Fist up, the images here are amazing, some evan beyond quality, even if I'm to lazy to write abaut them.
Now abaut the request:
O_O
That is simply amazing, really good, I wasnt sure anyone were actually going to do it, and I certanly didnt think they were going to do it this well! Thanks! ^_^
I did't quite inagine "the heart is leadng" quite that literal. :p
If to want some criticism: you character desigs are utterly awesome, as are the ruins, but i Do think you need to think about the light a bit more.
- the being of light is to yellow, it looks like it was fire or even yellow fur, more than being made of living light almost. consider simply adding some blurry white on top of it. (thou, not possible in point, so that might be why.)
- the scene looks like it's lit from behind the camera, but the suns are all in the picture!
- likewise, the shy has a whiteish gradient towards some point above the suns and the suns are solid blocks of colour. Real stars more likely would be white on the disk itself, but the colour visible from the sky-covering glow around it. Also, binary and trinary systems, if the stars are in the same poisition in the sky I think it's unlikely they are also the same size.
- shadows?
- the villages are small, and hard to see. not sure if this is an actual flaw thou, but it's something top think abaut.
- the demon abnomination thingy has a very good sense of motion, the being of light is not bad, but not as good as the demon.