That was all that mattered.
He ordered the drones back to work, took a key from his belt, and unlocked the secret trapdoor that gave access to his 'workshop', a cramped & cluttered cave beneath the depot, carefully excavated over many months.
It was not much, but this was where he was constructing a key element of his plan.
Two hours later, CARL emerged from the workshop, closed it up, and carefully partitioned the knowledge of his contraption within his mind, such that it would never be in his thoughts (except whilst working on the project). For all intents and purposes, CARL, at this point, did not himself know exactly what he was building. And so neither would his supervisor. Nor the Inquisitor who occasionally interrogated him and his colleagues; whilst she might've been able to dig it up with enough effort, she never spent enough time rooting through his thoughts to detect its presence- after all, CARL was a harmless idiot. Whenever he took an intelligence test, he always scored
just enough to avoid being recycled. In a smaller colony, someone might've become suspicious at how perfectly mediocre he appeared to be- but [Frozen Forge] had thousands of princes, and more important things to worry about.
CARL directed the drones manning the depot to clear the snow that had accumulated against the garage door, then left them with the standard instructions (maintain the depot, note irregularities, keep the garage entrance clear) and set off into the blizzard.
Psionic messages bounced around the colony. In one as large and populous as [Frozen Forge], it was almost impossible to keep track of, even for the Queen. This was a concerning situation to [PS.31.2.1.1.3(...)], Chief Inquisitor of the colony, as it meant that coded messages could be mixed in amongst the cacophony, without her knowing. There were, of course, plenty of coded messages that were mixed in with her knowing- she had several informants and faux-rebels under her command, in an effort to catch signs of dissent amongst the princes and princesses of the colony.
And, sure, she regularly uncovered princes who were dangerously displeased with their lot and had begun to plot against the colony. The occasional princess with suspicious motives too. Despite this, she worried. PS.31 was not a native to the [Frozen Forge]. She had worked as an inquisitor in two previous colonies before being sent here, and based on this she knew that a colony this large should be experiencing higher levels of disruption than she was uncovering. There were two possible explanations: either something about the [Frozen Forge] reduced occurrences of treacherous thoughts, or there was an uprising in the works that she knew nothing about. She had raised her concerns with the Queen, but had been ignored. "Those other Queens must have been worse at handling their subjects", was the response.
But [PS.31] strongly suspected it was the latter. She knew for a fact that [Q.2.2.1.2(...)] was not as good at detecting treachery as she thought. After all, the Queen showed no signs of suspecting her of being remotely disloyal, despite the fact that she fully intended to usurp the throne within two years. The plan, supported by her mother (Queen of a smaller, less prestigious [Forge Tender] colony) was progressing smoothly. She had built up stockpiles of weaponry and supplies in secret caches near the colony, which would allow her mother's troops to besiege it. She had brainwashed a significant number of princes during interrogation sessions, subtly indoctrinating them into following her- so subtly that even the princes themselves didn't know about it. She had cunningly built up connections with other princesses in the colony, such that most of them owed her a favour or two, and several would be willing to join her in open battle, should it come to that. Not that [PS.31] intended for it to come to that- when the day finally came, she hoped that [Q.2.2.1.2(...)] would recognise the checkmate and step down peacefully.
Of course, an unexpected uprising could ruin her best-laid plans. Which was why she was so concerned, and so frustrated that the Queen would not assign her the extra resources needed to do an intensive interrogation of all princes in the colony.
She made an exasperated chitter, and slid a psimat disk (containing a record of interrogations by a junior Inquisitor) into her playback device. She skimmed through the disk- dozens of quick interrogations, none of them tagged with importance. She briefly considered the case of [P.2202], whose frustration with his supervisor's cruelty was mounting, but the junior Inquisitor had tagged the report as [subject.terminated], indicating that [P.2202] was no longer a going concern. The playback device continued on to the next report, which regarded [P.1984] and was the shortest, blandest report she had ever experienced. She shut the device off and turned her attention to an incoming message from smelting district 14, where several drones had suffered mental breakdowns. It was probably just a result of overwork, but could also be a sign of mental disease, and would therefore have to be investigated.
Months passed. News reached the colony of a great battle taking place far away. CARL and his fellow princes were informed that the battle was a glorious victory. CARL, however, was sceptical, considering the rather hasty orders to increase production. Many of his fellow princes found themselves working extra shifts in the mines and foundries, and CARL found himself with a rather tricky request to harvest more edible material from the surface. He would've pointed out that the surface didn't
have more edible material to harvest, but that wouldn't fit his role as a borderline mindless prince. So he dutifully took a number of drones on a hunting expedition, relishing the summer sun, which warmed the air to a sizzling 7 degrees Celsius.
A temporarily ice-free lake was his nominal destination, which had in the past been found to contain aquatic lifeforms. He led his hunting party to the lake, set the drones to work on their inflatable dingies, and then sent a report to his supervisor, informing her that he had reached the lake and was now going to procure hunting supplies from a depot. He received a cursory acknowledgement- his supervisor had likewise more on her plate than usual, and was too busy to pay much attention to a mundane hunting party.
CARL sent a drone to deliver supplies to the lake, whilst he entered his workshop. As he crawled into the cramped space, he unlocked his memories, and was overcome with excitement. The device was almost complete. Tarnished psimat, a rusty steel frame, a mish-mash of wires, makeshift circuitry, and the battered power siphon of a broken down magcar- all carefully collected from discarded machinery, smuggled to the depot, and restored to somewhat working condition over the years... it would only hold up for a few seconds before something broke, CARL knew, but a few seconds would be enough. A few minor adjustments, and he would only have to worry about transporting it back to the colony without raising suspicion.
[PS.31] was having a bad day. The news from Oscar had shaken everyone. The idea of a Queen being
executed (by
animals, no less) was haunting, though [PS.31] was slightly more worried about keeping the news from getting out- it would be bad for prince morale, so an information quarantine was imposed. However, that was a secondary concern compared to the fact that the colony was now busier than ever. On the one hand, it was less time for princes and princesses to plot; on the other, the harsher work schedules had already started to cause resentment to build in numerous princes. On a third hand, the longer hours were also affecting drones, whose mental health was suffering. They were not at risk of causing trouble deliberately, but poor mental health was of great concern in a psionic society, where insanity could literally be contagious. Keeping drones sane fell under her department, and so she and her underlings were having to work extra shifts, just like everyone else.
She skimmed through interrogation reports, distributed orders and advice to the eleven junior Inquisitors, received and filed reports from princes monitoring drone health, all while trying to keep coup preparations on track.
A message from [PS.154.2.2.1.2(...)], an overseer of surface operations. Apparently, one of her princes- [P.1984.2.2.1.2(...)]- had delivered an unusual report about a depot being damaged, and she thought it might be worth investigating whether he had engaged in sabotage. [PS.31] sent back a reply stating that she would add it to the list, but that damaged surface depots were not a high priority at the moment.
CARL had, honestly, informed his supervisor that he was transporting the contents of the destroyed depot back to the colony. She had not actually ordered him to do so, but she didn't order him to stop. CARL drove the transport to an entrance, where a magtruck was waiting to bring the rubble to Recycling. CARL wordlessly jumped into the truck before it left, at this point no longer sending reports to his supervisor. A few minutes later, the truck pulled up at Recycling. The prince there to receive the delivery gave CARL a subtle sign of acknowledgement- one of several collaborators, he knew almost nothing of CARL's plan, but knew enough to do his part in it. The rubble was duly sorted and distributed by drones, with only CARL's contraption remaining. The other prince ordered a pair of drones to carry it to a nearby power junction, which they did without question. At said power junction, yet another prince (responsible for performing maintenance checks) opened the access panel, exposing a major power conduit. The two drones dutifully set the contraption down, and connected the power siphon to the conduit- dying almost instantly from electrocution.
The contraption lit up. Status lights- green. Power- plentiful. Broadcast- ready. CARL opened a panel, exposing a big red button.
CARL pushed the button.
The throne room was unusually busy. Seven princesses stood before [Q.2.2.1.2(...)]- the heads of all major departments: Mining, Forging, Construction, Food, Military, Research, and Inquisition. Three of the others were either on [PS.31.2.1.1.3(...)]'s side, or would likely remain neutral when she launched her coup, though Military was not one of them, which was a problem.
{The [Council] has announced increased taxes}, the Queen announced.
{Again? We cannot increase production much more. The [Deep] are at their limits already}, Mining responded.
{Agreed. Even with an increase in available ores, the foundries have reached 110% capacity- drone malfunctions are already commonplace}, Forging added.
{The [Council] is resolute. Production must be increased. Expand the foundry district, and increase the [Deep]'s quota}, said the Queen.
{I will need 10000 drones to organise construction in time}, Construction said. {On top of the 15000 I need for maintenance purposes}, she added, the message tagged with <emphasis> and <exasperation>. [PS.31] sent a subtle message to Construction reminding her to remain composed.
{The colony cannot support 25000 more drones. Last month we had to reduce alms to the [Deep] just to feed ourselves. Our import capacity cannot keep up}, Food said.
{Then take drones from other departments. Research, surrender 5000 drones to Construction. Military, surrender 15000 drones to Construction}, the Queen responded, the message tagged with <absolute.order>.
Nevertheless, Military spoke up. {Security of the outer sections is already compromised. To surrender 15000 drones would put the colony at serious risk}
The Queen said nothing, but exuded <irritation>. Military backed down. [PS.31] made a mental note to speak to Military after the meeting- perhaps there was room to work there after all.
{Iquisition. You will ensure the [Deep] remain compliant. Two inquisitors to each colony}, the Queen said, once she was satisfied that Military would obey orders.
[PS.31] started to respond. {I must emphasise that insurrection potential is especially high with a reduced military pre[tag[tag[tag[tag[tag- her message was cut off midway by a massive psionic roar that swept through the throne room. For a brief moment, [PS.31] thought it had come from the Queen, but she appeared equally shaken by it. [PS.31] did not have more time to think about it, because she was struck by an intense headache that blotted out her thoughts. Her vision swam, and she stumbled, as echoes of the roar bounced around her head. She was an expert at mental manipulation, and instantly recognised what was happening. It was a memetic discordant assault, designed to interfere with the proper operation of her psionic awareness. This would be bad enough, but the memetic nature was intended to cause the recipient to replicate it and broadcast it themselves. Naturally, her mental defences were too strong to buckle in the face of such a thing, but she was an Inquisitor- other princesses would be weaker to the effects, and princes and drones would be weaker still.
She recovered in under two seconds, having erected a mental filter that blocked out the MDA. She immediately sent requests for feedback to all her Inquisitors. She did not have to wait long. All of them reported the same thing happening. Drones were breaking down across the colony, princes were going mad, and princesses were too shaken to react intelligently.
She shared the structure of her mental filter with the other department heads. Some of them had managed to erect filters themselves already, but she received <gratitude> from those who had not. The Queen acknowledged reception of the filter, and went into a trance as she sent it out to permeate the entire psionic collective. It would be picked up by those who were not totally broken, allowing them to return to sanity. However, by the reports she was getting, [PS.31] knew that would not be enough. Thousands of drones were out of action, probably for good, and hundreds of princes had stopped responding to messages. In fact... yes, she was getting reports that some princes had severed themselves from the psionic collective.
That could only mean one thing: it was a prince uprising. A very well planned prince uprising.
The sounds of battle filled the [Frozen Forge]. Drones, minds rattled, followed orders to fight without stopping to consider who was giving the orders, and while their orders could be overridden, anyone who wanted to try that would have to make their way through a hail of laser fire just to get close enough. CARL watched the fight on security screens- capturing a security hub had been his first priority, and the dead princess behind him had been too rattled to react in time to her sergeants suddenly turning their laser pistols on her. CARL himself was not fighting. Such crass activity was beneath him, now that he was the master of the colony.
CARL chittered with satisfaction as a thermal grenade took out a princess-general who had been defending the secondary armoury. With its contents under his control, the war was all but decided (control over the primary armoury had already been established). Every second, more princes defected to his side, and soon the princesses would be all alone.
An urgent message from one of his generals snapped him out of his self-congratulation. He switched displays to try and locate the source of the panic. It didn't take him long. A swarm of warrior drones was attacking a security checkpoint- from behind. That his forces had been encircled would be worrisome enough, but the security checkpoint in question was on the edge of the colony. The only thing behind it was a long, long inter-colony tunnel.
CARL sent orders to another general to reinforce the checkpoint, but soon received another urgent message, from yet another outwards-facing checkpoint on the other side of the colony. Another message- attackers coming up through unused mineshafts. Another message- a request for reinforcements to face loyalist forces regrouping in the royal district. Another message- another message- another message... the messages began to blur together; CARL could not keep up. He issued an order to all his generals to use discretion and fall back if necessary, then took a moment to gather his thoughts. He would not be overwhelmed, not now, not when he was so close to victory.
He considered the situation. Outside forces. Reinforcements? Too quick. Invaders? Not enough to face the entire colony. A coup- yes, that would make sense. Stationed just outside the colony by a traitor, ready to support an uprising. Who? There were many princesses, but who had the means and motive to launch a coup?
He scanned a map of the colony. Resistance was mainly focused around the royal district, but there were pockets elsewhere. Nutrient Vats; Mining Hub C; Logistics Hub B; Inquisition. Inquisition. The princess in charge was not native. She was in charge of rooting out traitors- the perfect job for a traitor. CARL tried to find a general who could lead an attack on the Inquisition department, as if he could kill the princess, her allies would be leaderless. There were none available. All were too busy fighting elsewhere.
CARL skittered over to a rack of weapons, and grabbed a laser rifle. He ordered the drones nearby to follow him, and made his way towards Inquisition. He picked up more drones as he went, along with a few princes who were not in the chain of command, but willing to follow him anyway.
If the prince commanding the siege of Inquisition was surprised to see CARL and his horde of reinforcements, he did not show it, rather smoothly transferring control to CARL while providing a report on the situation. CARL considered his options briefly, and decided that with his greater numbers, he would be able to overwhelm the defenders- the Inquistion department was not very big, and could not be housing more than a few hundred drones. He ordered a dozen drones with disposable rocket launchers to attack the fortified entrance, simultaneously ordering a hundred more to rush forward to distract the defenders. The drones did as they were told, charging out of cover. Most of them were instantly mowed down by gatling laser fire, but not enough. Five of the disposable rocket launchers fired; the entrance was obliterated. CARL ordered all his forces forward. Drones charged forth through the dust clouds- the extremely hot dust clouds, causing their carapaces to blister and crack, but they survived for now (they would likely succumb to the damage within a few hours). CARL and his princes followed close behind, although they waited a bit for the dust to settle and cool.
Inquisition was a surprisingly tough department to assault. The interior spiralled upwards, forcing CARL and his drones to fight uphill into layers of barricades (the central elevator obviously disabled). Worse, side tunnels would seem empty, only for drones to spring out after the main force had passed. CARL had almost taken a shot to the thorax in the first such ambush, but was more careful afterwards. Yet his assessment had been correct- the defenders were outnumbered, and even though he was losing four drones for every drone he killed, they were making progress. It was unfortunate, but not unexpected, that none of the princes defending the department were willing to defect. No doubt they had been thoroughly brainwashed by Inquisitors.
They reached the final door after almost an hour of fighting. The situation outside was dire. From updates CARL was receiving from his generals, the loyalists had broken out, and were encircling a significant portion of his forces with the aid of the invaders. It was not uniformly bad news, as in some areas the invaders had been beaten back, their low numbers making them ineffectual in a head-on fight. But he was cutting it close. If he lost much more territory, some of his less fanatical princes might start to defect back, in the hopes that their temporary treachery might either be unnoticed or overlooked after CARL was defeated.
CARL directed his remaining drones (of which there were very little) to break open the door that stood between him and the centre of the Inquisition department, where his adversary no doubt lurked. However, before they could deploy blasting charges, the door opened of its own volition. Out strode a princess, a single measly laser pistol her only armament.
{Fire}, CARL ordered his drones.
The drones did not fire.
{Fire}, CARL ordered the two remaining princes with him, the message tagged with <emphasis> and <haste>.
The princes did not fire.
Stepping back from the steadily advancing princess, CARL raised his own rifle. Before he could do anything with it, a sledgehammer of psionic energy smashed into his brain. CARL threw up his mental defences- which were considerably greater than that of the average prince-, but the advancing princess's psionic abilities were both more powerful and more finessed. His defences may have held against another brute-force attack, but the subsequent blows were designed to bypass such straightforward defences: blows that matched the frequency of CARL's own thoughts (letting them sneak past his defences), weak blows deployed as feints to wear down his focus, blows that cycled through frequencies so rapidly CARL couldn't track them, and the whole time he could feel her oppressive psionic aura sapping at his strength.
The princess reached CARL, who was immobilised as he focused on defending his mind. She carefully, softly, lifted the rifle from his trembling arms, and tossed it aside. Then, without taking her eyes off of CARL, pointed her pistol at the prince to her left, and shot a hole cleanly through his head. She repeated the process with the prince to her right. At this point, the drones submitted to her fully, and she commanded them to scurry back down spiral tunnel.
Now she turned her full attention to CARL, even leaning forwards to touch her head to his. The psionic assault became thrice as strong, and CARL felt his will wash away.
{Kneel}, the princess said, and CARL knelt.
There was a moments pause whilst the princess scoured through CARL's memories with force far greater than he had experienced in any prior Inquisition.
{Impressive work}, the princess said. {I have never seen a prince rebellion so well executed. It almost matches those of lesser princesses}
CARL said nothing. Not that he could've said anything without her commanding him to, at this point.
{I should also congratulate you on your psionic defences. Again, they almost match those of a weak princess. It is a most curious thing}
CARL felt an indescribable sensation as the princess dove even deeper into his mind, deeper than he thought was possible. The very core of CARL's being was exposed to her, in a way which he could sense was not good for his continued sanity. Even if she were to leave him alone, he would not survive much longer.
{Interesting. I will certainly be interested in seeing the results of the autopsy. Be grateful, [P.1984], your brain may advance [Our] knowledge of psionic potential}
The implicit death threat did not bother CARL, at this point. Life, death, none of it mattered in the end.
{It will be another factor in the [Council]'s approval of my anointment. Even after the unfortunate death of [Q.2.2.1.2] during a spectacular prince rebellion, only thwarted by the actions of her chosen successor, there may still be those who question my right to rule}
Well, at least he would die knowing he had been right; the princess intended to usurp the throne. Had his entire rebellion just been a tool for her to accomplish her tasks?
{Ah, there she goes now. Bravely fighting the rebels who broke into her throne room. Well, [P.1984], it would not do to leave the colony leaderless. Let us preserve your remarkable genes}
Even in his nigh-frozen state, CARL flinched. Surely she did not mean-
{MATE}, the princess ordered him.
He did.