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[Asin]

I genned a world back when I was starting out with DF.

Ended up genning a world where elves took over the dwarves.

Only part of the dwarven civ left was a bandit group.

Took control of a dwarf.

Got some buddies and began my quest to kill elves and reclaim the civ.

I failed.

I don't have the world anymore.

[TheImmortalRyukan]

I genned a world back when I was starting out with DF.

Ended up genning a world where elves took over the dwarves.

Only part of the dwarven civ left was a bandit group.

Took control of a dwarf.

Got some buddies and began my quest to kill elves and reclaim the civ.

I failed.

I don't have the world anymore.

.... every story deserves to be told I guess. But next time, spruce it up, add descriptive details, add how a bond between you and the thieves began to form, and then tell of their tragic, yet heartwarming last stand, showing the true courage of dwarves.

As said, every story deserves to be told, but, it also needs to be heard, if you tell bland, generalized stories, no one will listen.

Take my advise with as much salt as you will

[Asin]

Alright.

I'll add a bit of flavor.