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[spümpkin]

Added some more example sheets, hopefully this helps give an idea of what to make.

[Tiruin]

QUESTIONS:
> Weapon/Armor 'qualities' have how many descriptors? What depth of detail are you looking for?
> And for the "Core", what kinds of ideas are you looking for? Can abstracted concepts be used? Is it only concrete ideas?
> In "Sides", is it possible to have a stat as low as 0? What is the maximum # that can be put in any 1 out of those 4 sides?
> I think I misunderstood the skills allocation points

>Weapons/Armor can have 3 Qualities to start, and heavy detail is preferred. Unless it's a really simple concept, or something.
>Abstract concepts can be used, yes.
>Well, if you have a 1d0 in any of the stats you'll simply be rendered incapable of doing options in a certain manner. Maximum is undefined.
>Skills and Stats were allocated fine.

Your sheet looks good, just add qualities to the weapons and armor and I'll decide between the two weapons when I get more time.

I'll be silly with the assumed tech level then
And qualities = adjectives? Done!

Nobody else is taking some kind of sentient vs sapient thing? :O Woaaa. Those cores are creative.
Reposting sheet here and moving it from first post due to messiness.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Name: Erevandis Lux "Eva" Nova
Gender: Female
Core: Rabbit
Aspects: [Decided based on Core]

Description: Eva appears as a five foot, four inch anthropomorphic rabbit--four appendages, with two being digitigrade and used for locomotion, basically humanoid, and having a light covering of light brown fur, overlapping a whitish skin predominantly showing around the eyes, tips of her ears, and ends of her appendages. Dark brown hair covers her head, while her eyes appear to shift between two colors near the "irises": dark brown and light green, and in all aspects, she is purely biological, and her personality traits conform to an individualistic variance than a species-wide description: She is analytical in nature, studious in intent, and quite given to an introspective perspective of life, showing in her mannerisms and her actions. Species-wise, communal behavior adapts to survival and maintenance in the short-term, giving people of her species physical traits built for agility, dexterity, and movement, of using with the terrain around them rather than forcing it to work with them. Her metabolism is quite high in comparison [to humans as a baseline], and she is given more to quick spurts of speed and endurance rather than strength; her musculature, in turn, conforms in this manner.

Her 'irises' are actually an eye membrane which appears to be focused around the pupil area, utilized to help in low-light situations alongside aiding vision in normal lighting.

She is clothed in simple layers of refined plant fibers from the neck until the near-end of her extremities, wearing a simple set of worked metallic and (chitinous?) hide armor.

Background: Eva, named after a combination of her names and surname, preferring nobody to know her actual names rather than her nickname, is a biological sapient born and raised on this very planet itself--born, however, to the harshness of the wilderness and the ever-changing environment that categorizes her birth area as "Suitably Dangerous; Caution advised for travelers--do not enter without official guidance. Death awaits the unweary"--she was raised as a mechanic and technician, educated purely by field duty and raised with the spark of wonder in the world and all life around. Her birth-area consisted of several square miles of a combination of several similar mountainous climates, changing with the moons and sun in the planet's habitable zone, frequenting drops of temperature combined with the cool airs of the mountains, and having quite a view of the surroundings--in contrast, the clouds and atmospheric phenomena provided their own beauty and dangers to add; the colorful rains (ranging from natural, clear, potable water, to a pinkish coloration of evaporated materia only found on the highest of said mountains) acted both as a boon and a bane, forcing most inhabitants, sapient or otherwise, to manage by a mix of technology and adaptation. Her being a mechanic relied on above-ground and below-ground measures, as the mountains were home to an open-cavern system which provided against the harsh temperature drops, alongside providing quite the variety of underground fauna and flora, alongside a studious education of several scientific aspects of geology and geography. The local fauna were conspicuously predatory, as the mountains were primarily a migration point of several different areas, and thus provided quite an array of game animals and other creatures.

Raised since young as an apprentice, while she was not brought up as a hunter or a more 'practical' role in her community, she was found to have acumen in skills that benefited over the long-run, skills that 'contrasted' with her personality as while she excelled in technology and adapting raw materia to usable materials and devices, she has quite a stubborn mindset on 'short-term' usability. Contrasting further, while her species has a knack for an especially strong memory cycle--both short and long-term--her concerns lie fairly within the field of science and development, relying on her devices for protection or even self-defense, preferring to not get into a fight or have something in between her and anything dangerous. Her role as a technologist was a niche in her community, and in a quick summary of her life: Her choice of adventuring was quite the turnabout, promising a risk of large gains over large dangers, with anything gained in turn being given back to her community--whether it be her development of the self, or any special 'artifacts' mentioned in legend and lore.

Stats: [24/24 sides used]

Efficiency: 1d8
Perfectionism: 1d3
Improvisation: 1d6
Hastiness: 1d7

Skills: [12/12]

       > Melee: 1
Combat  > Ranged: 0
       > Magic: 0


            > Problem-solving: 2
Adventuring  > Traveling: 1
            > Wisdom: 1


       > Crafting: 2
Science  > Analysis: 3
       > Utility: 2

Equipment: (You begin with two pieces of equipment, one Weapon, and one piece of Armor. You may have a total of one Weapon equipped ((unless you can dual wield)), three pieces of Armor ((one Head, one Torso, one Legs)), and two Artifacts equipped at one time. Weapons and Armor do not have set damage/defence, and instead use a Type, and the way in which you use it determines which stat-dice is used.

Equipment Templates:

Weapon/Equipment: [I'm undecided; decided to detail two items, one that could work as an item but could count as those 'two items' for purposes of balance, and one that's obviously a weapon]

Name: Hadenium Survival Knife
Aspects: Metal, Crafted, Tool, Strong, Survivalist.
Type: (Melee)
Qualities: Very Durable; Sharp; Utilitarian (Can be used alongside an assortment of utility purposes)
Description: A foldable or 'winged' knife, this object (exclusive from the handle) is as long as a hand in length and covering is made from the most durable metals found in Eva's birthplace--its structure made from durable alloys needing the minimum of maintenance for sharpness, and generally used as a utility item, although it could be strapped or improvised into a spear or otherwise. The blade has a curved spine, curving towards a blunted tip with one straight end meant for cutting, while the handle is hollowed to provide a minor compartment for material.

Armor:

Name: Pioneer's Vest
Aspects: Survivalist, Tool, Crafted, Modifiable, Hybrid, Storage, Metal.
Type: (Light)
Qualities: Very Durable; Flexible; Utilitarian
Description: Eva's Pioneer's Vest is moreso an amalgam of a rigidly combined 'tech' harness for storage of a multitude of tools and mixtures, an integrated 'toolbox' set into its weaves and construct to enable various crafting capabilities, and a slotted torso region sporting an area for either protective or medical padding, or inserting armored plating--in this case, the plated alloy of Haderite, named after the mythological depths of Hades, being quite time-intensive to make alongside requiring thorough refining; the metal plate is kept thin enough to not encumber the user while providing protection by discharging received forces, alongside being able to be swapped out (with a few modifications) to be used as an improvised shield. The harness also aids by distributing carried weight equally to the wearer, useful in climbing or spelunking situations where it was originally built to serve in. A known downside of Haderite alloy materials is its sensitivity to magical forces, acting both as a very ready conductor and transceiver.

Inventory:
> "DIY Crafting Book" [Book]/  A notary tome on the collection of generations of crafting schematics from "what can be simply done in survival crafting situations,"
> Personal Toolkit [Tool]/ Slotted within Eva's vest, this tool'box' contains a complete tool kit suitable for most field maintenance and construction activities; it includes a long list of duct tape and heating materials (like disposable or renewable heating sticks), alongside serving as a vital tool for fixing or aiding the construction of various items, (eg Materia made of wood, bone, or chitin).
> Satchel Stave [Tool]/ Utilized to work with Haderite alloys in cases of magical discharge, it is a 'stave in a box', with a satchel made to contain it--acting as a magic sink to absorb and disperse allocated magic via contact.

I went silly with the background of weaponry material, like Titanium (because Titans in Greek Mythology) and then rolled in mythology for the names.

Also since I've no idea as to the Light/Medium/Heavy/Mystical--background nudging is that the metals used [Haderite?] being extremely susceptible to 'magic'. "Materia" is a term for materials, just being locally translated.

Oh goodness I'll just post and modify this ever since I ripped out my sheet >_>

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[Sl4cker]

Spoiler: they call me baepsae, yokbwatji i sedae (click to show/hide)

Name: Cyperus
Gender: Something other than male or female
Core: A paper swan.
Description: A child made out of paper. Their whole body is made out of crumpled, bleach white paper, formed into the image of a small human with what seems to be a bowl haircut. Of course, this means they look very geometric and unnatural. They can fold themselves to look different, but it's pretty difficult. They are pretty fragile, but a little less so than being made of paper would imply.

Background: Cyperus is an orphan raised on the streets, poor and without guidance. From the street magicians, they learned magic and the ability to craft scrolls. From the meanness of the slums, they learned quickly how to improvise crafting useful tools and weapons. Becoming an adventurer is simply the newest way for them to get by. Despite this, though, they are still quite dainty and consider themselves much higher class than they actually are.

Additionally, they quest for the Four Treasures of the Study, a set of four artefacts that, when combined, can be used to create a scroll that cannot be depleted, being a source of theoretically infinite magic.

Stats:

Efficiency: 1d4
Perfectionism: 1d1
Improvisation: 2d7
Hastiness: 1d5

Skills:

       > Melee: 0
Combat  > Ranged: 0
       > Magic: 2


            > Problem-solving: 4
Adventuring  > Travelling: 0
            > Wisdom: 0


            > Crafting: 6
Science  > Analysis: 0
       > Utility: 0

Equipment:

Weapon:

Name: Cyperus' Fountain Pen
Aspects: (Decided by me, depending on description and what it is)
Type: Melee
Qualities: Stolen (Can't be sold in shops) Writing (Can be used to write on suitable materials with, in this case, ink)
Description: A regular fountain pen stolen from someone in an incident involving several ounces of chicken (also stolen), a set of chattering teeth (also stolen) and a carriage (money used to ride in was stolen). Cyperus is pretty possesive of it. Filled with ink.

Armor:

Name: Vellum Suit
Aspects: (Same as weapon)
Type: Light
Qualities: Classy (Looks nice.) Flammable (Easily burned) Flimsy (Easily ripped) Wettable (Easily soiled)
Description: A large amount of lavender paper folded, through many, many hours of hard work, into a wearable suit. Wearable if you're the size of a child, that is.

Inventory: Spare paper: For making scrolls with
Loose change: Spare money, stolen from unwary folk
Two bouncy balls: One red, one slightly darker red. To be frank, even Cyperus doesn't know why they have these, but they might be useful

[spümpkin]

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Name: Erevandis Lux "Eva" Nova
Gender: Female
Core: Rabbit
Aspects: [Decided based on Core]

Description: Eva appears as a five foot, four inch anthropomorphic rabbit--four appendages, with two being digitigrade and used for locomotion, basically humanoid, and having a light covering of light brown fur, overlapping a whitish skin predominantly showing around the eyes, tips of her ears, and ends of her appendages. Dark brown hair covers her head, while her eyes appear to shift between two colors near the "irises": dark brown and light green, and in all aspects, she is purely biological, and her personality traits conform to an individualistic variance than a species-wide description: She is analytical in nature, studious in intent, and quite given to an introspective perspective of life, showing in her mannerisms and her actions. Species-wise, communal behavior adapts to survival and maintenance in the short-term, giving people of her species physical traits built for agility, dexterity, and movement, of using with the terrain around them rather than forcing it to work with them. Her metabolism is quite high in comparison [to humans as a baseline], and she is given more to quick spurts of speed and endurance rather than strength; her musculature, in turn, conforms in this manner.

Her 'irises' are actually an eye membrane which appears to be focused around the pupil area, utilized to help in low-light situations alongside aiding vision in normal lighting.

She is clothed in simple layers of refined plant fibers from the neck until the near-end of her extremities, wearing a simple set of worked metallic and (chitinous?) hide armor.

Background: Eva, named after a combination of her names and surname, preferring nobody to know her actual names rather than her nickname, is a biological sapient born and raised on this very planet itself--born, however, to the harshness of the wilderness and the ever-changing environment that categorizes her birth area as "Suitably Dangerous; Caution advised for travelers--do not enter without official guidance. Death awaits the unweary"--she was raised as a mechanic and technician, educated purely by field duty and raised with the spark of wonder in the world and all life around. Her birth-area consisted of several square miles of a combination of several similar mountainous climates, changing with the moons and sun in the planet's habitable zone, frequenting drops of temperature combined with the cool airs of the mountains, and having quite a view of the surroundings--in contrast, the clouds and atmospheric phenomena provided their own beauty and dangers to add; the colorful rains (ranging from natural, clear, potable water, to a pinkish coloration of evaporated materia only found on the highest of said mountains) acted both as a boon and a bane, forcing most inhabitants, sapient or otherwise, to manage by a mix of technology and adaptation. Her being a mechanic relied on above-ground and below-ground measures, as the mountains were home to an open-cavern system which provided against the harsh temperature drops, alongside providing quite the variety of underground fauna and flora, alongside a studious education of several scientific aspects of geology and geography. The local fauna were conspicuously predatory, as the mountains were primarily a migration point of several different areas, and thus provided quite an array of game animals and other creatures.

Raised since young as an apprentice, while she was not brought up as a hunter or a more 'practical' role in her community, she was found to have acumen in skills that benefited over the long-run, skills that 'contrasted' with her personality as while she excelled in technology and adapting raw materia to usable materials and devices, she has quite a stubborn mindset on 'short-term' usability. Contrasting further, while her species has a knack for an especially strong memory cycle--both short and long-term--her concerns lie fairly within the field of science and development, relying on her devices for protection or even self-defense, preferring to not get into a fight or have something in between her and anything dangerous. Her role as a technologist was a niche in her community, and in a quick summary of her life: Her choice of adventuring was quite the turnabout, promising a risk of large gains over large dangers, with anything gained in turn being given back to her community--whether it be her development of the self, or any special 'artifacts' mentioned in legend and lore.

Stats: [24/24 sides used]

Efficiency: 1d6
Perfectionism: 1d2
Improvisation: 2d4
Hastiness: 2d4

Skills: [12/12]

       > Melee: 1
Combat  > Ranged: 0
       > Magic: 0


            > Problem-solving: 2
Adventuring  > Traveling: 1
            > Wisdom: 1


       > Crafting: 2
Science  > Analysis: 3
       > Utility: 2

Equipment: (You begin with two pieces of equipment, one Weapon, and one piece of Armor. You may have a total of one Weapon equipped ((unless you can dual wield)), three pieces of Armor ((one Head, one Torso, one Legs)), and two Artifacts equipped at one time. Weapons and Armor do not have set damage/defence, and instead use a Type, and the way in which you use it determines which stat-dice is used.

Equipment Templates:

Weapon/Equipment: [I'm undecided; decided to detail two items, one that could work as an item but could count as those 'two items' for purposes of balance, and one that's obviously a weapon]

Name: Hadenium Survival Knife
Aspects: [GM]
Type: (Melee)
Qualities: Very Durable; Sharp; Utilitarian (Can be used alongside an assortment of utility purposes)
Description: A foldable or 'winged' knife, this object (exclusive from the handle) is as long as a hand in length and covering is made from the most durable metals found in Eva's birthplace--its structure made from durable alloys needing the minimum of maintenance for sharpness, and generally used as a utility item, although it could be strapped or improvised into a spear or otherwise. The blade has a curved spine, curving towards a blunted tip with one straight end meant for cutting, while the handle is hollowed to provide a minor compartment for material.

Armor:

Name: Pioneer's Vest
Aspects: [GM]
Type: (Light)
Qualities: Very Durable; Flexible; Utilitarian
Description: Eva's Pioneer's Vest is moreso an amalgam of a rigidly combined 'tech' harness for storage of a multitude of tools and mixtures, an integrated 'toolbox' set into its weaves and construct to enable various crafting capabilities, and a slotted torso region sporting an area for either protective or medical padding, or inserting armored plating--in this case, the plated alloy of Haderite, named after the mythological depths of Hades, being quite time-intensive to make alongside requiring thorough refining; the metal plate is kept thin enough to not encumber the user while providing protection by discharging received forces, alongside being able to be swapped out (with a few modifications) to be used as an improvised shield. The harness also aids by distributing carried weight equally to the wearer, useful in climbing or spelunking situations where it was originally built to serve in.

Inventory:
> "DIY Crafting Book" [Book]
> Personal Toolbox [Tool]
> (Several rolls) Duct Tape [Tool]

Looks all good! Will add Aspects and put in OP.

Spoiler: they call me baepsae, yokbwatji i sedae (click to show/hide)

Name: Cyperus
Gender: Something other than male or female
Core: A paper swan.
Description: A child made out of paper. Their whole body is made out of crumpled, bleach white paper, formed into the image of a small human with what seems to be a bowl haircut. Of course, this means they look very geometric and unnatural. They can fold themselves to look different, but it's pretty difficult. They are pretty fragile, but a little less so than being made of paper would imply.

Background: Cyperus is an orphan raised on the streets, poor and without guidance. From the street magicians, they learned magic and the ability to craft scrolls. From the meanness of the slums, they learned quickly how to improvise crafting useful tools and weapons. Becoming an adventurer is simply the newest way for them to get by. Despite this, though, they are still quite dainty and consider themselves much higher class than they actually are.

Additionally, they quest for the Four Treasures of the Study, a set of four artefacts that, when combined, can be used to create a scroll that cannot be depleted, being a source of theoretically infinite magic.

Stats:

Efficiency: 1d4
Perfectionism: 1d1
Improvisation: 2d7
Hastiness: 1d5

Skills:

       > Melee: 0
Combat  > Ranged: 0
       > Magic: 2


            > Problem-solving: 4
Adventuring  > Travelling: 0
            > Wisdom: 0


            > Crafting: 6
Science  > Analysis: 0
       > Utility: 0

Equipment:

Weapon:

Name: Cyperus' Fountain Pen
Aspects: (Decided by me, depending on description and what it is)
Type: Melee
Qualities: Stolen (Can't be sold in shops) Writing (Can be used to write on suitable materials with, in this case, ink)
Description: A regular fountain pen stolen from someone in an incident involving several ounces of chicken (also stolen), a set of chattering teeth (also stolen) and a carriage (money used to ride in was stolen). Cyperus is pretty possesive of it. Filled with ink.

Armor:

Name: Vellum Suit
Aspects: (Same as weapon)
Type: Light
Qualities: Classy (Looks nice.) Flammable (Easily burned) Flimsy (Easily ripped) Wettable (Easily soiled)
Description: A large amount of lavender paper folded, through many, many hours of hard work, into a wearable suit. Wearable if you're the size of a child, that is.

Inventory: Spare paper: For making scrolls with
Loose change: Spare money, stolen from unwary folk
Two bouncy balls: One red, one slightly darker red. To be frank, even Cyperus doesn't know why they have these, but they might be useful

A-ok. Will put in OP with Aspects soon.

[Failbird105]

Spoiler:  I don't want to set the world on fire... (click to show/hide)

Name: Alec Wilholm
Gender: male
Core: A massive, solidified crystal of a purple material known only as Plasma, which constantly emits a gas form of itself, and when in a gas or liquid state, is incredibly flammable.
Aspects: Plasma, Crystalline, Alien, Purple, Self-emitting.

Description: A purple tinted, heavily Plasma infused skeleton, covered in a skin like film of Plasma, containing practically mummified sacks of flesh that hold the organs, a large one in the torso area, to hold almost all of them, and a small one within the skull to hold the brain, eyes, and inner ears, this all put together gives him very high pain tolerance.
His eyes glow bright yellow due to the Plasma reactions constantly happening inside his body, and he is constantly emitting a thin cloud of Unstable Plasma gas, which ignites on contact with oxygen. He has two severe weaknesses however, being that he is made of Unstable Plasma thus igniting on contact with oxygen, and must breath Stable Plasma to live. Luckily the stuff isn't very rare.

Background: Alec Wilholm is a type of being known as Plasmids, beings that are physically made of the strange material that has adopted the name of the fourth state of matter, Plasma. This leaves them like mummified corpses or skeletons made mostly out of the stuff, though what they actually are varies, there have been plasmid cats, dogs, fish, alligators, unnamable horrors, and even humanoids. Alec himself is a humanoid plasmid, who mostly learned everything he knew from the non plasmid beings that occasionally visited his underground home wearing thick environmental suits. He had a habit of collecting random interesting junk he found, or that was given to him by visitors. Some of this stuff he brought with him when he left his Plasma filled home. He lost most of THAT stuff when he ignited two steps into the oxygen filled atmosphere of the outside world.

Since then hes managed to acquire a fragile full body jumpsuit to stave off the oxygen from most of his body, and then a sturdy helmet, made to intake oxygen from tanks, but easily used for Plasma instead.

Stats:

Efficiency: 2d5
Perfectionism:1d4
Improvisation: 1d6
Hastiness: 1d4

Skills:

       > Melee: 3
Combat  > Ranged: 1
       > Magic: 0


            > Problem-solving: 2
Adventuring  > Travelling: 2
            > Wisdom: 0


            > Crafting: 2
Science  > Analysis: 0
       > Utility: 2

Equipment:

Weapon:

Name: Plasma filled Oxygen tank
Aspects: Titanium, Container, Heavy, Plastic, Tool, Crafted.
Type: Melee
Qualities: Robust(it is quite good bludgeoning tool due to its weight), durable(it's not going to be broken or penetrated any time soon),
 Plasma leak(has two valves, only one of which has the tube attached to his helmets intake, the other can be opened to release stable plasma into the air, which can be ignited with any sort of fire and burns very well)
Description: Mostly made of titanium, it is a sort of capsule shape in the center, surrounded by a larger cylindrical orange casing of reinforced plastic which opens outwards on one side to allow the insertion and removal of tanks, but is tight enough to not allow them to fall out without deliberate effort. The release valves are also built into this outer casing.
 It's primary use is to provide Alec with a portable source of breathable air, however in combat it can be used as a heavy bludgeoning weapon, swung around wildly like a very large club or used more precisely to deliver blows with crushing power.

Armor:

Name: Orange enviro-suit helmet
Aspects: Tool, Crafted, Container, Isolationist, Heavy, Dark.
Type: Heavy
Qualities: durable(has to be to stop him from lighting up), air tight(no gasses can get in through this helmet), air intake valve(unless they are ALLOWED in through this, which is connected to his Air tank by a tube)
Description: An orange(obviously) full head helmet, made to form an airtight seal to your average full body jumpsuit, or a full sized environmental suit. It looks kinda like an upside down childrens bucket in shape, the front of it is a very thick purple visor to cancel out the yellow from his glowing eyes, said glow is visible from outside the helmet, but none of his actual face., it has a horizontal purple stripe going all the way around it, and the air intake valve directly at the mouth area for a tube to plug into and pump gasses into the helmet. Currently sealed onto his orange jumpsuit, and connected to his plasma tank via tube.

Inventory: Orange jumpsuit(Clothing, its important to mention because he needs this to stop himself from going up in flames in almost any location)
Lighter(Tool)
Strange artifact - maybe it does something, or maybe its just a fancy paperweight, who knows, Alec sure doesn't, and neither do I.

[spümpkin]

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Name: Alec Wilholm
Gender: male
Core: A massive, solidified crystal of a purple material known only as Plasma, which constantly emits a gas form of itself, and when in a gas or liquid state, is incredibly flammable.
Aspects: (Decided by me based on Core.)

Description: A purple tinted, heavily Plasma infused skeleton, covered in a skin like film of Plasma, containing practically mummified sacks of flesh that hold the organs, a large one in the torso area, to hold almost all of them, and a small one within the skull to hold the brain, eyes, and inner ears, this all put together gives him very high pain tolerance.
His eyes glow bright yellow due to the Plasma reactions constantly happening inside his body, and he is constantly emitting a thin cloud of Unstable Plasma gas, which ignites on contact with oxygen. He has two severe weaknesses however, being that he is made of Unstable Plasma thus igniting on contact with oxygen, and must breath Stable Plasma to live. Luckily the stuff isn't very rare.

Background: Alec Wilholm is a type of being known as Plasmids, beings that are physically made of the strange material that has adopted the name of the fourth state of matter, Plasma. This leaves them like mummified corpses or skeletons made mostly out of the stuff, though what they actually are varies, there have been plasmid cats, dogs, fish, alligators, unnamable horrors, and even humanoids. Alec himself is a humanoid plasmid, who mostly learned everything he knew from the non plasmid beings that occasionally visited his underground home wearing thick environmental suits. He had a habit of collecting random interesting junk he found, or that was given to him by visitors. Some of this stuff he brought with him when he left his Plasma filled home. He lost most of THAT stuff when he ignited two steps into the oxygen filled atmosphere of the outside world.

Since then hes managed to acquire a fragile full body jumpsuit to stave off the oxygen from most of his body, and then a sturdy helmet, made to intake oxygen from tanks, but easily used for Plasma instead.

Stats: (You get 24 Sides to start with. See the Stats section of System for more info.)

Efficiency: 2d5
Perfectionism:1d4
Improvisation: 1d6
Hastiness: 1d4

Skills: (You start with 12 points to put in the general skills, but you cannot specialise any further at character creation. The points put into skills in character creation will apply to both the Theory and Practice level of the skills. See the Skills section of System for more info.)

       > Melee: 3
Combat  > Ranged: 1
       > Magic: 0


            > Problem-solving: 2
Adventuring  > Travelling: 2
            > Wisdom: 0


            > Crafting: 2
Science  > Analysis: 0
       > Utility: 2

Equipment: (You begin with two pieces of equipment, one Weapon, and one piece of Armor. You may have a total of one Weapon equipped ((unless you can dual wield)), three pieces of Armor ((one Head, one Torso, one Legs)), and two Artifacts equipped at one time. Weapons and Armor do not have set damage/defence, and instead use a Type, and the way in which you use it determines which stat-dice is used.

Equipment Templates:

Weapon:

Name: Plasma filled Oxygen tank
Aspects: (Decided by me, depending on description and what it is)
Type: Melee
Qualities: Robust(it is quite good bludgeoning tool due to its weight), durable(it's not going to be broken or penetrated any time soon),
 Plasma leak(has two valves, only one of which has the tube attached to his helmets intake, the other can be opened to release stable plasma into the air, which can be ignited with any sort of fire and burns very well)
Description: Mostly made of titanium, it is a sort of capsule shape in the center, surrounded by a larger cylindrical orange casing of reinforced plastic which opens outwards on one side to allow the insertion and removal of tanks, but is tight enough to not allow them to fall out without deliberate effort. The release valves are also built into this outer casing.
 It's primary use is to provide Alec with a portable source of breathable air, however in combat it can be used as a heavy bludgeoning weapon, swung around wildly like a very large club or used more precisely to deliver blows with crushing power.

Armor:

Name: Orange enviro-suit helmet
Aspects: (Same as weapon)
Type: Heavy
Qualities: durable(has to be to stop him from lighting up), air tight(no gasses can get in through this helmet), air intake valve(unless they are ALLOWED in through this, which is connected to his Air tank by a tube)
Description: (Same as weapon, except about armor instead of weapons.)

Inventory: Orange jumpsuit(Clothing, its important to mention because he needs this to stop himself from going up in flames in almost any location)
Lighter(Tool) (Arbitrary items go here, as well as crafting materials/tools, books for research, or spare equipment. You may have up to 3 items of actual significance.)
Strange artifact - maybe it does something, or maybe its just a fancy paperweight, who knows, Alec sure doesn't, and neither do I.

Looks good to me. Will add aspects when I do that.



Also, everyone: I updated the OP once more to talk about armor, and what light/heavy/medium/mystical means.

[ATHATH]

Spoiler: Wild Jack (click to show/hide)

Name: Wild Jack
Gender: Male
Core: The Gun of Wonder
Aspects: (Decided by me based on Core.)

Description: A dashing elvish (elven?) rogue who seems to be able to roll with anything that comes his way, whether magical, physical, or social in nature.

Background: Jack was kicked out of his home village after he accidentally burnt it to the ground with the Gun of Wonder. Well, technically he was ordered to hand over the GoW to the authorities and he skipped town, but those are minor details. He's been drifting from place to place, committing feats of wondrous power... and, to his shame, hilariously bad failures.

Stats:

Efficiency: 1d0 (1d1 if 1d0 isn't a valid die type)
Perfectionism: 1d0 (1d1 if 1d0 isn't a valid die type)
Improvisation: 1d24 (1d21 if 1d0 isn't a valid die type)
Hastiness: 1d0 (1d1 if 1d0 isn't a valid die type)

Skills: (You start with 12 points to put in the general skills, but you cannot specialise any further at character creation. The points put into skills in character creation will apply to both the Theory and Practice level of the skills. See the Skills section of System for more info.)

       > Melee: 0
Combat  > Ranged: 1
       > Magic: 3


            > Problem-solving: 3
Adventuring  > Travelling: 0
            > Wisdom: 0


            > Crafting: 0
Science  > Analysis: 3
       > Utility: 2

Equipment Templates:

Weapon:

Name: The Gun of Wonder
Aspects: (Decided by me, depending on description and what it is)
Type: Ranged (when used as a gun)/Magic (when the Wild Magic quality is invoked)
Qualities:
Unlimited Ammo: Although the gun still needs to be "reloaded", magic bullets for it (that fade if they haven't been in the Gun of Wonder in the past minute) somehow appear, ready to be loaded into the Gun of Wonder, whenever the wielder of the Gun of Wonder needs them.
Wild Magic: This is the Gun of Wonder's signature ability, and is the cause of much good-and-ill fortune. When this quality is activated, the GoW presents its wielder with 5 random words (chosen by the GM and/or pulled from the "Random entry" function of Wiktionary (translate the result into English and reduce it to the basic form of the word (i.e. ran would turn into run) as necessary)). The wielder of the GoW MUST choose 3 of the words when they're presented to them. If they take longer than a turn to choose the 3 words, the first three words are automatically chosen. The GoW then creates a magical effect based on the 3 chosen words, with a target of wherever/whatever the Gun of Wonder is pointing at. The power of the effect is based on the Improvisation stat and the Magic skill of the wielder of the GoW.
Description: It looks like an ordinary six-shooter (and fires like one), but appearances can be deceiving. When asked where he got the gun from, Wild Jack tells the questioner a wondrous and fantastic story- which radically changes each time he tells it.

Armor:

Name: Robe of Cleanliness
Aspects: (Same as weapon)
Type: Mystical
Qualities:
Always Clean: The Robe of Cleanliness automatically cleans itself and its wearer, so that they can both always look their best. The RoC also slowly repairs itself, but sadly does not bestow this effect on its wielder.
Accessories: The wearer of the Robe of Cleanliness can create and dismiss illusionary and intangible articles of clothing (that must be able to fit the wearer) that must remain on their body (or else the illusory clothing fades/is destroyed) at-will.
Fashionable: The Robe of Cleanliness always looks fashionable and cool.
Minor Hammerspace/Dimensional Storage: There are many pockets on the inside of this jacket, but trying to count them makes Jack's head hurt. However, for some reason, he can intuitively store and retrieve stuff from these pockets without fumbling around or searching for them. Jack tries not to think about this too much.
Description: Depends on what is/what would be in-fashion/cool at the moment.

Inventory:
Ring of Sustenance: The Ring of Sustenance keeps its wearer fed and watered. Because actually working for a living is for scrubs.
Lucky Coin: Once per day, when the command word is spoken, it is asked a question that can be answered with "heads" or "tails", and it is flipped, the Lucky Coin will land on the "correct" side 60% of the time. Using this ability multiple times on similar questions about the same subject will result on the Lucky Coin landing on its side.
Book of Illusion and Enchantment: This book contains many illusion and enchantment spells. Jack has recently... "acquired" it, and is eager to properly inspect its contents.

[ATHATH]

Also, you can have multiple dice for one stat. You can, for example, have 2d4 on one stat. Just making sure you know that.

How is this computed from the 24 sides? :x I don't understand how dice are computed that way other than adding to the latter number.

Well, 8 sides can split into 2d4s, or 1d8. You may not have anymore than 1 d1 per stat, and you can only have one kind of dice, but you can vary in between stats.

Wait, does this mean that I can put a 24d1 in a stat and always roll a 24?

[SOLDIER First]

24d1 means "rolling a one-sided die 24 times", so no, you can't. You can only have 1 one-sided die per stat, as stated.

1d24 is totally okay though, AFAIK.

[Tiruin]

Also, you can have multiple dice for one stat. You can, for example, have 2d4 on one stat. Just making sure you know that.

How is this computed from the 24 sides? :x I don't understand how dice are computed that way other than adding to the latter number.

Well, 8 sides can split into 2d4s, or 1d8. You may not have anymore than 1 d1 per stat, and you can only have one kind of dice, but you can vary in between stats.

Wait, does this mean that I can put a 24d1 in a stat and always roll a 24?

Start out with a 1dx, and increase from there Spoopy pumpkin said that in her notes, higher rolls = higher intensity of effects, so it can be a double-edged result at times. It's not a linear 'lower roles == bad', as far as I read into it, as it seems she made a complex but simple to understand game.

I like the premise a lot.

[ATHATH]

24d1 means "rolling a one-sided die 24 times", so no, you can't. You can only have 1 one-sided die per stat, as stated.

1d24 is totally okay though, AFAIK.

But the quote that I quoted says that you can spilt your dice into multiple smaller dice, as long as the number of dice*sides per die=24 (assuming that all of your dice across all of your stats have the same number of sides).

[SOLDIER First]

Well yeah, but you can still only have a single one-sided die per stat. Because that's what Spumpkin said in their post.

You may not have anymore than 1 d1 per stat,

[spümpkin]

Also, you can have multiple dice for one stat. You can, for example, have 2d4 on one stat. Just making sure you know that.

How is this computed from the 24 sides? :x I don't understand how dice are computed that way other than adding to the latter number.

Well, 8 sides can split into 2d4s, or 1d8. You may not have anymore than 1 d1 per stat, and you can only have one kind of dice, but you can vary in between stats.

Wait, does this mean that I can put a 24d1 in a stat and always roll a 24?

No, for that reason exactly.

d0s are fine, it just means you cannot do any action of that kind. Since you only have 1d24 as your dice, you can only ever improvise.

Also, you can have multiple dice for one stat. You can, for example, have 2d4 on one stat. Just making sure you know that.

How is this computed from the 24 sides? :x I don't understand how dice are computed that way other than adding to the latter number.

Well, 8 sides can split into 2d4s, or 1d8. You may not have anymore than 1 d1 per stat, and you can only have one kind of dice, but you can vary in between stats.

Wait, does this mean that I can put a 24d1 in a stat and always roll a 24?

Start out with a 1dx, and increase from there Spoopy pumpkin said that in her notes, higher rolls = higher intensity of effects, so it can be a double-edged result at times. It's not a linear 'lower roles == bad', as far as I read into it, as it seems she made a complex but simple to understand game.

I like the premise a lot.

More like an xdy, but if y=1 then x cannot be greater than 1. Lower is generally less effective and higher is more effective, but the intensity of those effects is increased by the number of total sides on the dice.

Remember that if you have a 1d1 in a stat, you're making it so (until you gain more sides) you cannot be any more than pathetic in performing that kind of action.

Didn't put this in the OP at first, but going to add now: Since the more sides a dice has, the higher intensity it is, if you have multiple lower-sided dice, you're more likely to be successful, just at a lower effectiveness. If you have 2d10s, for example, and roll 2 10s, it'll be less effective than rolling a 20 on a 1d20.

Spoiler: Wild Jack (click to show/hide)

Name: Wild Jack
Gender: Male
Core: The Gun of Wonder
Aspects: (Decided by me based on Core.)

Description: A dashing elvish (elven?) rogue who seems to be able to roll with anything that comes his way, whether magical, physical, or social in nature.

Background: Jack was kicked out of his home village after he accidentally burnt it to the ground with the Gun of Wonder. Well, technically he was ordered to hand over the GoW to the authorities and he skipped town, but those are minor details. He's been drifting from place to place, committing feats of wondrous power... and, to his shame, hilariously bad failures.

Stats:

Efficiency: 1d0 (1d1 if 1d0 isn't a valid die type)
Perfectionism: 1d0 (1d1 if 1d0 isn't a valid die type)
Improvisation: 1d24 (1d21 if 1d0 isn't a valid die type)
Hastiness: 1d0 (1d1 if 1d0 isn't a valid die type)

Skills: (You start with 12 points to put in the general skills, but you cannot specialise any further at character creation. The points put into skills in character creation will apply to both the Theory and Practice level of the skills. See the Skills section of System for more info.)

       > Melee: 0
Combat  > Ranged: 1
       > Magic: 3


            > Problem-solving: 3
Adventuring  > Travelling: 0
            > Wisdom: 0


            > Crafting: 0
Science  > Analysis: 3
       > Utility: 2

Equipment Templates:

Weapon:

Name: The Gun of Wonder
Aspects: (Decided by me, depending on description and what it is)
Type: Ranged (when used as a gun)/Magic (when the Wild Magic quality is invoked)
Qualities:
Unlimited Ammo: Although the gun still needs to be "reloaded", magic bullets for it (that fade if they haven't been in the Gun of Wonder in the past minute) somehow appear, ready to be loaded into the Gun of Wonder, whenever the wielder of the Gun of Wonder needs them.
Wild Magic: This is the Gun of Wonder's signature ability, and is the cause of much good-and-ill fortune. When this quality is activated, the GoW presents its wielder with 5 random words (chosen by the GM and/or pulled from the "Random entry" function of Wiktionary (translate the result into English and reduce it to the basic form of the word (i.e. ran would turn into run) as necessary)). The wielder of the GoW MUST choose 3 of the words when they're presented to them. If they take longer than a turn to choose the 3 words, the first three words are automatically chosen. The GoW then creates a magical effect based on the 3 chosen words, with a target of wherever/whatever the Gun of Wonder is pointing at. The power of the effect is based on the Improvisation stat and the Magic skill of the wielder of the GoW.
Description: It looks like an ordinary six-shooter (and fires like one), but appearances can be deceiving. When asked where he got the gun from, Wild Jack tells the questioner a wondrous and fantastic story- which radically changes each time he tells it.

Armor:

Name: Robe of Cleanliness
Aspects: (Same as weapon)
Type: Mystical
Qualities:
Always Clean: The Robe of Cleanliness automatically cleans itself and its wearer, so that they can both always look their best. The RoC also slowly repairs itself, but sadly does not bestow this effect on its wielder.
Accessories: The wearer of the Robe of Cleanliness can create and dismiss illusionary and intangible articles of clothing (that must be able to fit the wearer) that must remain on their body (or else the illusory clothing fades/is destroyed) at-will.
Fashionable: The Robe of Cleanliness always looks fashionable and cool.
Minor Hammerspace/Dimensional Storage: There are many pockets on the inside of this jacket, but trying to count them makes Jack's head hurt. However, for some reason, he can intuitively store and retrieve stuff from these pockets without fumbling around or searching for them. Jack tries not to think about this too much.
Description: Depends on what is/what would be in-fashion/cool at the moment.

Inventory:
Ring of Sustenance: The Ring of Sustenance keeps its wearer fed and watered. Because actually working for a living is for scrubs.
Lucky Coin: Once per day, when the command word is spoken, it is asked a question that can be answered with "heads" or "tails", and it is flipped, the Lucky Coin will land on the "correct" side 60% of the time. Using this ability multiple times on similar questions about the same subject will result on the Lucky Coin landing on its side.
Book of Illusion and Enchantment: This book contains many illusion and enchantment spells. Jack has recently... "acquired" it, and is eager to properly inspect its contents.

Gonna have to say no for a couple of reasons. Firstly, if your character has your Core as an item, that means you will either die very fast or be invincible. Your Core is basically your Phylactery, and if it's destroyed you are too, without any way to get back. Secondly, your character doesn't really seem to be designed with the Core in mind, as it's just a... generic guy, really. You have to remember that 'races' are barely a thing in this universe. Humans sure don't exist, because Cores are random. They don't follow any sort of sense. See example sheets for good incorporation of Cores in design.

[SOLDIER First]

Spoiler: nomen muta (click to show/hide)

General
Name: Armis Bellator
Gender: [You receive a feeling of confusion.]
Core: A steel-blue crest, small enough to fit in the palm, shaped like a shield with four points. An image of a crescent moon is set in the center, and that moon glows dimly at night.
Aspects: Steel, Nightly, Knightly, Lunar, Medieval.

Description: Currently, Armis consists of a silver breastplate with shoulder guards, faulds, and a cloth skirt hemmed in blue, floating in midair. It has managed to find sets gauntlets and greaves, as well as a blue-plumed helmet, that match its original color quite well. Its general appearance is that of someone invisible wearing an incomplete set of armor (though it can move these "limbs" independent of one another if it so chooses). When it is in a humanoid shape, it is about six-and-a-half feet tall. Strangely, the gaps in its armor where a body normally would occupy are voids of grey-blue light, like that of the moon. Is what lies beneath its faceplate the same...?

It is unknown if Armis is capable of verbal communication, but it is certainly able to hear normally. Its preferred method of communication appears to be transmitting thoughts, feelings and images to the "listener". Strangely enough, the normal laws and limitations of verbal speech apply, and it is able to "whisper" or "yell" as needed.

Background: It explains to you, quite simply...

[Nothingness. Then it Is. New, strange things. Sight but not seeing. Sound but not hearing. Touch but not feeling. Protected, but bare, incomplete. Need wholeness. Searching... for very long... success, over time. New limbs, new face. Then a weapon. Then comes to now. The tavern.]

Stats

Efficiency: 2d6
Perfectionism: 1d8
Improvisation: 1d4
Hastiness: --

Skills:

       > Melee: 8
Combat  > Ranged: 0
       > Magic: 0


            > Problem-solving: 2
Adventuring  > Travelling: 2
            > Wisdom: 0


            > Crafting: 0
Science  > Analysis: 0
       > Utility: 0

Equipment

Pale Greatsword
Aspects: Huge, Knightly, Unique, Metal, Leather, Crafted.
Type: Melee
Qualities:
 -Gigantic: This sword is easily seven feet long. It has incredible range in combat but it is awkward and difficult to store on the back, even without the normal limitations imposed by such a method.
 -Hand and a Half: Designed for use with two hands, Armis can wield it this way for increased damage without any penalty.
 -Supernaturally Light: To Armis, the sword might as well be a cloth sack, and it can swing the weapon with incredible ease.
Description: A normal, if impressively large, claymore. Its blade is silvery-white and the grip is made of a blue-dyed leather. It has a tassel on the pommel, also blue. The guard and hilt are golden.

Armis' Limbs
Aspects: Enchanted, Metal, Crafted, Timeless, Medieval, Knightly.
Type: Heavy
Qualities:
 -Imperishable: This armor is very durable, even more so when possessed by Armis. The pieces have, can, and will last quite a long time to come.
 -Supernatural Animation: Armis seems to inhabit their other armor pieces with a strange, blueish energy. The pieces can move independently of one another within fifteen feet, possess far more strength than a normal Shell, and can be inhabited or disinhabited at will. However, if separated from the center of Armis' body (including by its death), its pieces will instantly be disinhabited and inert, requiring it to find them again - or perhaps new ones. Special - allows Armis' Limbs to take on Qualities of any compatible armor they inhabit
Description: One pair of silver gauntlets, one pair of silver greaves, and a helmet possessing a blue feather plume.

Inventory: A small collection of smooth stones in various shades of blue and white
A large backsheathe for the Pale Greatsword
A single morning-glory stored within its center

Spoiler: cool pics i wanna use for armis eventually (click to show/hide)

[Pencil_Art]

I'm still confused about how multiple dice works. For example, in the OP, you say that multiple low dice results are less effectice then one high dice result (eg. Two 10s from 2d10 less effective than one 20 from 1d20).
> How does that work? Is it because dice roll results are not cumulative? Does this mean the main use of multiple dice is to reroll checks?
> Are the intensities of successes or failures based on how far away from a specific difficulty check they are? Eg, a result of 1 is a more intense failure than 2 if the difficulty check is 5
> If a low role is not necessarily bad, how do you figure out how bad a role is?