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Author Topic: [OFFICIALLY DEAD] Voidlight Academy [OOC] (16/inf): Feel free to use the concept  (Read 19069 times)

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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #210 on: July 06, 2016, 08:44:22 pm »

@Joshua: everything looks fine except your perk. It's a teamwide 50% damage buff. MASSIVELY reduce the bonus and/or scale it off of a stat, or discard the current effect entirely.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #211 on: July 06, 2016, 08:48:30 pm »

@Joshua: everything looks fine except your perk. It's a teamwide 50% damage buff. MASSIVELY reduce the bonus and/or scale it off of a stat, or discard the current effect entirely.
If I change the bonus to [2*INT], would that work?
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #212 on: July 06, 2016, 08:53:07 pm »

Ok, NOW I fixed that stuff, and am about to go back and buff feint attack. Also, check out Fat and lazy- I made a slight addition.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #213 on: July 06, 2016, 09:27:43 pm »

@Joshua: everything looks fine except your perk. It's a teamwide 50% damage buff. MASSIVELY reduce the bonus and/or scale it off of a stat, or discard the current effect entirely.
If I change the bonus to [2*INT], would that work?
No.  It would not.

Make it a flat +level, make it only affect a single target at a time, and make it take a turn to shift.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #214 on: July 06, 2016, 09:40:32 pm »

@Joshua: everything looks fine except your perk. It's a teamwide 50% damage buff. MASSIVELY reduce the bonus and/or scale it off of a stat, or discard the current effect entirely.
If I change the bonus to [2*INT], would that work?
No.  It would not.

Make it a flat +level, make it only affect a single target at a time, and make it take a turn to shift.
Done.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #215 on: July 07, 2016, 01:57:10 am »

Semi-final sheet reviews inbound. . .
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Clarify when resets occur on CCC. I'm also not sure how often you'll actually get to eat foes; ask Fish on this one.
Limit the range on Web Withdraw to (Level).
Make Heighten Sense an active and/or nerf it to a bonus on rolls to detect stealthed enemies. Currently this is stronger than Nobunga's perk.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #216 on: July 08, 2016, 11:58:52 am »

A rider effect is something other than damage on a damaging move.

As for a proper name, I guess I just mean something that actually describes how you get the summon or the nature of the relationship or some such. Flavor, you know.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #217 on: July 08, 2016, 12:01:45 pm »

Your Basic Defense, it shoukd use 2*DEX%, not 3*DEX%.

Blind should have a 50% miss chance.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #219 on: July 09, 2016, 08:36:05 am »

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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #220 on: July 09, 2016, 01:25:18 pm »

this character is meant to be a teacher, so she's meant to be overpowered :p
« Last Edit: July 13, 2016, 11:06:23 pm by Sl4cker »
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #221 on: July 09, 2016, 02:52:07 pm »

this character is meant to be a teacher, so she's meant to be overpowered :p
You sure you don't want be a fraud? Someone like Gilderoy Lockhart? Op is too main stream.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #222 on: July 09, 2016, 02:54:16 pm »

>futo
>fraud
get out

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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #223 on: July 09, 2016, 02:59:35 pm »

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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #224 on: July 09, 2016, 03:11:16 pm »

i mean

it'd be way more amusing and have the potential for interesting character development as the teacher transitions from 'fraud' to 'actually really good and strong teacher'

but if you want an op expy then ok
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