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Viterine

Some other place

I'm not involved and I want to see the votes

[Lorknis]

Sheet! http://pastebin.com/1ZX1t458 Oh god it's my first one, I hope it's alright. Mug once I get back from school.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Name: Farra Henreth
Age: 19
Class: Archer Trainee/Archer/Sniper?
Special: Not used in trainee
Character Skill: Miracle
Affinity: -
Personal Fault: Focused on injuries: -15 hit when under 50% HP
Personal Skill: Watch and Learn: If there are allied units within 3 spaces, +10 Crit
/Personal Skill: Trader of goods and blows: When first attacked by an enemy, +1 damage on counter attack
//Personal Skill:

Preferred Stats: Skill, Defense
Weapon Skill: Bow (E)

Level: 1
Total Level: 1

Base Stats:
HP: 16+2 (60%)
STR: 4+1 (50%)
MAG: 1 (0%)
SKL: 5+1 (60%)
CON: 4
AID: 3
LUK: 2 (30%)
DEF: 3 (40%)
RES: 1 (40%)
SPD: 4 (50%)
MOV: 4

Levels Gained: 1/0/0

Current Stats:
HP: 19
STR: 5
MAG: 1
SKL: 6
CON: 4
AID: 3
LUK: 2
DEF: 3
RES: 1
SPD: 4
MOV: 4

Inventory:
Name | Type ( ) | Rng | Wt | Mt | Hit | Cr | Ql
Training Bow | Bow (E)| 2 | 3 | 5 | 90 | 10 | 35
Vulnerary 3/3

Bio: Farra was born in Anecca in a city that fit the norm of the country. She was born into a merchant family, and thus saw people from many places come and go since a young age. Before long, her father started to teach her how the art of trading went including defending the caravan from thieves and bandits with bows. As she started to have more chores with the caravan, she became friends with a girl from Izzara, and learnt more about that country’s politics from her. At the age of 10 she started joining her father and mother on trade journeys, and learnt over time that the other lands around were far more interesting than her own, if a bit cold at times.

When her friend had stopped passing through the village, Farra first suspected nothing. She knew how busy the life was, and thought it just as not being in the same place at the same time. Her father stopped going to Izzara shortly after, and after a few months she started asking the few Izzarians still left, thus learning what had happened in the country and her country’s unwillingness to help. Knowing how the people from there now suffered from tales spread, she wanted to help liberate the country anyway she could Eventually, one stranded caravan decided to head back to it’s home country, now occupied. Farra decided to act as an assistant for this one journey, and arrived in the once flourishing country.

From there, she survived on coin gained through assisting in the few stores that were still left, before she left to join a resistance group. Despite not knowing techniques used by true soldiers, she believes her bow with keep her alive. Farra Henerth now stands ready to see the world flourish herself, starting with Izzara.

Whoop, a fellow new player! Good character sheet (better than mine was) and at least you won't have to edit yours a million times like I did.

[Swordstar]

If you're going miracle, I would suggest increasing your luck growth since it is dependant on that. In addition, I would guess that your second personal skill will be a no go since you're never going to attack first on the EP so it's always on essentially.

[Stirk]

Alright, calling this the final draft. I wrote the last one at midnight-01:00, so it needed some editing . Will probably try to remove the background on the mug -_-.

Spoiler: Here comes a candle to light you to bed (click to show/hide)

Name: Brock 
Age: 21
Class: Fighter Trainee-Bandit-Berserker
Special:
Character Skill: Daunt
Affinity: -
Personal Fault: Reckless Anger: -10 DG when under 50% HP
Personal Skill: Seeing Red: +2 Base Damage when under 50% HP
 
Preferred Stats: Str, HP
Weapon Skill: Axe (E)
 
Level: 1
Total Level: 1
 
Base Stats:
HP: 20 (70%)
STR: 6 (50%)
MAG: 0 (0%)
SKL: 2+2 (65%)
CON: 6
AID: 5
LUK: 1 (30%)
DEF: 3 (50%)
RES: 0 (10%)
SPD: 2+2 (55%)
MOV: 4
 
Levels Gained:
 
Current Stats:
HP: 20 (70%)
STR: 6 (50%)
MAG: 0 (0%)
SKL: 4 (65%)
CON: 6
AID: 5
LUK: 1 (30%)
DEF: 3 (50%)
RES: 0 (10%)
SPD: 4 (55%)
MOV: 4
 
Inventory:
Name | Type ( ) | Rng | Wt | Mt | Hit | Cr | Ql
Hatchet| Thrw (E)| 1-2 | 5 | 4   | 85  |5  | 35/35

Vulnerary 3/3

Bio:Brock was a Izzarran native, his parents being simple farmers as were their parents before them, so on and so forth. Those in the family tended to be built like bulls, as such they were fairly successful in this mundane profession. That isn't to say they were rich-nothing could be farther from the truth- but they weren't starving either, and were perfectly content with their lot in life for the most part. Naturally, the happy times ended when the occupation began. Falling further and further into poverty every day, the occupation was having an obvious effect on his family (two loving parents and two younger siblings, a brother and sister of 15 and 12 respectively). Rather then becoming depressed, he had become angry. Those who knew him always said he had a temper like a lightning bolt-quick to flare up, fiery and hot while it lasts, and over just as quickly as it started. It had always gotten him into trouble, but this time it was bigger than a street fight or shouting match. A drink in hand-surrounded by friends and neighbors,  he violently ranted about the situation of the country to eager ears. Our families are starving, with no benefit to anyone but far-off foreigners, and we are just sitting here and doing nothing about it? We deserve better! His friends joined him in arms (or at least, pointy tools and sharp farming equipment, passable weapons in the eyes of the not-entirely sober group).

If you want to think he ran toward the revolution with open arms, here is were you will be disappointed. Their goal wasn't revolution, it was coin. They reasoned that trying to fight would do more harm then good- their homes and families could easily be caught in the crossfire, and all who have opposed the occupation had been defeated with no positive results. So they set their sights on the south, running to Chilcinne for a life of banditry. After all, if we were going to be bled dry at the wrong end of a sword, why not do the same someone else in return? Everyone who left was one less mouth to feed back home, and the riches they would receive would more then make up for the lost labor. At least, that was the plan. It wasn't long before everyone's heads were clear of liquor and rage, but by then it was too late. They had already dedicated themselves to this, turning back now would be betraying everyone else.

Also as it turns out, inexperienced young farmers tend to make poor bandits. Chilcinne was already full of competition, leading Brock's group to fight for scraps that either were not worth the time of other groups or managed to slip through their cracks. They barley made enough to sustain themselves-let alone send anything back home. Their condition as bandits was even worse than the condition back home, many longing for even their simple farm houses. Naturally, this made Brock angrier and angrier, growing daily as he contrasts his suffering with the imagined riches of those who put him in this situation in the first place. Far from his normal flash-in-the pan rage, it had begun to burn within him like a wildfire. Once again following his anger, he returned to his home country to fight the resistance. He still didn't like its odds of success, he simply felt that if he was going to get cut down over coin he might as well do it in a place he could call home. The fact this would put the hurt on Mordo was just a bonus.

At least he was gone long enough for those not close to him to forget who he was. At least his family wouldn't be targeted. To this day, he goes only by his first name. His real last name would naturally put his family in danger, while he felt a fake one would be an insult to them. Naturally, he has yet to contact his family, out of fear for their safety, out of fear for what may have happened to them, and out of fear for what they would think of him...
 

Mug: (Basic head transplant using these suggestions and mug bank as a base. Minor scar removal used. I used Gimp, and when I converted it to Jpeg it turned the transparent background white >_>).

And since the OP asks for it, I've played with Twin, Elf, SB, Gilgamesh, and some other guys who could probably confirm I post too much . I've played with Tiruin and Haspen too, but I think I only played turned base games with them kinda limiting what I could do.

[SOLDIER First]

Protip: .png files can be transparent, .jpeg or .jpg can't (to my knowledge. Just use .png).

[Stirk]

Protip: .png files can be transparent, .jpeg or .jpg can't (to my knowledge. Just use .png).

Done, thanks. That was much easier then what I was gonna try .

[birdy51]

There we go. This'll be the final edit. Maybe.

[Swordstar]

Cute!

[Aliemma]

If you're going miracle, I would suggest increasing your luck growth since it is dependant on that. In addition, I would guess that your second personal skill will be a no go since you're never going to attack first on the EP so it's always on essentially.

For PS, I meant the first time a particular enemy attacks (Mage A, Myrmidon B, etc.) but it's weirdly worded, so I'll probably change it entirely. I see what you mean with luck though, so that'll be changed real quick. Thanks

[Blade Master Model 42]

All the submissions thus far:

Sharne (swordstar) (Swordsman Trainee-->Myrmidon-->Swordmaster)
Robin of Port Talia (birdy51) (Mage Trainee)
Mirix of Qun (Lorknis) (Swordsman Trainee)
Liam Innhart (Gaterhyme) (Rider Trainee-->Cavalier)
Bertholt of Aviane (ElfCollaborator) (Priest Trainee-->Troubadour-->Holy Guard)
Kaldach (CrimsonEon) (Swordsman Trainee-->Mercenary-->Hero)
Sam (Sirus) (Performer Trainee-->Bard--Lore Master)
Booker (Sentient Bowtie) (Thief Trainee-->Spy-->Assassin)
Roux (GiglameshDespair) (Rider Trainee-->Cavalier-->Paladin)
Esther Vann (Twinwolf) (Mage Trainee--> Shaman)
Martyn (Lucus Casius) (Archer Trainee)
Simon Isurus (Praefectus Screptum) (Mage Trainee-->Monk-->Inquisitor)
Brock (Stirk) (Fighter Trainee-->Bandit-->Berserker)
Amala "Sephi" Serafin (Tiruin) (Archer Trainee-->Spy-->Assassin)

Sheet! http://pastebin.com/1ZX1t458 Oh god it's my first one, I hope it's alright. Mug once I get back from school.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Name: Farra Henreth
Age: 19
Class: Archer Trainee/Archer/Sniper?
Special: Not used in trainee
Character Skill: Miracle
Affinity: -
Personal Fault: Focused on injuries: -15 hit when under 50% HP
Personal Skill: Watch and Learn: If there are allied units within 3 spaces, +10 Crit
/Personal Skill: Trader of goods and blows: When first attacked by an enemy, +1 damage on counter attack
//Personal Skill:

Preferred Stats: Skill, Defense
Weapon Skill: Bow (E)

Level: 1
Total Level: 1

Base Stats:
HP: 16+2 (60%)
STR: 4+1 (50%)
MAG: 1 (0%)
SKL: 5+1 (60%)
CON: 4
AID: 3
LUK: 2 (30%)
DEF: 3 (40%)
RES: 1 (40%)
SPD: 4 (50%)
MOV: 4

Levels Gained: 1/0/0

Current Stats:
HP: 19
STR: 5
MAG: 1
SKL: 6
CON: 4
AID: 3
LUK: 2
DEF: 3
RES: 1
SPD: 4
MOV: 4

Inventory:
Name | Type ( ) | Rng | Wt | Mt | Hit | Cr | Ql
Training Bow | Bow (E)| 2 | 3 | 5 | 90 | 10 | 35
Vulnerary 3/3

Bio: Farra was born in Anecca in a city that fit the norm of the country. She was born into a merchant family, and thus saw people from many places come and go since a young age. Before long, her father started to teach her how the art of trading went including defending the caravan from thieves and bandits with bows. As she started to have more chores with the caravan, she became friends with a girl from Izzara, and learnt more about that country’s politics from her. At the age of 10 she started joining her father and mother on trade journeys, and learnt over time that the other lands around were far more interesting than her own, if a bit cold at times.

When her friend had stopped passing through the village, Farra first suspected nothing. She knew how busy the life was, and thought it just as not being in the same place at the same time. Her father stopped going to Izzara shortly after, and after a few months she started asking the few Izzarians still left, thus learning what had happened in the country and her country’s unwillingness to help. Knowing how the people from there now suffered from tales spread, she wanted to help liberate the country anyway she could Eventually, one stranded caravan decided to head back to it’s home country, now occupied. Farra decided to act as an assistant for this one journey, and arrived in the once flourishing country.

From there, she survived on coin gained through assisting in the few stores that were still left, before she left to join a resistance group. Despite not knowing techniques used by true soldiers, she believes her bow with keep her alive. Farra Henerth now stands ready to see the world flourish herself, starting with Izzara.

I'm just going to do a quick evaluation without doing hardcore number checking on inventory or base stats for everyone with a sheet already up.

Swordstar: I think if you guys wind up in a desert chapter and there's a sandstorm (big if) I won't have it trigger your pf, even though by the wording it would.
Birdy: You didn't update AID after buffing your CON.
Lorknis: You only have 310% progression. Since you're going commander, it might help to drop the extra 20 into your MAG progression if you plan to make use of tomes, or take the 10 out of mag and spread the 30% elsewhere if you aren't.
Gaterhyme: No issues or really even comments.
ElfCollaborator: If I'm reading that third PS right, I'm not going to let you regain health from Renewal faster while you're under 50%. You can do that, but it'd have to be a different trigger. Also, your base and current progression rates don't match.
CrickEt: Lucky you I have enemies prioritized for Berserk.
Sirus: Your sheet is obviously unfinished so I'll save the commentary beyond saying that the Personal Skill and Fault are fine.
Sentient Bowtie: Please match the format of the example sheet.
Giglamesh: Looks like some pronouns got jumbled when Elf changed his character into a man, but aside from that and the tbd PS, no issues.
Twinwolf: Please match the format of the example sheet.
Lucus: No issues.
Praefectus Screptum: Second PS is super open ended and I don't really wanna deal with it. Also it looks like you cut off the name for whatever weapon is on your sheet. Also, Rheane is not really under any longstanding threat, aside from occasional incursions from Chilcinne bandits, but even those aren't very common. The White Knights aren't exactly pressured by their duties. So your bio doesn't make a lot of sense in light of that.
Stirk: Daunt is a good, safe choice for front line fighters, so definitely not a bad pick there. Bonus stat and Progression distribution look good both in terms of correctness, and also from a build standpoint. Also I'd suggest saving your mugs in the png format, its less lossy.
Tiruin: You seem to have 2 personal faults. Your third PS doesn't work, +2 AS is the maximum, and I don't know what is meant by 'in range'. As for the first PS, either specify a range the skill activates at, or alternatively, a weapon category the enemy can be using that it activates again. Not that I expect you to pick the second option based on the title of the skill as it stands. Your bio also doesn't say anything about how your access to your merchant business was lost, and it will have to have been, since I'm not giving you guys access to anything of that nature. Also, I don't understand how you expect your pacifist character to work within a group of often violent revolutionaries.
Aliemma: Your first PS needs to be updated to 3 allies within 3 spaces to trigger, or 1 ally adjacent. An ally within 3 spaces would basically mean that PS would never be off. Also the wording on your second PS is a little obtuse. It's basically if an enemy initiates an attack, +1 DAM? If so, feel free to bump that to +2. Also you have a couple grammatical errors in your bio but it looks fine otherwise.

If anyone's sheet got missed, just repost them and I'll give them the same once over.

~
Wow, 6 replies since I started. Guess I shouldn't be surprised.

[birdy51]

Alright, fixed the Aid issue! She can now even lift.

[Lorknis]

So my math was wrong, thanks mate!

[Aliemma]

Alright, /PS should make a bit more sense now, PS now is 3 within 3 and most grammar issues should be fixed. Also, hyperlinks. Many thanks!

[Praefectus Screptum]

Changed/fixed the sheet.

[IamanElfCollaborator]

i done did it

[Sirus]

Spoiler: Bard 1.2 (click to show/hide)

Name: Sam Bonham
Age: 18
Class: Performer Trainee -> Bard -> Lore Master
Special: Perform
Character Skill: Renewal
Affinity: ??
Personal Fault: Obvious Target: After Performing/Playing, Sam loses 10 Dodge.
Personal Skill: Pumped Up!: After Performing/Playing, Sam gains +15 Evade.
 
Preferred Stats: LUK, SPD
Weapon Skill: N/A
 
Level: 1
Total Level: 1
 
Base Stats:
HP: 15 (55%)
STR: 2 (00%)
MAG: 2 (50%)
SKL: 2 (50%)
CON: 3
AID: 2
LUK: 5+1 (60%)
DEF: 1+1 (25%)
RES: 3 (30%)
SPD: 5+2 (60%)
MOV: 4
 
Levels Gained:
 
Current Stats:
HP: 15 (55%)
STR: 2 (00%)
MAG: 2 (50%)
SKL: 2 (50%)
CON: 3
AID: 2
LUK: 6 (60%)
DEF: 2 (25%)
RES: 3 (30%)
SPD: 7 (60%)
MOV: 4
 
Inventory:
Name | Type ( ) | Rng | Wt | Mt | Hit | Cr | Ql

Vulnerary 3/3
 
Bio:

Just added the growths, a last name, and age. Still working on the bio. And the mug. I decided to go slightly nuts on the mug this time ._.