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[rhesusmacabre]

A Dig Deeper swamp troll:

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[Julien Brightside]

That look awesomely horrifying.

[peskyninja]

Great!
I don't know but it look like a oblivion/skyrim troll.

[xordae]

Love that troll's face, very stylish.

[Deon]

Great!
I don't know but it look like a oblivion/skyrim troll.

TES trolls have 3 eyes and no horns. Looks like a typical DF troll to me, good job.

[peskyninja]

DF troll :

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[Duuvian]

I've not had any positive feedback from my efforts, which is a shame,

Aw I am sorry, I love really like like and are quite creeped out by your avatars stare.... Now I do hope you made that yourself, otherwise... oops.

Thanks! When I get back ashore I might make another avatar.

Hehe. I opened it up in view image in new tab. I'd like to think that's the look on a dwarf's face when I tell them to wrestle a magma man. He knows that he will do it, though he might tantrum a few times in between due to my having ordered the other 6 to do it first.

In other words, very nice work.

[Meta]

So. I created this picture when I wanted to joke about the new 'arrow in the knee' meme.

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[UristMcScholar]

Simple art.. Second done with a tablet. Just saying, but criticism would be welcome.

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[Ogdibus]

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[Fault]

Dwarven haulers.

[Buttery_Mess]

A lovely thing to behold as usual, Fault

[Ultimuh]

I wonder if they are discussing the possibilities of quantum stockpiling.

[darkrider2]

I wonder if they are discussing the possibilities of quantum stockpiling.

Hmm, I wonder...

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[lordnincompoop]

Simple art.. Second done with a tablet. Just saying, but criticism would be welcome.

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Try to avoid putting the horizon line in the center.  It tends to look better if it's closer to either the top or bottom.  You can actually do that in this picture by cropping it, so that some of the bottom is cut off.  The only thing down there is some grass, so you won't lose much.

Rule of composition #44: Focus and/or a majority of composition lines placed in the centre tend to result in a boring picture.

Exploit the Rule of Thirds and the Golden Ratio to your benefit.

Dwarven haulers.

Nice (and cute too), but your picture would benefit from a proper focal point. Right now, everything has roughly the same importance (the eye is drawn to everywhere in the picture) which makes it slightly uncomfortable to look at as well as lacking a proper subject. Right now, my eye focuses the most on that thick black dividing line a little shy of the one-third mark from the left of the picture, which I don't think is the place you want viewers to focus on.

Simulating camera focus on your desired subject whilst removing detail and saturation from things behind and in front of it usually works. I suggest you make that black line to the left less loud as well.