Revision #1
> Arbores Technologies decides to aid its advances by spending that 20M on making the armor easier to mass produce (lessening costs on their side)
Arblar was quite a new name, and coincidentally had a similarity to the name the researcher and her team who had discovered the components for making it had--and as it was synthesized, it was the researcher's wish to put all profits to the company, given how she saw the extent of the company's products being humanitarian in nature. It was dedicated in her honor for devising its construction, and its work made into what the company hoped to be a record in the history books.
All that was needed now, as there were plans for its future usage based on predictive analysis in future revision stages, was to try and make production easier to produce.
Revision #2"Err, twenty million...
is twenty million." One financial manager was overheard saying, what with clear cut budgets and a complete lack of corruption present.
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Revision that Medical multikit! (Focus: Durability/better quality/distribution, and in other words diversify it from being just a set/series of kits)Analysts noticed how jargon and a lack of academic standards were present in the first rulebook--it lacked typographical errors, and its translations were in the least 'understandable', but in translation there was the problem of an equality of 'language'.
- Instructive writing based on academic findings; writing needs to be more straight-forward and requires use of words or expressions that are scholarly yet reader friendly.
- As much as possible, use simple sentences (rather than compound or complex ones) and use vocabulary words that are scientific yet not very technical.
- Use contextual terms as to how the mother tongue uses them in context; additional lingual consultancy via journals or scientific studies is advised.
Other than the numerous linguists provided for in outreach with all the money being spent, marked survivalists were also asked on numerous methods on how they would perform with what unfamiliar materials were present and instructions given versus the same materials but with a lack of instructions in a situation. Controlled studies were performed, alongside consultancy with battlefield surgeons and other medicare professionals even from WWI. Analysis of terrain and weather also brought insights into possible vectors of diseases that would cover the young soldiery, from marshlands, swamps, and the heat and climate, which brought on assumptions that tactical harnesses and other locomotive vests would be a variable for adequate medicare, alongside supplementation of contextual work. There was enough budget to even consider additional diversification other than the above diversification, including deployment of kits within marine/air vessels and land vehicles in their own rights, and this was added to complete the budget after miscellaneous budgeting was considered. Precision tools to be produced en masse, including the machinery utilized for such (and perhaps, even later models or similar products) were to be installed in the company too--inclusive with employee pay and rigorous attention to possible details for the money spent on revisions. The CEO refused any additional profits and even pushed her own aside in favor of these products being planned for--noting that marketing would pay for itself, as well as future action using these products as baseline.